A bundle of mysteries Fantasy SS AbhiGya PraRish AshLok RaIna ArJen

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A bundle of mysteries Part 1

 I am presenting a new SS.I won't say that this is a horror SS.But it belongs to the fantasy genre.It's a suspense thriller also.

4 beautiful girls were walking through the forest areas at night.Some bad boys lay their lusty eyes on them.The girls looked at each other in fear.As the boys walked towards them they pushed them and ran away.A police jeep stood in front of them.2 young police officers got out of the car.

They were ACP Abhishek Mehra and ACP Shlok Agnihotri.

One girl:Sir...my name is Pragya.These are my friends.Some boys are trying to attack us.Please save us.

They looked behind the girls.Those boys were running to catch the girls.Seeing the police cops they ran away.Abhishek and Shlok ran towards them and caught them.

One girl stared at the boys angrily and told Abhi and Shlok:Please hit them more Sir.These people tried to snatch our self respect and dignity from us.

Abhi and Shlok punched them hard.

Abhi:Can't you allow girls to walk peacefully?

Shlok:People like you can't change.

They kept hitting them.

One girl smirked at them and said:You all thought that troubling girls is easy.But you all landed up in the biggest trouble.

Suddenly her face became angry and said:You all deserved to be beaten brutally by the police cops.

Shlok rang up the constables.They came and arrested those men.

The girls thanked them:Thank you very much for saving us.

One girl said:Your names?

Shlok:I am ACP Shlok Agnihotri.This is my colleague ACP Abhishek Mehra.

Abhi:We are good friends also.

The girls smiled.

Shlok looked at that girl:Your name?

She:I am Aastha.

Shlok smiled.

Abhi whispered to Shlok:You asked only her name.Why?

Shlok felt embarassed.

Another girl:My name is Naina.

Another girl:My name is Pratha.

Abhi:Why you girls were walking around at night in a dangerous area?

Pragya:Actually we all are college students.We came here to enjoy our vacation.We had even booked a villa.

Aastha:But the villa owner told us that another family of 4 friends offered them a better amount.So the villa is given to them.

Naina:They did not even show the courtesy to inform us before.

Pratha:So we had to search for another house to stay at night itself.

Abhi and Shlok felt bad.

Shlok:Oh no...I think you are talking about the villa where we are staying.

Aastha:So you both only gave them advance rent?But the owner said that they are 4 friends.

Abhi:Our friends Raghav and Rishab are also staying with us.By the way where are you all planning to stay?

Pragya:No idea Sir.We have to search for a place to stay.

Abhi:Because of us only you all lost shelter.So you all can stay in our villa if you people are comfortable with us.

The girls were surprised.

Pragya:We are comfortable with both of you.

Aastha:Because you both only saved us.

Naina:Thanks a lot to both of you.

Abhi and Shlok smiled.




They all went to the villa.When the girls stepped inside the Villa,the wind started blowing heavily.

The girls became dull.

Naina:Why when we got inside the house the wind started blowing like this?

Pratha:In movies and all it happens when they have to hint that there is a bad omen.

The girls became dull.

Pragya:Stop your superstitious talk Pratha.

Abhi and Shlok laughed.

Shlok:You guys don't worry.We are not superstitious. So we don't consider you all as a bad omen.So you people can stay here itself.We won't send you all out.

The girls smiled.

Aastha:So you both are not superstitious at all?

Shlok:No.This forest has become mysterious.Many men who walk here at night time at seen dead.

Naina:Did animals kill them?

Abhi:No.According to the postmortem report it's clear murder.But here everyone says that a ghost is killing them.

Shlok:They say that there is a beautiful female ghost who attracts men towards them.When the men get attracted to her,she kills them.

The girls laughed.

Pratha:What a fake story!

Abhi:Yes.But these people are so superstitious that they believe all these tall stories.But our department is not foolish to believe this nonsense.

Shlok:So they send us here to investigate.We will find the real killer.

