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Posted: 1 months ago
#41

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

i remember this story lol I guess


It was revealed in the end the killer they are looking for attacked Riyas sister and jiju and it had water symbolism. Then it was unfinished πŸ˜…πŸ€£πŸ€£



There is a story straw house it's goat but of course unfinished I was just seeing it in goofl search. The story was very cool Riya comes back post xora and she's very timid scared. There is someone following her putting black balls in her locker resembling xora, Arjun is protective and all.


There is a story i forgot the writer she was from the clique of Vidya Anand despicable me Mohabbatgirl etc. the story was on new character Priya and Arjun, rosh jun Priya were friends and p was undercover when roshni was killed and it's implied she either gave up information due to torture or she betrayed xyz. Turns out she was rped and Jun and her are together then it stopped I guess. Shilpa Anand was cast as Priya.


Naaheen@ haha i deactivated in shame but now back cause these stories are fun to discuss on.

@bold - Yeh wali story toh main khud bhi dhund dhund ke pareshan ho chuki hoon, kya aap iss ka link share kar sakti hai, please?

And, yes, you shouldn’t feel shame on your write-ups, they're seriously good & we're having fun while discussing these stories that were written almost 10/11/12 years ago. That time many writers were younger in their age & now they've become quite mature which is why these stories now may look very much like childish fantasy & fan-girling thing to them.

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Posted: 1 months ago
#43

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

i remember this story lol I guess


It was revealed in the end the killer they are looking for attacked Riyas sister and jiju and it had water symbolism. Then it was unfinished πŸ˜…πŸ€£πŸ€£



There is a story straw house it's goat but of course unfinished I was just seeing it in goofl search. The story was very cool Riya comes back post xora and she's very timid scared. There is someone following her putting black balls in her locker resembling xora, Arjun is protective and all.


There is a story i forgot the writer she was from the clique of Vidya Anand despicable me Mohabbatgirl etc. the story was on new character Priya and Arjun, rosh jun Priya were friends and p was undercover when roshni was killed and it's implied she either gave up information due to torture or she betrayed xyz. Turns out she was rped and Jun and her are together then it stopped I guess. Shilpa Anand was cast as Priya.


Naaheen@ haha i deactivated in shame but now back cause these stories are fun to discuss on.

@Bold - are you talking about this one?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3269691/ff-betrayed-by-love-note-pg-151

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Posted: 1 months ago
#44

Originally posted by: naaheean

@bold - Yeh wali story toh main khud bhi dhund dhund ke pareshan ho chuki hoon, kya aap iss ka link share kar sakti hai, please?

And, yes, you shouldn’t feel shame on your write-ups, they're seriously good & we're having fun while discussing these stories that were written almost 10/11/12 years ago. That time many writers were younger in their age & now they've become quite mature which is why these stories now may look very much like childish fantasy & fan-girling thing to them.

haha you found strings of desire. What a story that was



I remembered another story just now, the girl was zuby/zebin something username. She wrote a story on Arjun Aisha Arjun was named as arshad and dutta bhau was there in story. It was very cool too and great thing was she finished the story. But she removed her posts so we used to joke this story should be made as a serial. I hope the lady published it somehow

The story was like arshad /Arjun was married to Aisha when he was in teens and she was very young , he came to know this on suhagrat and horrified he left for Mumbai cut all ties with his family. Married rosh and she died as per story. Years later he met Aisha but don't know it's his wife. Dutta bhau also likes Aisha but it didnt go ahead. Then somehow sik got involved , kidnapped Aisha. The chase of Arjun for finding sik and Aisha was fabulouly written πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ then in the end Arjun goes back to Aisha and is like i have lived my life alone til now will you come with me. It was πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’” that was a superb story man i wish I can read it again. I should download stories going forward lol



Yeppppp I meant Shilpa wala betrayed by love thanks for posting! ❀️❀️ I read it long back remember things lol you are awesome. You remember back then some writers changed their ariya stories to arakshi? Lmao petty times 🀣


There was a story milenge ab Yara do you remember what was the storyline? I joined IF reading Vidya Anand ka some story i don't remember the story now haha




Na I don't feel ashamed of my stories haha though grammatically incorrect and maybe in the end finished them in hurry as I finish stories in head. I am shy so ✌️✌️✌️


I am personally so fascinated with lavanya/Riya if you have some good recommendation post links here. One story i read other day where Riya stayed as lavanya due to some undercover job and arnab came to ETF and she revealed truth. You posted link of that story

