Chapter 1:
" Ma! Papa! Dii! Jijuu! " Screamed Siya, as she jolted up from her sleep! There were cold sweat drops on her forehead.
" Kya hua putri? " Asked Savitri, as she rushed into Siya's room. " Tum thik toh ho na?" She gently asked.
" Woh maine b- b- bura swapna dekha " she replied ,Her voice breaking.
Savitri gave a gentle smile and pulled Siya in her arms.
Siya started to sob in her arms.
" Maine Ma ( Durga ) , Papa ( Varun ) , Di ( Uma ) aur Jiju ( Mahadevan ) ko swapn main dekha! " She said. " Kya main hi unki mrityu ka karan h- " her sentence was cut of by Savitri placing her hand on her mouth.
" Yeh kya keh rhi ho tum putri ?" Savitri asked.
" Mera kathan uchit hi toh hain na mata?" Siya questioned back.
" Nahi putri! Tum unki mrityu ka karan nahi ho, balki yeh toh sab niyati ka khel hai! " Savitri said.
" Arthat? " Asked Siya.
" Arthat, tum hamare liye bahut priy ho! Aur tum hamare liye ek Lucky charm ho " Said Savitri, chuckling at the end!
Siya smiled ,and started laughing!
Savitri said back ! She wiped Siya's tears and motioned her not to cry!
Siya touched Savitri's nose , and started giggling!
Savitri pretended to be mad!
" Shama kardijiye na mata! " Said Siya, while pouting and hold her ears!
" Apni mata ko chidati ho?" Questioned Savitri as She started to tickle Siya.
Siya giggled!
" Arey waah! Dono Ma- Beti toh mujhe bhul hi gaye! " Said Virinchi making a dramatic entry!
" Arey pitashree hum apko kaise bhul sakte hai? Hum toh apke hi khilaf shariyat rach rahe the! Kyu mata? Replied Siya equally dramatically!
" Bohot shaitan ho gayi ho tum aaj-kal! " He exclaimed and started to chase her!
" App mujhe nahi pakad payenge pitashree! " Replied Siya giggling! And she ran as Virinchi chased her!
" Najar na lage inhe! " She said looking at the adorable pair!
( Their house! )
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[ Time skip ]
2 years later!
Siya was seated on a beautiful swing located in the garden of her house!
( Savitri and Virinchi were out of town as the went to visit a family friend who was sick! The workers were there at the house, Siya still felt lonely! Sure! The workers after kind and friendly, she felt like they were only there for the money! )
Siya was lost in the memories of the ones she hard lost!
And that was until....
" Aaaaaaaaaah! Bachao! Aaaaaaaaaah " a distressed screamed was heard!
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[ In Kailash ]
" Narayan Narayan " chanted Nardmuni as he entered the heavenly abode of lord Shiva and goddess Parvati!
" Pranipat Bhagavan aur Devi! " He Greeted the couple!
" Pranipat Munivar! " Mahadev and Parvati greeted back in unison !
" Pranipat ! " Greeted Bhagvan Bhrama, Bhagvati Saraswati, Lord Varun and Devi Varunani!
" Pranipat! " The others greeted back!
Mahadev : " Aaj hamare kaliyugi Avataro ke uddeshy anth ho gaya! " hai!
Parvati : "Apka kathan satya hai swami! Hamare avatar Varun (Varun Devta ), Durga ( Varunani ), Virinchi ( Bhrama ), Savitri ( Saraswati), Mahadevan ( Mahadev ) aur Uma ( Parvati ) ka uddeshy poorn ho gaya hai! Aur ab bas Lakshmi- Narayan ko apni leela karni baaki hai! "
Narada: " Phrabhu aur Maatey ki leela abhi se hi toh apna rang dikha rahi hain! "
Varunani : "Aur voh kaise Munivar ? "
Narada : "Voh toh niyati hi tay karengi!"
Saraswati : "Aap aur bhrata Narayan main koi farak nahi! Dono peheliyo main hi baat karte rehte hai!"
Narada : "Jaise Phrabhu waise Bhakt!"
All chuckled at this!
Varun : " Waise aap kabh apna roop lenge Munivar? "
Narada : "Jab uchit samay aayega tabh!"
Parvati : "Chaliye ab dekhte hai Narayan aur Narayani ki leela!"
