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Posted: 1 years ago
#61

Thank you very much for the long comment.I was waiting for it.Abhi did not tell anything to Pratha.


Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Awesome update dear.👏 Loved reading this mysterious story. OMG! There's one Simonica and the other female ghost.Kahaani mein twist Simonica wants to kill Abhi coz he arrested her husband Dushyant. She was about to shoot Abhi but female ghost saves him. Thank God. But who is this ghost. Abhi tells Pratha abt it. Shlok and Abhi discuss abt the ghost and also Rishab comes to know abt the ghost. Shlok - Aastha eyelock. I love Aastha who is so positive abt life and tells Shlok that they will solve the problem

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thanks a lot.Actually aastha fainted due to the stress given by her haunting past.But she didnt want Shlok to know it.So fainting due to fasting was an excuse to cover up the real reason.


Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Awesome part dear. 👏It was good on Rishab 's part to make Raghav realize that it' s Naina not Akasha to whom he is talking. But the twist in the story lies here. Naina smirking.. and changes to Akasha right. So Akasha ghost is here in form of Naina🤢The pics u chose of Naina/Dhrasti smirking is perfect dear. Wow it's Rishab's birthday. Rishab fed cake to Pratha and everyone pulling his leg so cute. OMG! what happened to Aastha she fainted because of fasting. Good Shlok took care of her. Gave her water. Rishab - Pratha at the escalator. Pratha's eyes glowing. It means she is a serpent /Naagin. Very intresting part. I must say you are an amazing writer jasmine. Hats off to you for your wonderful writing skills. So many twists and turns. It's getting more and more intresting. Excellent job dear. Do continue.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thank you very much for the long comment.I was waiting for it.Abhi did not tell anything to Pratha.


Instead of writing Pragya i wrote Pratha by mistake
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Posted: 1 years ago
#64

That's ok.I also make such mistakes.Actually Abhi did'nt tell Pragya about seeing the ghost.Suddenly when he saw Pragya in white he mistook her for the ghost.


Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Instead of writing Pragya i wrote Pratha by mistake

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Posted: 1 years ago
#65

Thanku very much Surilikoyal,coderlady, CarpediemRose,taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie,Silverbell.



A bundle of mysteries Part 5

Rishab:You are the ghost who killed Simonica.Right?You are the same ghost who killed all the people in the forest.You made Raghav laugh in a few minutes with your powers.Right?You are not an ordinary human being.

Pratha burst out:Yes.I am not a human being.

Rishab:So finally you admitted that you are a ghost.

Pratha:No.I am not a ghost.I can't kill anyone.I made Raghav laugh.I made Aastha energetic through the special juice I prepared.I cured the child.I can only do good things.When you asked me to learn shooting I refused.Because I can't do violence.Because I represent peace.A ghost maybe good.But a ghost chooses the path of violence.But I can never choose violence.

Rishab got confused.

Rishab:Then what are you?

Pratha was silent.

Rishab:If you won't reveal it,I will think that you are lying that you are not a ghost.

Pratha:Ok.I will reveal myself to you.

Pratha turned into a fairy with wings.

Rishab was surprised.

Pratha:This is me.I am a fairy.I was a normal human being.But at a particular age i discovered that I was a fairy with powers.Now I am utilizing my powers for good.

Rishab was surprised.

Rishab:Your friends?

Pratha:Only I am a fairy.They know about me.

Rishab was surprised.

Rishab:What's your intention behind coming here?

Pratha:I do not have any particular intention.I just accompanied my friends.

Rishab:Ok.

Pratha:If you don't trust me....

Rishab:I trust you.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Rishab:I have no reason to suspect a fairy.

Pratha smiled.

(The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor)

Pratha turned into her human form.

Pratha:Please don't tell anything to others.

Rishab:I won't tell.

Pratha:Thanks.

Rishab:I used to think how you can be so beautiful like a fairy.Now I understand that you are beautiful like a fairy because you are a fairy.

She blushed.




Naina gave a flying kiss to Raghav.He blushed as in his eyes it was Akasha who gave him flying kiss.

Raghav remembered his moment with Akasha in the past.



Flash back....

Akasha told Raghav:Raghav...I have to go to meet my school friend Radha.We have not visited each other for a long time because of our busy schedule.

Raghav smiled:Ok.But you are leaving your sweet lover and going.So I need compensation.

(Thank u my friend Rehana Siraj for this lovely edit).

Akasha:O really?What compensation do you want?

Raghav said in a naughty tone:I want a kiss from you now.

Akasha smiled:Ok.But I have a demand.

