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Posted: 8 months ago
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Thanks a lot all of you for giving your precious time to read my story.

I'm extremely sorry to inform that there will be a delay in uploading the next episode as I'm currently caught up in finishing an important work.

Meanwhile, I would like to invite all of you to give your guesses through comments on how do you think this story will proceed further.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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It is your story and I know that as a writer you will do justice to it but please do write about Sahan lovey dovey moments also as we don't get to see that in the show.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Beautifully written, with soo much positivity, looking forward to read how you unfold the story.

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Originally posted by: Reader17

It is your story and I know that as a writer you will do justice to it but please do write about Sahan lovey dovey moments also as we don't get to see that in the show.

I will try to insert Sahan scenes wherever possible but as I said since this a Veerat story, the central plotline will be focusing on them.

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Episode 2 (Rab ne banayi jodi)

The episode starts with Ajit and Santhosh standing dumfounded after hearing Akaal’s request. Ajit folds his hands and tells Akaal, “Akaal ji, Santhosh and I are the luckiest parents in this world that despite our middle class background you asked the hand of our second daughter for your elder grandson Angad Singh Brar. But now, you are asking for our younger daughter’s hand? Haven’t we told you that our eldest daughter is still unmarried? In that case, how can we get our youngest daughter married? What will people say about our Seerat? They will surely make stories that there is something wrong with our Seerat that her two younger sisters got married before her.” Akaal, “I understand your worries Ajit ji but haven’t you said that your eldest daughter is very ambitious and would not like to get married until she establishes her career? In that case, wouldn’t it be alright if you get your other daughter married?” Ajit and Santhosh were still not convinced. Akaal continues, “Ajit ji, Santhosh ji, I promise that once your eldest daughter returns to Punjab, I will take the full responsibility of her marriage but you both should promise me that you will surely think about what I said.” Santhosh, “Akaal Saheb, it’s a great honor for us to get our daughters married into your family but we still need time to decide. Moreover, our Keerat is too young. She has not even completed her college and she too has big ambitions. She wants to become a wrestler. Do you think she will be able to gel into your family?” Jabyot, “Santhosh ji, you need not worry at all about Keerat’s well-being in our family. We have raised our grandsons with good values of culture and manners. I’m sure our Veer will win your heart just the same way our Angad did.” Ajit and Santhosh were still skeptical. Jabyot continues, “Ajit ji, Santhosh ji, We understand it is a very difficult decision to take as it is concerned with the life of your daughter but trust me, your daughter Keerat will have a blissful married life in our family.” Santhosh and Ajit looked on. Just then, Inder called Akaal and Jabyot saying, “Papaji, Mummyji, what are you both doing? It is getting late for Sahiba’s grahpravesh rasam, let’s go.” Akaal signs them that they are coming and turns again towards Santhosh and Ajit saying, “Santhosh ji, Ajit ji, Take as much time as you need to decide after all it’s related to your daughter’s future however I insist not to discuss about this with Keerat or anyone else in your or our family right now. We shall present it to our families only if you are alright in going forward with this proposal.” After saying that, Akaal and Jabyot take leave. Santhosh and Ajit were still lost in thoughts when Keerat comes and hugs Santhosh telling her parents, “Mummy, Papa are you sad that Sahiba di is now married and is a part of Brar family? Don’t worry she has got a perfect life partner in Angad jiju and perfect in-laws in the Brars. I’m sure they will always keep Sahiba di happy.” Santhosh and Ajit smile and embrace their daughter affectionately. Sukhi comes there and seeing Ajit, Santhosh, Keerat together wards off the evil sight from them saying, “Nazar na lage!!” She then continues to Santhosh, “Sahiba is really lucky that she got Angad and Brar family, now just pray to Rab that your other two daughters too get a good family like Sahiba’s.” Santhosh reminisces Akaal and Jabyot’s words (Rab Aap Hi Ishq Ugawe, Rab Aap Hi Ishq Mitawe..…. Teri Meri Doriyaan continues to play in the background).

