Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016) - Page 2

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Ye chali kyun gayi...😲
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Originally posted by: cute.manasi

Ye chali kyun gayi...😲

Mujhe laga meko puch rahi ho ki main kyun offline chali gaye🀣
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Mujhe laga meko puch rahi ho ki main kyun offline chali gaye🀣


no mazak only mudde ki baat...πŸ˜‰

Jo gayi to gayi , now i want Jalal to do something & i would love to see DOMINATING , FURIOUS & POSSESSIVE but also CARING Jalal... , start writing next part...πŸ‘πŸΌ

BRING HIM yrr. !
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Ekta maata kya kam thi jo baar baar jajo ko alag karti thiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Ekta maata kya kam thi jo baar baar jajo ko alag karti thiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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Isse Jada aur kitna kareeb laun main jo ja koπŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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Isse Jada aur kitna kareeb laun main jo ja koπŸ˜†


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Hot and sensual OS..Payal..
Awesome ...love it...
Thanks ...

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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

πŸ˜†
Isse Jada aur kitna kareeb laun main jo ja koπŸ˜†

πŸ˜†πŸ˜† but last main jo ko jaane kyun diya. Write 2nd part where jo is more positive about life and realises her true love in ja. Its a request to youπŸ˜†. I get restless when there is no happy ending.😭
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Super duper update...i didn't like jo leaving ja as like object...
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Originally posted by: divyadaya13

πŸ˜†πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜† but last main jo ko jaane kyun diya. Write 2nd part where jo is more positive about life and realises her true love in ja. Its a request to youπŸ˜†. I get restless when there is no happy ending.😭


She didn't love him. She wanted to let out her frustration so she landed on himπŸ˜†
Seems I should had written more properly about jo's state of mind
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