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Part 51


Akash Ganga Community Hall - Friday, May 17th, 11 am


The melodious sounds of the drums and shehnai permeated through the air, as the Bhallas and Iyers danced to varying bhangra and bollywood beats. Mihika sat in the center of a circle of women, flanked by two mehendi artists as they painted elaborate bridal mehendi on her arms. She was dressed in a heavy teal and emerald lehenga, hair tied back in a dutch braid with a fragrant gajra.

"Aapke hone wale pati ka naam kya hai?" the mehendi artist asked her. "Unka naam likhna hai mehendi mein."

"Mihir," she replied. After a moment's pause, she stopped the mehendi artist. "Didi ek minute. Aap uska naam tamil mein likhiye. Phir woh kabhi dhund hi nahi paayega," she sniggered.

Ishita clicked her tongue in disappointment. "Kya Miku, kyun bichaare ko pareshaan karti ho?" She was seated on the cushion beside her sister, clad in a sky blue saree and white net blouse, having her own mehendi done by Rinki.

"I love it Mihika," Rinki interjected, in complete contrast to her bhabhi. "Keep up the good work." They giggled and winked at each other, as Ishita shook her head, pressing her lips to avoid smiling.

"Rinki, tujhe mehendi nahi lagaani kya?" Ishita asked her.

"No bhabhi, I don't like the smell on my hands."

"Come on yaar, Ruhi ne bhi lagaayi hai."

"Aap ko dekh kar Ruhi ko bhi shauk hai in sab cheezon ka. Lekin mujhe nahi. By the way, main bhi Raman bhai ka naam likh du aapki mehendi mein?" she asked.

"Likh de Rinki!" Mihika said before Ishita could answer.

While Mihika and the women giggled and conversed over their mehendi with Toshi and Madhu providing oversight, Mihir danced among the men, along with Raman, Romi, Bala, and Shravu and Adi, Omprakash and Vishwa joining occasionally. Once Ishita's mehendi was done, she, Rinki, and Ruhi joined the crowd as well.

As the festivities continued with pomp and grandeur, the lunch buffet was served, and Madhu and Soumya called everyone up for lunch. As everyone settled down with their plates, Ishita checked on Mihika's mehendi (who was now having henna painted on her feet), before looking for Adi and Ruhi to serve them lunch. To her delight, she found them having lunch with Vandu and Shravu, plates full of various delicacies.

"How's your lunch guys?" she asked, as she approached the table.

"It's really good, Aunty," Adi replied.

"Ishimaa look at my mehendi!" Ruhi showed her mother her palms, stained with brown henna designs, devoid of the dried mehendi.

"Aapne apne haath dho bhi diye?" Ishita asked as she surveyed her daughter's palms. "Sirf do-teen ghante to huye the."

"Mujhe bahot itching ho raha tha mumma."

"Uski mehendi sukh gayi thi Ishu," Vandu intervened. "Aur use bahot uncomfortable lag raha tha. To maine dhulvaa di. Phir bhi color kaafi accha aaya hai."

"Haa woh to hai. Aapki mehendi bahot pyaari lag rahi hai Ru." Ishita took a seat between her sister and her son, gingerly placing her hands on the table, palms facing up to protect her mehendi.

Over the course of the next fifteen minutes, Ishita and Vandu talked at length about the upcoming festivities, occasionally breaking up a fight between Shravu and Ruhi over the number of sweets in their plates.

"Have you had lunch, Akka?" Ishita asked, after distributing the sweets equally between all three kids.

"Yes I did. Maine actually ghar par khichdi khaayi thi. Yeh saara heavy khaana mujhe nahi khaana tha abhi. What about you?"

"Kahan se khaau akka? Look at this." She pointed her chin to her mehendi covered hands, highlighting her dilemma.

Just then, she felt a tap on her shoulder. She turned around and the solution to her problem stood in front of her.

"Aapka lunch madam." Raman presented a plate full of naan, paneer, mixed veg, rice, daal, sweets and samosas.

"Lunch to aap le aaye Raman, lekin main khau kaise?" She presented her palms to him.

"Hum hai na? Banda haazir hai aapki khidmat mein."

"Whoo!" Vandu whistled lightly. "Ise kehte hain good husband."

"Nahin Vandu," Raman interrupted. "Ise kehte hain smart husband. Kya hai na, agar tumhari behen bhookhi rahi toh uska keher mujh par hi padega."

Vandu and Adi erupted in laughter, much to Ishita's chagrin.

"Thik hai, baba. Tum apni patni ko khaana khilao-" Vandu stood up from her seat, "-main chalti hoon."

She left the table in chuckles, with Shravu and Ruhi following her, as they pushed their empty plates and galloped to play with the other kids, leaving Raman, Ishita, and Adi behind at the table.

"Yeh le madrasan." Raman sat down on the seat left empty by Vandu and broke a piece of naan. He dipped it in the paneer gravy and fed his wife.

"Adi, are you all ready to dance tonight? In the sangeet?" Raman asked his son, as he fed his wife morsels of naan and curry.

"Absolutely, I'm so excited!" Adi sipped on his lassi. "I'm dancing with Romi chachu and Rinki bua. We rehearsed for three hours last night!"

He described in detail the dance he was going to perform tonight with his uncle and aunt. Raman gazed at his son, listening with interest, pleased at his growing confidence.

"Are you going to dance too, dad?" Adi asked.

"Yup. With your Ishita Aunty." Raman fed Ishita a barfi. "Pray for me beta."

"Why?" Adi's brows furrowed in confusion.

"Because your Aunty dances very well. And I can't compete with her."

"Kuch bhi Raman," Ishita interrupted.

"Yeh lo, taarif karo to bhi takleef, na karo to bhi takleef."

"Raman, aap payasam nahi laaye?" Ishita asked, interrupting him.

"Woh to khatam ho gaya tha."

Ishita's face fell in disappointment. Payasam was one of her favorite dishes. Adi glanced at his empty plate. Almost empty plate.

"Aunty, here. I have half a bowl of payasam left." Adi picked up his bowl and tried handing it to Ishita, only to realize her hands were covered in mehendi. "Oh wait." He picked up a fresh plastic spoon from a nearby bunch and brought a spoonful of payasam to her mouth.

"A-Are you sure, Adi?" Ishita asked, voice quivering with emotion. "Don't you want to eat it?"

"I already ate Aunty. Mujhse aur nahi khaaya jaayega. You can have it."

Ishita blinked the sheen of sentimentality from her eyes and ate the spoonful fed by her son. Payasam had never tasted this sweet before.

As her husband fed her lunch and her son fed her dessert, she realized she had never been more thankful to have her hands incapacitated like this before.

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Akash Ganga Community Hall - later that day, 5 pm


"Hello everyone, and welcome to Mihir and Mihika's sangeet ceremony!" Romi announced into the mike and was received with thundering applause and hoots. "I'm sure we're all very excited so let's get this party started, shall we?!"

Another round of applause broke out.

"To begin the night, we'll be starting off with the eldest members of our families. So please join your hands for my mom and dad, and Madhu Aunty and Vishwa Uncle! Dekhiye kaisa rang jamta hai jab North aur South ka dance ek saath hota hai!"

Romi stepped off the stage, allowing both sets of parents to take to the stage. The DJ turned up the track and the dance began.


Chipak-chapak ke chalti hain kabhi kabhi do raahein

Jude-jude kuch aise ki laga ho jaise gum

Double-double hoti thi jo kabhi-kabhi taqleefein

Kisi ke sang mein chalne se hui half se kum


Ho tera-mera, mera-tera, tera-mera, mera-tera qissa atrangi

Kabhi-kabhi chalti hai kabhi-kabhi rukti kahani bedhangi


Kashmir main tu Kanyakumari

North-South ki kat gayi dekho doori hi saari

Kashmir tu main kanyakumari

Fifty-fifty har situation mein hissedari


Madhu and Vishwa's steps were a bit choppy, while Toshi and Omprakash stumbled on their feet more than once. But even so, their energy and enthusiasm brought everyone to their feet.


Ek taraf to jhagda hai, saath phir bhi tagda hai

Do kadam chalte hain to lagta hai aath hain

Do tarah ke flavor, sau tarah ke tevar

Dar-badar firtein hain ji phir bhi apni thaath hai


Kabhi-kabhi chale seedhe, kabhi mud jaayein

Kabhi-kabhi kahin tootein, kahin jud jaayein

Hum sham-sahar ke, Chaaron pahar ke, Mood mein dhal jaayein


Kashmir main, tu Kanyakumari

Uttar ne dakshin ko aflatoon aankh maari

Kashmir tu, main Kanyakumari

Tel bechne jaaye toh phir yeh duniya saari

https://youtu.be/WxtJqyIyThU


After the elders of the family, one performance followed another: Ruhi and Shravu; Romi, Rinki, and Adi; Simi and Pulkit; and many other distant relatives.

Even as the stage shook with each dance sequence, Raman couldn't focus on any of them. For his wife was nowhere to be seen.

"Kahan gayi yeh madrasan?" he muttered.

It wasn't after asking a group of ladies that he found out his wife had stepped outside for a phone call. He walked out of the back door and found her scrolling through her phone, checking her email, her back facing him.

He tiptoed closer and whispered in her ear. "You can leave your work behind for one day. The world won't end."

Ishita jumped in her skin, not realizing her husband had come up behind her. She turned around in alarm and stumbled on the edge of her saree, causing her to fall against him, as he caught her around the waist.

She still hadn't recovered from shock, when Raman took her phone out of her hand and placed it in his pocket.

"Raman! You scared me!" she whispered.

"What are you doing here?" he asked, ignoring her rebukes.

"I had a phone call from Dr. Batra. He just needed an email forwarded from me."

Her hands pressed against his chest, slowly rising to his shoulders, as he tightened his hold along her waist.

"You do realize you're supposed to be off for three days, right?" Raman stepped forward and she backed up.

"It was just one email, I promise. I even signed out of my account," Ishita promised.

