Pyar jhukta nahin... JaBir,Ruhaan-Gauri,RiKara SS Last part pg10 - Page 8

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Posted: 4 years ago
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What did Pooja want to say? How will they all escape now?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome Chapter



But who is this masked man

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brilliant update! well written

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I thank each one of u 4 supporting me in this journey.

This FS is ending here.So i request all of u to give a detailed comment n write your favourite character,favourite scene and favourite jodi.


Pyar jhukta nahin .... Love Does not Bow Down Part 11

Kabir ran towards Pooja and untied her.

Kabir:Pooja...

Pooja:Kabir...

Kabir:Did he hurt you Pooja?

Pooja was silent.Her hears flowed down.She felt suffocated in the smoke.

Suddenly she collapsed.Kabir caught her.She was on his lap.

Kabir:Pooja...

Pooja murmured:Ka..Kabir...

Kabir:Get up Pooja.

Pooja's lips shivered:Kabir...I don't know whether I will survive or not.Before that I want to tell you something.Otherwise I may not be able to tell that to you.

Kabir:Don't say like that Pooja.Nothing will happen to you.

Pooja:But please hear what I want to tell you.I..

Suddenly she became completely unconscious.

Kabir got panicked: Poojaaaaaaaaaaaa

Kabir started coughing due to smoke.

He lifted up Pooja and struggled hard to go out as the fire was spreading everywhere.

Finally he succeeded in getting out of the house.

He went near the pipe opening it and showered water on Pooja's face.Slowly she opened her eyes.

Kabir was really worried:Pooja...Pooja...are you ok?Pooja...nothing will happen to you.I will not let anything happen to you.I love you Pooja.

Pooja was stunned hearing his confession of love.

Pooja:Kabir...don't be upset.I am alright.

Kabir smiled emotionally.

Pooja:You were always angry with me.Then why did you get upset seeing me in this condition?

Kabir kept silent for sometime without facing her.

Kabir looked at her emotionally and broke the silence:I was never angry with you Pooja.Since childhood you were special for me.I was having special feelings for you.But because of ego I wanted to hide my feelings from you.So I pretended to be angry and kept fighting with you.

Pooja was surprised.

Pooja smiled emotionally:Me too Kabir.I was also fighting with you simply.There was something else behind my fake anger.

Kabir's eyes were glowing:What was that?

Pooja looked at his eyes deeply:Love.

Kabir was surprised.He looked at her emotionally:True?

Pooja nodded her head emotionally:Yes.

Kabir:Why did you hide your love and fake anger?

Pooja:Just like you.

Kabir smiled:We both are fools.We wasted so many years fighting.

She smiled.

Pooja:Finally today how did you shed your ego and open your heart ?

Kabir cupped her face in his hands:I got scared whether will lose you.So unknowingly my hidden emotions came out.

Pooja looked at him deeply.

Kabir:Pooja..you said you wanted to tell something.What was that?

Pooja:I thought I will die and I will never able to tell you what I feel for you.what I wanted to tell you was...I love you Kabir...

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Kabir:I love you too Pooja.

He pecked her forehead.

Ruhaan caught Omkara from behind.

Ruhaan:Where are you going?To Gauri?

Om:You cannot stop me from catching Gauri today.

Ruhaan:You cannot touch her when I am alive.While coming in search of you I had informed the police also.

Om:The police can't do anything.That's why I successfully escaped from the jail.You said you will not let me go near Gauri when you are alive.What if you are not alive?

Om kicked Ruhaan's stomach with his elbow and got rid of his hold.

He took a rod which was seen on the ground.Om walked towards Ruhaan with an evil smile.

Suddenly somebody shot him and he fell down dead.Ruhaan was relieved as he could see Police men at the back with the gun.

Ruhaan:Thank you so much for saving me by finishing this devil.

Kabir and Pooja were walking in search of Ruhaan.On the way they bumped into Ruhaan.

They were relieved to see Ruhaan.

Pooja:Ruhaan...you are alright?

Ruhaan:Yes.

Kabir hugged him.

Pooja:Where is Omkara?

Ruhaan:His chapter is closed.He is dead.

Kabir-Pooja were shocked and scared.

Ruhaan:I wanted to kill Omkara.But I did'nt do that as my Gauri needs me.So don't worry.He was not murdered by me,but by the Police.

Kabir-Pooja smiled.

