ARIYA FF : DEVIL'S TRIANGLE discontinued

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Character sketch -
ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathore(29 yrs ) : chief of ETF.. handsome dashing sexy cop.most desired bachelor of police department. many girls drool over him but... a coconut type person. Hard from outside but soft from inside. Loves his team although never tries to show it. Colleagues have named him sadu n sadhu because he isn't married yet..u can say he is dabang ...He has a crush on our lady dabang .

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte (29 yrs):uff this supercop is super handsome super dashing super sexy ... girls are mad for him but are afraid of him.. Second in command in etf...too much arrogant . He has a dark past ...His wife roshni was killed by sikandar a goon who is until now never seen by anyone. ... colleagues call him akdu as he is egoistic. .. never wants to see anyone close to him especially girls. ... can't bear anyone's interference in his past or present time... never tries to listen to his heart which has again started beating for someone special. ...

Ayesha Kapoor aka aish (25 yrs ): lady dabang of etf ...undercover cop n if she starts interrogating a criminal in her own way she will definitely take out everything from him including information, blood , attitude, confidence n even life too...she is charming beautiful lady on whom boys drool but never say as they are afraid of her beating...she also has a crush on our dabang bachelor but is afraid from saying it. ...she also doesn't knows about riya

Riya Mukherjee aka Rii (23 yrs): uff this girl is very innocent chulbuli n yes hot sexy cute charming beautiful at the same time. ... her electrifying dimple smile can give u peace n also strength to run a 25 km marathon. ... she is a black belt achiever in all kinds of martial arts. .. but no one knows about her black belt n past except shree n liza. ... although they know that she beats a person black and blue
[ Guys riya hasn't died in this story ...she is in coma ...from 6 months ...After her confession she went into coma ...]
she is a research specialist. ...has a habit of writing diary ... her parents died in a mysterious way or u can say they disappeared when she was just 8 yrs old ... shree is her best friend from childhood. ... He is like her elder brother. ...

Shreekant Sen aka shree [specky only for liza ] ( 25 yrs ) : he is definitely the most high tech person of the whole Mumbai . cute handsome boy but fears his bosses most ... fights with his childhood friend or u better say at least he thinks enemy liza all the time in office n wherever he meets her ...hates the name specky sen which liza has given him .

Liza D'Cruz aka liz ( lizard only for shree)(25 yrs ):beautiful sexy forensic expert of etf ...plays with bodies n organs like a child plays with his toy... best friend of Rii n shree too .fights with shree all the time. ...boys drool over her but are afraid of her slap which can cause a fracture in ur facial bones ... kind yet daring and yes sometimes goes on undercover missions if needed for etf...

Chandrakant Patil aka chhotu (27 yrs ) : only his name is chhotu otherwise he is a mountain. ... commando n encounter specialist of etf ...Loves food ...has a crush on a girl who comes at a departmental store near his house at 11:30 am every Sunday. ...Loves all the etf girls as his own sisters ... fears his bosses too much like shree ...He is also shree's best friend along with liza Rii ... ye char ki chaukadi pure etf ki jaan h /thi ...

Sakshi Anand (25 yrs ) : etf's new addition ...crime reporter ...looks beautiful n is a big chatter box... irritates everyone a lot ...is mad for arjun ... doesn't knows about riya ... can do anything to achieve her goal ...

GUYS until now I have been an active reader. ...This is my first story ever. ...plz is bachchi pe raham karna. ...aur ha plz eggs , tomatoes and shoes mat phekna mere upar as u know ki aaj kal mehengai kitni bad gayi h ...aur u r ha is story k beech me aapko kai serials k characters mil sakte h ...aur kahi pe ye bhi lag sakta h ki ye scene kisi aur story me bhi h to plz mujhe mat marna kyunki aap writers se hi to inspired hu me ...

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- neer


INDEX
CS n Prologue ---page 1
Part 1 ---page 3
Part 2 ---page 5
Part 3 ---page 7
Teaser for part 4 ---page 11
Part 4A ---page 11
Part 4B --- page 14
Teaser for part 5 --- page 16
Part 5 ---page 16
Teaser for part 6 --- page 19
Part 6 --- page 20
Teaser for part 7 --- page 24
Part 7 A --- page 26
Part 7B --- page 29
Part 7C --- page 32
Part 7D --- page 34
Part 7E --- page 39
Part 8 --- page 42
Part 9 --- page 44
Part 10 --- page 49
Part 11 --- page 51
Teaser for part 12 n important note --- page 57
Part 12 --- page 63
Teaser for part 13 --- page 69
Part 13 --- page 72
Peek in the future of this tale --- page 76




NOTICE > THIS STORY IS DISCONTINUED AND WILL NOT BE CONTINUED UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES Edited by dblackrubyneer - 8 years ago

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1993.ssg thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice CS
Continue soon
Is it a Ariya story???
Then pls pm me
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Awesome
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its ariya
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hmm interesting
welcome to Ariya's writers world


waiting to read the start ..so please cont..

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Originally posted by: SATRISHI

hmm interesting

welcome to Ariya's writers world


waiting to read the start ..so please cont..

ans thank u somuch for pm



Dii welcome k liye thanks. ... n thanks for commenting. ...
Aur aap thanks mat bolo ... bas order do ...will continue soonish
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Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Nice CS

Continue soon
Is it a Ariya story???
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Dear plz wait for the story ...I can't disclose that it is ariya or arakshi but I promise that I will be a thriller which can give u goosebumps...n thanks for comment Edited by neerajanariya - 9 years ago
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Awesome
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its ariya



Thanks dear ...I can't disclose that it's ariya or arakshi but wait for the chapters. ...
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It's awesome concept
Hope it's on Ariya
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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When you updt it
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nice  concept
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