He stepped forward again and her back hit the wall. She was caged in between the wall and her husband.

"Raman, chodiye na," she pleaded.

"Nope."

"Khule mein hai hum."

"I don't care." He tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear.

"Koi bhi aa sakta hai."

"I don't care."

He stepped even closer, until every hard plane of his body pressed against her delicate curves, crushing her to the wall. He dropped a kiss against her jaw, and she closed her eyes, holding back a whimper.

"Raman..." she whispered, unable to suppress the storm churning within her.

"Yes?" He pulled back and peered at her, raising an eyebrow, hoping she would finally give in to the undeniable love and passion they were enveloped in. But instead, she gently pushed him on his shoulders, bringing some space between them.

"Sab log andar hai. Humein dhoond rahe honge," she said breathlessly.

He withdrew his hands from her waist and trailed them down her arms, taking her palms into his. Gazing at her mehendi, he decided to take the conversation to another road entirely.

"Waise, tumne mujhe abhi tak apni mehendi dikhayi nahi," he said.

"Toh phir abhi dekh lijiye."

"Bahot accha rang chadha hai," he commented.

"Aapka naam bhi likhwaaya hai maine. Dhund ke bataiye." She raised her eyebrows at him in a challenge.

"Thik hai."

He trained his attention on her hands, trailing his index finger around every curve and contour of stained mehendi. But he couldn't find his name anywhere.

"Tumne kahin mera naam Tamil mein to nahi likha na?" he asked.

"Nahin. Hindi mein hi hai."

After a thorough perusal, he found his name written in a flower at the edge of her pinky finger.

"Found it." He rubbed the pad of his thumb against said flower and dropped a kiss on it, multiplying the goosebumps on her skin.

It wasn't until the door flew open with a breeze, and Bala's faint announcement on the mike diffused out that they sprung apart.

"Now, please put your hands together for the groom's brother and the bride's sister, Raman and Ishita!"

"Chaliye Raman, it's our turn now," Ishita said.

Raman grasped his wife's hand and intertwined his fingers with her, as he pulled her inside for their couple dance.

They stepped to the stage and their melodious song sounded from the speakers.


Ehsaas Ki Jo Jubaan Ban Gaye

Dil Mein Mere Mehmaan Ban Gaye

Aap Ki Taarif Mein Kya Kahein

Aap Humari Jaan Ban Gaye


It was a slow dance. They hadn't rehearsed much, but still, they found their rhythm immediately. Raman led his wife through the steps and Ishita followed perfectly.


Aap Hi Rab Aap Imaan Ban Gaye

Aap Humari Jaan Ban Gaye


Kismat Se Humein Aap Humdum Mil Gaye

Jaise Ki Dua Ko Alfaaz Mil Gaye


Ishita couldn't believe how lucky she was to have him as a husband. It was as if her deepest dreams and desires had been materialized. Murugan had not only answered her prayers, but blessed her with so much more.


Socha Jo Nahi Wo Haasil Ho Gaya

Chahun Aur Kya Ki Khuda De Ab Mujhe


Rab Se Mila Ek Aayan Ban Gaye

Khwabon Ka Mere Mukaam Ban Gaye


Raman guided his wife through a twirl. He could never have thought life could be so damn beautiful. This woman was his life, his love. And he couldn't ever ask for more.


Aap Ki Taarif Mein Kya Kahein

Aap Humari Jaan Ban Gaye


Deen Hai Ilaahi Mera Maan Hai Maahi

Main Toh Sajda Karun Unko

Harz Ruwayi Meri Farz Dawayi Meri

Ishq Hua Mujhko

https://youtu.be/_wHJNT0-OEQ


Their performance ended and a deafening round of applause caused Ishita and Raman to spring apart. They stepped off the stage, allowing Romi and Bala to announce the final performance of the night.

"Before we end the night, we would like to invite the final but the most important performance of the evening. Please welcome our very own bride and groom!"

Mihir and Mihika stepped up from their seats. She wore a violet and magenta netted lehenga while he was dressed in a dapper maroon kurta. Before they began their dance however, Mihir stopped the DJ.

"Mihika, I just realized that I forgot something," he said into the mike.

Mihika rolled her eyes. "We're right about to perform, Mihir. Can't this wait?"

"I don't think so."

Before she knew it, Mihir was down on one knee, his hand outstretched in front of Mihika.

"I realized that I never officially proposed to you. So, before everyone present here, I want to ask. Will you, Mihika Iyer, do me the honor of being my wife? Will you marry me?"

Mihika's chin trembled with emotion. "Yes! Of course I'll marry you!"

She pulled up her to-be-husband and launched herself into his arms, as applause and cheers broke out. Their favorite song began playing on the speakers and they began dancing, lost in the blissful promise of their future.

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Bhalla/Iyer Residence - next day, Saturday, 8 am


"Mihir, wake up!" Raman exclaimed at his brother who was threatening to fall asleep at the table. Again.

"Bhai, I only had like three hours of sleep. Rehem karo mujh pe," Mihir groaned. "Kal raat ki bachelor's party bahot lambi chali yaar."

"Ishita, chudiyaan aur kalire kahan rakhi hai?" Toshi asked.

"Mandir mein hi hai mummyji," she replied.

"Chetthi chetthi sab taiyyar kar le puttar. Baad mein Mihika ko sab pehnane jaana hai. Mihir, tu jaldi chai khatam kar. Phir Ganesh Puja shuru karni hai."

Both the Bhalla and Iyer houses were in chaos. It was the day before the wedding and many rituals had been lined up.

On one side of the hall, Mihir managed to jerk awake after a hot cup of tea, after which he sat in front of the temple for the Ganesh Puja. Mihika participated in a similar puja on the other side of the hall. Both families prayed for the wedding to happen without any obstacles. A kumkum and chandan tilak was applied to both the bride and groom, followed by aarti of the Almighty.

After the puja, Mihir made a quick escape for a power nap, while Toshi, Ishita, and the rest of the ladies went next door to the Iyer house, for the chooda and kalire ceremony. Toshi presented a set of red and ivory bangles, which she dipped in milk and rose petals before putting them on Mihika's hands, followed by gold-colored kaleeras encrusted with betel nuts.

"Aao kudiyon!" Toshi called out to all the unmarried girls of the crowd. "Sab ek ek karke idhar aao."

She instructed Mihika to shake the kaleeras over the head of each girl to see who would get married next. To her utter horror, a betel nut from the kaleera over Rinki's head. Toshi, on the other hand, was delighted.

"Oye ab to shaadi ke baare mein sochna shuru kar puttar!" she implored.

"Absolutely not!" Rinki stood up abruptly and threw away the nut that had fallen over her head.

After lunch, everyone set to work packing their wedding outfits and all the supplies needed for the wedding. They planned on leaving in the evening and staying at the Celestial Estate for the night, so the wedding could begin bright and early the next morning.

"Ruhi, aap ko aur kuch rakhna hai bag mein?" Ishita asked as she folded her sarees and placed them in the suitcase. "Once I pack the bag and load the trunk, we can't put anything else in it."

"I don't need anything else mumma," Ruhi said. Her outfit and jewelry for the wedding was already packed. "Main Ananya ke saath khelne jaau?" she asked.

"Thik hai, jao."

Ruhi jumped up from her parents' bed and ran out of the room to find Simi bua and Ananya, only to stumble into her father.

"Careful Ru!" he chided her, even as Ruhi flew away. He entered his room and handed his wife a stack of white silk. "Here, I got these veshtis from Appa. Pack these too."

"Adi ke kapde kahan hai?" Ishita asked, as she put away the veshtis.

"He didn't bring them yet? I asked him twice already."

Ishita shook her head and Raman sighed. "Adi! Adi!" he called out, voice rising in frustration.

Adi came running into the room. "Yes dad?"

"Adi, didn't I ask you to bring your clothes so Ishita Aunty could pack them?"

Adi stuck his tongue out as he realized his mistake. He had gotten distracted texting his friends. "Sorry dad, I totally forgot."

"Then go get them now! We're running out of time beta," Raman huffed impatiently.

Adi ran out of the room and came back with his purple kurta and tan pants, which he handed to Ishita, before leaving again.

"Raman, you didn't have to get that annoyed with him," Ishita said as she zipped the suitcase.

"I asked him twice, Ishita. He should've gotten it done when I said it the first time."

"But still..."

"You've gotten angry on Ruhi for less. Why is this bothering you?"

Ishita bit her lip. She was only just making headway with her son. She knew that being a parent wasn't always flowers and rose petals, but scolding Adi didn't sit right with her. Did she even have the right to scold him?

"Ishita, I get that you aren't as close to him as you are to Ruhi. But you're still his parent. Jab zaroorat pade to tumhe use bhi daantna hoga. Utne hi haq se jitne haq se tum Ruhi ko daant ti ho," Raman explained.

Ishita knew he was right. But it was easier said than done. She had yet to find her footing as Adi's parent. But she assured herself that it would happen soon enough. One day, being Adi's mother would come just as naturally as being Ruhi's mom.

"Yeh lijiye. Yeh bag pack ho chuki hai." She stood up from the bed and wheeled the suitcase out of their bedroom.

Two hours later, both families were on their way to the wedding venue.

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Celestial Estate - Sunday, May 19th, 4:40 am


Drums sounded loudly and firecrackers burst in all directions as the Bhallas danced in Mihir's baaraat (wedding procession). Toshi, Omprakash, Raman, Romi, Rinki, Simi, Pulkit, Ruhi, Aditya, and even little Ananya danced to the tunes of the best bhangra beats, as they surrounded Mihir on his horse. A crowd of other relatives, both close and distant, danced behind the groom's horse, as the entire baaraat proceeded to the entrance of the main pavilion.

Mihir was positively glowing. Gone was the sleepy boy from yesterday, having replenished himself after multiple afternoon naps. Today, he was decked in a gold threaded wedding kurta, flowers hanging from his paghdi in a sehra, as he rode the wedding horse.

