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Posted: 1 years ago

Wow! Just loving the way the story is progressing. Geets colleagues are truly cupid's. Always making Geet and Maan think more about each other, making them analyse each others behaviour towards the other. Them teasing Geet to no end was fun and Maan getting caught and flustered was too adorable. Finally Geet is realising that Maan has gotten comfortable with her and trusts her to let her in his personal space and also takes liberty to enter her personal space when needed. The chemistry is increasing each chapter. Still can't forget how he helped her with saree in previous chapter. Eagerly waiting for next chapter.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Great part

Anyone can fall for this maan

Geet’s colleagues try’s to make her understand but maan proved to them

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 31

Girls -Haan Sai baat hai. Kya hi kar legi Sheena. Maan toh bas tumhara hai. Baaki log to achoot h hain uske liye

All of them are giggling while teasing Geet

Geet lekin digest nahi kar pa rahi ki kya hua

Jab woh girne wali thi tab Maan kahan se teleport hokar usko help kiya.. Aur abhi yeh....

Is it.... ?

She actually thinks back ki actually mein Maan apna personal space kisi se share nahi karta.

He always stands at least on an arm’s distance away from everyone... except herself?

Huh?

Is Maan close to her?

HUH???

What? Isn't Sheena every guy’s fantasy? Maan rejected her so brutally?

Geet is at loss of words even in her thoughts

+++++

As they come home in the taxi, Geet is looking out of the window

Her face has a little happy smile

The stars look brighter, the wind feels pleasant on her skin, the lull of the night sounds like a melodious music

‘It was fun’

She hears him speak

She turns to look at him and nods

He smiles back looking relaxed

+++++++

They enter home and start to change

G- Suno!

He looks over his shoulder

She turns her gaze at the saree pins, asking for his help through her eyes

He walks towards her and the close to her gently undoing the safety pins on her saree

Maan is very aware of their closeness

Geet can feel his warm breath on her skin

M- Are you tired?

He asks after he is done undoing her last safety pin

G- Hmm

He nods

M- Take rest then. Sleep well

She nods

She changes to her comfortable clothes and removes her makeup and goes to her bed, while Maan lays down on his bed on the floor

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Geet ki need khulti hai

Its 3 am

She sits up to go the washroom but doesn’t find Maan at his usual position

She looks around the whole house

Its raining heavily

Maan is no where to be found

She wonders, has he left her

But his stuff was intact

Geet hears the main door open

She looks at the direction to

She sees a person’s profile in a dark long raincoat with a hoodie

The raincoat is drenched, and water is dripping

The hoodie is casting a shadow on the face, so the face is not visible

Geet is alarmed

She quickly turns on the light of the room to see better

Maan looks at her with surprise as if he caught him off guard

G- Tum…itni raat ko kahan gaye the?

He is gazing at her but today his gaze looks different…somewhat unsettling

He takes out a can of beer

M- I got beer.

G -Tumhe peene ki aadat hoti jaa rahi hai!

He smirks

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Next day while in the bus for her office, Geet fishes out her other phone

It has become difficult to check her other phone since Maan was staying with her

She quickly switches it on

She quickly finds the single message

Message means there is a new case

She always eagerly waited for the message on the phone

But this time reading the message casts horror on her face

Message said:

Abhijeet is killed. Time of death 2:30 am yesterday. The left thumbnail pulled off

She knew what this meant

This meant this won’t stop

The serial killer is back

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Her public phone also beeps

I have booked tickets for us tomorrow to visit your home for your sister’s wedding

The message is from Maan

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Posted: 1 years ago

Itna chotu update...😔

I told before itself...it's about serial killer.

It giving me vibes like "DURANGA" webseries.

Name also - abhijeet.

...is Maan serial killer...😲


Guess need to wait for revelations now..😛

Geet still doing her job as detective? 😲

So geet will catch the killer now...

Let's see....

Edited by Mg13 - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 31


Fascinating Update


It almost felt as if Maan wanted to cover the distance

between him and Geet

as he also ask her if she is tired

so he goes out alone but the next day Geet gets a message

on her phone that Abhijeet is dead

seems like the same time when Maan was out

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wow great update superb guess the killer is maan

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it Dear Neelu

Awesome and beautiful part🤗

Hmm 🙄 so finally Geet has started thinking in the right direction that Maan really feels for her & their proximity was beautifully penned

This trun of serial killer & Geet sister marriage is going to be a real fun ☺ even Maan is getting suspicious with every single update & now his side has to be revealed soon

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

31

all girls pressing maan seeing how he react when sheena fell

something is stopping geet opening up with maan

maan is comfortable with geet

is geet still doing her detective job in secrecy.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome part

Geet is still doing detective job secretly why hiding it

Serial killer is related to maan ?? Will Geet not go to her sister wedding due to case can’t wait for next part

Update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Glad to see Geet realising that Maan treats a differently than others and her being happy about this. She is also getting comfortable with her asking for his help. It's sweet of Maan to decide to go to Geets sisters wedding. The serial killer and the shaadi ka time all is coming together and it's little scary to see how things will unfold. This feels like a serial where there will be marriage celebrations planned and side by side some danger is also there. Hope Maaneet have masthi in the marriage and also take care of each other. Anxious yet excited to know what happens next

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