Connected: A YHM Story (COMPLETED) - Page 36

My Video Edits

I wanted to take this update to share a couple of my video edits with you guys. I hope you check them out and like them. Do comment what you think of them!

My first edit below is on the song "Evermore" from the live action version of the Disney movie Beauty and the Beast. In this song, Beast sings about his feelings for Belle, how she came into his life unexpectedly and changed him from the inside out, turning his heart into one of gold. This song comes at the point in the film where he lets Belle go back home simply because he loves her so much. He sings about how Belle is going to remain a part of his life and heart regardless of whether she's around him or not.

Ever since I heard this song in 2017, I could picture no one else other than Raman and his feelings for Ishita. How Ishita changed him (or brought him back to his earlier happier self, I should say). So I had do edit them on this song, and voila! This happened. 👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻

https://youtu.be/aOUo9hZlIGE

My next edit is on Ishita's relationship with the children of her heart (Adi & Ruhi). In both the show and my story, she's been repeatedly compared to Maiyya Yashoda. So what better song to edit Ishimaa on then one that describes Yashoda's love for Krishna?! Because as one of my readers has commented, Ishita as a mother>>>>

https://youtu.be/QG-QPz-o1uQ

I hope you guys have a chance to check these videos out! Do drop your comments here and let me know what you think. Love you all! ❤️❤️❤️

Both the parts were really very good and interesting please update next part soon

I am just away for a week and u posted so much, like almost 4-5 parts😲

So much to catch up, how am I gonna read these all in a day😭

Read till part 62

Shagun-Subbu respective endings were fabulous.

Even in the show, it always suggested that Shagun's end was going to be disastrous for her because Ashok only used her to torture Raman, once Raman is over her, he would ditch her anyway. What always bothered me was Subbu's, there was a scene where Subbu and his pregnant wife come across Ishita, and Ishita leaves in tears.

When Ishita says in the show that 'Subbu is out of my system' , he is out of my system as well. I didn't bother about him much. But suddenly makers brought him back, and that sudden revelation, that his beloved wife and his beloved son are dead, left me shivering. How unpredictable life is!! All his perfect future plans, for which he ditched Ishita, had no meaning when his wife and child died. He must have felt like a stupid. Ur version of Subbu's end is interesting as well. I hated it when Subbu was feeling sorry for Ishita that she had to marry a divorcee, Ishita gave it back, but still he thinks having own child is the biggest achievement of all. Even if he had to divorce his wife, his own blood standing in front of him is what all matters to him maybe. Ur version is still pending, or like u asked in ur note for us to decide, for me, Subbu's wife and son's death which happened in the show left me numb, that's more than karma. I don't think anything else could humble Subbu.

Shagun's was not at all karma, someone from above didn't punish her for her deeds, she just reached the consequences of her choices, what we all viewers could see, but she failed to see. Shagun ended for good, but I really wanna see her realise what gem of a person she lost to Ishita. Also let Shgaun realise that Ishita being second wife of Raman, step mom to her kids, never being able to conceive, earned more love from Raman than she could ever had. Maybe u can add one last scene with Shagun before her leaving to Australia, and then pack her off😈

And ur scene where Ishita gives it back to Shagun at Bhalla house, I don't remember Ishita giving it back to Shagun in the show, but U wrote one, thank you👏

Still I cannot see Ishita as someone who would literally say such words to Shagun, the message is enough conveyed to her through Raman and children, both in the show and in ur story well.

The honeymoon phase is really I am just waiting for pregnancy but honeymoon phase is even more wonderful🤩.In the show Ishita conceived in a week I guess🤭 that's really....... I don't even have a word. Since u confirmed pregnancy pls take ur time and write ur take, what all I request is just let every tiny thing, regarding pregnancy happen between them. Let Ishita take a test, let the test fail, let them cry, let them console each other, let them talk about having a baby, let them talk about going through a treatment, let them get scared what if treatment fails, let them have various doubts, I wanna read everything regarding pregnancy 😭

Thank you for the conversation I asked for which happened between Raman and bartender😆. Really loved it. He realised that Ishita must have gone through same emotions regarding him and Shagun, he was just melting and again the sight of Subbu makes him jealous😆. Very realistic.

Looking forward to read the remaining 2 parts😍

Hey

You have written the story beautifully.

I am a yhm fan and wishing for such a plot rather than all those bhoot and surrogacy plot. It was boring and has spoiled the whole plot of love between ishra.

