The Palace of Secrets2 Deva Gauri SS - Page 6

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Posted: 2 months ago
#51

Did Pranila send Bela and Ranav with a purpose? What is it?

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#52

Part 5


Fascinating Update

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#53

Such a bitter truth, but if they keep her locked without anyinteraction with the outside world, she may never heal. Yr can u plz clarify whoplays Aruna? Is it Erica? Wow such a nice dance sequence, why don’t you also trywriting on Bhool Bhulaiya? Actually Aruna and her husband both are in jail, Arunais also locked in a room. Loved Bela Gauri bond. Wow you also showed a shape shiftingphoenix. Surprising to see Bela as a peahen. Hahaha I knew they are shape shiftinganimals, else how will they study? Waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#54

Thanks a lot.

Yes,Aruna is played by Erica.



Originally posted by: salley145

Such a bitter truth, but if they keep her locked without anyinteraction with the outside world, she may never heal. Yr can u plz clarify whoplays Aruna? Is it Erica? Wow such a nice dance sequence, why don’t you also trywriting on Bhool Bhulaiya? Actually Aruna and her husband both are in jail, Arunais also locked in a room. Loved Bela Gauri bond. Wow you also showed a shape shiftingphoenix. Surprising to see Bela as a peahen. Hahaha I knew they are shape shiftinganimals, else how will they study? Waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Salley

Coderlady

MochaQueen

GOLDIE ABROL

Taahir

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Thank you so much for the comments friends.





The Palace of Secrets2 Part 6

The credit for the edits goes to Preeti Queen.

Deva gave a packet to Gauri.

Deva:This is my gift for you.A saree.Please wear this Gauri.

Gauri smiled.

Gauri:Sure Deva.

Deva:First you see how the saree is.

Gauri:You bought this for me.It must be beautiful.

He smiled.




Gauri wore the saree.Deva was lost in her beauty.

He took the necklace and tied it around her neck romantically.

Pehle Bhi Main Tumse Mila Hoon
Pehli Dafa Hi Milke Laga
Toone Chhua Zakhmon Ko Mere
Marham Marham Dil Pe Laga

He adorned her hair with jasmine flowers.

Paagal Paagal Hain Thode
Baadal Baadal Hain Dono
Khul Ke Barse Bheege Aa Zara

They both looked at the mirror.

Deva:You look very pretty Gauri.

She blushed.

Pehle Bhi Main Tumse Mila Hoon
Pehli Dafa Hi Milke Laga
Toone Chhua Zakhmon Ko Mere



They shared a passionate eye lock.

Marham Marham Dil Pe Laga

Ho Ho Ho Ho…

She caressed his face with love.He caressed her face with passion.

Marham Marham Dil Pe Laga

Ho Ho Ho Ho…

They started romancing passionately.

Ghalat Kya Sahi Kya
Mujhe Na Pata Hai
Tumhein Agar Pata Ho
Bata Dena

Main Arse Se Khud Se
Zara Laapata Hoon
Tumhein Agar Milun Toh
Pata Dena

Kho Na Jaana Mujhe
Dekhte Dekhte

Tu Hi Zariya
Tu Hi Manzil Hai
Ya Ke Dil Hai
Itna Bata

Toone Chhua Zakhmon Ko Mere
Marham Marham Dil Pe Laga

Paagal Paagal Hain Thode
Baadal Baadal Hain Bheege
Barse Barse Bheege Aa Zara

Pehle Bhi Main Tumse Mila Hoon
Pehli Dafa Hi Milke Laga
Toone Chhua Zakhmon Ko Mere
Marham Marham Dil Pe Laga





Ho Ho Ho Ho…

Hmm…(Animal).



Shamsher and Sulakshana heard music at night.

They became upset.

Sulakshana:As usual our daughter Aruna is singing and dancing.

Shamsher nodded sadly.

Shamsher:It is our fate Sulakshana.

Sulakshana rested her head on his shoulder tearfully.

Actually it was not Aruna,but Gauri the one who was singing and dancing.


Mere dholna...sun..
Mere pyar ki dhun...

Mere dholna...sun..

Mere dholna...sun..
Mere pyar ki dhun...

Mere dholna...sun...

Meri chahatein toh...fiza mein bahengi...
Zinda...rahengi...hoke fanaah...

Tana na na tum...Tana na na tum...
Tana na na tum...Tana na na tum...

Tana dere...Tana dere...
dere na.......

Mere dholna...sun..
Mere pyar ki dhun...

Mere dholna...a..aaa.........

Saathi re Saathi re mar ke bhi tujhko...
chaahega dil...
Tujhe hi bechainiyo mein..
paayega dil...

