Without You, I am Nothing : Abhimaan SS Part 4 on pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 months ago
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This was really well written!

Glad Abhira is practical and has said pyaar isnt enough essentially.

Last thing she needs is the impulsive Armaan doing a flip again and breaking her heart again.

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Posted: 5 months ago
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This is such a SUKOON to our hearts with the current track of show ❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹...Plz update soon🥺🤞 ...
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Posted: 5 months ago
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Amazing story

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Eagerly waiting for next chapter

Please update soon

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Amazing update,cont soon

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please update soon:)

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Heyy Guysssmiley31


Extremely sorry for the delay, was busy with some serious issues so.


Here is the next part, I don't know how it has turned out though.....smiley9







Part - 3




The morning sun of Mussoorie rose casting its glow on the foggy mountains disturbing the sleep of the cute girl who was sleeping tight, all tired of the chaos from the previous days. Disturbed by the rays she opened her eyes slowly and when she went to open the front door, she was shocked on finding Armaan there, sleeping on the floor near the door. Something broke inside her seeing him in that state because no matter what, she can't see the love of her life doing such struggles just for her. But she knew too that she can't melt because if she did, her life would change certainly but in a good way or bad she didn't know. so she just thought to let things move the way it is.



Gently she called his name to wake him up and Armaan opened his eyes to the most the beautiful view in front of him, his Abhira leaning on him and calling his name. He smiled at her and flowing with emotion, pulled her towards him making her to fall on his chest and smiling wrapped his hand around her waist and adjusting her hairs, whispered softly,"good morning".

Abhira in a daze was lost in his eyes but soon coming out of the riverie pushed him getting up and this sudden force made him to whine as he felt a sharp pain in his neck and looking around he realised he was lying on the floor all night. Clutching his neck he got up slowly with Abhira helping him. Seeing him waking up with a sore neck made Abhira to feel even more bad. And teary-eyed said to him, "Armaan tum please yahan se chale jao.. mein tumhen aise is halat mein nehin dekh sakti please wapas Udaipur chale jao please.." but this made Armaan to curve his lips and he said, "mere liye toh itna hi kafi hai ki tum mere parwah karte ho aur haan mein kahin nahin jaane wala.. abhi tumhare resort mein ek room book kar leta hun wahi rahunga mein jab tak tum nehin man jaati aur phir hum jahan jaenge sath jaenge.." and with a dreamy smile walked away. Abhira pissed with his reply shouted, "mein tumhe apne resort mein room nehin dene wali" and teasingly Armaan shouted back, "lekin ghar aaye mehman ko mana nehin karte itna toh tumhen pata hi hoga.." and walked off beaming and welcoming the new day with great enthusiasm.









But the morning in the Poddar house was not a good one, everyone were seated on the drawing room but the one thing that can be heard was silence. Dadi sa, Sanjay and Vidya where too shocked to react but Kajal, Manisha, Manoj and the chorus gang were somewhat happy that the wedding didn't happen for their own reasons.

Vidya was also continuously calling Madhav with a tensed Sanjay holding the phone. And a bit scared now Vidya spoke, "Maasa dekhiye na mein kitne dinon se inka phone try kar rahi hoon lekin yeh phone receive hi nehin kar rahe hein.. mujhe to chinta hone lagi hai unki aur ghar mein itna sab kuch ho gaya lekin woh abhi tak aaye hi nahin hai.. kahan hai kis haal mein hai mujhe to kuch samajh hi nehin araha.." Even tensed herself she replied, "Vidya chinta to humein bhi hone lagi hai Madhav to itne din kabhi dur nehin rehata aur woh bhi ese bina bataye.. pata nahin ab kya hua hai..mujhe lagta hai mujhe uske senior officer se baat karni padegi.." and with this she was about to pick up her phone when a scared Kajal stood up and in dilemma uttered tensedly, "bhabhisa, maasa, bhaisa hospital mein hai.. unka accident ho gaya hai"

Sanjay closed his eyes in anger and fear and Maasa and Vidya and all were shocked as they uttered in unison, "kya?"

And Kajal went on to explain everything that had happened consciously avoiding the divorce matter and when she completed Kaveri Poddar glared Sanjay Bansal and uttered angrily, "aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain Jamaisa? Humne aap pe itna bharosa kiya aur aaj humara beta aspatal mein hai aur yeh baat aap humein batana jaruri nehi samjha? Itna bada dhoka humse kyu?" Vidya went to him and snatched the phone from his hand saying, "mujhe aapse yeh ummid nahin thi bhai sahab" and crying pleaded, "Maasa please mujhe unke pass le chaliye.. Maasa" and all the worried Poddars headed towards the hospital.








It would be some hours now and tired with everything around Abhira was doing some work in her laptop when she heard her doorbell ringing and on opening, there stood Armaan, all changed and fresh with a bowl full of noodles in his hand. The smell itself made Abhira's stomach to groll and she is the one who can't say no to food and that too when it's her favourite then how can she? Smiling she was about to hold the bowl when she remembered she is angry and can't take it. Thus, controlling herself said, "yeh kya hai Armaan? mujhe nehin khana.. mujhe bhookh nehin hai..ise le jao.."

And Armaan smiled teasingly and said, "woh toh pata chal hi raha hai mujhe ki tumhe bhookh nehin hai.. pata hai tum gussa ho lekin ye noodles tumhara kya bigada hai? please kha lo.. mujhe pata hai ke tumne kuch nehin khaya aur mujhe bhi bhookh lag rahi hai jor se..chalo naa sath mein khate hain"

Abhira just looking angryily at him went inside and came back with a bowl and spoon and transferring half noddles into it, closed the door, shouting from inside, "Noddles kliye thank you very much Armaansa lekin tum apna khao aur main apna.. hum khana share nehin kar sakte..bye" but she was happy, yes. A smile lingered on her lips as savoured the taste of her favourite food made by her favourite person as it also did something to her poor heart.

Armaan was glad too that atleast she accepted the food and it was a big thing for him and he took the spoon full of noodles in his mouth imagining them having it together oneday. A hope was rekindled in his heart that everything would be alright soon, a hope that would guide him to gain back Abhira's trust soon.







Done with this one and would try to bring the next part asap..smiley31

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Amazing

Loved reading your version

Glad that armaan didn’t leave abhira- he should show her that he is serious about her

Excited to read more

Yesssmiley9

Thank u smiley27

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Posted: 5 months ago
#29

Originally posted by: Pinecone

This was really well written!

Glad Abhira is practical and has said pyaar isnt enough essentially.

Last thing she needs is the impulsive Armaan doing a flip again and breaking her heart again.

Yes that's what is fearful..smiley14

Thank u smiley27

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Originally posted by: Sajini235

This is such a SUKOON to our hearts with the current track of show ❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹...Plz update soon🥺🤞 ...

Thank u smiley27

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