FF:Life is now Complete... Epilogue-pg67,updated. 16.03.2014 *complete

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Charecter sketch.
1)ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod.
2)Mrs.Ankita Sameer Rathod.
3)ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte.
4)Research Specialist Riya Mukherjee.
5)Technical expert Shreekant Sen aka Shree.
6)Chandrakant Patil aka Chotu,ETF's commando.
7)Pratiksha Damsingh Rathod: ACP Sameer Rathod's only sister and Ankita's best friend cum nanad.

More charecters will be added as the story will progress.

Important Note:-
yahaan,iss story mein Arjun ko show mein jaise dikhaya jaata hai,waise hi dikhaya jaaye ga,but,thora soft bhi hoga,towards Riya.

Kal se post karna shuru karungi.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome. Really excited to read more. Please do continue ASAP!
I really want to see/read how soft Arjun is to Riya.
Pm me when you update.
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Nice start n conti soon N the most liking think in ur ff is ur title...i like ur title...Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Wow... one more... ðŸ˜ƒ
continue soon... cant wait ðŸ˜³
loved the title... ðŸ˜‰
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awesome CS :) 
looking forward to read it
continue soon 
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Nice CS..
Continue son
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Chapter 1.

The story begins,finally Arjun killing Sikander,thus completing Arjun's revenge.


Riya was admitted in the hospital.She was shot in her right shoulder.Ankita,Shree and Chotu were with her.She was unconscious for the last two days,because of the anaesthesia effects.
Ankita: Dekho na,Shree. Riya ko behosh huye do din beet gaye hai.Kab uthegi woh?
Kab woh mujhse baat karegi? Uski baat sunne keliye mere kaan taras rahe hai.usse bohut kuch batana hai.Usse ek bohut bari khush khabri deni hai.
Chotu:Kaisi khush khabri,Ankita?
Shree:What good news,Ankita?
Ankita(in a happy tone):Shree aur Chotu,tum dono chacha banne wale ho,aur,Riya maasi banne wali hai.
Shree and Chotu(in unison):KYA????
Sach mein????
Ankita:haan,haan. Main maa banne wali hu,aur,tumhare Rathod sir papa banne wale hai.
Shree and Chotu hug her and wish her congrats.
Ankita entwined her hand with Riya's hand and spoke.
Ankita:Riya,uth jao na.Dekho na,tumhari hone wali bhanja ya bhanji tumhe uthne ko keh rahi hai.Tumne kaha tha Rathod se agar Ankita ko larki hui toh uska naam Mansha rakhungi aur larka hua toh Rudra rakhungi.Utho na,Riya,please.Tumhe mera bohut khyal rakhna hai.Riya,utho.
Shree and Chotu were feeling sad.
They consoled Ankita.
Suddenly,Ankita felt that Riya's hands were moving.Ankita,shree and Chotu were so happy.
Shree took Chotu and Ankita out of the room and immediately informed the doctors.
Doctors rushed inside the room and were checking Riya's health.
After 10mins,doctors came out of the room.
Ankita:kya hua,Doctor? Sab theek hai na?
Doctor:everything is alright,Mrs.Rathod. Riya is out of danger now.Bhagwaan ne aap sab ki prarthna sunli.But be careful,unke shoulder pe gehri chot ki wajah se kuch hafte keliye unhe rest ki zarurat hai.Par,she can do light work.
Shree:thank you so much,Doc.
Chotu:Rathod sir ko batata hu.
Ankita nods in a yes.



