So sorry for the late comment, just read the last two updates (busy because of Ramadan)
Both updates were amazing and simply fantastic,
Love the flashbacks, Khushi is so crazy, especially with her mischief and her main aim was to wind up Arnav.
Awww the part in the kitchen between Arnav and his mum was such a touching and beautiful moment.
Loving the present, so it was his Nani that Arnav had called back, Khushi was so happy and overwhelmed, a lovely gesture by Arnav.
Wow, the office part was amazing when Arnav was mesmerised by khushi's wet appearance, loved the pic you used, one of my favourite scenes from the show.
Love the fact you included the rain hug, beautiful and sensual moment, written perfectly.
So poor Arnav has started to feel affected by khushi's presence and told her to work for Akash.
I'm so looking forward to the nanital trip, thanks to the three musketeers Anjali, Dadi and Nani.
Loved the updates, definitely a brilliant read.
The updates were written exceptionally well.
Eagerly waiting for the next part,
Continue soon and thanks for the Email xx
Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago
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