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Posted: 1 months ago
#45

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

haha you found strings of desire. What a story that was



I remembered another story just now, the girl was zuby/zebin something username. She wrote a story on Arjun Aisha Arjun was named as arshad and dutta bhau was there in story. It was very cool too and great thing was she finished the story. But she removed her posts so we used to joke this story should be made as a serial. I hope the lady published it somehow

The story was like arshad /Arjun was married to Aisha when he was in teens and she was very young , he came to know this on suhagrat and horrified he left for Mumbai cut all ties with his family. Married rosh and she died as per story. Years later he met Aisha but don't know it's his wife. Dutta bhau also likes Aisha but it didnt go ahead. Then somehow sik got involved , kidnapped Aisha. The chase of Arjun for finding sik and Aisha was fabulouly written πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ then in the end Arjun goes back to Aisha and is like i have lived my life alone til now will you come with me. It was πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’” that was a superb story man i wish I can read it again. I should download stories going forward lol



Yeppppp I meant Shilpa wala betrayed by love thanks for posting! ❀️❀️ I read it long back remember things lol you are awesome. You remember back then some writers changed their ariya stories to arakshi? Lmao petty times 🀣


There was a story milenge ab Yara do you remember what was the storyline? I joined IF reading Vidya Anand ka some story i don't remember the story now haha




Na I don't feel ashamed of my stories haha though grammatically incorrect and maybe in the end finished them in hurry as I finish stories in head. I am shy so ✌️✌️✌️


I am personally so fascinated with lavanya/Riya if you have some good recommendation post links here. One story i read other day where Riya stayed as lavanya due to some undercover job and arnab came to ETF and she revealed truth. You posted link of that story

@Bold - Mitraseth wala milenge ab yaara, which is left incomplete? Yeah, I read that story long ago, the concept was very interesting, Riya's traumatic past - her good for nothing goon father's death in the hands of her own mother & then she suicide infront of Riya stating that she hated her more than she loved her as she is a part of her father, after that her struggled life journey with the constant support from her Nana, her Nana's sudden death, her masi trying to get her married forcefully to some sahil deewan to get all her property under their name & then his sudden murder just before a week of their engagement & Riya becoming the primary suspect of his murder, her family lawyer called ETF to Delhi to solve this case & save Riya....& Arjun getting softer towards Riya during this whole fiasco....I really loved that story...but, the saddest thing is jo bhi storyline mere dil ko chu jaati hai, wahi kyun incomplete hotey hai yaar?

Ye rahi uss story ki link -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3171338/ariya-ff-milenge-ab-yaara-part-16-page-44

P.S. - Almost same issi title pe ek aur Four shot story hai, woh bhi completed, link is given below -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4571266/etf-milenge-ab-yara-completed-epilouge-on-pg-6-23-2

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Posted: 1 months ago
#46

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

haha you found strings of desire. What a story that was



I remembered another story just now, the girl was zuby/zebin something username. She wrote a story on Arjun Aisha Arjun was named as arshad and dutta bhau was there in story. It was very cool too and great thing was she finished the story. But she removed her posts so we used to joke this story should be made as a serial. I hope the lady published it somehow

The story was like arshad /Arjun was married to Aisha when he was in teens and she was very young , he came to know this on suhagrat and horrified he left for Mumbai cut all ties with his family. Married rosh and she died as per story. Years later he met Aisha but don't know it's his wife. Dutta bhau also likes Aisha but it didnt go ahead. Then somehow sik got involved , kidnapped Aisha. The chase of Arjun for finding sik and Aisha was fabulouly written πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ then in the end Arjun goes back to Aisha and is like i have lived my life alone til now will you come with me. It was πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’” that was a superb story man i wish I can read it again. I should download stories going forward lol



Yeppppp I meant Shilpa wala betrayed by love thanks for posting! ❀️❀️ I read it long back remember things lol you are awesome. You remember back then some writers changed their ariya stories to arakshi? Lmao petty times 🀣


There was a story milenge ab Yara do you remember what was the storyline? I joined IF reading Vidya Anand ka some story i don't remember the story now haha




Na I don't feel ashamed of my stories haha though grammatically incorrect and maybe in the end finished them in hurry as I finish stories in head. I am shy so ✌️✌️✌️


I am personally so fascinated with lavanya/Riya if you have some good recommendation post links here. One story i read other day where Riya stayed as lavanya due to some undercover job and arnab came to ETF and she revealed truth. You posted link of that story

@Bold - πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ What a fool I've been for all these years, main yahi story agar dubara padh leti toh shayed bohot pehle hi mujhe yaad aa jati, tnx for telling me...πŸ€—

