Kalma FF:: Teri Jannat me, ishq ki chaah part 4 updated pg 9 , 16-4-20 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha_17

Nice start.. painful yaar. Hope to see everything gets sorted out and Kalma always stay together 

Thanks Sneha ,

Will update soon, 

If you don't mind plz like part 1

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Nice dear I am astonished by kalyanis decision why she wants to go away. Update soon .loved it.

Gayu thanks for your good words. 

Will update soon. 

If you don't mind plz like part 1

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Thanks di, for liking it .

Di , I will update next part soon. 

Di , if you don't mind plz like part 1.

like Kiya tha Aya Nahi kya koyi Nahi abhi Karti hoon mein

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

5 years of celibacy in marriage ! Gall of this man " s self control . Ok so kalyani had some major issue , that has force her to break malhar' s heart so badly! Suspense  is building .We are waiting .

🤣oh titli, malhar 5 sal kya, janmo wait Kar sakta hai, for Kallu. BTW I write it just bcoz I can't write, adult scene good. So just to avoid it's possibility . Vaise it was a emotional one. 

Dekhna aage kya hoga. 

If you don't mind plz like part 1 .

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

like Kiya tha Aya Nahi kya koyi Nahi abhi Karti hoon mein

Ab hogaya di, thanks for it. 

Actually I want like a bit more 🤣.so ask for it. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Got something  really interesting to read....

You wrote it beautifully....

Hope everything will be fine for kalma 

Let’s see...

Waiting for next part 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Got something  really interesting to read....

You wrote it beautifully....

Hope everything will be fine for kalma 

Let’s see...

Waiting for next part 

Thank you dear. And thanks for liking my writing. I am not a good writer but try to be. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Thank you dear. And thanks for liking my writing. I am not a good writer but try to be. 

no yarr you are good writer.... I to love your writing 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Omg... Continue soon dear

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Posted: 4 years ago

Teaser 1

Teri Jannat me, Ishq ki chaah

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Malhar POV 
It has been 1 month since our conversation. You had refused Me to even touch you. I know we do not share physical proximity but there is a friendly touch between us always. You behave like I forced to be in this marriage. You can't even bear my presence now. 

You refused to live with me. That's why I came back to my house. You have changed so much. Whenever, we meet, I feel like I am a stranger for you. You made me hesitate to even look into your eyes. You are not the girl who is my princess. 

Your eyes had lost your innocence. Why these eyes are filled with fear . And what fear it is.  I know you have some reason behind this act, but can't you tell me what is it. I think at least I deserved to know. 
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Note :: Hello all readers. Guys so this is the teaser for next part and I will upload next part tomorrow for sure. I have a request to all. Plz plz like this teaser and previous chapter.( likes on previous chap is less)  I will not upload next part if likes are less. I am sorry for this. Enjoy 😁🥳

And Happy Mohhram to all. God bless you all. 

Edited by Vermilion - 4 years ago