Tere Bin TS : surprise night part 3 updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: preciousn905k

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Behaya 😡😡😡

Murtasim and Meerab❤️

Mere khwabon ki tabeer ho tum😍😍😍

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Part 2:

Confrontation:

The scene started with murtasim he was furious...then car gate open and meerub sit in the car with frim face without any expression from whicj murtasim can predict what's happened...but still murtasim tried to read her face...

Meerub : chalo ...

Murtasim : kia hua ? Are you alright? Kia kaha us n ...

Meerub : mn n kaha na murtasim chalo abhi yehn s mujhe kisi s koi bat nahi karni ... Tm s bhi nahi...

Murtasim silently follows the order of his begum...

Back at mension :

Haya is super happy she didn't believe on her ears ...

Haya : kia yeh jo murtasim n bola sb sach hai...mera koi khawab to nahi hai...

Meerub furiously leaves for her room

murtasim is about to follow her but maa begum stops him and ask the reason behind it.

Maa begum : murtasim .. yeh kia bolay ja rahe ho tm .. asa is khandan mn na kabhi hua hai r na hi kabhi hoga suna tm n... Mujha bhi to pata lage asa kia ho gaya tm dono k beech...

Murtasim : maa mn n jo kia theek kia .. buht jald ap ko bhi pata lag jaye ga... Bharosa rakhiye mujhe p...

but his minds stuck on her .. he hurriedly wraps the conversation and leaves behind her...

Dard dilon ke kam ho jaate

Main aur Tum agar hum ho jaate

Main aur Tum agar hum ho jaate

Kitne haseen aalam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate

As he reached the room and saw all the rooms messed up he was shocked to see that state of his room ...

Meerub is still busy throwing the things her eyes were swallowed and turned red like a berry .. murtasim didn't know what she was doing and why he only knows that at this point meerub needs him the most... At this point she needs his support,care and love... He runs toward her...

Dard dilon ke kam ho jaate

Main aur Tum agar hum ho jaate

Main aur Tum agar hum ho jaate

Kitne haseen aalam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate

Murtasim : meerub... Meerub yeh sb kia hai ? Kia hal bana rakha hai tm n kamaray ka... Are you mad ... Asa kon karta hai ..?

Meerub pushed him away ...

Meerub : jao yehn s mujhe koi bat nahi karni tm s .. akela chor do mujhe tm ...

Meerub is again about to throw the jar at murtasim direction...

Tere bina na aaye sukoon

Naa aaye qaraar mujhe

Door wo saare bharam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate

murtasim comes closer to her holds her hands behind

Murtasim : mn janay k liye nahi aya yehn p... Agr akela hi chorna hota na to us rat karachi tmhn akela chor k a jata ...

Ishq adhoora duniya dhoori

Khwahish meri kardo na poori

Dil toh yehi chaahe

Tera aur Mera ho jaaye muqammal ye afsaana

Har mushqil aasaan ho jaati

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate

A stream of tears starts flowing through her eyes .. murtasim loses his grip on her hands and from one hand wipes her tears.. from one eye with his thumb and from other eye back of his hand...

Meeeub holds his collar.. her eyes were filled with anger and emotions

Meerub : how dared you murtasim? how dared you....

Flashback :

As they reach the mension murtasim holds meerubs hand and announces that he is divorcing meerub in next few days...

Murtasim : mn aj yehn yeh announce karna chata hun k aglay kuch dino mn main meerub ko talak dedon ga...

meerub is shocked on his announcement...then he losses her hand and meerub furiously goes towards her room

Flashback end..

Kitne haseen aalam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jaate

He clunches his jawas and his eyes filled with anger and devastation... he steps one step closer to her

Murtasim : how dared i ? How dared you meerub... ? Tmhare himat bhi kesay hui wo sb kuch...

Flashback:

murtasim waiting for meerub It's almost 10 sec left and he is about to leave to bring her back

His fone ring he saw its some unknown nmber he pickup the call ... And shocked to hear the conversation...

Rohail : tm murtasim ko chor do ...

Meerub : kun ?

Rohail : ta k hm dono shadi kar skain...

Meerub : mn use kia keh k choron?

Rohail : kuch bhi kaho ... Kuch bhi karo... Yeh keh do k murtasim importent hai... tm shadi shuda ho k bhi kanwari ho...

Then rohail smriks and cuts the call...

