Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016) - Page 8

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

payal
what are you thinking my dear?

>>> I am not thinking anything..😆

arre you update os just today so plz wait for somedays

everybody must busy in their life so when they all free they definitely going to read
this month everybody is busy because of festivals
sometimes like button don't work or sometime they forget to hit like button

>>> Ohk darling😃

plz dear don't lose hope

>>> I didn't have any hopes bindu so it's ok😆

you know how much we are waiting for update of your stories
even lashy Di is also waiting for God update

>>> Really?? lashy😔

I don't think so..🤔

plz look at positive side at least you get 34 likes
plz payal update your stories
this is my humble request

>>> Trust me right now I don't have a little space in my brain to think/feel bad about forum and likes..😆 I was seeing the response because I was confused which story to post first..

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

nice update
I don't understand why Jo leave jalal
why Jo come to when she was frustrated
and again leave jalal
please update second part of os

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

That was too hot for me to handle 😳 😳

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Welcome back to writing, Payal...🤗

Originally posted by: Monucute

Uff! that's was more than I can Take *wiping sweat beads off my forehead*😆

>>> Liar..😆 You had taken more than this.. In my Temptation OS😉😆

Payu di🤗

>>> Neetu darling 🤗

So happy to see you back di😃

>>> I am happy too. Thankyou😃

Os was lovely... *Ahem* that's all I can say neither less nor more *cough cough*😆

>>>> He he.. Thankyou so much..🤗

Ending😕

>>> I"ll explain the ending after replying to all comments..😊

Thanks for the pm...

>>> Always Welcome!!

Love you❤️

>>> Me more❤️

Originally posted by: avika444

First of all...let me tell u how happy im to see u back that too with a bang ...and i really mean when i say this

>>> aww Thankyou soo much avi🤗

Secondly the banner ...ufff i liked the colouring and the words written on it and about pics ...ahem ahem...do u really want me to say anything about them ...☺️

>>> Yes, please😆

And lastly ...the os ...i can actually relate this os with someone i know very well ...who just like Jodha is pissed off with the ongoing problems in her family...not exactly the same though...m..but unlike Jodha ,she is not lucky enough to vent out her frustration and seek peace ...boyfriend nahi hai na

>>>>Agar bf hota bhi tab bhi wo yeh na karti avi😆 had h yaar😆

Wish i could help help in any way ...may be i can search a boyfried for her...😉

>>> Nops.. husband😉

Anyways ...the os was superb ...totally passionate and sensual...the ending ...payu u know na i like happy wae endings...i want to see JaJo together ...and the ending here looks incomplete ...still its ok yaar ...if possible give another shot of this...if not ...then its ok...leave this os as a good night read ☺️

>>>> Yes.. there's no second part for this as I wanted this ending only😃 Thankyou so so much for your comments dear.. I am so happy to see your comment. Also, you liked the first part na.. ending ko maro goli😆

Love you re🤗

Thanks for the pm dear

Love u loads