Night time, Brar Mansion, Sahiba and Angad’s bedroom

Sahiba is seated on the bed dressed beautifully in an off-white colored salwar with its duppata drapped around her head. She nervously fiddled her fingers and glanced every second towards the door waiting anxiously for the impending. Soon, Angad enters the room cautiously. Sahiba instantly gets up seeing him. Angad comes near Sahiba and makes out the latter’s anxiety. He inches closer towards her; Sahiba’s heart beats start racing faster. Angad comes closer to Sahiba such that she could feel his breath, she leans backward closing her eyes. Finally, Angad leans forward and takes the pillow and bedsheet kept beside her and goes towards the small divan placed a few metres away from the bed. Sahiba opens her eyes and was surprised to see Angad’s actions. She asks him, “What are you doing, Angad?” Angad, “Giving you time and space.” Sahiba, “Huh?” Angad, “Look, first of all, it’s not like I don’t trust my Darji and Bebe’s choice of life-partner for me but ours is an arranged marriage where we hardly had time spent with each other before marriage, so I believe that we need time and space to know and understand each other before taking our relationship forward.” Sahiba’s eyes were filled with tears of joy, on hearing Angad’s words. She hastily comes forward and hugs Angad tightly placing her head on his chest. Angad was taken aback on feeling Sahiba’s warmth on his bosom and was tempted to reciprocate, however he controls himself. Sahiba emotionally tells him, “Thank you Angad. Thank you so much for trying to understand me.” Angad catches Sahiba’s shoulders, pulls her facing him, makes her sit comfortably on the bed and says, “You are my wife now Sahiba. It is my responsibility to take care of your likes and dislikes. Are you missing home?” Sahiba slowly wipes her tears and tells him, “Which newly married girl wouldn’t miss her home? The place where she was born, the place where she grew up and the place where she made fond memories. ” Angad, “What do you miss the most about your home?” Sahiba gets thinking and tells him, “Being the middle sister made me close to both my sisters, Seerat Di and Keerat. Both were more close to me than with each other. They shared all their secrets and desires to me first before anyone else in the family. Now, realizing that I have to live a life without them, makes me miss them even more.” Angad takes Sahiba’s hand into his, places them in Sahiba’s lap and tells her, “Then why don’t we bring your sisters too to Brar Mansion?” Sahiba was perplexed.

Monga House, Santhosh and Ajit’s bedroom

Ajit enters and sees Santhosh seated on the bed lost in thoughts. He senses Santhosh’s apprehension and tells her, “Are you still pondering about what Akaal Saheb and Jabyot ji said after Sahiba’s bidaai?" Santhosh, “How can I not think about that when it is related to our daughters’ lives?” Ajit, “What do you think we should do? Should we get Keerat too married into the Brars’ family?” Santhosh, “A ji, what are you saying? We just set the doli for Sahiba and you are already thinking of doing the same for Keerat? Keerat is still young and what about our Seerat?” Ajit trying to calm her down, “Santhosh, they are your daughters. Don’t you trust in them? Keerat is not that young, that she cannot get married and take the responsibility of a family and Seerat, don’t you remember what she said? Right now, she wants to focus only and only on her career? You just wait and watch, once our Seerat returns, there will be a line of suitors for her.” Santhosh,“Then what about our Keerat and her dreams? Don’t you know that she wants to become a wrestler?” Ajit, “Santhosh!! Didn’t we worry in the same way for Sahiba? At that moment, Angad put our worries to rest by promising that he would support Sahiba’s dreams and career. Didn’t Akaal Saheb and Jabyot ji assure us that they gave the same values to all their grandchildren? I’m sure Veer will also support our Keerat in the same way.” Santhosh was still not completely convinced. Ajit tells her, “Now leave all that and take rest, it was a long day for us. You just put your trust on Babaji and inform him about your worries. I’m sure he will show you the right way out.” Santhosh looks on.

