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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Sure.what do you think about the twist in the abhigya tale?


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Thanks.part3 is posted.


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Thanku very much Surilikoyal,coderlady, CarpediemRose,taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie.

A bundle of mysteries Part 4

 Abhi went to the forest at night to catch the killer red handed.Suddenly he heard a voice:ACP Abhishek Mehra!

He turned back and looked at that person.That person had worn a hoodie.

Abhi:Who are you?

That person unveiled her face.

He was shocked to see that person.

Abhi:You?You are the killer?So I was right.The killer is not a ghost,but an ordinary human being.

That person:Yes.I am a human being.But I will kill you brutally like a ghost kills people.

Abhi was shocked.

Abhi:But why Simonica?Why do you want to kill me?

Simonica:Because you killed my husband Dushyant.

Abhi:I killed him because I got shoot at sight order from the department.Because Dushyant was the biggest wanted criminal.

Simonica:But he was my husband and he loved me.I loved him.Because of you,I lost him.So I will kill you.

Abhi:I can understand why you want to kill me.But why did you kill many other men?

Simonica:I did not kill anyone else.I came to know that you are here on duty.So I came here to kill you.

Abhi was shocked.

He thought:So the killer I am looking for is not Simonica.Then who?

Suddenly Simonica pointed the gun at him.

Simonica:Your last moment is near.

Abhi took the gun from his pocket 

and pointed it at her.

Simonica smirked:You can kill me as I don't want to live where my Dushyant is not there.But I will kill you for sure.

Suddenly somebody pierced her from behind and Simonica fell down dead.Abhi was shocked.He was even more shocked seeing the person who killed Simonica.Because it was a female ghost.Her nails and hand were full of blood as she used her sharp nails to kill Simonica.

The ghost blew air at her body.Her body turned into ashes and flew away in the air shocking Abhi.Abhi was shivering due to fear seeing this.The ghost disappeared.Abhi started sweating.



Abhi ran to the villa and told everything to Shlok and Rishab.Shlok and Rishab were shocked.

Shlok:Are you sure Abhi?

Abhi:Yes Shlok.That means your doubt is true.The killer is a ghost.

Rishab:What the hell!

Abhi:It's true Rishab.I saw it with my eyes.

Rishab:Oh no...

Shlok:But the ghost kills men.But why did'nt she kill you?She killed only Simonica.

Abhi:I don't know why.I felt that she saved me from Simonica.

Shlok:If that is true,then...the victims may not be innocent.We should check the background of the victims.We will know the intention behind the murders.

Abhi:Yes.



Abhi was sitting thinking of the ghost.Suddenly a girl in a white dress came near him.Seeing her,he got panicked.

Abhi:Ghost!Ghost!

The girl got scared:Where is the ghost?

Abhi looked at her.It was Pragya.

Abhi:Pragya...it was you?Suddenly when I saw you in white I thought you were a ghost.

Pragya laughed.

Pragya:You mistook me for a ghost?So funny.You said you don't believe in ghosts.Then what happened now?

Abhi:Our beliefs keep changing.Now I also think that ghosts do exist.

Pragya:What nonsense!Don't be superstitious.

Abhi just smiled.

Abhi thought:I don't want to argue with Pragya.Because no sane person will believe that I saw a ghost.

Shlok and Abhi did the background check of the victims.

Abhi:You are right Shlok.Nobody has got a clean background.They all are play boys.Some are rapists who escaped from punishment influencing the higher officials.

Shlok:So that's why the ghost did'nt kill you.This ghost does'nt kill innocent people.

Abhi:Maybe.Or maybe something more is there into it.

Shlok:Maybe.As days pass it will be clear to us.But I also want to see the ghost.

Abhi:Don't take a risk by going to the forest at night.What if the ghost intends to kill everyone?

Shlok:Let's see.



Aastha was walking.Her foot slipped.Shlok who passed by saw it.Before Aastha could fall down,Shlok caught her.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

They broke the eye lock.

Shlok:You got scared?

Aastha:Why should I be scared?There is no ghost here.

Shlok became dull.

He thought:How can I tell Aastha that a ghost does exist in our area?I should not tell her anything.She will get scared.

Shlok:You were about to fall down.So you got scared?

Aastha thought:A worst thing happened to me.Compared to that this was nothing.

Aastha:No Shlok.Before I could get scared you saved me.Keep saving me.

Shlok smiled:I promise you that I will keep saving you.

They smiled at each other.

Shlok:You know Aastha?When I am with you,I forget all my tensions.

Aastha felt very happy when she heard that she was about to relieve his tensions.

Aastha:What's the tension you have Shlok?

Shlok thought:Though I have handled many cases before,it's the first time I am having this much tension.Because this time a ghost is involved in it.

Shlok:As I am a police officer,till an investigation case gets solved I am in tension.

Aastha:Don't worry Shlok.You and Abhi will be able to successfully solve this case.

Shlok smiled.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Naina was eating food.

Raghav who came out of the room saw this.He smiled as he saw Akasha eating food there.

Raghav:So cute!