They arrived at the entrance of the pavilion, and Mihir got down from his horse, where Madhu, Vishwa, Soumya, Ishita, Vandu, Bala, and Shravu stood to welcome them. Vandu showered rose water as the groom's party entered the pavilion, while Soumya applied a tilak to Mihir's forehead and welcomed him with a garland around his neck.

The groom's party entered the pavilion and many relatives began seating themselves in chairs that surrounded the grand central mandap. Mihir strained his neck for a glimpse of his bride but she was nowhere to be seen.

"Where's Mihika?" he asked, as they approached the mandap.

"Before you can see her, we need to get you dressed for the wedding," Bala told him.

Mihir looked at himself. He hadn't worn anything more expensive in his life. How much more dressed could he be?

"What do you mean?"

"He means you need to wear a veshti," Raman chuckled. "Welcome to the club, pal."

Raman and Bala dragged Mihir to one of the rooms adjoining the pavilion.

Ten minutes later, the groom emerged, dressed in a silk veshti and crisp white shirt, wearing a gold chain and gold clip-on earrings. Bala and Raman brought him to the mandap and whispered something in his ear.

In the next instant, Mihir disappeared. He ran from the mandap, clutching his veshti, and dashed out of the exit.

"Aiyyo yeh kidhar gaya?" Soumya shouted.

Raman shook his head, shaking with mirth. "Woh Kashi jaa raha hai sansaar chod ke! Appa, jao roko use!"

"Oh no! Main to bhul hi gaya Kashi Yatra ki rasam!"

Vishwa grabbed his veshti and made to run towards the exit, only for Mihir to peek his head in from the door.

"Is someone coming to get me?" he shouted. "You guys know that I don't actually want to go, right?"

"I'm coming beta! Don't leave!"

Vishwa ran outside the pavilion and caught his soon to be son-in-law, bringing him back to the mandap.

"Kya Mihir, thoda sa tez bhaagta na to bach jaata," Raman quipped.

"Dulhan ko lekar aayiye please," the priest requested, interrupting the laughter.

The noise died down as Vandu and Ishita went to bring out their sister. They emerged with Mihika and walked towards the mandap. Mihika was dressed in a beautiful red and gold kanjeevaram saree, hair tied back with a gajra, and gold jewelry hanging from her ears and around her neck. A red chunni was draped over her head, and red and ivory choodas adorned her wrists.

The wedding rituals began with the garland exchange, as Mihir was raised on Raman and Romi's shoulders while Mihika was raised by Bala and Vishwa. They then proceeded to the mandap where the priest guided the bride and groom through numerous rituals, as the sunrise painted the sky above them in hues of blue, pink, and orange. Vishwa stepped in as Mihika's father for the kanyadaan while Bala performed the rituals as Mihika's brother.

"Aap dono pheron ke liye khade ho jaaye." At the priest's instructions, Mihir and Mihka stood up for their rounds around the sacred fire. Everyone showered them with flowers, blessing their new union. Even so, Ishita had other plans.

Amidst the rain of flower petals, Ruhi tugged on Ishita's pallu and handed her a box.

"Here you go Ishimaa," she whispered.

"Great job Ruhi!" Ishita gave her a discreet high-five before pulling Vandu aside and showing her the contents of said box.

"Yes!" Vandu hugged her sister lightly, celebrating their victory at stealing Mihir's shoes.

"Akka, we can't celebrate yet," Ishita warned. "Yeh jootein humein itni aasaani se mil gaye, yeh baat mujhe hazam nahi hoti. Zaroor kuch gadbad hai."

Vandu went inside to hide the box of shoes, even as suspicions grew in Ishita's head. She knew her husband well. And she couldn't help but suspect that he had something else up his sleeve.

It wasn't until after the wedding ceremony ended and lunch began, did Ishita find out what was bugging her.

"Ishita Aunty!"

"Ishimaa!"

Adi and Ruhi approached her, whispering her name and pulling her aside for a quick chat.

"We have a problem, mumma," Ruhi said.

"Kya hua?"

"Aunty, Ruhi told me about the joota chupai," Adi said. "And Romi chachu saw you take mama's shoes."

"So what Adi? The shoes are still hidden safely."

"It's not that. I heard chachu and dad talking. Apparently dad has another pair of shoes for mama somewhere."

Ishita's eyes widened in shock. Of course her husband had plans to outsmart her.

"Tumhe pata hai woh dusre jootein kahan hai?" she asked.

Both kids shook their heads in the negative.

"Accha thik hai. Main kuch karti hoon. Tum log khaana kha lo."

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Celestial Estate - 12 pm


"Ten thousand rupees," Vandu declared.

"That's way too much Akka," Mihir pleaded.

"If you want your shoes back, then that's the price."

Mihir and Mihika sat on their velvet throne chairs after lunch, tied by the gathbandhan, surrounded by their relatives. Vandu currently held Mihir's shoes and negotiated the price of their return.

"Bhai, help me out here." Mihir turned to Raman.

Raman turned his lips up in a knowing smile. "You know what Mihir? We don't need these shoes back. Vandu, yeh tum rakho. Aish karo." He turned around and called his brother. "Romi! Bring out our secret weapon!"

Romi came running and squeezed his way through the crowd before whispering something in his brother's ear.

"What do you mean they're not there?" Raman whispered in annoyance.

Romi shrugged.

"Are you looking for this, Raman?" Ishita revealed a pair of brand new mojdhi shoes from behind her back.

Raman and Romi exchanged shocked looks.

"How did you know?"

"Where did you find these?"

"I know all of your hiding spots, Raman," Ishita laughed. "You really thought you could hide these from me?"

"But how did you even know about these?" he asked.

Ishita bit her lip to suppress a smile, even as Ruhi and Adi burst out laughing. Realization dawned in Raman's eyes.

"Dagaabaaz," he muttered under his breath. His plans were thwarted by his own kids! But even so, he welcomed betrayals like these, if they brought out such bright smiles on his wife and kids' faces.

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Celestial Estate - 5 pm


The wedding ended right around sunset. The bride, groom, and both families' elders left first to go to Mihir's house for the griha pravesh and other post-wedding rituals. Meanwhile, Raman, Ishita, Romi, Rinki, and Bala stayed back to wind up the wedding venue and see off the rest of their guests.

"Thanks for coming bua ji." Ishita handed her aunt-in-law a silver box of sweets and dry fruits, as she left the pavilion.

"We hope you had a good time," Raman said.

They bid farewell to the rest of their guests as they left the venue. Some of them were pleasant enough to praise their arrangements and wish the new couple a lifetime of happiness. Some of them were ungrateful of their efforts, finding faults in the food arrangements, unhappy with only a box of sweets and dry fruits in return. But one guest they met shocked them both.

"The wedding was really beautiful," Mani said, taking the box of dry fruits and sweets from Ishita's hands.

"Mani...? Tum yahan?" Raman asked.

"Haan, Madhu Aunty ne invite kiya tha..."

Ishita gazed at him, shocked. She was at a loss for words. The last time she had met him, she had rained hellfire on him, and rightly so. He may have deserved it at the time, but Ishita still felt awkward facing him again.

Raman's nostrils flared in irritation. The last time he had spoken with this man, he had almost gone down a self-destructive spiral. If it weren't for his wife, god knows where he would've landed. All because of this man's misconceptions.

"Guys, I um... I wanted to apologize," Mani began, being the first one to break the ice. "For whatever I said last time. I um... I crossed a line. I'm sorry."

Raman breathed a sigh of relief.

"I'm sorry too, Mani," Ishita replied. "Main kuch zyada hi bhadak gayi thi tum par."

"Koi baat nahi Ishu." Mani waved his hand dismissively. "Mujhe bura nahi lagaa. Lekin dar zaroor laga tha."

"Matlab?"

"Matlab kitni khatarnaak ho chuki ho tum?" he chuckled. "Ab to tumhe Raman hi sambhaal sakta hai."

"Main ise nahi, yeh mujhe sambhaalti hai," Raman said.

"I'll take your leave now guys," Mani said. "Congratulations on such a beautiful wedding again. And many congratulations to Mihir and Mihika."

Ishita and Raman nodded at Mani as he left the venue. Subconsciously, Raman stepped closer to his wife, pulling her towards him. No one... absolutely no one was going to take her away.

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Bhalla House, Raman and Ishita's bedroom - 11:30 pm


Ishita entered her room in her night clothes, yawning and dabbing her freshly cleaned face with a towel. She hung the towel on a chair before sitting on her bed, where her daughter was already sprawled on her stomach, fast asleep in her pajamas. Ishita ruffled her hair lovingly and dropped a kiss on her head. Her little girl had been so tired at Mihir's house during the post-wedding games. Thank god she had gotten her changed before they left otherwise she would have fallen asleep in her lehenga.

Ishita leaned back on the headboard and waited for her husband to return. He was riding back in another car with Toshi and Omprakash and was yet to return. She was so exhausted, she could barely keep her eyes open. But still, she couldn't fall asleep until her husband came back.

A knock on the door jerked her awake. The door opened, and Adi peeked in.

"Is Ruhi here?" he asked.

"Yes beta, she's sleeping here," Ishita answered. "She fell asleep in the car so I brought her here."

"Oh okay. She wasn't in our room so I came to check."

After a moment's hesitation, Adi asked another question.

"Can I join you guys?" He had had such a fun couple of days, surrounded by so many people, and he did not want to be alone now. Besides, he knew now that he wouldn't be wronging his mother by having a relationship with Ishita Aunty.

"Of course, beta!" Ishita brightened up. She scooched her daughter to the side and moved to the middle of the bed, making room for her son on the other side. She patted the empty space and welcomed Adi. "Come here."

Adi walked in and got under the covers with his sister and stepmother. He lied down beside Ishita, who sat between her children. She patted their backs, sending them into a smooth slumber.


Mila hoon ab jo tum se

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..


