AbhiMaan ss - heartless sweetheart -PART 3 UPDATED ON PAGE 3 - Page 2

Beautifully written

Love the scene with dev and abhira

Excited to read more

Its great. But it would be nice if Abhira just moves out for good. She should just reveal everything to Dev

Amazing update

Poor abhira

Hate poddar family always take abhira for granted

Loved it!!

I'm getting a feeling that Dev is Abhir, would love to see his and Abhira's bond and their truth coming in front of each other!

do let Abhira take a firm stand against them, Armaan is as always pathetic

Introduce a new ML for her and not this weak 1.

take care.

Nice start

PART 2 - WELL, YOU SURE YOU ARE HER HUSBAND ?

Abhira woke up from her slumber with gentle head pats so much warmth that she mumbled "Mumma sone do please" She heard a small chuckle.

" abhira tumhain jana padega raat bhout hogai hai ghar jaake araam se sona" - dev replied with hint of adoration .

Sudden realization hits her ans she started to apologize again.

" omg main itni Buddhu kaise hoon , achanak itna Pura farmhouse bech ke sogai I am so sorry sir main bas apne aap ko itna careless hogai hoon main...." dev unwrapped chocolate and popped it into her mouth "shaant hojaiye maate aur farmhouse bhout choti si nindh main becha hai apne , look at your eyes abhira they are so puffy , tum khudka toh dhyaan rakho fir case toh tun dhang se sambhal hi logi , I believe in you" dev ended his speech after a smile while abhira still shocked with her favorite chocolates taste ...it's been so long when somone fed her chocolates ? Someone woke her up with such gentle care ? She misses her mumma even more but as she got aware of the time she rushes to get out of the care " thank you so much sir , also I'll give you this jacket back after dry cleaning it , also sorry sir apko bhout takeleef hui meri wajh se" abhira said with apologetic smile.

" it's alright abhira yeh lo tumhara phone shyaad tumare ghar se kisi ka call tha they must be waiting aur ghar pahuchke text karna okay? " - dev said while abhira nodded.

She quickly grabbed her phone and bid bye to her boss and rushed towards the back gate.

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Silently rushed towards the back gate of Poddar’s mansion,she closed the door lightly.

Turned around and dashed onto hard surface, she looked up just to meet with angry glare from armaan,wait armaan why is he here? Just to let her know she is such an irresponsible person with no family values.

“Welcome back,ruko ek minute tumhare liye arti ki thaali leke ani hai ,chori jaise back gate se entry kyun le rahi ho ? Shaan se front gate se aao na” armaan smiled but madness was dripping in his tone.

Abhira got startled by the tone but she decided to not make a scene as she needs to prioritise herself first.

“Tumahain kuch kaam tha ?” - she questioned in blunt tone and when armaan thought its impossible for him to get more angry than he already is , there goes the next levels as he chuckled and continued.

“Accha toh tum ab kaam ki baat tak hi mujhse baat karni aur jahaan kaam ka topic hota hai wahaan tum firse wo acchi hasne wali abhira hojati ho,farak bhul gai ho tum, itne raat ko kya karri thi tum bahar ” armaan taunted .

“ konsa farak kaisa farak? Dekho armaan raat bhout hogai hai aur mujhe tumhara door darshan wala drama nahi chaiyey? Mujhe sona hai” abhira tried to get away from his but armaan grabbed her wrist and twisted iand locked it behind.

“ maine kuch pucha abhira, yeh raat ko choro ki tarah kyun back gate se aa rahi ho ? Aur please dont give me excuses, agar case ke liye milna hi tha toh tum kal subh bhi jaa sakti thi but abhi raat yahaan chori chupke jane ki wajh kya thi abhira wo bhi buna kisi ko bataye aur yeh kya pehna hai tumne ?” - armaan barked his frustration out he tugged on the dev’s jacket making abhira smile on his silliness, the nerve of this man.