Aastha:All the best Sir.We wish you both the best to find the real killer and show these idiots that the real killer is a human being and not a ghost.

Abhi and Shlok smiled.




The next morning...

Naina was enjoying the cool breeze in the balcony sipping the juice.

She looked at the beautiful place and admired it's beauty.

Naina:What a beautiful place!

Naina looked at the sky and said:The sky looks so beautiful after sunrise.

A guy who came there watched Naina there.

He saw another girl enjoying the view from the balcony in Naina's place.She turned back and looked at him with a smile.

His eyes got widened.

Actually it was Naina.

Naina:You?

He got scared and ran away.

Naina came out.He saw Abhi and Shlok there.

Naina:A guy saw me.Seeing me he ran away as if he saw a ghost.

Shlok and Abhi became dull.

Shlok:Raghav!Raghav!

Slowly Raghav came.It was Raghav who watched Naina at the balcony.

Naina:This is the guy.

Seeing her,Raghav's face became dull.

Abhi:Raghav!What happened?

Raghav pointed his finger towards Naina emotionally.

Abhi:Her name is Naina.

Raghav was shocked.

Raghav:But in place of Naina,I saw Akasha there.

Abhi and Shlok became upset.

Abhi:No Raghav.You simply hallucinated Akasha there.It was Naina.Only Naina was there.

Shlok:Yes.How can Akasha be here?

Abhi:Here you can see only Naina,Pragya,Pratha and Aastha.

Raghav became upset.His eyes became wet.He went back to his room.Naina stared at Raghav.

Shlok looked at Naina and said:Don't feel bad.Actually Raghav had a girl friend named Akasha.She died in an accident.After that he slipped into depression.To make him relax only we brought him here.But he is hallucinating Akasha.

Naina:That's so sad.

Pratha:Anyways we are here to have fun.We will remove Raghav's depression soon.

Aastha:Exactly.

Shlok and Abhi smiled.

Abhi:We really want our Raghav to be normal.We are really upset about our Raghav's condition.

Pragya:Don't worry.We will make Raghav alright.

Abhi smiled.

Pragya:Raghav can be brought back to life only if his wounded heart gets healed.

Abhi:But how can his heart be healed?A psychiatrist is treating him.But even the medicines are not having any effect on him.

Pragya:Raghav's heart can be healed only through something.

Abhi:Through what?

Pragya:Love.Raghav's heart can be healed only through love.

Abhi:But he lost his love.

Pragya:He will get his lost love back.

Abhi:How is it possible?

Pragya:Love can be recreated.If Raghav falls in love again,he will become cheerful again.

Abhi:But in this condition there is no guarantee that Raghav will fall in love again.

Pragya:Love can happen at any time..any moment.So don't lose hope.Hope for the best.

Abhi looked at Pragya's eyes deeply and said:Yes...love can happen at any time.

They smiled at each other sweetly.

Raghav was in his room.

He remembered his past moment with Akasha.



Flash back....

Raghav was embracing Akasha from behind and they both were looking at the sky.

Akasha:The sky has become blue again due to sunlight.

Raghav:Yes.And it looks beautiful.

(Thank you very much Rehana Siraj for this lovely edit).

Akasha:It is so nice to watch sunrise with you Raghav.

Raghav:I also like watching sunrise when you are in my arms.

They both smiled at each other romantically.

Present...

Raghav:Akasha used to love looking at the sky after sunrise.The girl I saw was Akasha only.She was also looking at the sky like Akasha.But when I saw her suddenly I got tensed..I doubted whether I was seeing Akasha's ghost.But no...Akasha is not dead.She is alive.She has come back.But then why others said that she is Naina?

Raghav was confused.




The Villa owner came to the villa.

Owner:How is the stay here?

Abhi:Good.

The 4 girls came in front of them.The owner was stunned.

Shlok:Don't be shocked.Because of you,these girls were roaming around homeless.So for their safety,we asked them to stay here.After all they were supposed to stay in this Villa.