Every one of Adi's muscles relaxed as he fell asleep. He tossed and turned a bit, trying to find a comfortable position, until instinctively, he twisted onto his side and brought his arm around Ishita's waist. His eyes were closed and his mind was in that weird place between consciousness and deep sleep, but he could tell he was warm. Warm and loved and protected. Whatever this warmth was, he loved it. He burrowed closer the source of warmth, cuddling like a baby to a mother, something he hadn't done in a long time.


Tujhe hai paaya Rab se,

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..


Ishita struggled to contain her shock and her overwhelming affection for Adi at that moment. His arm was around her waist and he snuggled into her, the lines of tension easing from his forehead. He looked like an innocent baby, not a kid who had been forced to grow up too quickly. She felt the overwhelming urge to kiss him on his forehead, but she was scared to overstep. Adi had asked her not to be his mother. Maybe he might disapprove of it. Instead, she merely stroked his head repeatedly and poured all her love and affection into that simple gesture.


Har pal haseen sa huaa hai

Saanson ko tune chhuaa hai

Badhi tujhse nazdeekiyaan

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..


As she was lost in the warmth of her children snuggling into her, the door opened and her husband walked in... and stopped in his tracks. His wife was seated on their bed, flanked by their sleeping children. It was a sight he had prayed for years, and seeing it in real life sent a punch in his gut. He tiptoed to the bed and sat on the edge, not wanting to disturb his babies, even as his gaze remained fixed on them.


Mila hoon ab jo tum se

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..


Suddenly, he heard a snuffling sound, which caused him to tear his gaze away from his children. It was then that he realized that tears were streaming down his wife's face, and his heart fell into his stomach.

"What happened?" he mouthed, his voice barely a whisper.

Ishita shook her head. She had no words. And even if she did, she didn't have the strength to say it. Instead, she took a hold of her husband's hand and held it close to her chest. She kissed the back of his hand, her tears falling on his knuckles. Raman understood her without any speech, as he leaned over and wiped her tears.


Jab se juda tujhse jiya

Chain o qaraar dil ko mila

Jab bhi rahoon sang tere

Bhoolun har gham shiqwa gila


Anyone else witnessing this sight would not understand the sheer joy that ran through their veins. Only they could. Ishita had gone through hell and back in her ordeal to become Ruhi's mother. And she was still working to build her relationship with her son. Raman had been separated from both his kids for five long years, and he had fought tooth and nail to get them back. Both of them had been robbed of so much time with their children; they had been robbed of so many of the normal joys of parenthood. So much so that even this simple act of watching their children sleep was extraordinary.


Tere ishq ka hi nasha hai

Meri rooh tak mein basaa hai

Tune aankhon se jo chhuaa

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..


Raman turned off the bedside lamp as Ishita dozed off with her head leaning against the headboard. Raman got up from the bed and laid out his bedding on the couch, unwilling to disturb his wife and children. Truth be told however, he didn't know if he could fall asleep. For he could've spent eternity looking at his wife and children in peaceful slumber.


Mila hoon ab jo tum se

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

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Bhalla House - next day, 9 pm


"I want to watch Barbie!" Ruhi insisted.

"Come on Ruhi, that's been on forever!" Adi complained. "Can't we watch Marvel now?"

"Guys, play nice," Raman interrupted. "Ruhi, you've been watching it for long enough. Let bhaiya watch what he wants now."

Ruhi pouted and handed her brother the remote, who gleefully switched through the channels until he found the Spiderman movie he was looking for. Upset at having lost control of the remote, Ruhi ran into her room, choosing to play with her dolls instead.

Raman leaned back on the chair of the dining table and stretched his back until he felt his joints crack. Both he and his wife had taken the day off today, owing to their exhaustion after the long wedding yesterday. But it turned out that looking after his two kids was a full-time job in itself.

The front door clicked open, and Ishita and Mihir walked in.

"Tum dono saath mein kaise aaye?" Raman asked.

"Main apni gaadi lekar waapis aa rahi thi, tab Mihir bahar hall mein mila. Toh main use bhi le aayi," Ishita explained.

"I know you went to get your car back, but why is Mihir here?" Raman asked. "Shouldn't he be with his new wife?"

"Kahaan se bhai?" Mihir groaned and sat down in a chair beside Raman. "Mihika's staying with Periamma and Periappa tonight. Pag phere ke liye. So I'm all alone tonight."

"Awww you poor thing," Raman mocked. "Don't worry. Stay here tonight. Sab log yahan hai, including Mihika. It doesn't make sense for you to drive all the way back home for one night."

Ishita shook her head and walked into her bedroom, leaving her husband and brother (in-law) behind at the dining table.

"I'm so glad the wedding is finally over," Mihir groaned. "That was so exhausting. Three days of non-stop rituals and parties and what not..."

"Speaking of the wedding being over... Adi?" Raman called out to his son, who turned around on the couch to face him. "Do you want to change rooms now? We can convert the guest room to your room if you want," he asked.

Adi mulled over his father's suggestion. And he decided against it.

"No dad. I like sharing my room with Ruhi. It makes me feel less lonely."

Adi immediately turned his attention back to the TV, but his simple statement pierced Raman's heart. His chest burnt like acid thinking of how lonely his kid had been for so long. Both his kids. All because of Shagun.

"Bhai, all okay? Aap ko achanak kya hua?" Mihir read his brother's face.

Raman shook his head and sighed. "Just... I was just thinking about Adi and Ruhi. How much pain they have endured. All because of Shagun's selfishness. I can't believe I ever married her." He made sure to lower his voice enough so that Adi couldn't hear them.

"Why are you thinking about all that now?"

"I just... I wish I had married Ishita first." He thought about how his wife had cradled their sleeping children last night. "If she would've given birth to Ruhi and Adi, our entire family would've been saved from so much pain."

"I guess I can't disagree with that," Mihir admitted.

"I still can't believe I ever married Shagun."

"Bhai, ab jaane dijiye na in baaton ko. Jo hona tha woh ho gaya. Maybe it was all fated."

"Maybe it was. But still... I truly regret marrying her."

Behind them, a pair of steps retreated from the living room, leaving behind the pieces of a broken heart.

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Hey ya'll!

Our precious Mihir-Mihika are married now! ❤️🎊🎉 Yay!!

Okay, so it's truth time for your author. I want to share some of my original ideas I had for this fic, which I have since then scrapped.

So originally, when I drafted this fic, I was planning on following the same pairing as the show. Which meant I was planning on breaking up Mihir & Mihika and pairing up Romi-Mihika and Rinki-Mihir. Obviously I didn't go through with it, mainly owing to the readers' wishes, and because I was frankly not as interested in the side stories more than IshRa's story. But I still think the other pairings could have worked too, only if it was executed properly.

MiMi's break-up could've worked if they had a solid reason to break up, like career choices or different priorities in life (career vs family).

Rinki and Mihir could've gotten together after Rinki's broken marriage. Sooo many tropes that could've worked: friends to lovers, healing broken hearts, office romance, brother's best friend, and whatnot.

Even Romi and Mihika could've worked if the story was developed right. They could've had an enemies to lovers arc, where the bad boy Romi falls for the feisty girl Mihika and reforms himself. Considering how they started, it would've made for a very interesting story. Also, Aly Goni and Mihika Verma had great chemistry together.

Oh well, what's gone is gone... I just wanted to share this stuff with you.

As far as this update is concerned, I want to let you know that all my wedding research comes from the internet (I'm not Tamilian or Punjabi). So I apologize for many cultural mistakes. Also, not all rituals were shown on the page. If you don't see them happening, just assume they happened off the page.

Keep reading and voting and commenting guys!! I love you people! ❤️❤️

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Part 52


Ishita tiptoed out of the living room and stumbled into the bathroom, even as she struggled to breathe. Somehow, she managed to suck in the oxygen necessary for her body to function.

He regretted their marriage. He regretted their damn marriage. She couldn't believe it. His words circled in her brain, echoing louder and louder until they drowned out every rational voice in her head.

I truly regret marrying her... I truly regret marrying her... I truly regret marrying her...

He didn't love her. Not the way she loved him. She loved him more than life itself. More than she had ever loved anyone else. More than she ever thought possible. But he didn't love her back. Not in the same way.

Sirf Ruhi ke liye. Only for Ruhi. Sirf Ruhi ke liye. Only for Ruhi. Their original agreement rang in her head and she wanted to slap herself. Who was she to think he loved her back? Who was she to think he loved her beyond the original terms of their marriage? Especially when he had already experienced a real marriage before her? She hiccupped from the tears streaming down her face, gripping the edge of the sink so hard, the granite dug into her palms.

I truly regret marrying her. Of course he regretted it. Who was she compared to the woman he had had before? Who was she compared to the glamorous, beautiful Shagun who had bore his two children? Her husband was the best father she had had the fortune of witnessing; it was one of the reasons she had fallen in love with him. Why would he love a woman who wasn't a real mother? Who couldn't ever make him a real father?

I truly regret marrying her. Of course he regretted it. Anyone would regret a marriage of convenience in the long term. He was with her out of gratitude, out of obligation. Not out of love. Her body racked with silent sobs as she fell against the wall of the bathroom, dropping to the cold floor, a flood of tears dripping down and staining her green kurti.

She squeezed her eyes shut, and every precious moment of her marriage flashed behind her eyelids.

You are Dr. Ishita Raman Bhalla now.

You're an amazing, strong, incredible daughter, wife, and mother.

I enjoy your company, Madrasan. More than I can say.

I think you're my best friend, my favorite person.

Every moment was tainted now that she knew the truth in his heart. Everything had risen out of convenience, proximity. They weren't a match made in heaven. They were a match forced to be together. Except she had found her soulmate in him. But he hadn't. He had found a burden.

She wiped her tears furiously, but they refused to stop. Subbu had left her behind after recognizing her inadequacies. He had found a much better, more complete woman. She knew in her bones that Raman wouldn't do that. He would honor their marriage, regardless of how empty it was. She would be a burden on him for the rest of his life. A realization that devastated her beyond the possibility of another rejection.

No, she wouldn't let him carry the weight of this burden. She was better than that. She forced herself to stand up, ignoring the weightlessness in her legs. She furiously wiped her tears away, washing her face over and over until she could look at herself in the mirror without breaking apart.

