Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat
wow that sik story and chutki wala sounds sick. Props to writers imagination they have written far better things with 1000+ stories with little material than writers can ever imagine. 🔥🔥
Yeah that's exactly it. Sometimes I wonder, what If they caught one of these ffs and incorporated it in og just to have proper ending. But alas.
I downloaded and watched last couple of eois. The ridiculous part was that small kid helping these grows ass adults, Karan Arjun to solve cases. Bahu riding scooter to moon ek taraf ye bakchodi ek taraf my internet legit shut down lol it was a waste.
Lol Bahu on a scooter to moon 😂 I stopped watching colors dramas after "Pyar kii ye ek Kahani" especially when I watched "sasural simar ka" in passing. That drama makes you hate all dramas, it's that ridiculous. I don't know why they have so many seasons of that. Now it's just meme material.
It was easier to digest Anjali as a tech expert because I used to watch American crime/thriller series. But it was the fact that they relied on her on field too that makes it more ridiculous.
I love bamf women character and I like Aisha for the reason, but in many stories she's there just for Sam. Riya i have always seen her very empathetic soft person but she won't tolerate bs beyond something. She has a fire but she's not sharp tongue, especially post initial epis when she starts to develop feelings. She understands Arjun and tries to analyse his moods and all, she's very transparent about her feelings everyone can see etc. but in stories especially that perfect stranger mein Riya goes through a lot and it makes sense why she transfers to another department, makes her place and has a world beyond ETF/Arjun. And it also shows a nice reality check to Arjun who kinda takes his team granted. But in show I feel Arjun had mellowed and we would have seen more scenes where she gets to know about rosh and Arjun also admits to himself he loves her, and it's not a betrayal to roshnis memory, and both are matured enough to keep it silent and it will be on hold till rosh case.
That's the crux of his life story. The fact that he was happy go lucky before marriage and all and then turned all angry, ruthless and arrogant after Rosh death. It would have been amazing if there was se**ual tension and slow burn thing going on between them where Riya realizes that Arjun at least feels something for her and then BAM, the moment Sik is done for, he would come at her home and just hug her and some hidden confession where they don't say the three words but still realize there's love between them. That would be so awesome.
Did I tell you I so love the hidden love, secret romance, delayed tension filled confessions. Like the one Arnav did with Khushi in IPKKND.
The team had new energy with sakshi Aisha and Liza but personally never liked sakshi but I love the idea of character. She was bubbly and all and it was a contrast to Riya and aishas silent caring for the men. It was Riya bias for me too and sakshi had a dark undertone too with her dad stuff etc. Sam Aisha was sidelined I would like to think they are together and when Sam goes to find sik with Arjun she's waiting there working in another department (i just realised ETF is dead ugh). Chotu had legit nothing about his character, a commando like him should had more scenes where he's not comedic relief. Ugh this show still makes me mad lmao
I guess they had too many characters and didn't know what to do with them. So screen time depended on how important the case was. Also they took Arjun as lead too seriously, it went from adjusting Arjun in team to Making Arjun a one man team himself. Also they never explored depths to any character's backstory or personality. Even Arjun's past was limited to 4 flashbacks and the song.
I also dig the idea sik is underworld mafia and having dual identity hence none knows it's him. Self promotion alert but it's sad 🤣🤣 in one of my story I wrote it like sik and his group into illegal arms, and Aisha recognise it cause her uc job was about same arms. And sik has identity as a psychiatrist who's client is Riya (she has her own story where her mom brother dies , sam Riya Arjun were friends in academy etc. I don't like some parts about the fallout of academy Arjun Riya so I might change it someday) and they have friendship outside therapy. So it's a big blow to her when she herself finds out sik is her friend, she's hurt and she's the one shooting him. Or course there is big investigation about it where Riya is a suspect too and Arjun question himself if his revenge path was worth it with the shitstorm Riya is going through. So as you can see the concept was next level 🤣🤣🤣 it's incomplete of course 😔 😏😏
Omg you have incomplete stories 🤭. The concept seems good. Do share the link. I might give it a read. Also there was this story where Sik had a name "Shehzad" who was Arni's friend.
There is another idea I am having since a while, and of course it started as a Arjun Riya story but the characters are different so maybe I will write it as a theme of ETF but character name will be sia and Aryan. And in this story same like Arjun, Aryan starts working in the SIT /whatever dept and sia /Riya was in file section but joins him for sheen kidnap case, later joins the core investigation team where they two pair up. And it's all done by Aisha /haven't decided the head of dept to keep an eye on Aryan. And Aryan sia become super co dependent on each other, dude is hella protective possesive etc. and of course to match upto aryans dead wife past sia has her own past and these two lonely character making there way. It's an entire universe on its own lol need to get it out of system someday. So point of this rant was sik/the guy who murdered roshni, Aryans wife is a stalker who had killed other women too and Aryan keeps a murder board tracking cases. I like this idea too, independent of Arjun, and it's also very real that you never know something unexpected happens to your family someday. And Aryan /Arjun has a right to obsess that all these time there was self blame that somehow your work was reason she's dead, but it's unrelated, but there is new kind od guilt too that you weren't enough to save her. And now you have this obsession that there is this girl as lonely as you, you aren't letting her get one scratch on her. Its supposed to be very gritty dark idea of these two finding each other. If i write it someday.... phew.
That's such an intriguing concept. If you write it I'll be the first reader. Tho it's okay if you keep it original names. Maybe they met as Aryan/Sia but they're really Ariya and ooohhh the team will be baffled if these two come outta nowhere as new characters.
Last rant- like I said Lavanya/Riya is so fascinating to me and it happens back to back lol we were blessed. I was thinking other day these two are same people, and whatever happens In show example Riya getting a call from house, she's sad and takes leave, lavanya is there with her relatives etc. and it continues till sakshi Liza etc enter, and ariya gets together and it reveals she's lavanya too. So all betrayal stuff ye woh falana.
I love this concept too. I've read so many crossovers. Asad, Zoya, Arnav,Khushi and Ariya give almost same vibes and it would be something if I get to read about them all in one story. Like Arshi are Riya's past as Lavanya while Asad be Arjun's friend and Zoya be Riya's. Oohhh that would be so nice.
Writing so many characters are so hard keeping them together their journey lol
It definitely is. But you know some character gives off same vibes. Like the enemy to lovers etc. It's always interesting to see how writers merge their story to pave way for another one. And I've always found IF/Wattpad writers to be more creative then show's CVS.
ipk watched during original run dont think can watch again, might watch geet someday
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