Raghav:For a kiss also you have a demand.What's that demand?

Akasha:You need to kiss me back.

Raghav blushed.

They looked at each other romantically.They came closer to shower love on each other's lips.



Present....

Raghav smiled.

He moved closer to Naina passionately.

She pushed him to the bed giggling.He pulled her towards him

and caressed her romantically.

Then he moved towards her lips.

Naina pushed his face shyly and giggled.

Then she ran out.Raghav smiled.Rishab came inside seeing Naina running out of the room shyly.

Rishab asked in a naughty manner:What's happening between you and Naina?

Raghav got irritated.

Raghav:Stop it Rishab.How did you even think that I can love someone other than Akasha?I was with Akasha,not with Naina.

Rishab got angry.

Rishab:For heaven sake stop it Raghav.That was Naina,not Akasha.

Raghav could'nt tolerate it.

Raghav:Enough Rishab and get out.

Rishab got hurt and went out of the room.Raghav threw the pillows in anger.

Abhi and Shlok went to Raghav's room.

Abhi:Raghav,why are you not even coming to have food?

Raghav:Because I am angry with Rishab.

They were shocked.

Shlok:Why?

Rishab came inside.

Raghav looked at Rishab angrily and said:Because this idiot says that .....

Rishab:I told him that Naina is not Akasha.Because he feels that Naina is Akasha.

Raghav:She is not Naina,but Akasha.

Shlok and Abhi were shocked.

Shlok:Raghav..Rishab is right.She is Naina,not Akasha.

Raghav:Nonsense.What's wrong with all of you?I have a proof that she is Akasha.We both had taken a photograph together.You can see Akasha in it.

Raghav showed them the photograph.

It was Naina with Raghav in the photograph.

Rishab:Open your eyes and see.It's Naina.

Raghav looked at the photograph and was shocked to see Naina.

Raghav:How is it possible?It was Akasha with me.

They became upset.

Abhi:No Raghav...please understand that it is Naina.Akasha is no more.

Raghav was shattered:Noooooooooo...

Raghav cried bitterly.Abhi,Shlok and Rishab felt sad and hugged Raghav emotionally.




Seeing Shlok upset,Aastha went near him.

Aastha:What happened Shlok?Why are you upset?

Shlok burst into tears and embraced her.

Aastha was stunned.

Aastha:What happened Shlok?

Shlok broke their embrace.

Shlok:Raghav's condition is becoming worse than before.Earlier he was depressed because Akasha was no more.But now he thinks that Akasha is back to him which is even more dangerous.He thinks that Naina is Akasha.Medicines are not having positive effect on him.

Aastha held his hand and said:Believe in God Shlok.Raghav will surely be cured.But you have to be patient.Believe me,Raghav will be cured.Naina will cure him.Because she loves him.

Shlok looked at her in surprise.

Shlok:What?Naina loves Raghav?

Aastha:Yes.

Shlok:This is a surprise.Now I have a relief that Raghav is not alone.He has someone who loves him to look after him.

Aastha:Yes.So you don't worry about Raghav.

Shlok smiled at Aastha.

Shlok:You know Aastha?When I talk to you,I feel an unknown happiness.I feel very happy with you.I wish I could be with you through out the life.

Aastha became so happy that she embraced him.He embraced her back.

Suddenly her face became gloomy.

She thought:If Shlok comes to know my past,he may not love me.

Suddenly she moved away from him and ran out of the room.Shlok became upset.

Shlok:What happened to her suddenly?




Abhi was sleeping and dreaming...



Dream...

Abhi and Pragya were dancing.

· Catwalk wali baby hai teri chaal
Backless suit vich lagdi kamaal
O kitthe chali jaandi ae (aha!)
O kitthe chali jaandi ae (oho!)

· Tennu puchna hai ikko hi sawaal


Oh dass de kawaari aa
Ya kisey de tu naal
Kyun dooron dooron jaani ae (aha!)
Jaan kadd jaani ae (oho!)

Aine vi nakhre tu kar na soniye
Aine vi nakhre tu kar na soniye

· Dil mera tere layi dhadke
Ni aaj phir kitthe
Aaj phir kitthe
Aaj phir kitthe challi aein
Morni banke, morni banke!