Brar Mansion, Angad and Sahiba’s bedroom

Sahiba was puzzled hearing Angad’s words and asks him, “What do you mean Angad? How can I bring my sisters too to Brar mansion?” Angad, “What I mean to say is that you have two sisters and I have six siblings of which three of them are brothers. Barring Prince, there’s Garry and Veer who too are of marriageable age. So wouldn’t it be nice if your sisters get married to my brothers?” Sahiba’s eyes grew big in amazement. Angad continued, “Look I know marriage is a big decision and it should be taken by the partners themselves but after meeting you and getting to know about, I feel that your sisters will make a perfect match for my brothers.” A smile passes through Sahiba’s face, she playfully keeps her finger on Angad’s top button and leans closer to him asking, “Well how well do you know me?” Angad gets nervous and starts stammering, “Sahi….Sahib…Sahiba…”, he gets up immediately saying, “Sahiba, I know that you are a really nice girl and I’m sure your sisters will also be like you which is why I want them as my brothers’ wives. Besides, won’t it be also good for you to get to live with your sisters in the Brar family?” Sahiba reflects for a moment and tells him, “See Angad, uniting two individuals in a marriage is not in our hands. It’s purely in Rab’s hands. We can only follow Rab’s signs and instructions, so let’s just leave everything in Rab’s hands. If Rab has connected my sisters’ strings (doris) with your brothers then they will surely come to Brar mansion, otherwise whatever happens, will happen for the good.” (Rab Aap Hi Ishq Ugawe, Rab Aap Hi Ishq Mitawe..….Khud Baandhi Hai Uss Rab Ne Hai Teri Meri Doriyaan Rab Aap Hi Ishq Ugawe, Rab Aap Hi Ishq Mitawe song plays in the background ) Angad was stunned with Sahiba’s words of wisdom, he wanted to hug her tightly and kiss her, however he stopped himself.” Sahiba continues “I think it’s quite late now, we should sleep.” Angad nods and goes towards the divan, arranges it and gradually lies on it. Sahiba on the other hand, lies on the bed. The two keep stealing glances of each other, until they close their eyes and eventually sleep (Teri Meri Doriyaan plays in the background).

As the days pass by, Sahiba impresses everyone in the Brar family including Angad with her kindness and talents. Manbeer and Inder thank Akaal and Jabyot for choosing Sahiba as their daughter-in-law. Both Akaal and Jabyot felt proud in their decision but somewhere deep in their hearts they anticipated to know what decision Ajit and Santhosh had made about their proposal.

A few days after Sahan’s marriage, Gurdwara

Santhosh is seen prostrating in front of the Guru Granth Sahib. Someone had placed yellow marigold flowers near Guru Granth Sahib as a part of their offering. Sahiba prayed in her heart, “What should I do Babaji? My mind is confused. Is Veer the right life-partner for my Keerat? Please show me some sign Babaji. Just as she was praying, a flower kept near the Guru Granth Sahib rolls downwards towards her. (Rab Aap Hi Ishq Ugawe, Rab Aap Hi Ishq Mitawe..….Khud Baandhi Hai Uss Rab Ne Hai Teri Meri Doriyaan Rab Aap Hi Ishq Ugawe, Rab Aap Hi Ishq Mitawe song plays in the background ) Santhosh was amazed and kept staring at the Guru Granth Sahib in confused thoughts. While, Santhosh was still baffled, her phone starts beeping, she sees that it was a call from Jabyot. She kept gazing at the Guru Granth Sahib. (Rab Aap Hi Ishq Ugawe, Rab Aap Hi Ishq Mitawe..…. Teri Meri Doriyaan continues to play in the background)

A day later, Brar Mansion, All family members were seated for breakfast

Sahiba is busy serving hot gobhi parathas for everyone. Hansraj asks, “Sahiba, I agree that you make really tasty gobhi parathas but why are you making them every other day? Is it your favorite?” Prabhyot teasingly tells him, “Not exactly her favorite but someone else’s favorite!!” Everyone laugh while Angad and Sahiba turn red. Kiara adds, “Not just gobhi ki parathe phuphaji, Sahiba pabhi has also made Angad paaji’s favorite phirni today.” Everyone continue to laugh while Sahiba and Angad gave shyful glances at each other. Manbeer continues, “I must say, Sahiba learnt all of Angad’s likes and dislikes within a few days. We are blessed to have her as our daughter-in-law.” Gurleen, “You are right Parjayiji! I wish I too get a daughter-in-law like Sahiba but it’s no use, my son Veer rejects every girl’s proposal, I bring for him.” Veer continues to gulp his food giving her no notice while Akaal and Jabyot gave mischievous looks at each other. Soon, Akaal shushes everyone saying, “I want to announce something to all of you.” All the heads turn towards him.

Scene shifts to Monga House

Keerat is hurrying for college as she is getting late. She comes to the breakfast table rolls few parathas in a silver foil and tells everyone, “Mummyji, Papaji, Beeji I’m leaving, I have an important class and I’m already late!!” Ajit stops her saying, “Wait Keerat, we have something more important than your class to discuss with you.” Keerat turns around being surprised.

Scene shifts to Brar Mansion

Angad, “What is it Daarji, is it anything to worry about?” Akaal continues, “Nothing to worry about but it is something related to our whole family.” Everyone looked at each other in puzzlement. Inder, “What is it Papaji? Now it is bothering all of us.” Akaal turns his head towards Gurleen and Jaspal and tells them, “Jaspal, Gurleen, just like the way I and Jabyot chose Sahiba for Angad, we have chosen Sahiba’s younger sister, Keerat for Veer.” Gurleen and Jaspal smile on hearing that while Veer’s eyes bulge out in horror.

