The Palace of Secrets2 Deva Gauri SS - Page 5

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Glad that deva saved gauri and brought her home. Surprised to know Gauri do fasting every Tuesday to get good husband. I guess it's deva 😁😁. Deva talking interview with pranila and her tigers were cool. Pictures of pranila with her animals were super cool. I guess that shark is also pranila's pet only. Can't wait to know the reason behind her powers to talk to animals. The taking lessons to animals scene was super cool.
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Posted: 2 months ago
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The Palace of Secrets2 Part 5

Gauri noticed that one room was locked.

Gauri:Why is this room locked?

Deva became dull.

Shamsher and Sulakshana who came there became dull hearing this.

Gauri:Why you are all looking sad?Did I ask anything wrong?

Shamsher:No.But it's an unpleasant secret of our Mansion.

Gauri:Secret?Sulakshana:Yes.Shamsher...let Gauri also know the secret.Now she is our family member only.

Shamsher:Yes.Let her know it.

Gauri:What's the matter?

Sulakshana:Deva has an elder sister named Aruna.She loved dance like anything.She wanted to be the biggest dancer of the country.

Shamsher:But being narrow minded I forced her to get married and then pursue her career.That was my biggest mistake.After marriage her dreams were broken by her cruel husband.He tortured her physically and mentally to stop her from dancing.

Sulakshana burst into tears.

Sulakshana:Thus she lost her mental balance.Her husband deserted her.After that only we realised how much our daughter suffered in her husband's house.

Shamsher:We got her husband arrested.But despite of giving treatment,she has not recovered.To save our family reputation we have hidden from the outside world that Aruna is a mental patient now.She sings and dances in her room imagining herself dancing on the stage.So we hid her in her room by lying to the world that she has settled abroad with her husband.We know that it's cruel.But...

Gauri was shocked.


Sulakshana opened the door of Aruna's room.

Aruna was singing and dancing wearing a dance costume.Gauri was shocked.The others were in tears.


Mere dholna...sun..
Mere pyar ki dhun...

Mere dholna...sun..

Mere dholna...sun..
Mere pyar ki dhun...

Mere dholna...sun...

Meri chahatein toh...fiza mein bahengi...
Zinda...rahengi...hoke fanaah...

Tana na na tum...Tana na na tum...
Tana na na tum...Tana na na tum...

Tana dere...Tana dere...
dere na.......

Mere dholna...sun..
Mere pyar ki dhun...

Mere dholna...a..aaa.........


Saathi re Saathi re mar ke bhi tujhko...
chaahega dil...


Tujhe hi bechainiyo mein..
paayega dil...

Saathi re Saathi re mar ke bhi tujhko...
chaahega dil...
Tujhe hi bechainiyo mein..
paaYega dil...

Mere geshuon ke saaYe mein..
Teri raahaton ki khushboo hai...
Tere bagair kya jeena..
Mere roam roam mein tu hai...
Meri choodiyon ki khan khan se..
Teri sadaen aati hai...
Ye dooriyan hamesha hi..
Nazdeek humko laati hai...
o piya.....................

sa ni dha..
ni dha ma..

ma ga sa ni dha ni sa ga ma....
ma ga sa ni dha ni sa ga
ma ga sa ni dha ni sa ga
ma ga ma ga
sa ni dha ma ga pa dha ni
sa ni dha ma ga pa dha ni
sa ni dha ni
dha ni sa..dha ni sa
dha ni sa..dha ni sa
ma dha ni..ma dha ni
ma dha ni..ma dha ni
dha ni sa
dha ni sa
dha ni sa..


ma dha ni
ma dha ni
ma dha ni..
ma dha ni sa ma dha ni sa
ma dha ni sa ma dha ni sa
sa ni dha ma sa ni dha ma
sa ni dha ma sa ni dha ma
ma ma ga ga sa sa ni ni sa sa ni ni dha dha ni ni sa sa ni ni dha dha ma ma ga ga sa ni ni dha dha
dha ni sa sa sa
ni dha sa sa sa
ma ga sa sa sa

Mere dholna...sun
Mere pyar ki dhun
Mere dholna......a.aaa.........



