How this beautiful story slipped by me. Read both chapters now. What a dreamy beautiful story. So so nice to read it and you've wonderfully executed it. Their relation, malhar's confusion, her unconditional love, his confession, their romance everything was so perfect. I thought I can go on n on reading this no matter how long it is. These routine n simple things are sweet. Waiting for your next update...
Thank u so mch ....
Heyaa thanks for appreciating
Beautiful dear
I read you're both stories together
Continue writing
Hope to see you soon
Heya... thanku so much for commenting ... ll try to update soon
Originally posted by: InkAndFable
FIRST CHAPTER:
You described Malhar's emotions perfectly. His confusion regarding Kalyani and realization of how better Kalyani is from Sampada.
The way she cared for him and bandaged his wounds.
The last part was amazing when they poured their hearts out.
SECOND CHAPTER:
It was hot. ☺️
Loved their chemistry...🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Filled with Hope of a new life and a beautiful future...😇😇😇😇
Update next part soon...😍😍😍
Awwww super thanks for this comment... like u actually gave a review of both parts... n as a writer honest reviews... suggestions are always welcomed... it help us to grow as a writer... thnks alot for appreciation 💃🏻🙌🏻
Originally posted by: kusharberry
awesome update dear
loved it
kalma relationship progressed beautifully
wanna see more kalma moments
please do continue soon
Heyaaa glad u liked it ... thanks for commenting n yuppp ll try to update soon...
Originally posted by: asmitasb
How this beautiful story slipped by me. Read both chapters now. What a dreamy beautiful story. So so nice to read it and you've wonderfully executed it. Their relation, malhar's confusion, her unconditional love, his confession, their romance everything was so perfect. I thought I can go on n on reading this no matter how long it is. These routine n simple things are sweet. Waiting for your next update...
Awww thanku so mch for commenting... M happy that u connected... ll try to update soon
Thanku so mch... yupp ll try to update soon...
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