Scene shifts to Monga House

“What is it Papaji? What is so important that you have stopped me from going to my class?” Ajit gets up, comes closer to his daughter and tells her, “Puttar, Akaal Saheb and Jabyot ji have asked your hand in marriage for their younger grandson Veer.” Keerat was astounded to hear that.

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To be continued.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Lovely....I loved the start..the story is so full of positivity.smiley27

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Posted: 8 months ago
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The characters here are must more positive than the show. Waiting for VeeRat next meeting. Hope their story doesn't become toxic like the show.

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Episode 3 (Untold Secrets)

The episode starts at Brar Mansion, Dining hall

All were shocked and transfixed to their position after hearing Akaal’s announcement. Sahiba and Angad shared shocked expressions at each other recalling their conversation on the same topic during their nuptial night. Veer furiously gets up and confronts Akaal asking, “What Daarji you have already planned my marriage without even consenting me?” Jaspal berates him saying, “Veer!! Is this how you talk to your Daarji?” Veer continues dismayingly, “But here the topic is about my marriage so isn’t it me who holds the maximum rights to take the decisions?” Akaal silences him by calling out his name “Veer!!” and continues, “I agree the topic is about your marriage and you have all the rights to decide the things in your life but remember that I and Jabyot are your grandparents. We would never decide or do anything that will ruin your life. Don’t forget, Sahiba was also our choice for Angad and look at them today, don’t you see how happy they are together?” Angad approves it saying, “I agree with Daarji, Veer. I have full confidence in Daarji and Bebe’s decisions and I’m sure they wouldn’t go wrong. If they have chosen Keerat for you then it should be for a good reason. And what is wrong with Keerat?” Veer, “Angad paaji, I have just met her once!! I hardly know anything about her!! And here Daarji and Bebe have already made plans to get me hitched with her. Why?” Daarji questions, “Do you have anyone else in your life Veer? If yes then we are ready to send our proposal to that girl instead of Keerat.” Veer upsettingly, “There’s no one else in my life Daarji!! But what is the hurry for my marriage. Angad paaji just got married and isn’t there Garry too so why don’t you get him hitched before me?” Jasleen interrupts, “Don’t bring Garry into this. He is busy making his career in UK and wants to get married only after that while it’s not the same with you. You are the most celebrated Rockstar of Punjab. I accept you will get any girl of your choice but since you do not have any girl in your life what is wrong in going forward with Mummyji and Papaji’s choice?” Gurleen affirms saying, “Yes Veer puttar. Daarji and Bebe have never taken any wrong decisions regarding anyone’s life. Keerat is a nice girl, we all like her and most importantly she is Sahiba’s sister. I’m sure she will make her special place in all our hearts like Sahiba did.” Sahiba’s face brightened in contentment. Prince jokes in saying, “Gurleen maami, Veer paaji doesn’t want to marry Keerat di because he’s scared of her.” Everyone chuckles while Veer hits on Prince’s head saying, “Oye chup kar!!”. Akaal continues, “Gurleen, Jaspal are you both alright with going forward with this proposal?” Jaspal, “Of course Papaji, Veer has been always rejecting every girl’s proposal we bought for him, now that you have taken the initiative of Veer’s marriage, we are absolutely alright with whatever you decide.” Veer gave them a discouraged expression. Akaal turns towards Veer and tells him, “Did you hear your family’s decision, Veer? Everyone agrees that Keerat would surely make an ideal life-partner for you, so what is the harm in taking this proposal forward? If you think you don’t know enough about her then just like Angad-Sahiba, we can arrange meetings for you both to get to know each other more.” Veer was completely mad with all the proceedings and walks away without uttering a word more. Angad tells Akaal, “Don’t worry Daarji, I will talk to him.” Akaal nods.