I do wish you to write the further plot with surprised pregnancy and all that pampering that raman did when he came to know about the unexpected pregnancy.

Thank you for creating such a blissful plot and interesting story.

Waiting eagerly for your update.

Finally completed reading the last two parts🤩

Ishita being in hospital, once in Mani track and the other during earth quake are two instances where you find Raman's love for Ishita so overwhelming. All those episodes are treasures which are always cherished by IshRa fans and thanks to you, u added another few moments, along with Adi and Ruhi🤩. Just loved loved loved the whole hospital scenes.

All my life I have only seen evil ( or grey) not at all getting punished, forget punished, I wished at least they realise their mistake, but never happened, I was not so happy with Shagun's ending (did she ever had a end though), Ashok threw her out, that was a lesson for though,but I felt like she never learned her mistakes, later on she became a fairy, and IshRa and Bhallas always backed her up🤢, I never got to see her repenting for what she did to Raman.Post leap when Raman leaves her at the altar, knowing that Ruhi is alive, I really don't want Raman and her at a marriage altar, but Raman rejecting her is the real kick ass vengeance for me😎

Instead of Raman faking her as wife for Pihu, makers should have shown Shagun as changed person who kept hopes on Raman since Ishita died. Makers should have shown her trying out for Raman and asking him to consider her. But after Ishita's return, Raman would solely go back to Ishita, in spite of Shagun's change. That would be a real stab to Shagun. What all Shagun left and went away ,thinking she deserves better,she could never win them back and what all Ishita left away thinking she doesn't deserve at all, came back to Ishita's feet without much struggle. But I do agree after leap premise is problematic. There should be so many changes for us fans to digest it.

Also all my life I have seen just people never being satisfied. Like in the show, I felt Ishita should deliver a baby, a boy in particular because these people are so obsessed with their GKC🤢, but never happened, even at the end of the show, when Ishita gets to know that Ruhi can't conceive, at least in the very first instant Ishita was shown as a woman who carries pain of not being able to carry a child of her own which has worsened with years, not like the woman who would console saying Ruhi u can become another Ishima. Yes Ishita has the pain, and she knows how to live with it and yet not get consumed by it. I wished at least she had a special child, considering her complications and extra care and extra financial security that Raman would ensure for the kid, which might irk Shagun or whatever. I am just being too dramatic😆.

I am happy you're bringing pregnancy track😭. I am just waiting to embrace it. But even before that just show how Ishita what would feel in her head if she has to live her whole life without bearing a kid of her own.

And yeah, Raman sending Ashok to jail without shedding a drop of blood is real badass😎.

I couldn't have asked for a better alternative for bhoot track😭. Thank you so much🙏. Yes we know Ishita will not hesitate to put her life at stake for Raman, but choosing the bhoot way with those jokers around, just stabbed my stomach🤮. And top of that the trauma Adi, ruhi went through is just unimaginable. U just avoided all that👏. Thank you.

Waiting for the new parts. Please make them happen soon

Originally posted by: Aditi_X

My Video Edits

I wanted to take this update to share a couple of my video edits with you guys. I hope you check them out and like them. Do comment what you think of them!

My first edit below is on the song "Evermore" from the live action version of the Disney movie Beauty and the Beast. In this song, Beast sings about his feelings for Belle, how she came into his life unexpectedly and changed him from the inside out, turning his heart into one of gold. This song comes at the point in the film where he lets Belle go back home simply because he loves her so much. He sings about how Belle is going to remain a part of his life and heart regardless of whether she's around him or not.

Ever since I heard this song in 2017, I could picture no one else other than Raman and his feelings for Ishita. How Ishita changed him (or brought him back to his earlier happier self, I should say). So I had do edit them on this song, and voila! This happened. 👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻

https://youtu.be/aOUo9hZlIGE

My next edit is on Ishita's relationship with the children of her heart (Adi & Ruhi). In both the show and my story, she's been repeatedly compared to Maiyya Yashoda. So what better song to edit Ishimaa on then one that describes Yashoda's love for Krishna?! Because as one of my readers has commented, Ishita as a mother>>>>

https://youtu.be/QG-QPz-o1uQ

I hope you guys have a chance to check these videos out! Do drop your comments here and let me know what you think. Love you all! ❤️❤️❤️

Wonderful edits👏👏👏

IshRa's journey is so captivating. Meaningful songs find a new meaning for themselves, if they're used for IshRa❤️

Loved the second edit too. Gautam Ahuja and Divyanka have amazing chemistry even ,like Divyanka and Ruhaanika. Just loved the way he hugged her, as soon as she opened the door🤗. Actually I watched that video on YouTube some time back, loved it instantly, didn't know it was yours😮.

