Samaina SS : "Suhana Safar" (*Updated*; Epilogue on Page 85) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

By God Aaisha! This is your first attempt? Unbelievable! I was so hooked onto this story...it seemed to be to be another scene from the show...if Sameer n Naina had met this way...I loved you showed the Hindi mein bolo na by Sameer...I just miss that! This was simple, romantic n so 90s...mujhe bhi hamesha aisa lgta tha koi kabhi aise train me, safar me mil jaye...haaye Sam asked for her number...n Naina gave it to him...I know Naina is going to DU now...n hopefully Sam too! Wow! Hope to see their romance brewing in the Dilwalon ki Dilli in a good light...btw tum to badi achi shayae bhi ho...loved it to the core...

It can't be an OS nope! You have to convert it to a FF! 

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Originally posted by: Anjali33

This was so sweet

Humko to train mein dhang k log hi nhi milte🤔

The last part just took my heart

Originally posted by: chaaru26

Such a beautiful os...👏

Please do continue. Dont stop it as an os. 

If you plan on continuing do pm me when you update the next part.

Originally posted by: Riyagong

Simply Beautiful ❤️ pls Continue If U can and Thank you for this 😊

Originally posted by: shravyarao

Such a beautiful piece for a first time written! Keep writing!

Loved the update very much, hope you would continue this.

Originally posted by: moumita04

Hey Aaisha - You know I have so many pending stories to read and comment on... but I simply couldn't resist opening this on reading your PM. 😳

That's so sweet of you Mou🤗 I really wanted you and Surbhi di to read this. Thanks a lot for taking out time😊

I will say something people told me when I updated my first story - I cannot believe this was your first attempt...!! It was amazing...!! 👏👏

😊bas mera story likhna safal. Forum ke Mere teeno favourite writers ko pasand aa gyi meri story, to aur kya chahie😊

Okay - first of all same-pinch. My first story update (the first part of Lights of Eternity) was based on a train journey from Delhi to Ahmedabad... And yours is also on a train journey, but from Ahmedabad to Delhi... 😃😃

Same pinch😉

I have a strange fetish for train rides... the charm in these journeys can never be replaced by the quick flights we are so used to these days. I still miss my annual vacation journeys... 😛

Me too, Me too. My parents and brother always prefer to travel by planes and I am the only one who enjoys train rides in my family. And you are right, flights can never replace the charm of train rides. That's why I wanted Samaina to enjoy a train ride together

Now coming to the story - It was such a simple and heart-warming one... I loved the way they opened up slowly to each other and the spark of attraction was from both sides... In fact, Sameer tried to open the conversation flow, loved that touch.  

Aww, thanks honey. earlier I thought I was going a little faster but fir socha itna to banta haa 😛

That "hindi me bolona" has my heart... I loved Sameer's voice and expressions when he used to say that and I could literally imagine it here. 😆 

😆I can never forget Sameer's hindi me btao na bit.  I so wish to see him say the same in the show again.

For first time conversation they surely opened up a lot to each other... sharing some well preserved secrets of life... And Sameer's concern that she should sleep as she has exams next day and then waiting with her until Chachji arrived... haaye... he is already acting like a perfect partner...

That shayari was brilliant...!! 👍🏼

😆Maine OS likha tha na phle islie bohat saari baatein krwa di. 

Sameer is always a perfect partner

And finally that asking for her number... yet understanding that she might not be comfortable... but our hero need not worry, heroine is already fida... 😃

I noticed you have already converted this to a SS... and thank you for that... I wouldn't want to miss out on such a lovely story... 😳

Looking forward to read more from you... amazing work honey... 🤗

I am overwhelmed by the love and appreciation I have received. Sabne bola to I thought next parts bhi likh deti hun😳

PR vo exam ke bad😆

Love,

Mou