Maan might well have entered the building. But that does not mean he killed Abhijeet. He may be tracking the killer too.
Maan might well have entered the building. But that does not mean he killed Abhijeet. He may be tracking the killer too.
Maan wanted to go to a hotel, but Geet was not happy about it. Does she think he can not afford a hotel so thats why he is with her?
It looks like Maan has found out something and came to stay with her for her protection.
Its good to see that she did not have to give up her dream of detective work after all.
Thanks for the pm and update
Part 32
Compelling update... sensationally written
great that Geet is still continuing her detective work
so she is working with the police
well she saw the video footage
oh the image of Maan entering in the raincoat comes to her mind
alas brushes it off
she recalls that Abhijeet was going to meet her
great that Maan called her about their trip
hmm he is already packed
now Geet wants to reopen the serial killer case
Abhijeet questioned Maan about this
was is Maan's connection to this?
who killed Abhijeet?
glad that Geet and Maan are on their way to her hometown
Geet clearly cannot stop thinking about the case
Maan's question was reasonable
he wanted to stay at the hotel
alas Geet refused
they will stay at her house
update soon
Great part
Omg what is Maan hiding
Everything is too complicated
Cont soon
Ye ho kya raha hai
OmG is Maan the murderer?? I hope not!
Lol ab what is Maan going to answer to her not so rhetorical question?
nice one
glad that geet didnt give up on her passion
good to see her working with the police
here maaneet finally board for geets sis wedding
so maan booked hotel earlier but later agrees to come with geet to her home seems like he wants to be with geet, does he? or keeping eye on her?
Part 33
He composes himself
M- Fine. Bhaiya aap iss address mein drop kar dijiye humein
Maan gives the address to the driver
G- Mujhe toh laga tha tum hotel mein nahi ruk sakte ho. Hotel mein ruk sakte ho toh mere ghar pe kyun ruke ho? Hotel mein kyun nahi gaye?
Geet thinks out loud
But Maan chooses to ignore her question
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They reach Geet’s house
As she looks around memories start pouring in
She takes a deep breath to compose herself
Maan rings the doorbell
Geet sister opens the door and both happily hug each other
Her other sister and parents also appear happily to welcome them
Ma- Aiye aiye jamai ji
Maan folds his hands as acknowledgement towards the parents
Geet looks at Maan to see whether he is uncomfortable
But his expressions are unreadable
So she starts to step in to get in the house quickly
Ma- Arre ruk, pehli baar tum dono aaye ho. Grihpravesh toh karenge naa
The family does aarti and all
Geet is getting annoyed with the drama
Maan is standing their obediently
Father- Jamai ji, aap dono ko aane mein takleef toh nahi hui naa. Hum gaadi bhijwa dete
G- Jamai ji ki takleefon ke baare mein pehle soch lete toh zyada acha ho jaata
Geet enters rolling her eyes
Ma- Geet!
Ma snaps at her
M- Nahi sab theek tha
Maan answers her father while ignoring Geet
Father- Suno, jamai ji thak gaye honge. Unko unka karma dikhado, thoda aaram kar lenge
The father says to Geet’s mother
Ma- Ji ji
‘Unka kamra’ Geet wonders, she was heading towards her old room
Ma- Tu kahan jaa rahi hai, idhar aa!
Ma stops Geet and pulls her aside
Ma- Wahan kahan jaa rahi hai? Tu aur jamai ji ke rehne ka intezaam main tere papa aur mere bedroom mein kar diya hai
G- Kya??? Par kyun???
Ma- Kya kyun? Jamai ko kahin bhi thode thehra sakte hain. Aur tu ye, kaise saade kapde pehenke aa gai. Shaadi ke baad pehli baar aarahi hai, mahualle waale taak lagake baithe the. Zara achi saaree, thode zevar sindur, mangal sutra kuch toh pehen aati. Jamai ji ne tujhe sarr pe bitha rakha hai!
G- Toh pehle batana tha ki mauhalle ka fashion show ho raha hai
Ma- Chup ho jaa! Shaadi ke baad bhi zabaan katt-katt chalti hai
G- Kyun shaadi ke baad bezubaan ho jaate hain kya aap ki tarah?
