Thanks for the appreciation 😊Wow dear...it was a fantastic read...Cant belueve it was ur first time...Really looking forward to read more from u...i wish u wud continue tis ..i so wanted to know wat happens next!!
Thanks 😊This wa sos beautiful...ek sun DHKMN style...plz continue...I would love to see the love story progress with a different angle.
Thank you so much Minu 🤗.Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
That was so beautiful Aaisha.😃 Lovely..👏👏 The small moments of they opening to each other.The dialogues and the VO...all had so much feels..
The way they tried cheering up each other and the poem in his diary..Too good.The ending was beautiful and the whole of it just took me to some beautiful vistas of railway stations and the railway journeys..Safar suhana hai manzil se bhi...😳Do PM me when you pen down anything next.I don't want to miss such beautiful renderings.😳Keep coming with more.With love-Minu.
kitni bar dil dogi Rucha😉Hey Aaisha...
Dil Le Lo..❤️Maine kaha tha you can write very well, not only fun posts but stories also..Train Journeys fascinate me every time and I wait eagerly to travel by train...aur is journey me sameer jaisa koi sathi mil jaye to kya kehne..You have captured Chachijis worry, nainas nervousness very aptly..VO added the charm to the story just like the show's VO does...It was like watching the scene straight from the serial..😊😊Hindi me bolo na...😆😆😆Naina ka uske looks me. kho jana, bad me kuch nahi bolna...2 hours tadpaya usko..😆😆I liked their conversation..how casually it started and went on till sharing the tiffin including their favorite grahnakshatra..Aur wo shayari..👏👏Kaha se late ho...itna talent..👏👏He waited for her till her chachaji comes without any expectation...aww..😳😳Jaise naina ka dil chahta hain sameer par vishwas karna waise mera bhi dil chahta hain tum is OS ko FF me badaldogi..Ye kahani jarur age badhegi..👍🏼
Thanks sweetie😊 I am glad it made you happy😊Waohhh u r amazing writer yrr.. safar dach me suhana tha.. felt happy reading it.. keep writing..
Thanks dear 😳 You were engrossed in my story. That's so sweet😊😳Originally posted by: Samainadeewani
It was really very amezing ..
I was totally engrossed in your story ..Loved it ..samaina were too cuteCan't believe it was your first time writing anything ..you should write more ..I would love to read more from youAre we getting the next part of it ?LoveLaalchi reader
Toh, next part aapko thode din me zarur milega. Jaise hi mere exams khatam honge😳Originally posted by: ratnarao12
Outstanding yaar
Bahut hi kamaal ka thaNow can't wait for the callToh ???When is the next partEagerly waiting😛
Thankyou so much Shreya. Such a sweet reply🤗Originally posted by: Mayashika
Wow Aaisha di, now this is what I call beautiful😳
The way you kept the essence of the show, the voiceovers...Do continue your stories with this writing style as it's different yet very much attractive..and also I loved how you kept their dialogues in hindi, that move was very inviting for the readers; atleast to me😃You bought back the memories of all the railway journeys..Infact I just had another trip and I took railways to travel..I loved the ending absolutely, that unknown trust on him provedKeep coming with more and don't forget to PM me your works!Love,Shreya
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