Ariya FF: Haule Haule Ho Jaayega Pyaar- Chapter 4 on Page 14 - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: shah10

Amazing update

Loved riya and choree's bonding ❤

Thank you so much ❤️❤️

Who doesn't love their bond 😉😌

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Nice update

I guess now Dhruv will make Arjun realise his love for Riya

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: balan04

Nice update

I guess now Dhruv will make Arjun realise his love for Riya

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Thank you ❤️

Hoping that he does the same 😂😂

Will continue soon 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Bechare humare teen bandar fus gaye.😜

"Yaar yeh seniors humesha aise pathar dil hote hai Kya" hahaha yeh sentence toh galat prove hua 😌

Hahaha Dhruv's prank was too funny 😂

Dhruv is both strict and fun when needed 💕

Awww arjun is jealous 😂 kisne kaha tha team se akadu aur khadoos hoke baat karne ko 😅😅

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: NIDZZ123

Bechare humare teen bandar fus gaye.😜

"Yaar yeh seniors humesha aise pathar dil hote hai Kya" hahaha yeh sentence toh galat prove hua 😌

Hahaha Dhruv's prank was too funny 😂

Dhruv is both strict and fun when needed 💕

Awww arjun is jealous 😂 kisne kaha tha team se akadu aur khadoos hoke baat karne ko 😅😅

2 bandar aur ek chiraya

Chalo koi ek toh normal hai.. issi mein khush hai abhi teenon. Thode din Khushi manane dete hai.

Abhi Arjun jealousy mein kya kya karega dekhna hoga 🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Hey, Karuna, thanks for the pm & sorry for late reading n late comment.

Loved the chapter n it is quite intriguing although I felt it was short in length in comparison to your another blockbuster FF "Emergency Task Force".

I always loved the masti "Shriyatu" these three musketeers always did in the show, n so here is also the same. Loved the new character Dhruv to be seen as a normal person combined with both professionalism n fun prank player. But, don't chop off Rathore's character from this story, as without Rathore there's no Arjun for me.

I felt, Arjun is slightly burning in jealousy because of the free minded nature of Dhruv with everyone especially with Riya. But, I will really love to see what jealousy can make him do next.

Will be eagerly waiting for the next update. Till then stay healthy, stay safe.

P.S. Why don't you publish this story on Wattpad?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: naaheean

Hey, Karuna, thanks for the pm & sorry for late reading n late comment.

Loved the chapter n it is quite intriguing although I felt it was short in length in comparison to your another blockbuster FF "Emergency Task Force".

I always loved the masti "Shriyatu" these three musketeers always did in the show, n so here is also the same. Loved the new character Dhruv to be seen as a normal person combined with both professionalism n fun prank player. But, don't chop off Rathore's character from this story, as without Rathore there's no Arjun for me.

I felt, Arjun is slightly burning in jealousy because of the free minded nature of Dhruv with everyone especially with Riya. But, I will really love to see what jealousy can make him do next.

Will be eagerly waiting for the next update. Till then stay healthy, stay safe.

P.S. Why don't you publish this story on Wattpad?

No no you don't need to be sorry dear 😘😘

Yes my further FF's will be short in length because Emergency Task Force takes maximum amount of my time. 😅😅 It has nearly 7 people to incorporate hence it becomes very long. 😅

Yes ShriYaTu were always amazing for me. I loved their bond a lot. Hence I try to put as much of their scenes as possible.

Don't worry I did not chop off Rathore. He is very much important to me. Actually more than Arjun 🤭😅

Arjun burning in jealousy will be a treat to watch. 😉 Let's see if this jealousy will get him to propose.

Will soon update. Don't worry 😘

Will publish even there but would need some time 😌

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Please message me when you update

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Interesting loved it update soon thnx for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Minisanjukta

Please message me when you update

Yes sure I will do that 😌😘😘

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