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First i really admire you for your commitment to your readers in spite of your personal difficulties
So take a bow !!! 👍🏼 I think now u know the secret mantra as to why you are popular in the forum and among the readers and writers !!😉😛 My little prayers for your home net to get repaired soon . Hey Devi maiyya raksha karna hamare Zehra ko, aur unki mushkil ko hatao. I will ask her to give Jalebis on my behalf😆 So deal DM??😉
Over to the update :
So Ma crying over beta's videshi trip !! Typical of any parent's emotion when the child leaves them.
You have really added nice blend to it by suggesting about the number of pickles and ladoos which can be fed for the entire campus. This detail makes the update realistic.
What Khushi described about her LG was really true. Only they should be afraid of him So our heroine witnessed a HOT kissing scene and started running away but at the same time acting like a typical teenager and complained to his mom which eventually shattered all his dreams
hey first i will pat myself on my back for guessing in my earlier comment whether she would be jealous because he has got a big family and over protected because of something connected with Bhopal !!! Not bad, i too have grown as a reader ( i know too much tareefdari for my own self ) Shashi and Garima had a love marriage ?? 😲 I am also shocked like Arnav. Chupa rastam !!
Their past was beautifully penned or rather i should say etched perfectly👏 The loneliness and longing of a child to meet her relatives and surrounded by people who shower love , the disappointment in not receiving the same , the capitalization at a place where it is received in tons , the yearning to be with the grandparents while being the apple of their eye and listening to various tales from them , taking a long walk with them and being cared and loved . I think its every child's dream and only some lucky ones were gifted enough .
"when I started understanding my surroundings and the feelings others experienced, it dawned on me that although Nana had accepted their marriage, he hadn't forgiven Amma's 'deceit'. So, he never looked at my mother the way she wanted him to look at her'and I could feel her pain and no matter how much love my Nana showered upon me, I didn't like it because I couldn't share it with my Amma"
The above lines literally had me in tears. I just felt myself connected with Khushi as i am also a person who feels that i also dont belong to a place where my parents are not respected and treated well
His past is something i feel happens in most of the rich families. The war for money and power resulting in deceit, pain and hatred . My heart goes for the teenage boy who had his dreams shattered , lost his parents and had to become a responsible man overnight.
The way he shouted at her when she mocked him and the words he used which wounded the poor soul and her undying fighting spirit challenging him that she too will live her life in her own way were some of the brilliant moments of this update as the pain and the feel were beautifully brought out. His guiltiness and the eventual conclusion that he was responsible for his parent's state and death was something which people think due to their inner turmoil.
Their teasings in the morning and his concern and assurance that they are safe and sound along with the interrogation of his crazy family , her Ziddiness in driving back home , her sheepish admission that she was a naughty brat during child hood , their handshake , the various pranks played by her , and atlast the threatening to burn mosquito coil were some of the cute moments of this update. Now i am also excited with regard to his ways of pay back.⭐️
The story starts now only ??😲 I thought the attraction for the love started way back in Chapter 5 itself!!
Lavanya Ji - Nice collage. When is your tutorial starting? Student waiting here !!
Zehra i am leaving u only this time as your net is bad. I want more pictures from the next update to compensate for this 😡
Vandanaji - Only one question - Kya bolun ab?? Mesmerized by your poem. I also second with Arasi's opinion of you starting an index for your poems. Now I am on a mission and expecting followers for the same for this movement 😆
PS: Zehra i think u can thank her by making a collage of smirking , sexy and smiling Barun and giving an intro of her to Barun !!😉😛
What more will be a better thank u gift for a "I LOVE BARUN - Bas" fan !! 😛 but please dont declare this Arnav/Barun for her as u have already promised him as mine😳 Copyrights reserved 😆
My earlier comment was unresed today only - here is the link - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3673024&PID=88916592� (Page 66)
Sorry i dont know to hyper link , we will have that tuition in our next scrapping session !! 😛and gurudhakshana will be dealt privately by giving a horror movie video/ ticket 😉
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