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Posted: 1 months ago
#47

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

haha you found strings of desire. What a story that was



I remembered another story just now, the girl was zuby/zebin something username. She wrote a story on Arjun Aisha Arjun was named as arshad and dutta bhau was there in story. It was very cool too and great thing was she finished the story. But she removed her posts so we used to joke this story should be made as a serial. I hope the lady published it somehow

The story was like arshad /Arjun was married to Aisha when he was in teens and she was very young , he came to know this on suhagrat and horrified he left for Mumbai cut all ties with his family. Married rosh and she died as per story. Years later he met Aisha but don't know it's his wife. Dutta bhau also likes Aisha but it didnt go ahead. Then somehow sik got involved , kidnapped Aisha. The chase of Arjun for finding sik and Aisha was fabulouly written πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ then in the end Arjun goes back to Aisha and is like i have lived my life alone til now will you come with me. It was πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’” that was a superb story man i wish I can read it again. I should download stories going forward lol



Yeppppp I meant Shilpa wala betrayed by love thanks for posting! ❀️❀️ I read it long back remember things lol you are awesome. You remember back then some writers changed their ariya stories to arakshi? Lmao petty times 🀣


There was a story milenge ab Yara do you remember what was the storyline? I joined IF reading Vidya Anand ka some story i don't remember the story now haha




Na I don't feel ashamed of my stories haha though grammatically incorrect and maybe in the end finished them in hurry as I finish stories in head. I am shy so ✌️✌️✌️


I am personally so fascinated with lavanya/Riya if you have some good recommendation post links here. One story i read other day where Riya stayed as lavanya due to some undercover job and arnab came to ETF and she revealed truth. You posted link of that story

OMG!!! Me too had read this story long long ago, but now this story is removed. The title of that story was Qubool Hai

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3721062/new-story-qubool-hai-pt11-pg-53

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Posted: 1 months ago
#48

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Oh yea I remember this story too dude was like Arjun but not Arjun, but didn't follow later. Many writers leave stories update once twice then leave. In last 1/2 yr there was a story i was reading the writer left it too, forgot it's name but it was like ariya love each other but didn't confess and there is a scene Arjun is injured and staying with his parents, ETF comes and Riya goes to him hugs him in his room. Then nothing lmao. - The title of that story was "All in Me" by everestlove -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/5163112/ariya-ff-all-in-me-note-on-page-105

Another story it was ETF and commando movie cross over with Karan and bhavna, very interesting premise that Karan bhavna is in relationship but he's ignorant of her, teases her but it's very insensitive. It's also incomplete . If you didn't watch the movie start from commando 2 and 3 bhavna is fire lmao I watched the hotstar series only for her 🀣πŸ”₯ - Yeah, this one was also read by me, it was entitled as "Love Forever", I think.

My reply is given beside the bold statements.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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β˜… Milenge ab yara β˜…The wait just ❀️ but incomplete 😣
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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: naaheean

@Bold - Mitraseth wala milenge ab yaara, which is left incomplete? Yeah, I read that story long ago, the concept was very interesting, Riya's traumatic past - her good for nothing goon father's death in the hands of her own mother & then she suicide infront of Riya stating that she hated her more than she loved her as she is a part of her father, after that her struggled life journey with the constant support from her Nana, her Nana's sudden death, her masi trying to get her married forcefully to some sahil deewan to get all her property under their name & then his sudden murder just before a week of their engagement & Riya becoming the primary suspect of his murder, her family lawyer called ETF to Delhi to solve this case & save Riya....& Arjun getting softer towards Riya during this whole fiasco....I really loved that story...but, the saddest thing is jo bhi storyline mere dil ko chu jaati hai, wahi kyun incomplete hotey hai yaar?

Ye rahi uss story ki link -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3171338/ariya-ff-milenge-ab-yaara-part-16-page-44

P.S. - Almost same issi title pe ek aur Four shot story hai, ya woh bhi completed, link is given below -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4571266/etf-milenge-ab-yara-completed-epilouge-on-pg-6-23-2

loll I was thinking milenge ab Yara by different writer lol. So Vidya Anand wala story is different



I was trying to read the epilogue didn't understand but mitraseth wala story was superb, duniya bhar ka trauma tha Riya ko. It's amazing how writers write these tragic backstory for riya but she still has her core strength intact.


Lol so true good stories are left incomplete by writers but I guess they lose inspiration when nothing new is happening or they finish it in head. What I understood from my experience is if someone isn't writing a complete story at one stretch, don't drag it much and keep focused on main story, then story will stay incomplete.

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