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"Aaaaaaaaaah! Bachao! Aaaaaaaaaah! "
Siya was jerked away from her thoughts!
She got up from the swing and went out of the house to find out what was happening!
And what she saw shocked her! She saw a man was trying to kidnap a young girl!
She then saw all red! She walked up to the man and.......
" Usse chodo! " She warned him!
" Agar nahi choda toh, kya kar legi tu choti!? " He questioned !
" Toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga! " She said furiously!
" Chod diya ! Ab kya karogi, kyonki main ab tumhe pakad ne aala hoon ? " He left the girl and came closer to Siya!
" Mere paas mat aana, dusht !" She said and kicked him in the stomach!
" Aah! " He groaned as he fell to the ground!
Another 2 men came out of nowhere and were going to attack Siya!
But before they could hurt her , she sprinted out of the place!
She sprinted! Not because she was a coward! But because she was a child and she was aware of the fact that she could not hand more than 1 person at a time!
Siya ran and ran! She didn't give up! Her feet took her to a place where two paths met! The first path led her to the city ant the second lead to the forest! She chose the forest path because if she went to the city then she would take a risk! Because she can be caught by more members of the kidnapper gang! So thats why she went to the the forest! And after running she reached near the edge of a cliff! The 2 members blocked her path and chance of escaping!
Siya had no choice so she closeed her eyes and she..... Jumped!
" Aaaaaaaaaah!"
( Imagine this as the cliff! )
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"Shree!" A boy screamed in horror as he jolted awake from his sleep!
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Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii guys! 💖💖💖💕 hope u liked the update!
What will happen to Siya?
Who was the boy?
Will Siya and Ram meet?
And sowwy for the cliff hanger!😁😅😜😉😘🤣
Will update soon ☺️
~Ria~
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Loved it dear
Awesome and interesting start 👍😎
Siya is really brave, emotional & strong character & missed her parents who died
She is getting all the love from savitri & she loves her like her daughter ❤😘
Hmm so kidnapping & Siya is at risk hope she is saved on time
Narayan or mata Lakshmi ke leela ka aanand as gaya
Thank you for the PM
Continue soon 😌🙏🙏💕
Nice update 😊
So Siya is shown brave, yes she indeed is brave and strong.
Scene is Kailash was quite interesting, Narayan and his leelas are never ending and what leela he is going to create for him and his Lakshmi this time.!!
Interesting last part, waiting for Ram's entry and how exactly things are going to be ❤️
Nice update! 👍🏼 Really liked Siya's bond with her parents. ❤️ And it was really amazing how she kept calm and pondered over her option, chose the safer route despite being a kid. Good job dear! 👍🏼
Nice start Ria.
So it's a story of mix yugs, that's what I understood 🤔
Well Siya is indeed a brave and now I guess the boy is Ram? Waiting for his entry and their meeting.
Chapter 2:
"Shree!" A boy screamed in horror as he jolted awake from his sleep! Sweat drops were forming on his forehead as he remembered the horrific scene he just saw through his dream!
" Kon thi woh sahasi ladki? Woh thik toh hogi na?" He questioned himself. " Aur kya tha us swapn ka uddeshy? " Another question he muttered to himself.
" BHAIYAAA! Aap thik toh hai? Kya kuchh hua apko!? Kya aapka wasthya thik hain? " Questioned a distressed looking Lakshman, as he entered his dear bhaiya 's room after hearing his shout!
" Haan Lakhan, main thik hoon! Mujhe kuch nahi hua hai! Aur Haan mera Swasthya thik hai! " He replied and motioned lakshman to come near him.
Lakshman followed his instructions and came near him and sat on his bed!
The seven year old kept the head of the younger five year old on his lap as the yonger boy laid on his bhaiya 's bed asked, toh fir appne itni jor se kyu chillaya!?
Both had a comfortable silence surrounding them as the elder boy was thinking about the question. Lakhan knew that this silence didn't mean that his bhaiya was thinking of an excuse! But he was thinking about the honest answer to his question.
" Maine dekha........." He started.
( Flashback )
A beautiful yet skilled girl his age ( 7 years ) was fighting a grown up man!! She was risking her life to save a girl who was a complete stranger to her! But the problem was no matter how hard he tried yet just couldn't see her face! She was fighting and defending herself so skillfully! Then he saw that two men came out of nowhere! They tried to attack her. " Yeh toh adharma hain! Dono log us akeli ladki par hamla kaise kar sakte hai? " He thought! The the girl skillfully sprinted and went to the forest, the attackers following closely behind! He then saw that they had reached the end of the forest. There was a huge cliff at the end of the forest. Now what will she do the question continueslly roamed in his mind. And then what he saw horrified him! She turned around and Jumped!