(Bhool bhulaiyya).



Sulakshana closed the door crying.Gauri felt upset.

Gauri:Maa,please don't cry.Aruna di will be alright.

Sulakshana and Shamsher kept weeping.




Deva was crying in his room.Gauri went near him.

Gauri:Deva!

Deva:I love Aruna di a lot.But I failed to protect her.I was abroad to do my film making course.Otherwise I would not have spared her cruel husband.

Deva embraced her crying.

Gauri felt sad and held him closer.

Gauri:Deva...he is in the jail.He is getting punished for what he did.

Deva:But Aruna di lost her life despite of being innocent.

Gauri became upset.




After a month...

A couple visited Deva's house.

Gauri was surprised:Ranav...Bela!What a surprise!

Bela:Yes Gauri!

Gauri and Bela hugged each other.

Deva came.

Ranav:Hi Deva,I am Gauri's cousin Bela's husband Ranav.

Deva:Hi Ranav!

Shamsher and Sulakshana came.

Gauri:Papa...Maa...this is my cousin Bela.He is her husband Ranav.

Ranav-Bela:Hello Uncle..aunty...

Shamsher-Sulakshna also greeted them.

Bela:We are sorry.We were out of station.I had accompanied Ranav for his important business trip.So we could not attend the wedding.

Ranav:That's why we came here with a wedding gift.

Gauri:We don't want any wedding gift.You both visited us.I am really happy.

Shamsher:It seems that Gauri is really close to both of you.So it will be very nice if you both stay here for some days.

Sulakshana:I agree.You both please stay here.

Deva:Yes.We all can have a nice family time.

Ranav:But...

Gauri:Please....

Bela:Let us stay here for some days.I am seeing Gauri after a long time.

Ranav:Okay...fine.

Bela and Gauri hugged each other in excitement.

Everyone smiled seeing their bonding.




Gauri was showing the Mansion to Bela and Ranav.

Bela:This house is really beautiful Gauri.

Gauri:You are right.

Bela saw a wall painting of pea cocks.She touched the painting with a smile.It looks so beautiful.

Gauri smiled.

Gauri:You are craving to be a peahen.Right?

Bela:You are right.I am craving to be a peahen.Because it's my original form.I am a shape shifting Peahen.

Bela turned into a peahen.

Gauri smiled.

Ranav:Then why should I alone control myself?

He turned into a shape shifting phoenix.

Ranav:They thought that I will die if they murder me.But they forgot that a phoenix can never die.I was born again.


(The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor).

Gauri and Bela smirked.

Gauri:Come back to the human form guys.Someone will see.

Ranav and Bela transformed into human beings.




Pranila was lighting lamps in her jungle.She was surrounded by her animals and birds.

They all turned into human beings and greeted her.They all were shape shifting animals and birds.

One creature:Ranav and Bela have reached Deva's Mansion.

Pranila smirked.

(The credit for the edit goes to Preeti Queen)

Pranali remembered her pet birds Phoenix and Peahen taking human forms.They were none other than Ranav and Bela.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
#43

This story has some similarities with first part of BB....i wonder if Aruna is suffering from split personality

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Posted: 2 months ago
#44

No split personality like bhool bhulaiyya.

Did u read the last scene?


Thank u.


Originally posted by: MochaQueen

This story has some similarities with first part of BB....i wonder if Aruna is suffering from split personality

Edited by jasminerahul - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
#45

Very interesting update dear πŸ™‚

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Thanks for the pm


Part 2

Good update... finely written

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Posted: 2 months ago
#47

part 4

Gauri is quickly getting settled in her new life. Who is the mystery woman heard singing?

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Posted: 2 months ago
#48

A locked room is never good news. It always hides a story that is never forgotten.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#49

part 5

Aruna's story is so sad. The family can just watch helplessly.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#50

Both Bela and Ranav are shape shifting. Does Gauri also have that ability?

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