MG FF - Silent Whisper - Chpt 12 - Pg 72 note pg 82 - Page 4

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Hi dear prologe is superb so geet wanted a slave on the name of a husband like geet 's mother said. She wanted to married a boy who will dance in her tune.

Hi, nice chapter dear, Maan is very  brilliant,his hand is full of responsibility, his grand ma medicine, his father is on wheel chair, for his father treatment, for his MBA course, for anwesha to go to aboard for higher study, for his house EMI how much he will do yaar, then also he didn't get the appreciate from his grand ma and his siblings, they are making fun of him, they didn't gave him appropriate respect  also.but his parents standing like a pillar for him in his side. Always appreciate what he is doing for them, but he humbly said that as a elder it is his duty, I am in love with ur Maan character yaar, He said that he got a marriage proposal of geet handa the business woman, but he declined it, when his family  hear that Maan has got proposal of geet handa they make fun of him but when they got to know that it's not a joke actually that happened they got shock of their life.

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Except for Maan's parents nobody has even little sympathy for him which is very sad. He is doing so much for family and he deserves some respect.

Hope Geet comes in his life and show some mirror to his siblings.

prologue

very different concept

interesting

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Feeling so bad for Maan... 

Awesome update ☺

Beautifully written