For: PART 11
T, I think this is the first time I'm replying to this fic and I wasn't disappointed in the least! It wasn't even the mature content, but just the whole last section. It was powerful:
... my mother had always warned us of our bodies. She had told us how body could take over mind. How there can be a moment that overrides logic and reason between a man and a woman. She had wanted us to be safe, and be on our guards until the time came when we knew we won't regret it.
And here I had let my guards down. With a man whom I adored, but he was the man who was my namesake husband.
He wasn't my husband, he wasn't my lover.
I wasn't sure what he felt about me.
I wasn't sure if he needed me at all in his life.
Yet, I had shared the night with him, a night that completed me as a woman.
I didn't know if it was the need of bodies, or my lonely heart or just his moment of distress.
I did not regret it.
While I also now wonder what Abhi will decide and where this is going, I'm also happy for Pragya because neither is she blinded by the situation nor does she regret what happened - she doesn't NEED any regrets.
The last line was the BEST! I can't wait for the next update! 😊
Edited by Fanaah - 9 years ago
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