" Shree! " a scream left his mouth!
( End of Flashback )
" Waah! Kitni adhbhut hogi woh kumari! Kitni sahasi aur karuna waali! Bilkul aapki tarah! " Lakshman said.
The 7 year old just nodded his head, as he was lost in the thoughts of the girl!
" Kya woh thik hogi? " A curious Lakhan asked.
" Mujhe gyat nahi hai, mere anuj!Par main aasha karta huoon ki woh thik hogi!" He replied.
Both of them were thinking about this. Both were tired and fell into a dreamless slumber due to exhaustion!
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{ Morning 6am }
" Raam! Lakshman! Kaho ho tum dono? Bhojan thanda ho raha hai! " Sumitra searched for them! " Kaha gaye dono? Lakshman bhi apne kamre mein nahi tha! Ab bas Ram ke kaksh me dhundhana shesh hai! " She muttered to herself, as she headed towards her eldest sons room!
As she opened the door to his chamber , she saw someone sleeping on the bed! " Mera Ram toh itni der tak kabhi nahi sota! Toh fir yeh kon so raha hai!? " She thought.
( Imagine this as young Ram's bed)
She the pulled the blanket off the sleeping figure hesitantly and she saw.....
" Lakshman!? Tum yaha? Kyu so rahe ho tum apne bhaiya ke kaksh main? " She angrily asked as she shook him awake!
" Thodi der aur sone dijiye na bhaiya! " He muttered sleepily.
" Aur sona hai tumhe! Haaaa!? " Sumitra said angrily as she twisted poor Lakshman' s ears!
" Aaaaaaaaaah! M- m- m- mataaa! Aap yaha par kya kar rahi hai!? " He exclaimed as he got up from his sleep.
" Mera chodo! Tum yaha par kya kar rahe ho? Haan? " She questioned.
" W- woh mujhe ratri ke samay nidra nahi aa rahi thi toh fir main yaha par aa gaya! Aur thodi der ke bad name nidra aane lagi aur hum so gaye! " He said.
He didn't mention anything about the dream to Sumitra as they ( Ram and Lakshman ) didn't know whether it was true or false!
" Thik hai! " She said.
" Waise mera putra kaha hai? " Sumitra questioned him?
" Aapke samne! " Lakshman innocently replied.
" Mujhe woh gyat hai! Par main apane dusre putra ke bare me puch rahi hoon! "
" Bhaiya puja ke liye gaye hoge! Unki puja ke bad woh chanur vidhya ka abhyas kar rahe hoge! " Lakshman exclaimed!
" Thik hai! Tum shigra snan karke apne bhaiya ko bulane ke liye jao! " Said Sumitra.
" Ji mata! " He said as he left to complete the task given to him!
Both the mother- son parted ways!
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" BHAIYAAA! Ram bhaiyaa! " Lakshman's loud voice echoed through the forest!
" Kaha chale gaye Ram bhaiya subh subh!? " he questioned himself.
He then heard an arrow moving in a fast pace! It sliced through 5 trees and then whizzed past him and hit the tree behind him! Lakshman didn't realise a branch, of the tree he was standing under was about to fall on him! Just before it could hit him an arrow stopped it!
" Yeh toh ek hi vyakti kar sakte hai! Ram bhaiya! Mere Ram bhaiya! " He said!
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So that was the update ☺️ hope u like it!!!💖💕💖😍😍😊☺️😅
Wow! 🤩 Loved the way you described the dream and the connection between Ram and Lakshman. Plus the jungle scene at the end and the arrows saving Lakshman was beautifully written. Good job dear! 👏 👏 👏
Originally posted by: Nush_Rat
Wow! 🤩 Loved the way you described the dream and the connection between Ram and Lakshman. Plus the jungle scene at the end and the arrows saving Lakshman was beautifully written. Good job dear! 👏 👏 👏
Aww thanks 🥰😌 glad u liked the dream scene! I thought it would be to wierd!😅😅 Ram will always save his Lakhan!❤️💖 Glad u liked it!!🥰🥰💖💖💞
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