In office,Rathod was reading a case file,when,suddenly,his phone buzzed.Caller id showed that Chotu is calling.Rathod answered the call.
Rathod:haan,bolo,Chotu.
Chotu:Sir,Riya ko hosh aachuki hai.Woh aab khatre se bahar hai,par...
Rathod: par kya,Chotu?
Chotu: par sir,Doctor ne kaha hai hai goli Riya ki daaine kandhe pe lagne ki wajah bohut gehra ghav banchuka hai.usse bharne mein thora time lagega.
Rathod: par Rawte ne usse jo dard diya hai,uss dard ke samne yeh dard kuch nahi hai."SUNKE KE BHI AANSUNA KAR DIYA",Rawte ne.
Chotu:aapne sahi kaha Sir. Choriye unn baaton ko.Bhagwaan ka shukr aadah kijiye ki humari Riya aab thik hai.Doctor ne yeh bhi bola ki Riya ko kuch hafto keliye rest bohut zaruri hai,par,halka phulka kaam kar sakti hai.Hum sab Riya ke saath hai.Arjun sir ko main toh kya,Shree aur Ankita bhi kabhi maaf nahi karenge.
Rathod:u r right,Chotu. Waise,main aadhe ghante mein hospital aa jaunga.Ankita ka khyal rakhna.
Chotu: dont worry,Sir.Ankita is perfectly alright.She is inside with Riya.
Rathod: ok.Rakhta hu,bye.
Chotu:bye,Sir.

Rathod thinks to himself,"Riya,tum jaldi thik ho jao.ETF is missing you."

after half an hour,Rathod was preparing to leave for hospital,when he saw Arjun.
Arjun had the same attitude,but,he was a bit soft and mellowed from before.
He saw Rathod going somewhere.He asked Rathod.
Arjun:kaha ja rahe ho,Sam?
Rathod's head shot up after hearing this name after a long time.He was very happy,but,at the same time,was sad and angry.
Rathod:kon Sam?yahaan koi Sam nahi rehta.yahaan sirf ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod kaam karta hai,samjhhe ya samjhau?
Arjun:kyun aise behki behki baatein kar rahe ho?
Rathod:Rawte,main hospital ja raha hu Riya ko dekne.Main baadme tumse baat karta hu.
Arjun: nahi,Sam.aaj toh tumhe mujhse baat karni hi paregi.kyun tum mujhe itna avoid kar rahe ho?
Rathod:sunna chahte ho,toh suno.Tumne Riya ko jo chot pohuchayi hai,usske liye main tumhe kabhi bhi maaf nahi karunga,aur,agar,maaf kiya bhi,then it will be ur good luck.
Riya toh tumse bohut pyaar karti thi.tumne uske baaton ko bhi,"SUNKE AANSUNA KAR DIYA."
Arjun:main Riya se pyaar nahi karta.she is just my colleague,and,moreover,my junior.
Main sirf Roshni se pyaar karta thha aur humesha rahunga.
Rathod: oh really!!!!! Agar tum Roshni se pyaar karte thhe,toh woh tumhe woh raaz kyun nahi batayi?
Arjun:kaisi raaz? Aur Roshni ke baare main ek shabd bhi nahi.
Rathod:wah... Aakhir kar,dikhahi di tumne tumhari dosti.u knw what? Right now,i am feeling really ashamed of myself to be known as your friend and ur colleague.
Mujhe tumhari shakal nahi dekhni hai.
Arjun: Rathod,stop. Meri baat suno.
Rathod:main nahi sunne wala. Accha,ek baat aur? Agar tum Riya se pyaar nahi karte,toh tumne usse uss din hospital kyun legaye thhe after Sikander's encounter?
Arjun was shocked and,for,the first time,he was tongue tied.
Rathod:bolti kyun bandh ho gayi?jawaab do,Rawte. Nahi de pawge jawaab.Kisiki baare mein accha nahi soch sakte,toh bura bhi maat sochna.
Saying this Rathod left the ETF premises.

Precap: Rathod visits Riya in the hospital.Arjun is thinking about the raaz.and much more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
First episode etna supence...conti soon...
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hmmm Ankita is pregnant😆
and poor Riya must have suffered so much, and finally she's out of danger...
Par aisa kya huwa? why is arjun angry with her?
and what raaz are they talking about?😕 too many suspense😆
Please update soon dear😉
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OMG ankita is pregnat rolf...
plz udate soon