Don't say bye yaar Payal ... now i'm afraid of it .. u say bye n then u are gayab for months ... i sure had a doubt abt the ending thanks for clearing it ... and plz update journey yaar plz plz ...
Originally posted by: avika444
Wow ...so good to see payalia in form ...
So when r u updating ur stories ?? And which one r u posting first ??
Originally posted by: dellaakdha
oh tat's a gud note..and thank u for it...it was just needed for many as the author's and readers thought/view sometimes differ based on the situations..it ll clear the doubts regarding the end..atfirst i thought u ll give a sequel reg jo's decision but u gave it as a note and i lyk tat...waiting for ur updates payal..
Originally posted by: lakshmi1403
Well finally I read it...>> Good!πAs usual its hottt update...>> ThankyouπJo left out her frustration on jalal... π²Well I don't want talk about jodha but I don't like jalal leaving her after all this..He should definitely teach her a lesson..Its just my opinion..>> π²So he should make her lie for round 2 for revenge, this time??πIf u really want to give second update for this I would love to see cunning jalal hmmm Payal's jalal hopefully...>> Payal's jalalbut I am happy with this ending na.. I can't write next part for this..ππLeaving the last part I loved it..Very hot.. ummm... π³My payu always rocks.. π>> Thankyou so much,sweetheartπ€What a reentry darling...π€ͺWill wait for ur other stories tooo..>> My darlingβ€οΈThanks for writing again..Love u catty di...π€Muahhh...>> Love yaβ€οΈπ€Thanks for pm
I am happy to see u again Payu..
Waiting eagerly for your all updated...
I don't know when u will give update??
>>> Thankyou Anji!πUpdated Beyond Innocence yesterday but didn't see my readers except one or two
Os is dizziling hot...
Each n every line describes nicely...
Good job Payu..>> Thankyou so much!π
Last para is emotional..
Poor Ja..
Why jo left him aftet making love..>> Why she left-Please read a note on page 18 for clarification..π
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