Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016) - Page 3

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

no mazak only mudde ki baat...😉

Jo gayi to gayi , now i want Jalal to do something & i would love to see DOMINATING , FURIOUS & POSSESSIVE but also CARING Jalal... , start writing next part...👍🏼

BRING HIM yrr. !

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Oh my god !!! Look whos here ...

Yesh.. I'm here

i've waiting for u to write for so long ...

Really?? 😃 Thanks manu..

thanks payal .. will b back with the comments after i complete reading ...😊 i m so so happy 🤗

Thankyou so much🤗

Originally posted by: CindyTruong

Hot and sensual OS..Payal..
Awesome ...love it...
Thanks ...

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Super duper update...i didn't like jo leaving ja as like object...

Originally posted by: harshu27

wonderful os payu after a long time got to read ur os🤗and as usual its sensual and passionate one...😉per last part incomplete laga re...😆i mean jo leaves him and goes...😕anyways waiting fr u to updte ur ffs...😉😉

Originally posted by: CindyTruong

wow beautiful banner...dear..

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

wow payal
thank you so much for os
I am so happy to see your pm after so many days
really so good to see you update at least something

>>> Aww 🤗

and os is just awesome no doubt in that
very well written
love it

>>> Thankyou😃

in your stories jodha is totally different from other stories
so jodha don't love jalal
both break up three years ago
but now she only landed on his department because she is frustrated , feeling guilty because of her father and also she is drunk
poor jalal he is thinking she come back to him after so long

>>> Yes dear..😛

but yes I don't like ending
you know I love happy ending no matter what

>>>> I think no one likes this os and ending😆 It's ok but I don't understand.. was it a sad ending??

I mean everyone is saying happy ending but she's happy without him na..😉

nothing much to say but yes love this os
infact I love all your work you know that
now you started writing so eagerly waiting for updates of your stories
start writing dear its distract you from your personal problems
I know you are going through lot
I pray for you all problems sorted out soon so you back in original self soon
stay happy dear

>>>> Thankyou so much, Bindu😃

thanks for pm



and yes
beautiful banner dear

>>>> glad you liked the banner dear😃