Scene shifts to Monga House

Keerat was standing gape-mouthed after hearing what Ajit just said and exclaims, “What???” It’s hardly been a few days after Sahiba’s di marriage and you have already fixed my marriage. Have you got so fed up with me?” Sukhi, “Keerat, relax!! First of all listen to what your Mummyji and Papaji want to say!!” Keerat composes a bit. Ajit continues, “Keerat we have not fixed your marriage yet and it’s not like we are tired of you. You are our little princess, how can we think of sending you away so soon? It’s just that when Akaal Saheb and Jabyot ji themselves came to us asking for your hand, we felt that it was a prospective good relationship for you.” Keerat, “Then what about my dreams and career goals, Papaji? You both have always supported Seerat di’s decision to not get married until she establishes her career; won’t you do the same for me?” Santhosh, “Keerat when did we say that we will not support your dreams and career? Akaal Saheb and Jabyot ji have promised that they will let you pursue your dreams and goals even after you get married?” Keerat, “But what is the hurry to get me married when Seerat di is still unmarried?” Sukhi interrupts, “Keerat every girl’s parents are always anxious to find the right partner and in-laws for their daughter. Ajit and Santhosh are also in the same situation. When they got Brars proposal for you, they only thought about your happiness and well-being after marriage nothing else and it’s not like you don’t want to get married ever. Isn’t your marriage bound to happen some day or the other? So what’s wrong if it happens now?” Keerat was still not satisfied, she informs her family that she needs some lone time and rushes to her room. After getting inside, she shuts the door. Ajit and Santhosh concernedly knock at her door. Santhosh tries to persuade her saying, “Keerat, why have you shut the door? Look we know you don’t want to get married soon but good proposals don’t come always, puttar. The Brars are a good family; they will surely support your dreams and goals and Veer is a well-settled guy who earns well. You will be always happy there.” Inside Keerat muttered under her breath, “Does that mean I have to marry that egoistic shithead?” Outside Santhosh asks, “Did you say something Keerat?” Keerat shouts, “Mummyji, Papaji yaar!! Both of you leave me alone for some time.” Sukhi comes there and tells them to let Keerat alone for some time. Ajit and Santhosh agree and leave. Inside Keerat sits angrily on her bed.

Scene shifts to Brar Mansion

Angad comes to Veer’s room and sees him carelessly strumming his guitar on his bed. He goes and sits beside Veer. The latter ignores him. So, Angad teases him asking, “So my little brother is already preparing a love song?” Veer angrily keeps his guitar away and asks him, “Why have you come here paaji?” Angad, “To discuss about your marriage.” Veer irritatedly gets up from the bed saying, “I don’t want to talk anything about it.” Angad comes and stands next to him, keeps his hand on his shoulder and says, “Look Veer, I know it’s difficult to take a decision on getting married to a stranger but just look at me. I and Sahiba, hardly knew each other before our marriage but today just a few days after our marriage, she has become the world to me and all this happened thanks to Daarji and Bebe. You too have to do the same thing Veer, just trust completely on Daarji and Bebe’s choice. I’m sure that their choice, Keerat, would surely become your perfect life-partner.” Veer looked away without getting moved by Angad’s words. Angad continues, “Okay I understand that you are reluctant to marry Keerat because you want to know more about her. Soooooo, I have brought something for you.” Angad takes out a piece of paper from his pocket and places it on Veer’s hand. Veer looks at the piece of paper and sees Keerat’s phone number written on it. Angad catches Veer’s shoulder a second time and tells him, “All I want to say to my little brother is that don’t underestimate Daarji and Bebe’s decisions, they love us so much that they can never go wrong in taking our lives’ decisions. Just give a chance to their decision.” With that being said, Angad affectionately hugs Veer, turns around and leaves. After Angad is out of the vicinity, Veer takes out his phone and dials Keerat’s number, “I need to talk to Miss. Pehalwan.”

Scene shifts to Monga House, Keerat’s room

Keerat is seated angrily on her bed pondering on what her parents just told her. Her phone rings. She gets annoyed and disconnects the call.

Scene shifts to Brar Mansion

Veer gets surprised that Keerat disconnected his call and calls her once again.

Scene shifts to Monga House, Keerat’s room

Keerat again gets annoyed and disconnects the call.

Scene shifts to Brar Mansion

Veer calls her a third time, a fourth time, a fifth time and continues even when she constantly disconnects his calls.

Scene shifts to Monga House, Keerat’s room

Keerat getting agitated with the repeated calls, takes the phone and asks, “Kiske pooch mein aag lagi hai jo baar baar phone kiye jaa rahe ho?”

