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Tia! Great update :)
I love how natural everything is. The people are written true to their character, but there isn't any excessive comedy or drama. Great work!
Glad you said that. That's how I want to write this story.
Tia! Great update :)
I love how natural everything is. The people are written true to their character, but there isn't any excessive comedy or drama. Great work!
Tia,that was an awesome part😛...
Abhi and pragya marriage went so fast and the details you described are great😊...
Abhi offered bed to Pragya...that is unbelievable😲...Waiting to see both in the same bed...😉
Thanks for the update😃...
Forgot to ask...Aliya and purab are there in the SS??
Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome
So Abhi and Pragya are married and negin their marital life. Both love their dearest one so much that they can do anything for the sake of their happiness.can't wait to read more.Pm me when you update next chapter
i'm glad for this transparent wedding- no misunderstandings!
continue soon
Originally posted by: -Martinski-
HOW I WISH THIS WAS THE CASE!!! Well written twin!!
And abhi offering the bed first PHEW ! ;)
Originally posted by: -Trishh-
Tia, omg I seriously love this so much! It's so realistic, but at the same time I love the dialogues!! One thing about me is that I always love good dialogues and pay attention to the wording of everything!! So love it in that aspect as well! And I see so much of the Prags and Abhi that I see/wanna see in the show!!
Originally posted by: putturani
Tia! I love this so much! Your story is progressing so well. It's very slice-of-life, nothing melodramatic happens but you can picture it in your head. Have you read Farhad Zama's books? This story reminds me of that. I like this strong and sassy Pragya who is also realistic and feels out of place in Abhi's world. I also like this Abhi with a sense of humour from the beginning. I hope they end up on the same bed soon! I really loved the bit where she cries upon leaving her mother's house. And when she gets distracted by Abhi in his towel! 🤣
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