She left the bathroom with a deep breath and entered her bedroom, only to find her husband seated on the couch, scrolling through his phone. Her tears threatened to spill over again, and she turned away from him, fussing over stuff in the cupboard.

Raman noticed his wife come in and immediately his senses heightened. Something was wrong. He could see it in the stiffness of her spine, in the jerkiness of her movements. He stood up and walked over to her.

"Is everything okay, Ishita?" he asked.

No answer.

He held her by the elbow and forced her to face him. When he finally saw her face, his heart broke. She was crying. Her kurti was stained with teardrops, her cheeks were sullen, and her eyes had lost their light.

"Kya hua tumhe? Tum ro kyun rahi ho?" He raised his free hand to cup her face, but he pushed him back and stepped away, walking over to sit on the bed.

Every alarm in Raman's system was blaring now. She was recoiling from his touch. Something was really, really wrong. He sat down beside her and jerked her by the arm so she would face him.

"Ishita, speak up dammit! What's wrong? You're scaring me now!"

"Why do you even care?" she whispered angrily. "Why do you care about me? Just stop it."

Raman staggered back as if he'd been punched in the teeth.

"Why do I... Why do I care? Of course I care! You're my wife!" he shouted.

Ishita laughed bitterly. "You mean I'm Ruhi's mother. That's why you care, right?"

"What is going on? What are you saying?"

Ishita roughly brushed his hand off and stood up, finally facing him and looking him in the eyes. "You regret our marriage, don't you? You regret marrying me." She said it like it was a fact. Even so, he heard the quiver behind her accusation.

"How could you even say that?" Raman stood up and faced her, eye to eye. "How could you even think I'd ever regret marrying you? After everything you've done for me, for Ruhi, Adi, my family?"

Ishita closed her eyes and shook with a silent sob. There it was. Ruhi, Adi, family... That was all it boiled down to. That was all that tied them together. But what would happen once Ruhi and Adi grew up and moved out? When their siblings left the nest and moved on with their lives? When their parents were no longer in this world? What would tie her to this man who was her life and breath?

The thought of not being connected to this man, the thought of being shunned from his life (or worse, of him being with her out of obligation alone) split her heart open. Her body racked with a shudder and her fears compounded.

Raman saw his wife shaking from tears, and desperation and fear knotted in his chest. He could feel his love slipping away. Pain lanced through his heart when she opened her eyes and tears leaked down her cheeks.

"Ishita, just talk to me. Tell me what's wrong," he begged. "Please."

Ishita drew in a shaky breath. "What's wrong is that our marriage is a sham. And you shouldn't have to carry the burden of it."

Raw panic scraped his veins at her words. "Our marriage is not a sham. It's the realest thing in my life."

Her gut twisted at the lies he uttered. Empty words he said just to make her feel better. She couldn't take it anymore. "Just stop it, Raman!" she screamed.

"No, I won't!" he insisted. He grabbed her by her arms and tried shaking some sense into her. "I don't know what's going on in your head, or what happened in the ten minutes I was outside, but you don't get to stand here and declare the most important relationship of my life a sham!"

"I get it Raman, you've put so much into this marriage. But you got the short end of the stick." A broken sob bled through her lips.

"Enough." He gritted out. "That's not true. You're my wife, my equal. We're connected forever, and you know it."

Forever. How could that be true? Subbu's words from when he dumped her came ringing back in her ears.

Tum kabhi maa nahi ban sakti. Aur shaadi ke baad bacche hi do logo ko baandh ke rakhte hain. Agar hamare bacche hi nahi honge to tumse shaadi karne kya matlab?

If kids were what tied her to her husband, then she was doomed. Ruhi and Adi would grow up one day and leave the nest. What was in store for them after that? She couldn't even bear another child to tie them together.

"Trust me, you don't want to be stuck with an infertile woman forever," she whispered bitterly.

"Is that how shallow you think I am? That I'll have an issue with a simple medical problem that was out of your control? Have I ever even brought that up before? What do you think of me?"

"I think you're too good to realize you could have better. Heck, you've already had better, haven't you?"

He lost the strength in his fingers at that accusation, and he let go of her arms. She was a shield today. And everything he said, every reply he gave was reflected off that shield, launching into his chest, piercing his heart.

Ishita's heart bled at the hurt reflected on her husband's face. Or it would've if she had a heart. She didn't have a heart anymore. It lay in shattered pieces at their feet. None of this was rational. It was completely unlike the smart, confident, self-assured woman she normally was. But the rejections she'd faced in the past had left a mark on her, and try as she might, she couldn't rid herself of these insecurities.

"So that's it then?" Raman's voice was raw with emotion.

Ishita could give no answer. They stared at each other, eyes shimmering with hurt, air silent except the painful sounds of their breaths. She turned around, unable to face him. She was drowning in dark waters, and his face was simply saturating her lungs.

"I can't be here," she whispered. "I'm going to the kids' room."

She walked out their bedroom and silently crept into her kids' bedroom. Her son and daughter were fast asleep. She slipped under the covers with her daughter, holding her close, gazing at her son on the other bed. Her children grounded her, acting as her anchor in the storm. But she was scared this storm would wipe out everything she ever held dear.

She hadn't meant it, but unknowingly, she had projected her own insecurities onto the one man who loved her the most. Because she didn't know yet, how deep his love ran, how much he adored her.


I blew things out of proportion, now you're blue

Put you in jail for something you didn't do

I pinned your hands behind your back, oh

Thought I had reason to attack, but no


Fighting with a true love is boxing with no gloves

Chemistry 'til it blows up, 'til there's no us

Why'd I have to break what I love so much?

It's on your face, and I'm to blame, I need to say


Hey

It's all me in my head

I'm the one who burned us down

But it's not what I meant

Sorry that I hurt you

I don't wanna do, I don't wanna do this to you

I don't wanna lose, I don't wanna lose this with you

I need to say, hey

It's all me, just don't go

Meet me in the afterglow

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Raman stumbled back against the bed trying to wrap his head around what had just happened. They had been so happy together. What could've happened that made her think such things? That he regretted their marriage? That he didn't care for her like she mattered more than his own life?

She'd accused him of having had a better woman before her, as if she wasn't the greatest epitome of motherhood and womanhood he'd ever seen. She'd degraded herself to an infertile unworthy woman, as if she wasn't the reason he was still a father, a good man.

He fell back against a pillow and rubbed his eyes, trying to stop the tears that threatened to spill over, but to no avail. He thought back over the last few weeks. Flashback after flashback passed through his mind and he felt the pieces of the puzzle clicking together. Shagun's frequent appearances in their lives, her vitriolic words about his wife, Ishita's unease at talking about pregnancy... It had been building up over the past month. And today she broke down.

Seeing her hurt like that was excruciating beyond belief. All he wanted to do was crush her in his arms until she was rid of every single ugly thought she had about herself. He'd make her see sense. Their love was worth fighting for, and he wasn't going to give up on it.


It's so excruciating to see you low

Just wanna lift you up and not let you go

This ultraviolet morning light below

Tells me this love is worth the fight, oh


I lived like an island, punished you with silence

Went off like sirens, just crying

Why'd I have to break what I love so much?

It's on your face, don't walk away, I need to say


Hey

It's all me in my head

I'm the one who burned us down

But it's not what I meant

I'm sorry that I hurt you

I don't wanna do, I don't wanna do this to you

I don't wanna lose, I don't wanna lose this with you

I need to say, hey

It's all me, just don't go

Meet me in the afterglow

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Bhalla House - the next day, 5:30 am


Raman jerked awake as the sun shined on his eyes. He groggily blinked his eyes as he surveyed his bed and sat up. His sleep had been rough without the warmth of his wife cocooning him. It took a moment before the events of last night came tunneling back.

His wife. Ishita was upset. No, she was heartbroken. And he needed to set it right. Suddenly, every trace of sleep vanished, as he stood up and ran out to find her. It wasn't even six in the morning yet. She had to be asleep in the kids' bedroom, or getting ready in the bathroom.

He ran to Adi & Ruhi's bedroom. She wasn't there. He ran to the bathroom. She wasn't there. He ran to the kitchen, then dining room, then living room. She wasn't anywhere. He was growing frantic. In his panicked state, he ran into the guest room, running into Mihir who was coming out the door.

"Bhai, what's wrong? You look like hell," Mihir said at first glance.

"Where's Ishita?"

"I saw her leave in her car a few minutes ago, from the window. I figured she was just going to work."

Raman cursed under his breath. She was avoiding him. It was only then that he realized Mihir was fully dressed this early in the morning. "What are you even doing awake at this hour?" he asked.

"Mihika and I leave for our honeymoon today. Our flight is in three hours." He gazed at his brother in concern. "Bhai, what the hell is going on? Did you and bhabhi have a fight?"

He guided his brother inside, and Raman roughly sat down, running his fingers through his hair in frustration. Unable to suppress the storm inside him, he talked a bit about his fight with Ishita last night. How she had called their marriage a sham. Even so, he held back on most of the ugly details of their fight.

"I just... I can't comprehend that she'd ever think that!" he ranted. "She should know more than anyone how far we've come!"

Mihir sighed in disappointment. He loved his Raman bhai, but he could be so damn oblivious sometimes. "Bhai, after everything she's been through, she needs reassurance. She needs concrete proof that she's loved."

"What more proof could she need? I love her more than anything!" he yelled impatiently.


Isn't it enough that I fight the dragons?

That I fight the villains and I win the prize?

Isn't it enough that I run the kingdom?

Solve everyone's problems direct and advise.

Why must I also get down on my knees and apologize?


Mihir stumbled back momentarily at hearing his brother finally fess up to what they all could see clear as day.

"Have you told her that?" he asked.

"She knows. In everything I say to her, every time I touch her, she has to know."

"Bhai, I know you're a man of few words. But this time, you have to use your goddamn words. You have to tell her explicitly that you love her."

