Will Love You Till Eternity -AR SS- 29.Dec.14

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Will Love You Till Eternity - An AR SS -

Hello Everyone
Here is another short story which I write for blog competition...
I won 4 awards to this story so hope u all would love it...
Enjoy...
Take care...


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Part 6 (Last Part) : Page 12



Posting Credit Goes to Rihoo Haws




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My other works are here

Always With You

Always With You Thread #1 Completed

Always With You Thread #2Completed

Back to MY JAAN(AR FF) Completed

Tera Pyaar Mein AR SS Completed

My heart doesn't beat without u (AR SS) Completed

Will Love You Till Eternity Completed

Love Gets Its Destiny Completed

And We are Made To Be One mine and Anamika's concept

Aadha Aadhura Tera Bina(AR FF)

Index for AR OS

Forming AR index


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Will Love You Till Eternity - An AR SS -

Character Sketch...


Armaan - As U All Now His Character...A Charmer.A Heart-Robber. A
Lucky Go Man Yet Concerned Most. A Sensitive Yet Careless On
Front... A Romeo Yet A Playboy To Others... A Super doctor And
Also A Patient Too... That Caused Him To Leave His Riddhima...
His Everything Behind... But No.One Knows Where He Is...


Riddhima - A Loving Caring And Sensitive Girl... No Brittle In
Emotions Area... She Is A Very Lively Girl But Her Past Made Her
Heartless And Rude Which Was So Not Her... But Situation Change
The People... Always Lost In Her Pain... Talks Only About Work Else
Quiet...


Shashank - A Total Hitler Of People... Care For His Image More Then
Anything... Once Loved Riddhima More Then Himself But Things Got
Changed...

Padma - A Mother With All The Bad Fate... Every-Time Er Destiny Play
Game With Her... She Never Felt The Happiness In Her Life For A
Time Period In Stability...


Sidhant Modi - The Character Will Be Revealed By The Running Of
Story...

Some Character Of Old Gang Will Be Introduced Too In Story With Need...



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The Scene Began With The Crowd Around Sanjeevni Reception And Some Photos Were Spread All Around...
People Standing There Were Gossiping...
Riddhima Was Having Tears And Looking At The Ground Where Photos Were Spread And Was All Numb... Dr.Keerti Standing There Was Shocked Herself... Sid Having All Innocent Face... And Many Nurses And Ward-boys Were Also There...

Sr.Stella. - Ye Toh Hona Hi Tha... Jaisi Maa Hain Beti Bhi Toh Waise Hi Hogi...
Dr.Keerti - Bus... Sr.Stella... Aapko Pata Bhi Hain Aap Kya Bol Rahi Hain ... Sharam Nahi Aati Aapko Aise Bolte Hua...

Sr.Stella - Mujhe Kyun Sharam Aayegi Dr.Keerti Jab Dr.Riddhima Ko Aisa Karte Hua Sharam Nahi Aai Toh Mujhe Bolne Mein Kyun Aayegi...
Dr.Keerti - Ye Aap Kya Bole Ja Rahi Hain ...
Sr.Stella - Mein Vo Hi Bol Rahi Hun Dr.Keerti Jo Sab Dekh Rahe Hain... Ki Dr.Riddhima And Dr.Sidhant...Lonavla Mein Akele Ek Hotel Mein... Ek Room Mein ... Ek Bed Par...
Dr.Keerti - Bus Bahut Hua...
Sr.Stella - Aap Mujhe Par Kyun Chila Rahi Hain ...

Shanky Coming From Back Spoke...

Shanky - Kya Ho Raha Hain Yahann...

Shanky Came Inside The Crowd To See What Was Happening And When He Came And Saw The Reason He Was Dumb Found... When He Look Up At Riddhima... He Saw A Person Behind Riddhima Going Week On Her Knew And Losing Senses And Was About To Fall...

Shanky Run Towards The Person To Give The Person His Support...
Seeing Shanky Run Past Riddhima She Turn Back And Saw Her Mother Padma Fall In Her Fathers Arm... She Came Out Of Her Shocked State... And Tried To Hold Her Mother When Shanky Show Her A Hand To Stay Away...

Riddhima Felt As She Have Lost Everything Today... Her Love Had Already Left Her... Her Image That Was Of A Shy And Loving Girl Till Now Has Been Broken Apart And Now She Is Seen With The Eyes Of Being Prostitute... And The Only Support She Had Till Now Also Showed Hand Towards Her... Her Parents Have Shown Their Back Towards Her... What Wrong Have She Done In All This...