· Aaj phir kitthe challi aein?
Morni banke, morni banke

· Sunday ton laike Saturday tak
Sunday ton laike Saturday tak
Ghar de wait teri khattke
Ni aaj phir kitthe
Aaj phir kitthe
Aaj phir kitthe challi ae
Morni banke, morni banke
(balle balle, balle balle…)

· Jadon nachdi kudi tu badi hot lagdi (ahaa!)
Uff husna di rani by God lagdi (oho!)
Jadon nachdi kudi tu badi hot lagdi
Uff husna di rani by God lagdi

· Jadon kole aake kardi ae smile kudiye
Kisey shayar da viral jeha thought lagdi
Lakk nu ainna lean karaake
Tight waali jean chadha ke
Ho gaye ne sab jhalle

· Ni aaj phir kitthe
Aaj phir kitthe
Aaj phir kitthe challi aein
Morni banke, morni banke

Lagda tu hi hatt ke soneya
Dil tu lai gaya kadh ke soneya
Aayi tere layi sajj dhajj ke
Ni aaj phir kitthe
Aaj phir kitthe
Aaj phir kitthe challi aein

· Morni banke, morni banke

· Teri ore main challi aan
Morni banke, morni banke
Teri ore main challi aan

Morni banke, morni banke
(balle balle, balle balle…)
(oye oye…)

· Main aivein challi aan
Morni banke.. hahaha…

·
(Badhai ho).

Suddenly somebody shot Abhi.Pragya screamed.

Abhi fell off the cliff.Pragya cried loudly.

The dream ended.


Abhi woke up from the sleep panting.

Abhi:What a strange dream it was!This dream is not normal.Does this dream signify something?

Only Pragya can give me an answer.I have to talk to her about it.



Rishab went near Pratha.

Rishab:Pratha...Raghav is really disturbed.He is not mentally well.Can't you cure him?

Pratha:What happened Rishab?

Rishab:Raghav considers Naina as Akasha.Can you please erase his memory?Like can you make him forget about Akasha?So that he will be normal and happy like before meeting Akasha?

Pratha:Akasha is the most beautiful memory of Raghav.Akasha is his love.Why should I erase his love from his memory?

Rishab:Because Akasha is no more,but he thinks that Akasha is alive and Naina is Akasha.

Pratha:But what if Akasha is alive and Naina is Akasha?Maybe because of that Raghav is seeing Akasha in Naina.

Rishab was stunned.

Rishab:What do you mean?




Abhi went to Pragya's room and saw a guitar.Suddenly he saw a glimpse of him playing guitar and Pragya watching it.

His head ached and he turned off the face.

Pragya came inside.

Pragya:Abhi!

Abhi stared at him.

Pragya:I mean ACP Abhi.

Abhi:Call me Abhi only.I like it that way.

She smiled.

Abhi:Pragya...again I saw you in my dream.

Pragya felt happy.

Pragya:What did you see?

Abhi:This time the dream was not normal.

He explained her the dream.

Abhi:Tell me Pragya..does it have any meaning?Why I dream of you?Why were we together in my dreams?

Pragya burst out tearfully:Because we were together.We were a couple.

Abhi was shocked.

Abhi:Then why I don't remember anything?

Pragya:Because you forgot everything.

Abhi was shocked.

Abhi:Means after the gunshot I fell off the cliff and in that accident I lost my memory?

Pragya was silent.

Abhi:This guitar!I saw myself playing guitar in my dream.

Pragya:Because you used to play guitar well.

Abhi:Impossible.I have no connection with music or guitar.

Pragya became upset.

Pragya:You forgot everything Abhi.

Abhi:But Raghav Rishab and Shlok are my close friends and they know everything about me.Why they did'nt recognize you if we were a couple in the past?

Pragya said something which shocked Abhi.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#66

Pratha a fairy surprised Rishab

I loved it

Naina and Raghav mystery continues with romance

Ashlok takarar pyaar abhi pragya janam janam connection pyaar interesting

Lovely update

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Posted: 1 years ago
#67

Part 5


Fabulous Update

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Didn’t expect Pratha to be a fairy. Rishab complimenting Prathawas nice. Hey you can still tell me to edit pics, I can make Pratha fairy pics ifu want. Naina giving flying kiss to Raghav was sweet. Natural and lovely edit byRehana. Both demanding each other a kiss in the fb scene was romantic. Yaar Nainais Akasha only na? Just clear me this thing coz in last update she turned into Akasha.Raina romance scene was cute. Rishab teasing Raghav and Raghav bursting in returnwas hurtful. Why can only Raghav see her as Akasha? Raghav getting to know thatAkasha is no more and crying bitterly was sad. Aastha shlok conversation was deep.Abhi’s dream was romantic at first but the rest of the part was painful and looksso real. Pratha is right. Wonder what did Pragya say. Perfect pics. Waiting fornext.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#69

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago
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A fairy! We could not have expected that.

Edited by coderlady - 1 years ago
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