Raman sighed. Actions may have been his way of expressing his love, but words were just as important. Their marriage needed to solidified, and the only way to do so was to tell her he loved her.


Because I love her, I need her

Like Earth needs the Sun

I need the one I love

To keep my hope bright

My head right

My heart fighting on

Until I am back in her arms


She needed him to say it out loud, that he loved her. Well, if that's what she needed, he'd say it all right. He'd scream it at the top of his lungs, until his voice was hoarse, until his madrasan had zero doubt regarding what she meant to him.

"I need my keys," he rasped, as he got up roughly. "Tell mummy and papa I'm going out for a while. I don't know when I'll be back."

"Okay bhai. Good luck!" Mihir called out after his brother, who dashed into the bathroom, brushing his teeth and showering in record time before buzzing out of the building with his keys and wallet.

He started his car and headed for his wife's clinic, excitement, anxiety, and hope flickering in his chest. He loved her. He loved her. He loved her. The ultimate truth thumped against his sternum with every beat of his heart, and he couldn't wait to finally tell her.


Because I love her, I need her

Like summer needs rain

To grow and sustain each day

I hear her singing

And bringing strength to my soul

Until I am back in her arms

Miles apart, yet still my heart can hear her melody

I'm more than sure I can't endure

Without her love for me

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Batra Medical Center - 5:50 am


After an excruciatingly long fifteen minutes, Raman finally arrived at the entrance of the Batra Medical Center. He parked his car in the visitor parking lot, unbuckled his seatbelt, and flew out, shutting the door behind him.

"I need to see Dr. Ishita Bhalla," he panted breathlessly, as he reached the 24-hour front desk.

The young intern scrolled through the computer and turned back to him.

"There is no one by that name signed in today," he said.

"What nonsense?! She's a pediatric dentist here! She left for work like half an hour ago. Just check again!" he ordered.

"But sir-"

"Is everything okay here?" a female voice sounded from behind him.

He turned and saw Sarika, allowing himself to breathe a sigh of relief. Finally, a familiar face.

"Sarika, where's Ishita?" he asked her.

"Ishita ma'am isn't here yet sir," she said. "In fact, the dental office doesn't open for another hour at least."

"What? How is that possible?!"

"I'm sure sir. I just came in and her car isn't in the staff parking lot. None of her things are in the staff room, and her office is locked too."

"And you're sure there wasn't a dental emergency this morning?" he asked, panic creeping up his throat.

"I'm sure sir. Ishita ma'am isn't here."

"Is it possible she went to another site or for a house visit somewhere?"

"The dentists here don't do any off-site visits. Only family physicians and certain specialists."

"Okay, thanks Sarika."

He jogged out of the building and re-entered his car, taking out his cell-phone and dialing his wife's number again and again. Each time, his call went unanswered. He sent a string of messages asking her of her whereabouts, but received no reply.

To make matters worse, a weather alert chimed on his phone: STORM WARNING FOR YOUR AREA. SEEK SHELTER IMMEDIATELY.

His heart was stuck in his throat and he struggled to breathe normally. His wife was out there somewhere, stuck in a brewing storm, both literally and figuratively. He needed to get to her. Now.

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Part 52

OMG such a sad ending - how can you end it on a cliff-hanger ooooooooohhhh!!!😭😭😭

It's so heart breaking!!!!💔💔💔

So she just heard the last sentence and the earlier part - I feel so bad for both of them!!! Oh gosh I can't wait too long for what happens next.


It is absolutely fabulous the way you have been building Adi and Ishita's relationship - amazing!!

I really liked the fact that you showed his talks with the therapist giving us a great insight of his thoughts and his conflicts!! I am so happy that the therapist is making him forget about what Shagun has been saying to him and for him to think for himself and realise the actual situation - excellent!!!

Ishita and Adi's conversations have been brilliant - Ishita loves him so much and wants to show her love to Adi physically with hugs and kisses like she does to Ruhi but rightly realises that it's too soon!!!

I love the way Adi shared payisum with her it was so sweet - would have been nice to have prolonged that scene - an added scene of Raman and Ishita having a short conversation about it, however it was still beautiful.


Also the way Ishra's closeness has been unfolding - fantastic!!

I know misunderstandings are necessary/realistic but I really don't like them they make me too sad!!😔😭

I want Raman to remember his conversation with Mihir and his last sentence and realise what triggered Ishita's heartbreak!!!!


Please please please continue soon as I don't like being heartbroken!!!😭💔


I would like to say thank you so much for the lovely updates you have been giving it has been so exciting seeing them coming up so quickly recently it makes me so happy as I look forward to your updates as I love your story so much. You are giving a second life to YHM and I am just loving it!!!🤗🤗❤️❤️

Eagerly waiting for the next update - I cannot wait too long - confession time!!!!

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Part 53


Parag Street, Delhi - 6 am


Ishita punched the steering wheel as her head fell back in frustration. She had been stupid. So so stupid. Not only did she forget to charge her phone, she had also forgotten to fill her car's petrol tank this morning. She cursed at the car service shop for returning her car without a full tank last night.

Now, she was stuck here, on the side of Parag Street, with a phone with no battery, in a car with no petrol. Thankfully she had had the foresight to veer her car to the side of the road before it stopped working, thereby preventing a traffic jam. But even after being rewarded with such small mercies, her problems had only begun.

She had left this morning in a hurry, unable to sleep soundly, simply eager to leave the house, unable to face her husband. But on her way to the clinic, her car had broken down at the worst location possible. Parag Road was an isolated stretch of road, running through an uncharacteristic empty field, that was empty save a couple hoardings of building companies that had purchased the land.

Her heart raced in panic, and anxiety crept up her throat. Somehow, she managed to push her fears down and willed her brain to think. The first thing she needed was a phone. She needed to call a cab and get to her clinic. A car or a truck passed by occasionally, but she didn't have the courage or willingness to stop anyone for a phone. It was early in the morning, and she was all alone, on the streets of Delhi. Fright settled in her chest.

Even so, she gulped her fears away and exited her car. She needed to be brave. She could wait until a car passed with a female driver and then ask for a phone. She needed to do something other than just sit and wait. She shut the door of her car and waited. But no car passed by. Her anxiety grew.

To make matters worse, just then, thunder struck above and rain pattered down, big hard droplets drenching her. The wind picked up and her saree pallu fluttered behind her, leaves and sticks flying in the storm. Ishita pulled on the handle of the car door, but it refused to budge. She tugged again, but to no avail. It was then that her gaze fell on her keys. They were stuck in ignition, inside the car, and she was locked out.

"No no no no..." she groaned. "Paithyam Ishita. Praanth. What is wrong with you today?"

She smacked her forehead. Nothing had been right with her since last night. Now she was stuck here, locked outside of her car, without a phone, getting drenched in the middle of a storm.

Panic laced through her veins, and her heart called out to her comfort person. "Raman..."

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Raman sped down the highway, flooring the gas pedal. Wipers swiped over the windshield clearing his path in the storm, even as a tempest brewed within his chest. His wife, his soulmate, his Ishita was stuck somewhere in such a violent storm, and he couldn't reach her.

He had spent the last twenty minutes calling everyone his wife possibly knew, trying to find out if they had heard from her. He had been driving to every single place she ever frequented, their favorite coffee house, her favorite South Indian restaurants, the temples she frequented. But she was nowhere to be found. He was now driving to one last temple he could think of where she could be.

He parked his car in the parking lot of the Shiv temple and stepped outside, struggling against the pouring rain, his heart threatening to beat out of his rib cage. He ran into the sanctum sanctorum, water dripping down his pants and shirts, frantically looking here-there for his wife. But she was not here.

Distraught, he approached the godly idols, folding his hands in desperation. Lord Shiv, Goddess Parvati, Lord Murugan (Kartikeya), and Lord Ganesh's calm presence managed to dampen his panic, but fear still ran through his veins.

"Hey bhagwaan, please mujhe meri Ishita se milwa dijiye," he pleaded.

He had been everywhere, called everyone, and he still couldn't reach her. What more could he do? God knows where she was, whether she was okay or not, whether her car was even working properly... Raman's eyes opened and an idea struck him. Her car. Her damn car.

They had just upgraded her car with every latest technology he could think of, and that included GPS. He could track her car with the GPS.

"Thank you so much Bhagwaan. Thank you, thank you so much!" He bowed down in front of the Lord and ran back to his car, uncaring of the rain and wind. He got into his car and opened his phone, finding the GPS tracker app. The map focused on her car and his heart dropped. It was on Parag Road, in the middle of nowhere. What the hell was she doing there?

He shifted the gear from park to drive. "I'm coming Ishita... I'm coming," he whispered.

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Parag Road - 6:15 am


Raman turned onto the road and immediately, he spotted his wife, finally being able to draw in a breath of relief. She was struggling with the handle of her car door, beating at the window in frustration, panic evident in her expression. Rain pattered around her, and the wind blew her saree and hair all over the place. He parked his car behind hers and got out to run to her. She was safe. And she was here. His Ishita was here.

Ishita banged the door one last time before slumping against her car in exhaustion. As she turned around, she saw her husband's car pull up, and her anxiety finally eased a bit. His white shirt was plastered to his chest, his hair was dripping from rain, but he ran to her, uncaring of the storm around them. She had been so scared, and she couldn't think of anyone else she would've wanted to see at that moment. Raman was here. Her Raman was here.

"Raman!"

"Ishita!"

They screamed and ran to each other. Ishita threw her arms around her husband, pressing her chin into his shoulder, as Raman squeezed her around her torso, holding her to his chest, nuzzling his nose in her hair. Relief cascaded through them, and they clung to each other as if their life depended on it.

Moments later, Raman pulled back and cupped her face, peering at her as if she were the most precious thing in the world.

"Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?" he asked, raising his voice so he could be heard over the rain. "I thought you were going to work."

"I was. Lekin meri gaadi mein petrol khatam ho gaya," she replied.

"Toh tum phone kyun nahi utha rahi thi? Kab se dhund raha hu main tumhe!"