Flashback end

Baaqi nahi kuch par dil na maane

Dil ki baate dil hi jaane

Meerub : mn n nahi bola kuch bhi ...

Murtasim : himat kesay hui sb kuch sunay ki tmhare....

Meerub pushed him back...

Meerub : nahi suna gaya na mere s islye to a gai the mn ...

Flashback :

Meerub : are you mad rohail kuch bhi bolay ja rahe ho... Tmhn kis n kaha k mn murtasim k sath nahi rehna chahti... Le de k ek hi rishta hai mere pass jo sirf mera hai ... Jis p sirf r sirf mera haq hai r tm chatay ho use bji mn chor doon tmahre liye...

Rohail : han merrub chor do use mere liye .. trust me mm tmhn itna piyar doon ga k murtasim jesay shaks ka aks bhi bhool jao ge tm... Mn nahi reh skta tmahre baghair... he is about to come step closer meerub signals him angerly through finger that doesn't took a single step forward...

Meerub : kia jantay ho tm mere r murtasim k rishtay k bare mn ...

Rohail : yahi k tmhara r us ka kaghazi rishta hai bs... R mere liye yahi kafi hai janay k liye...

Meerub : u know what rohail tm bs itna jantay ho... Use agay peechay tmhn kuch nahi pata...

Meerub is about to leave rohail comes infront of her way

Rohail : meerub tm mere piyar ko ase thukra nahi sktyi..

Meerub is pissed off

Meerub : tmhara piyar.... Really rohail...

Kia kia hai tm n aj tk mere liye... Bs ek b.day party arrange ki jo koi kisi bhi friend k liye kar skta hai...

Rohail : acha agr ase bat hai to us murtasim n kuch dino mn asa kia kar dia k tm us k peechay pagal hui ja rahi ho...

Meerub : wo sb kuch jo tm nahi kar paye mere liye.. wo sb kuch jo shohar apni biwi k liye karta hai...

Rohail : saf saf kaho na mihabat ho gai hai tmhn use ...

Meerub: han ho gai hai muhabat use r sirf usi s hui hai...

Rohail is shocked and devastated.. but then smriks ...

Meerub is about to leave rohail holds her hand

Rohail : i m sorry baby tm mujhe ase chor k nahi ja skti tmhn to mn hasil kar k rahon ga by hook r by crook..

Meerub snatch her hand from his grip and slaps him harder...

Meerub : i m warning you rohail... aj k bad koshish bhi mat karna kisi larki ka hath us ki marzi k baghair pakarnay ki...hato mere rastay s ...

Meerub pished him away and left the spot...

Flashback end

Hum dono kahin pe mil jaayenge ik din

Inn ummeedon pe hi main hoon zinda

Har manzil haasil ho jaati

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jate

Meerub : R dekho kia mila mujhe...

Murtasim holds her arm and pulled her and yelled...

Murtasim : tmhn kia mila...? Mijhe kia mila meerub ... Kia mila mujhe .. jis k liye itna sb kuch kar raha tha wahi mujhe zaleel karnay ka soch rahi hai... good yahi deseve karta hun mn ...

Kitne haseen aalam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar Hum ho jaate

Meerub : you know murtasim mn hi pagal the sari ghalti meri hai jise yeh laga k shayad i can trust you... Mere sb rishtay chin gaye mujhe s ... Jo asal baba hn unhn n bhi dhudkar dia mujhe ... Phr jinhn n apnaya wo bhi chor gaye mujhe ... Lawaris kar k chor dia gaya mujhe .. ase mn tm aye mere samnay jis n mujhe sahara dia ... Mere dard ko mehsoos kia ... Mera khayal rakha sayae ki trah mere peechay khare rahe... Mujhe s piya.... Lakin nahi tm bhi sb jesay niklay ... Ek rishta ek rishta tha jise mn shayd apna sirf apna man skti the... manay lage the... R aj us n bhi mujhe dhudkar dia...

Meerub cried ...

Murtasim eyes also filled and he felt her pain of being rejected... he comes near her

Murtasim : hamre is rishtay ko apnana to tm nahi chati merrub... shartain tm n rakhi thein... Tm chati the k mn tmhn chor doon... Ta k tm us rohail k sath...

Meerub puts her hand on his lip... and took step closer...