Kabir and Ruhaan went to Sharma house with Pooja in the early morning..PK and Suman were also there.

PK:Where were you all since night?

Suman:We were so worried.

Suddenly all were shocked to see bruises on them.

Anuradha:What is this?

Ashok:Can somebody explain it to me?

Kabir explained everything.They were shocked.

Ashok,Anuradha and Gauri hugged Pooja and cried.

Anuradha:Thank God that you are fine Pooja.

Gauri shed tears:Because of me only my Pooja was in danger.

Pooja:No Gauri.It's that monster Omkara's deed.

Gauri:Why can't he let me be in peace?

Ruhaan:Don't worry Gauri.He has been killed by the Police.

Gauri was stunned.

Kabir:Now we all will live in peace.

They all felt peaceful.

Gauri:Thank you Ruhaan for saving Pooja.

Ruhaan:Why thanks Gauri?Pooja is my best friend.

Gauri smiled.

Gauri looked at Kabir:Thank you very much Kabir for protecting Pooja though you both are enemies.

Kabir:Don't thank me Gauri.Pooja is my life.How can I not protect my life?

All were stunned.

Suddenly Kabir realized what he said.Ruhaan smirked:Finally you burst out your feelings.

Kabir was embarrassed.

PK:Kabir...what did you say now?

Kabir:Papa...I...

Anuradha:Pooja...do you have to say anything about it?

Pooja was blushing.

Kabir said without looking at them:Pooja and I love each other.

They all were surprised.

Ashok:When did this happen?You both were always fighting.

Pooja:We don't know when it happened.But it just happened.



Everyone smiled.

PK:We also wanted you both to get married.But we never mentioned it as we thought you both dislike each other.

Kabir-Pooja were surprised.

Ashok:Anyways ..now since we know that they both do not hate each other why don't we conduct both the weddings together?

Anuradha:Of course yes.

Suman:Yes,I agree.

Gauri:I also want to get married along with my sister.

Ruhaan:Both the weddings together will be cool.

PK:But Kabir and Pooja...if you both did not like that idea we will delay your wedding.

Kabir:No dad..we are ready.

Kabir looked at Pooja:What say Pooja?

Pooja blushed nodding her head.

Everyone giggled.

PK:Chill.We are not going to postpone your wedding.I was just joking.

Kabir and Pooja became shy.

Kabir-Pooja and Ruhaan-Gauri got married on the same mandap.



Gauri was sitting on the bed.Ruhaan sat near her.She was shy.He held her closer.

Gauri:Ruhaan...

He pecked her palm sweetly.She felt heavenly.

With Omkara it was a forced love moment,but with Ruhaan she really felt the beauty of physical love.

Gauri:Thank you so much for loving me Ruhaan.

Ruhaan:Thank you so much for entering my life Gauri.

They both smiled.

He placed her on the bed and covered her with love.

Kabir pulled Pooja closer holding by her waist.She was lost in his touch.

His lips travelled all over her face taking her to another beautiful world.

They melted in a sensual embrace.

Years passed...

Kabir-Pooja have a beautiful daughter called Ambar.


Ruhaan-Gauri have a cute son named Sahil.

A room....

On the 4 walls it's written 'Gauri' many times.

There you could see a man crying:Gauri...Gauri...I want you Gauri...Gauri....

He was none other than Omkara.

Yes,Omkara is alive.Though he was shot,he was not dead.He was taken to the hospital by the cops when he was found breathing.He was sent to a mental asylum.He is living in a mental asylum and every moment he is haunted by Gauri's face.He cries for Gauri and breaths for Gauri.

He screamed crying:Gauriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Unaware of his existence Gauri lived happily with Omkara and Sahil.

The End

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

pooja faught with Kabir

Dear its not characteristic but characterless

they lied to Gauri

the brothers went to the address n tried saving Pooja but the goons blocked them

as Om alleged Gauri, pooja blurted out the truth

he lit fire and went n Pooja got unconscious

hope shes fine

waiting for next

can u write an ff on yeh jadu hai jinn ka and on yeh hai chahatein?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Fantastic and so Awesome Update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

Om is still alive? That was a shocker. Hope he will stay where he is forever.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#78

Puja and Kabir finally confessed and started their lives together. Gauri finally found happiness.

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outstanding update... nice end

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Posted: 4 years ago
#80

Awesome Update



What was done to Gauri was just not good

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