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ArjunfanNAJAAN thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh wait let me read this whole os and then comment okay.
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Posted: 9 years ago
pehle toh nice character sketch aur now to the story.
wel pehle toh i cant believe Arjun is stammering and tht too infront of sameer... thats interesting yaar.

waise whom does Riya love.
and superbly written part 1.
waise whom does Arjun love.
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 2 was amazing.
wow arjun beat them up in one minute.
nice update next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
chapter 5 is so romantic yaar.
update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update both feel lone and emptiness
in there life update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dears
here is the next part


CHAPTER 8

Flashback continues

riya keeps lying there on the sand for a long time and after it was almost dark she gets up and starts walking absent mindedly and somewhere else in a room arjun was sleeping with tears rolling out of his eyes and a whisper comes out of his mouth "mom".


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Two days, its been two days since ariya met, two days since arjun talk to his dad, two full days, it has not pass even one second that arjun has recall the incident that took place and broke his heart into million of pieces.


He still can't forget what his father told him that day, "aaj ke baat apna ye batsurat chakal mujhe mat dikhana",this keeps ringing in his ears and everytime he thinks about it, he eyes wells up but he controls himself. Ever since his father said this ti him, he left the cottage and sends the key and a letter through his driver and now he was staying in a lodge. He had also tell the team that he was staying in a lodge but he did not tell them the true reason. Everyone thinks including sameer think that this is just a cover up so that no-one suspect them because everyone knows that this cottage belong to the businessman MR Suryakant rawte and only his son has the access to it.


For the team it was a good excuse so no-one thinks that there was something wrong with arjun but sameer did sense something wrong but arjun suryakant rawte se kaun jeeth saktha hai. So they just thinks about the case and little by little they were getting leads which were directing towards the commissioner. And now they were discussing about the case through video conferencing


"sam tujhe kya lagta hai, ab kya karna chahiye"


"pata nahin arjun, commissioner ek bohut powerful insan hai, hum kare to kya kare"


" so toh hai yaar, ab tak joh bhi lead milli hai humme sab usike taraf piont kar rahe hai, aur uss crime repoerter bhi toh thik thi, I think humme usse baat karne chahiye, tumme kya lagta hai"


arjun stiffenef a bit in the mention of riya and sam noticed it, he was sure that something was wrong with arjun so he asks her" arjun tum thik ho?"


" ha yaar main thik houn, woh actually mujhe nahi pata ke woh kaha hai aur uss din ke baat mera usse mulakat hi nahi hua, toh mujhe nahi pata kya karna hai"


" hmm sochne wali baat hai, ek kaam karta houn shree se kehke uski phone number ka pata lagane ki koshich karte hai telephone company se "


"thik hai lekin uske boss se pata laga sakte hai na mera matlab hai uss channel se jaha woh kaam karti hai"


" ha yaar lekin uske boss thora teda hai kahi baar pucha lekin kuch bhi nahi hua"


"hmm ab yahin ek mouka bacha hai ab usse baat karne ke baat hi kuch keh sakte hai"


"ha yaar tum sahi keh rahe ho acha arjun main tum se kuch pouchna chata houn"


"yaar tum itna formal kyun banrahe ho poucho na"


"arjun sach bata mujhe, kya kuch hua hai kya jiske wajhase tum lodge mein reh rahe ho dekh jooth bolne ki koshich bhi mat karna warna aaj ke baat main tum se baat nahi karunga"


arjun knows that he can't do anything now, he has to tell him the truth"sam actually...ek bohut bare prob hue hai, jiss din main yaha aaya tha dad ne ek bohut bara party organise kiya tha aur woh chate the ke main uss main chamil houn, woh mujhe uske business partners se milana chatethe lekin case ke wajhase mujhe yaha aana para aur dad ko lagta hai ke maine ye jaanbujkar kiya hai aur usne mujhe apni life se banned kardi usne mujhe kaha ke main aaj ke baat usse apni chakal na dikhana" arjun was sobbing after he finish telling him


"isliye maine woh cottage chora kyunki dad ki kissi bhi cheeze par ab mera koi hak nahi hai " arjun close his eyes remembering whatever happened with his dad that day


sameer was shocked, he has never seen arjun so broken and he was angry on his dad, he knows how much arjun loves his dad, he feels bad for his friend so he made his mind for something but he did not know now how to handle his friend sill he tries


"arjun i'm sorry yaar, mujhe nahi pata tha ke itna sab kuch hogaya plz yaar maaf kar de"


" tu mafi kyun magraha hai tune kuch nahi kiya, shayad mere naseeb mein mere dad ka pyar likha hi nahi anyways tu ya sab chod main thik houn akhir tum sab hai na mere saath mere family okay tu fikar mat kar, tu bass case ke bareme socho aur ha agar mujhe kuch hus bhi toh, toh main tumme batatunga, promise ab kuch ho"


"ha yaar thx aur aaj ke baat mujhse kuch mar chupana ok"


"done bye, good night"


"good night"


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the next day arjun gets a call from sam


"hello sam kya hua"


"hello arjun woh riya ka phone number aur uska address bhi milgaya hai, I mean jaha woh reh rahe hai pune mein main tujhe sms bejhta houn"


"thik hai sam kuch aur pata chala to bata na, acha main tujhse baat mein baat karta houn ok bye"


After that he cuts the call and goes to get ready. after an hour he was standing infront of a small house. he ring the bell and after some seconds the door get open.


he smiles at her and says"hi riya,kaise ho?"


kaise lagi?


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Posted: 9 years ago
nice.. 👏

always loved SamJun Bond...
Feeling Bad for Arjun 😭
God knows what will b Riya's reaction 😕 ..
so we r heading towards ARIYA TEAM WORK..

Continue this ...
Thanks a lot for PM..
😊 😊 ..
Edited by Sana_J. - 9 years ago
pink1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update after 2 day both are
meeting ow they will react
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice
So they met again
post soon :-)
Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update dr.
Feeling bad 4 arjun.
Samjun bond is superb.
Arjun went to meet riya.
Nw what will happen?
Update sn dr.Tnx 4 pm
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