your stories are addictive- time pe dose chahiye 😉
Res!
Yo I love this story sooo much. Such an exciting chapter. Liked the bit w the lawyer and pragya overwhelmed and disinterested in his money. LOL at his shaadi barbaadi speech! So many awesome details like the disapproving celebrity queue and number of house helpers. LOVED abhi complaining abt being made to wait to go to his room. And towel moment haaaye!!!Fantastic work! Mujhe aur chahiye tiyuuu aur dedo naa jaldi ^_^Or, you know, not jaldi. Jabhi aayega, I'll be happy!!!
tia this story is so realistic no misunderstandings
i love the details you give like the number of helpersand towel moment haaye!!!!i love your sassy pragyacontinue soon
Originally posted by: simsim25
UFFF TIA!
Yay so the wedding is done and done for good. No escape for both of them now!! Loved the way you started with Pragyas wish! "All I had wanted was my own little family, an understanding husband and two kids I would raise in my home sweet home." That is exactly what every girl wants so why not Pragya!
The car scene when Abhi made her smile made me smile too! Such cute moments! I am loving this without any misunderstandings and Tanu is not part of the picture!
It was emotional to read Pragya leaving her house! It sums up how once a girl is married she isn't expected to come back to her house, lovely lines used there as well! Especially loved this one - "So, basically I was leaving the house I lived for pretty much all my life, and that was unbearable."
All in all as I have always said I love this story and your writing! Great work Tia! <3
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