“Main choro ki tarah back gate se isliye gai taki kisi ki nindh na kharab ho aur tumhare family ko ek aur script nahi mile mujhe insult karne ki aur rahi baat main itni raat ko kahaan jaun iski chinta tum mere pati banke karre ho toh bhout zyda funny hojayega cause atleast main shaadi karke kisi ke sath hut main romantic music video jaise chipak ke nahi baithi thi aur mujhe car main nindh agai isliye sir ne unka jacket de diya out of goodness but sorry tum nahinsamjhoge kyunki tumhari sab acchai ruhi aur tumhare family ke liye hi booked hoti hai” without hearing armaan abhira pushed him away and moved towards the guest bedroom ignoring armaan’s voice.

Armaan tried to knock but she didnt reply making armaan drop his shoulders and get back to his own bedroom with hope of talking to her in morning

Next morning

Armaan woke up early with determination to cook for abhira, her favourite noodles and then apologies for being rude also make her understand that he truely cares about her and she shouldnt be taking the case but the whole planned flopped when he opened the door just to know the room is empty and when he questioned his family their response “ humain kya wo ladki kahin bhi jaye afaat hi khadi karti hai” he was bit upset that but he knows his family slowly accept abhira , they already on the journey, he believes in them, he was about to turn his back but ruhi entered the room.

“Dekha armaan tumne itne subh uth kar uske liye khana banaya and wo toh hai hi nahi , jabse usse wo case mila hai usse kisi ki fikr nahi hai na hi yeh family ki na hi tumhari” -ruhi

“Tum kyun aise keh rahi ho ruhi, mujhe pata hai tum manav ke topic ko leke stressed ho par abhira pe kyu nikal rahi ho” - armaan said politely

“Wo selfish hai armaan , pata nahi kab usse hosh ayega and …”

Suddenly armaan’s phone started ringing

Its said abhira

But as soon he picked up he got the worse news.

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Abhira feels exhausted, surviving on few hours of sleep and just caffeine in her system makes her bit dizzy but she has no option, she cant leave the affected victims on their own , they needed someone to help them out and hear their point of view, so after some interviews and talk with them she was getting back to the office as finding any mode of transport here is bit difficult she looked at her watch and suddenly she felt everything blurred out and sudden hit of force made her fall.

All she could see was blurry she unconsciously screamed for armaan in panic.

Armaaan …..- abhira lost her consciousness

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Hospitals have always been traumatic place for armaan the whole blue vibe hospital gives makes his skin crawl but the moment when he got to know abhira is admitted here cause of her accident all he could think was the moments they spent together he rushed as if he is the one running for his life.

“ doctor please mujhe patient abhira se milna hai please mujhe milne dijiye usse meri zarurat hogi usse accha nahin lagta hai akele rehna” - armaan rushed towards the room as soon he saw the small glimpse of abhira drenched in blood , all he could see was red.

“ dekhoye aap aise behave karenge toh hum apne kaam nahi kar pyenge pelase yeh form fill kariye hum jald se jald patient to recover karne ki koshish kar rahe hain, khoon bhout beh gaya hai wo toh lucky hain ki time pe

Hospital agai” - doctor replied with sympathy .

Armaan snatched the form and started filling the details only to realise he is unable to fill more than 2 columns, patient name and spouse name which he wrote with shaking hands.

Date of birth …when is her birthday ? Blood group? Allergies ? He doesn’t even know when she was born and he took responsibility of her when he hardly knows her. He felt helpless while doctor was waiting for him to fill ip the form.

“Kya hua ap unke dost hain kya ? Aap family ko bula lijiye agar apko details nahi pata hai” - doc offered

“Nahi main ….wo ….” - armaan felt wave of shame crawling his heart, what an great husband he is.

“ ji uska birthdate 11th agust 1999 hai, blood group B+ positive and usse peanut se allergy hai also unke family main cardiovascular disease ka history raha hua hai toh please make sure zyada heavy treatment na dijiaye” - male voice made armaan and doctor head turn just to see dev standing with his shirt crumbled with huge stain of blood near his chest and hair messed up, looking straight at closed emergency room.

“Ji aap unke husband hain? Family member ?” -the doctor enquired making Armaan look up at Dev who was ignoring his presence.

