MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 11 Pg 70 May 17 - Page 11

Wonderful starting. Interesting

Awesome update.

It's an interesting story where geet has changed her name to mishty and maan feels a connection with his son after 5 years. Seems like Maan and geet had a bitter relationship  and now he is regretting for his behavior with geet.

Looking forward to know the further story.

Its a great start. Keep up.👍

Congratulations for ur new story.. 

Sounds interesting

Interesting update..

People always say.. U know the worth of someone only after losing them. This is happening with Maan. He never cared for her when she was with him. Now when she is gone he wants her back.

Seriously, what mistake? Drunk maan ka fayda uthaaya kya?

Will be waiting for update

teaser

interesting

not able to wait for update

Awesome and interesting teaser...... waitinnnn for update 

Intriguing Teasers 

Darji and Brij punishing Geet 

while Maan hates to celebrate birthdays 

now I'll be waiting to see what happens