Kalma FF:: Teri Jannat me, ishq ki chaah part 4 updated pg 9 , 16-4-20 - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Thanks beats. BTW what is your name. Second part is updated. You can read it. 

Hii..my name is Riya.

I read and already liking the story... it's gripping so far, full of suspense as to why is Kalyani acting so heartless...wanna know the reason eagerly as now curiosity is arised.. !! Thanks for the update and continue with it soon❀

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful written. The way your scene in such detail we can visualize it and Kalma rocks 

Proposal by Kalyani in her style and Malhar in his style so well put.

Keep writing and please update soon 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update neera di 

Sorry for being so late to comment but I didn't come here from 1 months 

Do write more 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Will try but let me be honest it will take some months. I am very busy. I am in class 12 , so next months practical hai and then boards 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Eagerly waiting for your update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please update soon

I am eagerly waiting to know y kalyani want divorce

Please continue this story soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
                           Teaser 
                         Part ::3
This is the time when someone is crying for another one. Malhar,  a caring and loving husband,  crying for his love. It seems like all miseries are whispering in his ear that he was going to face them alone . Without his companion. What could be more worse than this. 
Malhar checked time. It was 6:30 in morning. He has to get ready as he had to arrive court at 9 . Just 2.30 hour left after which two inseparable souls will get separated. 
Malhar went to bathroom and took a shower. As single drop passing through his eyes to his neck to his body,,  he can sense shiver in all his body.  This is not shiver, this is pain of two souls which are under immense pain. 

( Note -- I will update 3rd part tomorrow. Sorry for being late. Just a seal in my mind. One more part 4 will come after this that was full of romance . Until this it was mostly emotional. I dunno how will I complete my all ff. I am literally very exhausted from ongoing thing. But just one thing show some more love . I kinda need it. 😘
You all stay safe 😊.
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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting teaser

thanks for continuing πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Interesting teaser

thanks for continuing πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thank you. You are from pune right. Safe Rehna .

Agar koi ghar se bahar nikla toh update nahi karonga πŸ˜‘

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Thank you. You are from pune right. Safe Rehna .

Agar koi ghar se bahar nikla toh update nahi karonga πŸ˜‘

yes

thank you

stay home, stay safeπŸ‘πŸΌ