The owner became embarrassed.

Aastha:Don't worry.We will give our rent separately to you.

The owner nodded silently.

Owner:Ok.I have to leave now.

Shlok:Ok.

The owner left from there immediately.



Aastha went near Shlok.

Aastha:ACP Sir..I love gardening.Can I do spend time in your garden?I promise you that I will not destroy your garden.

Shlok:Yes.But I have a demand.

Aastha got curious to know his demand.

Aastha:Demand?What demand?

Shlok:You should stop calling me ACP Sir.Call me Shlok.

Aastha smiled.

Aastha:Ok Shlok.

Shlok smiled.




Pratha heard a music and followed it.Listening to the music she reached a room.She saw an Army officer's photograph on the wall.She smiled.

Pratha:Looking smart.

Suddenly she heard a voice.

"Who are you?How dare you enter my room?"

Pratha looked at that person nervously.

Pratha:I am Pratha.I entered the room hearing music.

Rishab:Oh!So you are one of the girls Abhi and Shlok told me about.

Pratha nodded.

Rishab:I was singing in my bathroom.Then why did you come here?Is it not a shameful act?

Pratha got irritated.

Pratha:How will I know whether you were singing in the bathroom or in your bedroom?I did'nt peep into the bathroom when you were taking shower.I just entered your room hearing the music.Then how can it be a shameful act?

Rishab got embarrassed.

Rishab:But why did you come here hearing me sing?

Pratha:You are questioning me as if I did a crime.Anyways I came here because I liked the song.I loved your voice.

Suddenly Rishab's face blossomed.

Rishab:You loved my voice?

Pratha understood Rishab's excitement.

Pratha:Hello..I said I loved your voice.I did'nt say that I love you.

Rishab got embarrassed.

Pratha:Hope you won't kill me with your gun just like you kill enemies for loving you sing.

Rishab giggled.

Rishab:Nice joke.But I kill only our country's enemies,not the people who enjoy me sing.

Pratha smiled.

Pratha:But how come an army officer like you sing?

Rishab:Is there any rule that army officers can't sing?Singing is my passion.So when I am not on my duty I sing.

Pratha:That's cool.By the way your good name?

Rishab:Rishab Gujral.

Pratha:Ok.Now I am leaving.You continue your bathroom singing if you want to.

They both giggled.



 

A man was walking through the forest.Suddenly he heard a whistle and looked back.He saw a stylish girl smiling at him.

She:I am bored as I am alone.You are also alone.Would you like to join me for having fun?

He smiled:Sure sweety.I don't reject beautiful girls.

She smiled.He walked towards her.

Suddenly the beautiful smiling face of her's turned scary.She was smiling showing her teeth which were painted with blood.

He got scared.

He:You...you?

She screamed loudly scaring him more.

He fainted.Her nails became big and they looked like many small knives.She stabbed him with her knives like nails and killed him.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Wonderful✨😍 dear 

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

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The girls lost their booking at the last minute. The guys got it.

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There are stories of a ghost. But who knows who is killing those people?

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Raghav thought he saw his girlfriend when he saw Naina.

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Rishab and his bathroom singing. But someone actually liked it.

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Is the ghost real? The people are really getting killed.

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Part 1 


Fascinating Start 

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Awesome update Jasmine. Loved the casting. AbhiGya, PraRish my face was lit seeing them.😃 OK now coming to story. It's interesting and mysterious as well. Loved reading it. Good that ACP Abhishek and Shlok came to save the girls Naina, Pragya, Pratha, Aastha from the rowdies👍🏼Felt bad for Raghav he felt that it was Akasha his gf who was sitting there instead of Naina. Loved Shlok-Aastha part as well the garden scene. Aastha seems to be soft hearted girl as compared to the rest. OMG! a man walking into the forest he sees a beautiful girl. While talking to her she turns into a ghost🧟‍♀️It's really scary. 😱