"Phone ki battery khatam ho gayi. Main charge karna bhul gayi thi. Madad maangne ke liye gaadi se bahar nikli to chaabi andar reh gayi. Aur gaadi lock ho gayi."

"Tum yaar... Itni laaparwaahi-"

A car flew past them before could chide her, and he instinctively turned her inwards, hiding her wet form between her car and his body. He had so much to say, but this was not the place to say it.

"Come with me, we have to get out of here," he instructed.

He dragged her to his car and made her sit in the passenger seat, before he got behind the wheel himself.

"Lekin Raman, meri gaadi ka kya?" she asked.

"I'll tell the driver. He'll come get it. But we're leaving right now."

Saying so, he made a U-turn and sped away with his wife.

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Emerald Elite Hotel, Deluxe Suite - 7 am


Raman stepped inside the luxurious suite and his wife followed behind, her saree pallu blanketing her shoulders, covering her wet frame. He closed the door and latched it shut, before turning the heat up in the temperature dial. Even then, he could see her shivering from being drenched in the rain, and so he kindled a fire in the fireplace as well.

The storm carried on outside, dark rain clouds causing an downpour and hiding the sun, thunder and lightning sounding frequently. It wasn't unlike the storm that raged within them.

Raman hadn't planned on coming to this hotel when he had found her stranded on Parag Road. He had planned on taking her home, to their bedroom, and talking some sense into her. But as it turned out, the roads were closed off due to the storm and there was no way to go anywhere. Neither home nor her clinic nor his office.

So instead, he had pulled into the nearest hotel, hoping to wait out the storm in a comfortable heated suite. Hopefully, they could resolve the storm between them in this time as well.

Ishita fidgeted with the edge of her saree, smoothing her wet hair, wiping her face nervously. As relieved as she was to see her husband in a time of panic, the dull ache in her heart had now ripened again. Her heart cracked open again at being reminded of what she had heard last night, of what she now assumed to be true.

"Ghar pe kya kahenge sab se?" she asked, leaning against the wall and staring out the window. She still couldn't face him.

"Maine group pe message kar diya hai," he replied, standing up from the fireplace. "Yeh kaha ki tum toofaan ki wajah se clinic nahin pohoch paayi to main tumhe lene aaya tha. Aur raaste band ho gaye the to hum ghar waapis nahi pohoch paaye. Jab tak toofaan chal raha hai, tab tak hum hotel mein rukenge."

"Hmm..." she acknowledged in a small voice.

Raman frowned at the lack of light he observed in his wife. She was drawing into a shell, and he could feel her slipping from his fingers like sand. But he had had enough. He stomped over to the window and jerked her to the side, forcing her to face him.

"Please, just talk to me. What the hell happened? What could've possibly made you say the things you said last night?" he asked. "Aisa kya hua ki tumne hum dono mein itni dooriyaan daal di?"

"I heard you."

"What?"

"I heard you talking to Mihir. I heard you say it yourself, that you regret marrying me." She held back a sob as he recalled his words. I truly regret marrying her... "It's okay Raman. I get it. I won't keep you tied to a woman you don't want-"

She gasped and lost the rest of her words as he pushed her against the wall, his fingers digging into her arms.

"You have no idea what I want," he hissed. "It's you I want. For the rest of my life. For every one of my lives."

"Don't lie to me." Ishita's eyes rained fire. "I heard you yourself."

"You heard wrong. I never said I regretted marrying you. I was talking about Shagun. How I regretted marrying her. I could never regret you."

He explained Adi's innocent comment and his own pain at thinking of his kids' loneliness which had caused him to utter those words to Mihir. But Ishita still didn't believe them.

"Come on, Raman. Don't take me for a fool," she scoffed. "How could you regret marrying the woman that made you a father?"

"Shagun simply brought my children into this world. You're the woman who made me a father," he said with absolute conviction.

"I had lost both Adi and Ruhi before you came into my life. I had no clue how to be Ruhi's father, until you married me and helped me heal. I had no clue how to fight for Adi, until you supported me and guided me through it. I would be nowhere without you. I'd be trapped in hell if it weren't for you."

Ishita's eyes widened as his words washed over her, putting her broken heart back together.

"But I can't even... I can never..."
"You can never what?" Raman interrupted her. "You can never give birth?" he asked, reading her silence correctly.

She nodded meekly.

"None of that matters madrasan. You're already a natural mother. You're Adi and Ruhi's mother. Their only true mother."

"And what about Shagun? She-"

"Please don't compare yourself to her, for god's sake. That's insulting to you. And I can't bear your insult. Not even from you."

Ishita smiled at that, despite the throbbing ache in her heart. Her lips turned up, and Raman felt his world finally right itself.

"What nonsense were you saying yesterday," he continued, "about me having had a better woman before you? There is no one better than you Ishita. Your kindness, your courage, your resilience, your selflessness... Your gigantic heart... I couldn't have asked for a better wife than you."

Tears pooled in Ishita's eyes and spilled down her cheeks, as Raman's sweet words seeped through her and stitched her wounds closed. He was standing so close, gazing at her with so much love, it was all she could do not to launch herself into his arms.

Struggling to draw in enough oxygen, she pushed him back and escaped from his hold, walking to the other end of the room, wanting some space between them so she could think straight.

"Okay fine," she said between shaky breaths. "Maybe I misheard you last night. But that still doesn't change the facts. We got married for Ruhi, out of convenience. That hasn't changed."

"Of course it's changed!" Raman yelled, his patience breaking. "Everything's changed!"

"How? And why?!" Ishita yelled back.

"BECAUSE I LOVE YOU GODDAMIT!" Raman bellowed.


A summer rain is passing over

And it feels like a dream

I could run and look for shelter

But you hold onto me


Wind whistled in her ears, as Ishita gasped, struggling to digest what Raman had just uttered, her heart pitter-pattering like the rain outside. But he was not done talking.

"I love you more than I ever thought possible! You're my only soulmate, my only love! Chot tumhe lagti hai aur dard mujhe hota hai. Aansu tum bahaati ho aur dil mera tut jaata hai. Ishita, I... I've never loved anyone as much as I love you." His knees weakened and he staggered back, struggling to hold himself upright. "I love you Ishita..." he sobbed.

He gazed at her, his eyes laser focused on her face, waiting and waiting for an answer. He had gone off on a limb, and he was terrified she was going to saw it off. She stood there, unmoving as a statue, shock etched on her face.


I'm under your skies

I'm caught in your eyes

Don't you know you stop the room

And all that I can see is you


In a split-second, he found the wind knocked out of his lungs as Ishita ran forward and threw her arms around him, crushing him in a hug, her body shaking desperately. Raman wrapped his arms around his wife, squeezing her to his chest, tears trailing down his cheeks in earnest.

"I... I love you too..." Ishita hiccuped.

The air brightened, and every one of Raman's senses cleared up. His world finally righted itself on its axis as he heard those three words. He pulled back slightly to lock eyes with her.


I'm standing where the lightning strikes

I know this doesn't happen twice

You must be my once in a lifetime, in a lifetime

You must be my once in a lifetime


"Say it again." Raman caressed her cheek.

"I love you," Ishita laughed, tears flowing down her cheeks and neck.

"Say my name with it."

"I LOVE YOU RAMAN!" The words exploded out of her, raw and unfiltered. "I love you so so much. More than my next breath," she sniffed. "Raman, I'm so sorry for everything I said last night... I-I don't know what came over me. I-"

"Shhh. It's okay." Raman touched his forehead to Ishita's, moving his hand from her cheek to the back of her neck. "Just don't ever say anything like that again. You get that?"

Ishita nodded.

"If you still have any doubt about what you mean to me, then feel this." Raman grabbed her hand and placed her palm over his heart. It was pounding like a freight train. "This is what you do to me every time you come near me. This is how you've been affecting me since day one. Since before I even fell in love with you."


There's so much that I have told you

But it's all in my head

Ask me anything you want to

'Cause the answer is yes

I'll spend my whole life

Just being caught up in your eyes


Ishita felt such an outflow of love, she felt she would burst open from it. Every peeking doubt, every insecurity was vanquished, and she couldn't bear any more walls between her and her husband.

She snaked her hands up his chest and tugged at the lapels of his shirt, bringing his lips down on hers. Although he was momentarily taken aback at the sudden gesture, Raman adjusted quickly, slanting her lips on hers, holding her close.

They were finally home at last. They had not only mended each others' broken hearts, but they completed each others' souls in a way that was never done before. It wasn't just a journey to move on from their past or overcome their demons. It was a journey to their one and only soulmate. This wasn't their second chance at love, this was their once in a lifetime kind of love.


Don't you know you stop the room

And all that I can see is you

I'm standing where the lightning strikes

I know this doesn't happen twice

You must be my once in a lifetime, in a lifetime


They had finally met their match, someone with equal passion, someone who challenged them. They had driven each other crazy since the day they met, just as they were meant to. This was it. They were meant to be driven crazy in love.

It could've been minutes, or it could've been hours, but they finally came apart, gasping for air. Raman lifted her into a bridal carry and gently placed her on the bed, even as she rained kisses along his jaw. There would be no walls between them anymore. She was ready to surrender herself, to love and be loved.

The storm raged on outside, the fire kindled in the fireplace, but now, their fiery passion was enough to keep them warm. As Raman closed the distance between them, Mr. and Mrs. Bhalla became one. Forever.


So before the storm has passed

I just want to ask

Can we make this moment last?

So before the storm is passed

I just want to ask

Can we make this moment last?

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Emerald Elite Hotel, Deluxe Suite - 12 pm


The sun shone through the windows, now that the storm had passed, bringing in daylight. Even so, the curtains of the windows blocked out most of the sun rays, protecting the couple's quiet interlude before worldly duties called them.

Ishita stretched her joints and stirred awake under the blanket. The cobwebs of her brain cleared up as she blinked her eyes open, recalling the events of the morning. Her saree and blouse lay scattered across the floor, along with Raman's shirt and pants.