Naina walked to the kitchen to wash her plate.

Raghav walked after her and held her hand.

Raghav:Akasha!

Naina looked at him.

Naina:Raghav!

Raghav:Akasha...can I ask you something?

Naina:Yes Raghav.Ask...

Raghav:Akasha..I missed you a lot.Life became empty after you left.

Naina/Akasha became emotional.

Akasha:I also missed you a lot Raghav.That's why I came back to you.

Raghav smiled emotionally.

Raghav:Promise me that you won't leave me ever.

Akasha/Naina said emotionally:I promise you that I will not leave you ever.

Raghav smiled.

Raghav:Akasha,but where were you all these months?

Akasha/Naina looked down.

Suddenly Rishab came that way.

Raghav:Say Akasha...

Rishab:Raghav!

Raghav and Naina looked at Rishab.

Rishab:Naina,you can go to the kitchen.

Naina nodded.

She looked at Raghav with a smile and said:Raghav,I am going to the kitchen.We will talk after some time.

 She walked away.

Raghav:Rishab,why did you call Akasha as Naina?

Rishab:Raghav...don't be so blind.She is not Akasha,but Naina.

Raghav:Stop it Rishab.I am not blind,but you are blind.She is Akasha and I can clearly see that.

Raghav walked away angrily.Rishab got irritated.

Rishab:How will I make him understand that she is Naina,not his Akasha?

Naina was watching this with a smirk.

Suddenly she turned into Akasha and stared at Rishab without his knowledge.



All were celebrating Rishab's birthday.Rishab cut the birthday cake and fed it to Abhi,Shlok and Raghav.After that unknowingly he fed the cake to Pratha.She blushed.

Pratha:Happy birthday Rishab.

Rishab smiled:Thank you Pratha.

Rishab realized what he did.

He thought:Oh my God!I fed cake to Pratha with my own hands.How could I do that?

He gave the cake pieces to Pragya,Naina and Aastha.

Pragya:You gave us the cake pieces in a plate.

But why did you feed it specially to Pratha with your hands?

Everyone laughed while Pratha and Rishab blushed.



Aastha was sleeping.She got flashes of a incident and she woke up panting.

She wiped her sweat and went to drink water.

But she was haunted by that incident.

Aastha thought:Why I am not able to forget it even though it happened long ago?Because of that I am in this condition now.If I had forgotten it,I could have moved on and lived a peaceful life.But it's not possible.

Aastha felt traumatic and fainted.

Shlok who came out of the room saw this with a shock and ran towards her.

He held her head softly.

Shlok:Aastha,what happened?Wake up Aastha.

Slowly Aastha opened her eyes.

Shlok was relieved.

Shlok:What happened Aastha?

Aastha:I am alright Shlok.I had not eaten anything.That's why.

Shlok:Why did you skip food?

Pratha came there.

Pratha:Aastha fasted for the well being of her dearest ones.

Shlok:Aastha...you are so nice.But don't skip food.You will become weak.

Pratha:I will bring juice for Aastha.She will be fine in a second if she drinks my juice.

Pratha went away.Then she brought a glass of juice.

Pratha:Aastha...drink this juice.

Shlok took the glass and made Aastha drink the juice with his hand.Pratha smiled.

Aastha woke up after she drank the juice.

Shlok was surprised.

Shlok:Pratha...your hands are magical.After Aastha drank the juice made by you,she became very energetic.

Pratha smiled:Maybe my juice is magical.

Shlok laughed while Pratha and Aastha smiled.




Abhi was sleeping.He dreamt of him dancing with Pragya in traditional clothes.

Saat Rang Ke Sapano Mein

Main Kho Gayi Sajana

Saat Rang Ke Sapano Mein

Main Kho Gayi Sajana

Odhi Chunar Tere Pyaar Ki

Teri Ho Gayi Sajana

Maine Tujhko Pehnaaya Hai

Sajani Gajara Chudi Kangana

Chaahe Chhute Duniya

Maine Maangi Hai Duwa

Chhute Teraa Sang Naa

Saat Rang Ke Sapano Mein

Main Kho Gayi Sajana

Odhi Chunar Tere Pyaar Ki

Teri Ho Gayi Sajana

Maine Tujhko Pehnaaya Hai

Sajani Gajara Chudi Kangana

Chaahe Chhute Duniya

Maine Maangi Hai Duwa

Chhute Teraa Sang Naa

Saat Rang Ke Sapano Mein

Main Kho Gayi Sajana

Bole Meraa Kajara

Bole Meri Bindiya

Teri Aankho Se Piya

Main Churaau Nindiya

Tere Jude Ki Kasam,

Tere Baalo Ki Kasam

Main Deewaana Hu Teraa,

Tere Gaalo Ki Kasam

Chain Se Teri Baaho

Mein Main So Gayi Sajana

 