“Ji haan wo hum…” before dev could complete

“Main ..main abhira ka pati hoon aap form main dekh sakte hain “ - armaan interrupted the conversation, somone calling another male abhira's family didn't settle well with him, worse husband? Since when this guy got to know so much about abhira ...what if he is another stalker ? Or he works with yuvraj ? No he won't let someone hurt abhira , he will protect her as he promised.

" well, are you sure you are her husband cause aap toh basic patient ka information bhi fill nahi kar sake toh thoda doubt laga" - doctor glanced at him with suspicious look and walked away after dropping another bomb at him.

As Armaan sat in the hospital waiting room, consumed by guilt and self-doubt, another emotion began to gnaw at him – jealousy. It was a bitter pill to swallow, but he couldn't help but feel a twinge of envy towards Dev, Abhira's boss.

The realization hit him like a ton of bricks – Dev seemed to know everything about Abhira, from her birthday to her allergies, while Armaan was left in the dark about his own wife's life. It stung to think that someone else, someone who wasn't even her husband, had a deeper understanding of Abhira than he did.

Armaan couldn't help but wonder why Dev seemed to care so much about Abhira. Was it just professional concern, or was there something more? The thought of another man knowing Abhira better than he did made his blood boil with jealousy.

He clenched his jaw, his fists tightening at his sides as he struggled to contain the surge of insecurity bubbling within him. How could he compete with someone like Dev, someone who seemed to have everything together, while Armaan felt like he was falling apart?

But amidst the jealousy and self-loathing, a flicker of determination ignited within Armaan. He refused to let his insecurities get the best of him. He may not know everything about Abhira, but he was her husband, and he would do whatever it takes to prove himself worthy of her love and trust.

With renewed resolve, Armaan pushed aside his feelings of jealousy and focused on the task at hand – being there for Abhira when she needed him the most. He may not have all the answers, but he was determined to learn and grow alongside her, to become the husband she deserves even if its for less than year.

Before he could create and scene he felt strong hold on his wrist, he looked up to see ruhi and with all mixed emotions he started tearing up.

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As Abhira's eyes drifted from Armaan and Ruhi to Dev, a wave of jealousy washed over her, mingling with the confusion and guilt already swirling in her mind. She couldn't shake the feeling of unease at the sight of her boss, asleep on the nearby couch, seemingly keeping a silent vigil over her.

Her thoughts raced as she tried to make sense of the situation. Why was Dev here, when her own husband, who had promised to protect her, was fast asleep outside her room? The memory of Armaan's vow to her mother on her deathbed echoed in her mind, a painful reminder of the expectations she had placed on him, expectations that now seemed to be crumbling before her eyes.

The realization hit her like a punch to the gut, filling her with a sense of inadequacy and insecurity. She had always believed in the strength of her bond with Armaan, but now she couldn't help but question the depth of his friendship for her. Was she just a burden to him, a responsibility he couldn't wait to shed?

As she lay in her hospital bed, surrounded by the people she cared about, Abhira couldn't shake the feeling of loneliness that gnawed at her heart. She longed for the comfort and reassurance of Armaan's presence, but she knows she is expecting way too much out this contract.

She remembers this one line from her father's diary " banjaare dil apni takdeer ka rasta khud Chun te hain, na koi humsafar mile toh bhi koi baat nahi apne aap ko Chun kar hi agay badhna yehi zindagi hai , har kisi ko apnapan mile aisa zaroori nahi"

Now she realized the depth of her papa's line.

And as she watched Dev stir from his slumber, a silent guardian in the darkness, Abhira couldn't help but feel a pang of guilt for the doubts swirling in her mind. She knew she should trust Armaan, to believe in the promises he had made to her and her mother. But in that moment of vulnerability, it was hard to silence the voice of doubt that whispered in her ear, casting shadows over the love she had once held so dear.

Beautifully written. Look forward to more.

her feelings, so sad for Abhira

Loved it

Beautiful. I wonder how Dev knew so much abt Abhira.