My love was as cruel as the cities I lived in

Everyone looked worse in the light

There are so many lines that I've crossed unforgiven

I'll tell you the truth, but never goodbye


Raman. She sighed, as she thought of her husband. He was currently sound asleep, spooning her from behind, holding her tight around her waist. She shuddered thinking of how close she had come to throwing it all away because of her foolishness. But none of that mattered anymore. She had made it through the fire and storm and gloom. The air had cleared up and brought daylight.

She lifted her head and glanced at the wall clock. She saw that it struck twelve... and she gasped.

"Raman! Raman!" she whispered, shaking her husband to wake him up. "It's noon already. We should go home now."

Raman groaned aloud as he stretched his arms out and woke up, smiling at the sight that greeted him. His wife was in his arms. His entire life had led up to this moment. Every pain, heartbreak, and betrayal of the last ten years seemed worth it, if this was what he was getting in return. He was never letting go of her. All the darkness had cleared up. It was finally daylight.


I don't wanna look at anything else now that I saw you

I don't wanna think of anything else now that I thought of you

I've been sleeping so long in a 20-year dark night

And now I see daylight, I only see daylight


"Raman? Are you listening?" his wife said. "We should go now. The storm has cleared up, look." She pointed out the window.

"I don't want to leave," he moaned, burrowing closer to her, dropping a kiss on her shoulder.

Ishita sighed in pleasure. "I don't want to leave either," she confessed.

"Then we're not leaving," Raman declared.

"What about work? And what if our families start looking for us?"

"It's my own office. No one's going to have an issue if I skip one day. And our families know we're together. They can handle the kids for a few hours."

Ishita mulled over his plan. And then gave in. "Okay, I'll call in sick to my clinic too. We don't have many appointments scheduled anyway."

Raman smiled in surprise. His normally goody two-shoes wife was actually planning on skipping work.


And I can still see it all (In my mind)

All of you, all of me (Intertwined)

I once believed love would be (Black and white)

But it's golden (Golden)


"Raman?"

"Hmm?"

"Can we at least order something? I'm starving," she pouted. "Subah se kuch nahi khaaya."

"Haan, bhookh toh mujhe bhi lagi hai... Subah se energy bhi kaafi waste huyi na?" he chuckled.

Ishita colored up and averted her eyes, only for him to kiss her on the cheek. He held back a laugh at her shyness. She was so adorable.

"Fine, tum bolo, kya khaana hai tumhe?" he asked.

They spent the rest of the day cocooned in their hotel suite, emerging only for food and air.

When night befell, Raman convinced his wife to stay the night, planning to return home the next morning. She had spent a good twenty minutes on the phone with her daughter, coaxing her to have dinner and go to sleep. Even so, she couldn't feel guilty for leaving her for one night. She needed this time with her husband.

When she finally hung up the phone, she immediately found herself in her husband's arms, and all speech was lost, replaced with pure ecstasy.


And I can still see it all (In my head)

Back and forth from New York (Singing in your bed)

I once believed love would be (Burning red)

But it's golden

Like daylight, like daylight

Like daylight, daylight


I wanna be defined by the things that I love

Not the things I hate

Not the things that I'm afraid of

Not the things that haunt me in the middle of the night


I just think that

You are what you love

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Part 53

Thank you so much for quick update - I am so relieved!!!

What an absolutely fantastic update - finally the confession happened and in just the way it should have have in the circumstances!!!!☺️❤️❤️


I loved the fact that the name that came on her lips when she was scared was Raman - amazing!!!!

The way you describe the emotions is awesome I get totally involved in the whole story - I can myself feel all the emotions they all go through!!!

Also the fact that she made the first move to kiss him☺️

Also she did not object to staying in the hotel for the rest of the day - for once not feeling guilty and wanting to spend time with her husband - fabulous!!

This is how I want to see Ishita - taking the initiative not keep saying "chodiye koi ajaayega!!" In fact now that they have confessed - Raman I know will always look for occasions to romance her but it would be lovely to see Ishita also taking chances to romance Raman - I know he will be over the moon if she did!!!!😳


I have to say you are a brilliant writer and one of the reasons I stick to your story absolutely fantastic!!

I will continue to be greedy - please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!🤗⭐️

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I've enjoyed enough reading your IshRalicious content, I only delayed appreciating ur writing skills, now I don't have heart anymore to delay. Ur one of the awesome writers I have come across in yhm forum.👏

U never mentioned the length, breadth and width of the IshRa room, but I could only picturise the 11p.m.Ishra room while reading ur story. Ur story just gives the 11p.m vibes. 😛

Coming to Mani's track, I think u hate Mani just like anyone of us😆, u just packed him off so soon. The initial fun, when Raman gets to see Mani as Ishita's CLOSEST friend in the show was hilarious 😂. Keeping fun aside, Raman could not handle a handsome, successful close friend of Ishita, he was just too jealous that Ishita is giving him more attention,just as a friend though, I always wondered how much does Ishita has to feel jealous, go crazy, and feel uncomfortable, everytime she has to handle Raman's past. In the show, Shagun's narration of how Raman was so romantic, and Ishita over hearing Raman-Shagun talk about Adi's stem cells being preserved and the entire conversation, even after all that, the maturity with Ishita handles all this stuff is just what makes me fall for her. Even though I enjoy, Raman's jealousy, his care when she was in hospital during Man's track, I just waited for him to realise that it's not easy being Ishita. She gave in to his weird demands for Adi, Shagun was always there to bother her, she just took everything with a smile. And here he just couldn't handle an old friend of hers who crushed over her, I just wanted him to realise that being in love with him, she had to carry his past baggage as well, and the jealousy rotted her bones as well. That's all I wanted. They never showed in the show too, Raman realising that Ishita had to swallow the toughest of pills, after falling in love with him,

I wonder if you had watched BALH, Rajat was the Mani there. But he was the most lovable character unlike Mani. He enters post leap, after Priya has a baby girl. He thinks she is a single mother and falls for her. But Ram and Priya cross paths, initially Ram is angry that Priya didn't come to her and hid about their daughter. There were many Ram-Priya moments, and during this time Rajat character comes into play. We see the love and care between Ram-Priya, through Rajat's eyes. The way he understands Ram-Priya equation, and every moment of Ram-Priya just pinches him, because he crushes over Priya. Eventually he moves on though. There are some jealousy moments of Ram because he is obese and Rajat is fit😂, and one cringe dance of Rajat-Priya which is a must in Ekta's show🤔, but I really like Rajat unlike Mani. When Mani was about to enter Yhm, I was so happy because I have this BALH experience of Rajat, so I expected similar things in YHM, as both are from Ekta. I was more excited for YHM, because there Ram-Priya were already parents of a baby girl,so handling a third wheel is no big deal for them, and here IshRa didn't even confess yet, so I was so excited for YHM, that we would get more stuff. Initially I really liked it, Raman's jealousy was top notch, he even pulls Ishita's hand close during that Golu pooja😂, never before seen Raman's side coming out, earlier it was too awkward for them to pose for a pic, with Raman holding Ishita close, but Mani made him break the barrier😂. I really loved the change 😊. Some unexpected things came bursting out from Raman during Man's track. I was expecting more, but makers just fooled us😡

Sorry for such a long comment, I was just giving u hints, so that u might think of inculcating these points in ur story with your rare talent of being able to write exactly 11p.m. Yhm stuff😭

I just started reading the latest parts for IshRa stuff and OMG u just gave ua consummation. Cannot wait for this journey of IshRa with 11p.m. essence

I didn't understand why Ishita was so quick to misunderstand Raman's words without asking him, but u were heading for a confrontation and consummation, so I understand😉

I thought Ishita misunderstood about Raman wanting Ishita to give birth to Adi and Ruhi. Actually I was hurt💔. If Raman thinks of a pleasant life, he thinks about Ruhi and Adi along with Ishita. What if Ishita can't give him his kids? Will he still choose Ishita? . The way YHM went, at the end of the day, Raman will choose Ishita as his only wife for his another janm, even if she cannot give him Adi and Ruhi. Can u just write something on these lines?Just a conversation maybe. As per my faith, husband and wife is the first relation ever made on earth, and children are made later. But it's different for IshRa. First children happened for them, then they came together as husband and wife. But since u wrote the most brilliant line for Ishita, " My journey to marriage and parenthood was not the usual path, but that doesn't make it any less valid", make it valid for IshRa, even if it's without Adi and Ruhi. Just a request. I am not asking you to wipe out Adi and Ruhi, just try a conversation.

Earlier there was a game in YHM forum. IshRaian of the week something like that, where one person is termed as IshRaian of the week and other members can ask them questions that they have to answer for the entire week. I once asked, just let's assume all the Bhallas and Iyers died, in heaven, God gave them all a chance to choose one person to go with in the next janm. I asked who would Raman, Ishita, Shagun, Ruhi, Mihika, Mihir and some others choose. People gave brilliant answers👏👏. I am asking the same to u, as I find you brilliant too ❤. Please answer when you find time.

U said pregnancy yay🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Can't wait.

So so sorry for the long comment, I promise I will never bother you again

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Part 53

Thank you so much for quick update - I am so relieved!!!

What an absolutely fantastic update - finally the confession happened and in just the way it should have have in the circumstances!!!!☺️❤️❤️

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!!


Originally posted by: nafnaf

Also the fact that she made the first move to kiss him☺️

Also she did not object to staying in the hotel for the rest of the day - for once not feeling guilty and wanting to spend time with her husband - fabulous!!

This is how I want to see Ishita - taking the initiative not keep saying "chodiye koi ajaayega!!" In fact now that they have confessed - Raman I know will always look for occasions to romance her but it would be lovely to see Ishita also taking chances to romance Raman - I know he will be over the moon if she did!!!!😳

This is how I've wanted to see Ishita too!! There were a couple instances where she showed her desire to be with her husband but usually she was always like "let me go and chodiye" and all.... I hated it.

I'll definitely write about Ishita taking the initiative too, much to Raman's delight.

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