Saat Rang Ke Sapano Mein

Main Kho Gayi Sajana

Odhi Chunar Tere Pyaar Ki

Teri Ho Gayi Sajana

Maine Tujhko Pehnaaya Hai

Sajani Gajara Chudi Kangana

Chaahe Chhute Duniya

Maine Maangi Hai Duwa

Chhute Teraa Sang Naa

Saat Rang Ke Sapano Mein

Main Kho Gayi Sajana

Haatho Mein Mehandi

Aur Mann Mein Piya

Lage Kahi Naa Piya Bin Jiya

Inn Hawaao Ne Kaha

Inn Bahaaro Ne Kaha

Tu Hai Meraa Balam

Inn Nazaaro Ne Kaha

Teri Yaado Mein Rahu

Teri Aankho Mein Rahu

Mai Hu Teri Zindagi

Teri Saanso Mein Rahu

 

Laut Ke Naa Aayi Tere

Ghar Mein Jo Gayi Sajana

Odhi Chunar Tere Pyaar Ki

Teri Ho Gayi Sajana

Maine Tujhko Pehnaaya Hai

Sajani Gajara Chudi Kangana

Chaahe Chhute Duniya

Maine Maangi Hai Duwa

Chhute Teraa Sang Naa

 

Saat Rang Ke Sapano Mein

Main Kho Gayi Sajana

Odhi Chunar Tere Pyaar Ki

Teri Ho Gayi Sajana

Maine Tujhko Pehnaaya Hai

Sajani Gajara Chudi Kangana

Chaahe Chhute Duniya

Maine Maangi Hai Duwa

Chhute Teraa Sang Naa

Chhute Teraa Sang Naa

Chhute Teraa Sang Naa.

( Saat Rang Ke Sapne).



Abhi woke up from his sleep.

Abhi blushed.

Abhi:What kind of dream did I see!I have a soft corner towards Pragya.I think that's why I saw this kind of a dream.My inner feelings came out as a dream.But why do I feel that these things already happened in my life?But I did not even know Pragya before.Then why I feel like this?

Abhi came out of the room.He saw Pragya there.He remembered his dream and looked at her deeply.

Pragya blushed.

Pragya:Why are you staring at me like this?

Abhi:I...I saw you in my dream.

Pragya was surprised.

Pragya:What did you see?

Abhi:I saw us dancing together.I know that we did'nt know each other before.But I felt that this dance happened had really happened in our lives before.

Pragya became emotional and embraced him.He was stunned.Unknowingly he embraced her back.

Slowly he smiled.She came back to sense and broke the embrace.

Abhi:What happened Pragya?

Pragya:Nothing.I just....Sorry.

She ran away.

Abhi thought:Pragya also has feelings for me like I have feelings for her?

He smiled.

Pragya thought:Abhi started remembering his past?I hope he remembers our past.I came here so that seeing me Abhi will start remembering our past.I hope I am slowly suceeding in it.




A mall....

Pratha was standing on the escalator.

Suddenly she heard a kid's cry and she turned back.

A kid had fallen down from the escalator and hurt it's forehead.

Pratha reached the top and again she went down in escalator.She ran towards the kid.She saw the kids' parents crying and others coming towards them.Pratha stared at them.Her eyes started glowing.

Suddenly all of them became still.Pratha touched the kid's forehead.The blood disappeared.Everyone including the kid started moving.They walked in different ways.

Somebody was watching from a distance with a shocked face.It was Rishab.

Rishab remembered Pratha making Raghav laugh very easily.Rishab remembered Shlok telling him that Aastha became very energetic after she drank the juice made by Pratha.

Rishab:That means Pratha is a ghost.

Rishab got nervous.

Rishab:No Rishab.You should not be scared.You are a brave army officer who has fought against the dangerous enemies.



Rishab went back to Villa.Seeing Pratha,Rishab held her hand tight and said:Pratha!

Pratha stared at him:Rishab..what are you doing?

Rishab:Don't hide the truth anymore.

Pratha:What truth?

Rishab:That you are a ghost.

Pratha was shocked.

Pratha:I am a ghost?Are you mad?

Rishab:I saw what happened at the mall.

Pratha got nervous.What did you see in the mall?

Rishab:I saw that the injuries of the child vanished after you touched her.You made everyone around you still with your powers.So that they won't see you healing her.After they became normal they walked away as if nothing happened.That means you erased their memory.So the parents and child also forgot that their child got injured.

Pratha became dull.

Rishab:You are the ghost who killed Simonica.Right?You are the same ghost who killed all the people in the forest.You made Raghav laugh in a few minutes with your powers.Right?You are not an ordinary human being.

Pratha burst out:Yes.I am not a human being.

Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thanks for the pm 


Part 6

Dramatic update..... nicely written

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Episodes has bahut zyada twists and mysteries 

Mujhe bahut acha laga hai 

Pls continue; pm keliye thank u 

Naina akasha wala wahi mystery ki raaz keliye I am awaited 

Thanks a lot, pls continue soon 

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Is Naina akasha ?

And Pratha A Naagin?

Continue Soon 

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 Simonica wants to kill Abhi, but she is not the killer they are looking for.

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The ghost (or whoever) saved Abhi by killing Simonica.

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All the victims were people who wronged others and got away. The ghost must be seeking justice.