Saathi re Saathi re mar ke bhi tujhko...
chaahega dil...
Tujhe hi bechainiyo mein..
paaYega dil...

Mere geshuon ke saaYe mein..
Teri raahaton ki khushboo hai...
Tere bagair kya jeena..
Mere roam roam mein tu hai...
Meri choodiyon ki khan khan se..
Teri sadaen aati hai...
Ye dooriyan hamesha hi..
Nazdeek humko laati hai...
o piya.....................

sa ni dha..
ni dha ma..

ma ga sa ni dha ni sa ga ma....
ma ga sa ni dha ni sa ga
ma ga sa ni dha ni sa ga
ma ga ma ga
sa ni dha ma ga pa dha ni
sa ni dha ma ga pa dha ni
sa ni dha ni
dha ni sa..dha ni sa
dha ni sa..dha ni sa
ma dha ni..ma dha ni
ma dha ni..ma dha ni
dha ni sa
dha ni sa
dha ni sa..
ma dha ni
ma dha ni

ma dha ni..
ma dha ni sa ma dha ni sa
ma dha ni sa ma dha ni sa
sa ni dha ma sa ni dha ma
sa ni dha ma sa ni dha ma
ma ma ga ga sa sa ni ni sa sa ni ni dha dha ni ni sa sa ni ni dha dha ma ma ga ga sa ni ni dha dha
dha ni sa sa sa
ni dha sa sa sa
ma ga sa sa sa

Mere dholna...sun
Mere pyar ki dhun
Mere dholna......a.aaa.........

Saanson mein Saanson mein Teri sargamein hain
ab raat din...
Zindagi Meri toh kuch na...
ab Tere bin...

Saanson mein Saanson mein Teri sargamein hain
ab raat din...
Zindagi Meri toh kuch na...
ab Tere bin...

Tere dhadkanon ki sargoshi
Meri dhadkano mein bajti hai

Meri jaagti Nigaahon mein,
Khwaahish Teri hi sajti hai

Mere khayalon mein harpal,
Tere khayal shaamil hain

Lamhe judaiyon wale,
mushkil bade hi mushkil hain

O piya.....................

Mere dholna sun..
Mere pyar ki...dhun..
Mere dholna......aaa.........aaa.......aa..........aa......

(Bhool bhulaiyaa).

Slowly her skin started changing

and she turned into a tigress.




Gauri was lying next to Deva on the bed.

Suddenly she felt strange.

She thought:Why do I feel that Maa is in danger.

She got up from the bed to go.Deva who got up from the bed held her hand.

Deva:Please don't go Gauri.

Gauri's eyes were glowing as she was slowly turning into a tigress because of the strange feeling in her.

But since she was not facing Deva,he did not see it.

Gauri:Leave me Deva.Don't be over romantic.I have some work to do.

She left his hand and ran out of the room.

Deva:Oh...the romantic moment got spoiled.




Pranila was sitting near the sea.A shark was there behind her.It was smirking.

The shark:Your end is near Pranila.

Pranila turned back and looked at it with a shock.

Pranila:Why are you after me?

Shark:Years back you killed my wife.

Pranila:Because she tried to kill my baby.



Flash back....

Gauri was sleeping on Pranila's lap when she was a baby.

Hearing some sound from the near by sea she walked towards the sea carrying Gauri in her arms.

Suddenly waves carried both to the sea.Pranila got shocked.

A shark was laughing.

Pranila:So you made the sound purposefully to bring me here.

The shark:Yes,I trapped you.I want you as my meal.

Pranila requested her:Please spare us.My baby is little and innocent.It needs a mother too.

Shark:Sorry Pranila.You both are for my stomach.

Pranila got angry:You forgot that I am very powerful.I can do anything to save my baby.

She turned into a huge tigress and attacked the shark.The shark got killed by Pranila.




Present....


The shark:All these years I was waiting to catch you.Finally that day has reached.Now you are a powerless human being.

The shark laughed.Pranila got scared.

Suddenly a figure appeared in the sea.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
#56

Iss story mein sab hi animals hain

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Posted: 2 months ago
#57

Yes.

Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: MochaQueen

Iss story mein sab hi animals hain

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Posted: 2 months ago
#58

Nice update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 2 months ago
#59

Deva gifting Gauri a saree was lovely. Their romance was passionate.Gauri’s dance looks so nice. I knew she’s a tigress. Oh so the shark is after Pranila.Of course anyone would do the same to save their child. Is this inspired by animal?Perfect pics, waiting for next.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#60

Gauri is also a shape shifter. Deva has no idea yet. How will he react to this?

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