Ma- Akalmand ho jaate hain, samjhi? Chal jamai ji intezaar kar rahe haain
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Geet’s mom directs Geet and Maan to the bedroom
Ma- Jamai ji, aap aaram kar lo. Phir khana laga deti hoon
Maan nods
Ma- Aur ye hamare mein rivaaz hai, jamai ghar mein aata hai toh unko ladki ke maike se kapde dete hain. Aap agar ye pehnoge toh acha lagega
Geet’s mother hands Maan a bag
Maan nods
M- Thank you
Maa smiles
Ma- Waise jamai ji, ek baat kahun?
M- Ji
Ma- Geet ke papa, jo pehle hua uske liye bohot sharminda hain. Islie who aap se nazar milaane mein bhi kat ra rahe hain. Aap ho sake toh unko aur hum sabko maaf kar dijiyega
M- Ji, aap chinta mat kariye. Uss baat ko 2 saal ho gaye hain
Maa grins happily
Ma- Jeete raho beta. Khush raho. Aaram karo
Maa leaves
Geet appears from the other side of the room
G- “Ji, aap chinta mat kariye. Uss baat ko 2 saal ho gaye hain” ???? Chinta matt kari???
Maan looks at her
G- Tum kitna kuch keh sakte the. Aur tumne bass…
M- Kya keh sakta tha. Aur kyun kehna tha?
G- Kyun nahi kehna tha! Tumhare saath jo hua…
M- Harr baat pe logon se jhagda karne ki koi zarurat nahi hoti. Ye samajhna chahiye
G- Harr cheez mein chup rehne ki bhi koi zarurat nahi hoti , ye tumhe bhi samajhna chahiye!
Maan doesn’t answer her back to stop the quarrel
G- Tum iss poore jhamele se iss baar bach sakte the. Par nahi! Tumhe to serial ki mahaan bahu banna hai! Tum Anupama ho yaa Tulsi, ya Parvati; mujhe toh samajh nahi aata
M- Acha? Toh mujhe yahan nahi aana chahiye tha?
G- Bilkul nahi
M- Tumhari behen ki shaadi hai, unhone mujhe invite kiya tha. Toh main kya kehta?
G- Manna kar dete!
M- Aur tum?
G- Main kya?
M- Tum apni behen ki shaadi mein nahi aana chahti thi?
She answers after a moment
G- Chahti thi. Par tumhe pata hai naa tumhe yahan kitni takleefein hongi aur ye sab natak karna hoga. Inn logon ke saath uthna baithna padega jo…
M- Tumhari behen ki shaadi thi. Tum aana chahti thi. End of discussion.
Maan turns away fiddling with the kurta pajama that Geet’s mom had gifted
G- No!
Geet appears in front of him
G- Main aana chahti thi. Main aajaati. Mere paas plan tha
M- Aur kya tha who plan?
Maan asks looking unconvinced
G- Main akeli aati
M- Aur log mere baare mein puchte toh?
G- Keh deti ki kaam tha toh tum nahi aa paaye. Yaa keh deti ki hamare beech mein kuch problems chal rahi hain
M- Acha. Tum keh deti kaam tha toh ye aas paas ke log baatein nahi banaate. Aur kehti ki hamare beech problems hain ye keh kehti toh tum tumhari iss behen ki bhi shaadi tutt jaati aur dusri ki bhi nahi ho paati. Aur sab tumhe zimmedaar thehraate
G- Woh sab main handle kar leti par tumhe toh pareshaaniyaan nahi hoti naa
M- Tumhe toh hoti. Aur main nahi chahta tumhe koi pareshaani ho. Main ye handle kar lunga. Trust me
Maan says with such a sincerity that for a second Geet’s heart stops to just hear him and believe his each and every word
Her gaze meets his
His eyes were as dark and deep as the deepest night
That sense of assurance in his words was filling her heart
Awesome and amazing update Neelu
Just loved it 🤗🤗
I really loved how after so much of events Maan is maintaining his composure & managing everything at Geets place nicely as it is matter of family
Thou Geet was pissed off with the entire drama feeling that if they were so concerned they wouldn't have created a mess like this but she cannot do anything as it is her sister marriage
Maan to calmed her with his assurance that he is going to handle things smoothly which was surprising for Geet
Waiting for more
Thank you for the PM
Continue soon 🤗
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