Dard dilon ke kam ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar hum ho jaate

Main aur Tum gar hum ho jaate

Meerub : rohail k sath jana hota to wapas tmhare pass na ati... Yehn na khari hoti aj...

Murtasim politely cups her face in his hand and matches his eyes with her glare...

Murtasim : saaf saaf kaho na kia chati ho...

Meerub : tm to hamesha mujhe ghor s dekhtay ho na murtasim... Mujh s pahle tmhn pata hota k mujhe kia chahiye hota... Ab nahi smjh pa rahe tm...

There is a deep emotional long eye lock...

Murtasim expression softens... He smiles as he got his all answers through eyes...

Murtasim leaves her ... And pushed her lightly.. meerub shocked on his gesture... Then he turned and about to leave meerub hugs him from back and cries ...

Meerub : please murtasim ...

Murtasim turns toward her

Murtasim : kia please please laga rakha hai ...

Then he smriks and sits on the couch....

Murtasim : jo kuch kehna hai saf saf bol k kaho... Mn n kuch ghalat matlab smjh lia r kal koi unch neech ho gai r tm mukar gai toh... Mn kia karon ga... Na baba na mn itna bara risk nahi le skta... Kal ko meri izat loot li tm n r sb ko contract dekha dia toh....

Meerub expression changes to unbelievable.. which is enjoyed by murtasim...

Meerub : seriously murtasim... Tm s to bat karna hi fazool hai..

Meerub us about to leave... Murtasim holds her hand and pulls her closer... He stuck a strand of her hair befor her ear...

Murtasim : laikin abhi meri bat khatam nahi hui...

Meerub shys and lowerd her eyes ...

Murtasim left from there and meerub blushes..

Nicely written. Update soon

Love this!! Pl update the next part 😳

Agr akela hi chorna hota na to us rat karachi tmhn akela chor k a jata ... --- what a line yaar, can imagine this in murtu's voice 😆

At night

Meerub is busy with maa begum work .. bt desperately wanted to meet murtasim... As she wanted to give some surprises to him bt he left for his village in noon... At late night meerub is upset as she find out that murtasim is not coming tonight...

As meerub is about go to her room bhaktu calls her ...

Bakhtu : bi bi g wo sahab ...

Meerub stops ...

Meerub : kia hua murtasim ko sb theek to hai na...

Bakhtu : nahi wo sahab g ki tabiyat achanak kharab ho gai ... R unhn n maa begum r kisi ko bhi batanay s mana kia hai... R wo dawai bhi nahi le rahe mujhe un ki fikar ho rahi hai... Smjh nahi a raha kia karon ap plz chaliye mere sath ...

Meerub : han han chaliye mn bhi chalti hn...

They left for village...

As meerub reaches there she saw its dark everywhere...

Meerub : murtasim... Murtasim... Tm yehn ho kia .. ?

She got scared little bit .. and about to leave the lights got on ... And it was beautifully decorated... With roses and candles ...

Meerub surprised by the arrangements. She turn and saw murtasim comes out from behind the pennal...

Meerub is surprised on her surroundings

Her feet met with the carpet of rose petals... her every step luminated with side by side candles

murtasim smiles and walk toward her ...

Meerub furiously holds his collar and pulled him closer

Meerub : asa mazak phr kabhi mat karna...

Murtasim : promise ...

Meerub smiles

He giftes her red saree ...

Murtasim: jao yeh pehn k ao mujhe dekhna hai tmhn is mn... Go..

Meerub without any objections take it and goes to getting ready

After 15 min meerub comes back in simple red shafoon saree ... In which her perfectly shaped body look more appealing...

They both start walking toward each other there sparkling eyes collide with each other having same intensity of passion ...

As the reaches closer their passion increasing with every step... Finally the come face to face ... Here meerub is shocked to see this side of murtasim which she never ever expected in her dreams...

He bend down on his knees and forward her a rose ...

Murtasim : i love you mrs murtasim khan...

Meerub smiles back and pull the rose lightly...

Murtasim holds her hand stands back

Meerub slightly hits the rose on his shoulder

Meerub : yehn bhi tmhn khud ko ahmiyat deni hai murtasim....

Murtasim : han bhai akhir is khandan ka iklota waris hn ahmiyat leni to banti hai ...

Meerub : han wakie mn itnay bare celebrity jo theray tm... Ek kam karo tm yehn khud ko ahmiyat do mn ja rahai hn...