On the other side, Veer was astounded with her question and tells her, “Miss. Pehalwan, this is me, Veer Singh Brar.” Keerat shockingly gets up asking, “YOU??? What kind of perverted guy you are? I just spoke a word or two with you and you sent your marriage proposal for me. If you were in front of me right now, then I would have punched your face so hard such that you wouldn’t recognize yourself while looking at the mirror.” Veer tries to pacify her saying, “Miss. Pehalwan, the marriage proposal was a shocker even for me. Even, I never knew that Daarji and Bebe had such an idea in their mind.” Keerat, “Chal jhoote!! Don’t try to fool me. I have seen a lot of jerks like you and know very well how to deal with such creeps.” Veer getting irritated, “If you already know how to deal with men like me then can we meet?” Keerat, “Meet? Why do you want to meet me?” Veer, “I will tell you when we meet.” Keerat although hesitant at first eventually agrees, “Fine, where do you want to meet?” Veer, “I will send you the location and time. Just be there.” Keerat accepts and hangs up. Veer gets thinking, “There’s no way out now, I will have to reveal everything to Miss. Pehalwan.”

An hour later

Keerat comes to a public park and looks around for Veer. She wonders, “That egoistic shithead asked me to come here, now where is he?” As she was still searching for Veer, a masked hooded man comes there, catches her hand and drags her along with him. Keerat tries to resist but he drags her with all his force. Finally, he reaches a secluded place and leaves her hand but as he turns around to say something, the latter lands a sharp punch on his left cheek. The man falls down. Keerat shouts at him, “How dare you touch me? I’m Keerat Kaur Monga!! If anyone dares to play crooked with me then he will have all his bones broken.” The man gets up keeping his hand on the cheek where he was punched, removes his mask and hood to reveal himself. Keerat was shocked to see Veer standing in front of her. She exclaims, “You? Why were you trying to kidnap me? ” Veer, “Oh hello, Miss. Pehalwan, I wasn’t trying to kidnap you!! It’s just that, I did not want to draw anyone’s attention so I brought you here.” Keerat, “Huh?” Veer explains, “Look, Miss. Pehalwan, I’m a reputed rockstar…” As he goes on Keerat starts showing faces of his speech, Veer unknowingly continues, “…so wherever I go there will be people around me asking for selfies, autographs and what not, hence, I did not want to entice anyone by my presence …” He turns around to see Keerat making faces. He glowers at her saying, “Listen Miss Pehalwan, whether you like it or not, the fact is that I’m a rockstar so wherever I go people will get attracted towards me like a swarm of bees to a beehive.” Keerat mumbles, “This egoistic shithead knows nothing than to boast about himself the entire time saying “I am a rockstar…I am a rockstar” rockstar my foot!!” Veer asks her, “Are you saying something?” Keerat fed up with his vainglorious speeches, asks him, “Now why have you called me here? To brag about yourself being a “ROCKSTAR”?” Veer stares angrily at her. Keerat continues, “Listen no matter how great rockstar you are, I, Keerat Kaur Monga have no interest in you!!” Veer, “So do you think I’m dying to marry you?” Keerat, “Then why did you send your proposal for me?” Veer, “Excuse-me, Miss. Pehalwan, as I already said it wasn’t me but rather it was Daarji and Bebe who sent you the proposal. Unfortunately, they couldn’t see how haughty, ill-tempered and irritable you are!!” Keerat offended with his remarks, “If you have so much of problem with me then why don’t you just say a NO to your Daarji and Bebe?” Veer disappointedly, “I can’t” Keerat, “Why?” Veer, “Because if I reject you today then tomorrow they will bring some other girl’s proposal for me and I don’t want to get married no matter whosoever it is!!”

Scene shifts to Brar mansion, Angad-Sahiba’s room

Sahiba was ironing Angad’s clothes while constantly reflecting on Akaal and Jabyot’s announcement in the morning. She is about to burn her hand when Angad comes and stops her saying, “Sahiba where is your focus? You could have hurt yourself now. Leave that. Come here and sit with me. Now tell me what is bothering you.”

Scene shifts to Public Park

Keerat was stupefied with Veer’s declaration and questions him, “You have a problem with women in general? Are you gay?” Veer madly, “No!! I’m not!!” Keerat, “Then what is your problem? Infact the way you swagger around with your rockstar identity, you can get any girl of your choice then why don’t you want to get married?”

Scene shifts to Brar mansion, Angad-Sahiba’s room

Sahiba tells Angad, “I don’t know why Angad, but from the moment Daarji and Bebe announced a possible marital alliance between Veer and Keerat, I feel something is amiss.”

Scene shifts to Public Park

Veer turns towards Keerat, takes a deep long breath and says, “I’m into DRUGS.” Keerat was taken aback by Veer’s revelation, letting her mouth agape. Unbeknownst to both of them, someone was keeping an eye on them and listening to their conversation carefully.

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Lovely update, I loved the Veer and Keerat bickering.

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