Amazing edits. Lovely ❤

Originally posted by: --QUEEN--

Wonderful edits👏👏👏

IshRa's journey is so captivating. Meaningful songs find a new meaning for themselves, if they're used for IshRa❤️

Loved the second edit too. Gautam Ahuja and Divyanka have amazing chemistry even ,like Divyanka and Ruhaanika. Just loved the way he hugged her, as soon as she opened the door🤗. Actually I watched that video on YouTube some time back, loved it instantly, didn't know it was yours😮.

Amazing edits. Lovely ❤

After watching the video like 3 times, I noticed that there's no Pihu in the video😆. She never managed to bring the warmth what Adi and Ruhi brought to YHM. Anyway, you're not going to write anything about surrogacy and surrogate child for IshRa. But write ur views, on whether you consider surrogacy as an option for IshRa, if yes, why ,and if no ,why not? Would love to read your version. Just plain opinion, only if u manage to find some time 😊

Originally posted by: --QUEEN--

After watching the video like 3 times, I noticed that there's no Pihu in the video😆. She never managed to bring the warmth what Adi and Ruhi brought to YHM. Anyway, you're not going to write anything about surrogacy and surrogate child for IshRa. But write ur views, on whether you consider surrogacy as an option for IshRa, if yes, why ,and if no ,why not? Would love to read your version. Just plain opinion, only if u manage to find some time 😊

OMG, I have so much to say on this. Buckle down... 😄

I purposely didn't put Pihu in the video because the song was about Yashoda Ma and her love for Lord Krishna. So I focused on Ishita and her adopted children (instead of biological). Plus, it was hard to find scenes of Pihu with Ishita without enduring the dramatic storyline.

As far as surrogacy goes, then yes, I won't be including surrogacy in my storyline. I mean, the whole point of IshRa's biological child was that Ishita would be able to experience pregnancy. What was the point of having Shagun give birth to another child for Ishita to raise?

Still though, I have lots of opinions about how surrogacy could've happened without angering the fandom. I mean, first of all, they could've used any other woman other than Shagun. LIKE WHY SHAGUN???

Okay fine... Let's say we need to include Shagun. I’m going to propose a theory where surrogacy is still possible without characters being butchered. Maybe the hospital where Ishra were undergoing IVF treatment is where Shagun comes as an undercover surrogate mother to stop the surrogacy scandal. Here, she is accidentally implanted with Ishra’s embryo so she ends up getting pregnant with Ishra’s baby (Pihu). When the truth comes out, Raman, Ishita, and Shagun are all horrified, but they make do because this is Ishra’s last chance to have a baby, and plus Shagun's womb is more hospitable and stronger than Ishita's so it is a less risky and safer pregnancy. They somehow convince Shagun and the families to accept it. Here Shagun could be staying at Mihir’s place during her pregnancy or with her new live-in boyfriend (Dr. Manoj or any other colleague of hers). Raman doesn’t trust her completely so he brings legal papers and makes Shagun sign them saying she would have no right over the baby and only Ishra would be the legal parents/guardians. Once she gives birth to the baby, IshRa are given full custody and Shagun is never heard of again. 🤷🏻‍♀️

In the original show, Pihu is raised by Raman and Shagun while Ishita is presumed dead. They literally pretended to be married for her?!?! 😳 How insulting is that to Ishita?! Raman could've raised her alone, along with Adi. At least Pihu deserved to know who her biological mother was. It was least both Pihu and Ishita deserved. How I wish ITV would give men their due and show them as generous, chivalrous beings AND as men capable of emotion and responsibility. Especially as fathers.

Here I would like to say that Pihu was actually brought up by Bhalla family ladies and ofcourse, Neelu and Shagun was only pampering here with this and that and then attending to her NGO shows. So exactly what is the need of Shagun there? Pihu could have well be brought up by anyone including Mihika. Or even they could have hired a Nanny, who could have become indispensable later on. Actually the producers wanted to give screen space to Anita. So all these things happened. That's what I guess.