Meerub turns to leave murtasim holds her hand and pulled her .. her back collided with his chest ... he slides his one hand on her belly from back and from other hand he removes some strands of hairs from her ear and wispers

Murtasim : nahi meerub aj nahi... Aj tm hamre bat adhori chor k nahi ja skti...

Meerub felt the butterflies in her stomach on his touch and warmth of his breath on her shoulder...

Then she slowly turns towards him with slightly smile and lowered eyelids...

Murtasim raised her chin with his index

Kuch dekhana hai tmhn chalo ... He holds her hand and drag her toward the table ..

Which is beautifully decorated with roses,candles and some crystal pieces and the centeral piece illuminated its beauty... Murtasim make her stand middle just parallel to the cake and untie her eye cover

Meerub is again not expecting this she is again pleasantly surprised... Murtasim holds her hand from behind and about to cut the cake ...

Meerub : ek minute murtasim ...

Murtasim: kia hua acha nahi laga? To mn r cake mangwaon ?

He is about to call meerub holds his hand...

Meerub : nahi...

Murtasim : to phir ?

Meerub : Ek surprise mere pass bhi hai tmhare liye mn abhi le k ati hn wi8 ...

Murtasim smiles and gestures to go...

Meerub left from there

After 5 mon she comes back..

Meerub : yeh raha ...

She gave him the box he take it and desperately opening it which is enjoyed by meerub as he looks like some naughty baby finds its long lost chocolate...

An finally he opened it and shocked to see the gift ...

Murtasim : meerub ... Yeh kia hai..

Meerub : tmhn nahi dokh raha kia hai ?

Murtasim : ise aj beech mn lanay ki kia zarorat the..

Meerub : lanay ki matlab yeh hmare beech mn hai...

Murtasim : dam... Meerub... Sare mood p pani pher dia..

Meerub naughtily smiles and holds his shoulder from behind

Meerub : acha to phr mood kesay theek hoga ...

He shrugged her hand

Muratsim : choro tm jao r so jao ...

Meerub : sonay k liye to mm nahi ai the yehn wesay .. chalo tm uahi chahtay ho to ja rahi hn ...

She is about to leave he holds her hand and pulled her closer ...

Murtasim : chali jao ge ... Mujhe ase akela chor k ...

Meerub : are tm n to kaha na jao.. achi bivi ki traha apnay husband ki bat man rahi hn ...

Murtasim : bat manani hai na... To ek r bat mano

Meerub : wo kia...

He took that piece of paper which she gifted a min ago from table and show it to her.. then he holds her both hands He requested her with puppy eyes...

Murtasim : ise hata do plz...

Meerub smiles a little, hide it from him but it was not unnoticed by him

Meerub : chalo pahle cake cut kar letay hn phr sochtay hn...

Murtasim: hein.... Sochtay hn ... Nahi matlab meerub yeh sb k bad bhi tm abhi sochna chati ho..

Meerub : han toh..

Murtasim : theek hai phr tm sochti rahom ka raha hn kb soch khatam ho jaye bata dena ... Phr mn sochon ga...

He was about to leave

Meerub holds his hand

Meerub : kahan ja rahe ho idher ao...

She lights the candle on cake and holds the contract ask him to hold it with her and he follows her order, both happily burns the contract on cake candle then cuts the cake feed eachother and both hugs eachother tightly.. murtasim carries her towards the room and close the door...

Meeru is such a mood killer🤣

Murtu toh contract jalte hi chalu ho gaya☺️

Originally posted by: Moonks

Meeru is such a mood killer🤣

Murtu toh contract jalte hi chalu ho gaya☺️

Meeru being meeru 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Loved it aimmy.. 😍

Happy that murtu gave her a red saree this time 🤭

Cake ki candle mein contract ko jaladiya aur room mein chali gayi.... itna jaldi☺️😆

Originally posted by: midniteangel

Loved it aimmy.. 😍

Happy that murtu gave her a red saree this time 🤭

Cake ki candle mein contract ko jaladiya aur room mein chali gayi.... itna jaldi☺️😆

Thanks alot 😇😇😇😇

Heheh han na room mn hi jana tha is k bad dono ko 🤣🤣🤣🤣 you know na how much murtu is desperate for meeru

Originally posted by: CherryOnTheTop

Loved it ❤️

Thanks alot 😇😇😇