Riddhima - Papa...
Shanky - Maat Bolo Mujhe Papa... Nahi Hun Mein Tumhara Papa...
Riddhima - Plz Papa Aisa Maat Kahiye... Mein Ne Kuch Nahi Kiya Hai Papa... Mera.. Mera Yakin Kariye Papa...
Shanky - Mein Ne Bola Na Mujhe Papa Maat Bolo... Aaj Tumhare Karan Padma Ka Ye Haal Hai... Chali Jao Mera Saamne Se...

Riddhima - Aisa Maat Kaho Papa... Aap Log Hi Toh Mera Aapne Ho... Mein Kahan Jaungi... Plz Papa Meri Bat Suniya... Jo Aap Kahenga Mein Vo Karungi Par Plz Mujhe Aise Dur Maat Kariya... Waise Hi Sab Akela Chod Kar Ja Chuke Hain Mujhe Plz Papa...


After Some Time Riddhima Crying Sitting Near Padma's Leg And Shashank Holding Padma's Hand And A Saline Was Attached To Padma's Hand...
Shashank Goes Somewhere And Came Back After Sometime...

Riddhima - Papa
Shanky - Riddhima Agar Tum Chati Ho Ki Meri Izzat Par Koi Daag Na Lage... Tumhari Maa Ko Kuch Na Ho Toh Tumhe Dr.Sidhant Se Shaadi Karni Padegi...
Riddhima - Shaaa...Shaadi... Papa Aaj Jante Hain...
Shanky - Riddhima Tumhe Chose Karna Padega... Tum Shaadi Karogi Ya Phir Tumhe Ghar Chodna Padega...
Riddhima - Papa...
Shanky - Riddhima Ye Hi Mera Phisla Hain...
Riddhima - Ghar Toh Mera Ko Chodna Hi Padh Raha Hain Na Papa... Apni Marji Se Ya Shaadi Karke...Mein Taiyaar Hun Papa... Ajar Aapko Issei Se Khusi Millti Hain Toh Ye Hi Theek Hain...

Riddhima - Par... Dr.Sidhant Ki Shaadi Mujhe Se Nahi Sir Ek Body Se Hogi.. Ek Jinda Laash Se...

Sid Who Was Standing On Door And Listening To All This Got Burned In Anger... And Goes Out Of Sanjeevni And Left Taking His Car...

He Goes To Pub And Meet His Friend...
Raj - Hey Sid... Kaisa Hain...
Sid Just Nodded His Head In Yes...
Raj - Kya Hua Tera Chera Itna Uthra Hua Kyun Hain...
Sid - Kuch Nahi Yaar Bus Aise Hi...
Raj - Arye Bata Na... Kya Hua... Aab Toh Tujhe Khush Hona Chaiye... Jaisa Tune Socha Tha Waisa Hi Ho Raha Hai.....
Sid - Hain Ye Toh Hain.. Par Vo Riddhima...
Raj - Chod Na... Thode Time Mein Vo Khud Tera Pass Ayegi...
Sid - Hain Aana Toh Padega Shaadi Jo Pakki Ho Gai Hain...
Raj - Vo Toh Hona Hi Tha... Aab Toh Tum Roj Usse Jaise Chaho Chu Sakte Ho... Tum Toh Ek Din Ke Liya Bol Raha Tha.. Ab Toh Roj Teri Raat Maajedar Hogi...
Sid - Hain Agar Mujhe Last Moment Par Na Camera Yaad Aata Toh Sara Maaj Kir Kira Ho Jata...
Raj - Bahut Baada Kamina Hain Tu.. Koi Nahi Bol Sakta Ki Is Itna Maasum Chehre Ke Piche Aisa Inssan Hoga... Waise Kya Plan Tha Tera...
Sid - Hain Yaar... Vo Riddhima... Vo Bhenji Toh Room Lock Kar Ke So Gai Thi... Mein Khidki Se Aandar Gaya... Aur Uske Bed Par Let Kar Intimate Photo Click Ki ... Vo Toh Bechari Soi Padi Thi Usse Toh Kuch Pata Bhi Nahi ... Mein Ne Photo Aise Li Hain Jaise Vo Aur Mein... Kisi Ko Nahi Pata Ki Hamare Bich Kuch Bhi Nahi Hua...Aab Toh Jo Uss Raat Mein Nahi Kar Paya Uske Sojane Ke Karan Vo Shaadi Ke Baad Roj Karunga...

And Both Friend Left Out The Evil Laugh...
Raj - Teri Toh Nikal Padi Yaar.. Mera Bhi Kuch Kar De Yaar...
Sid - Pareshan Kyun Hota Hain... Tu Bhi Aa Jaiyo.. Kabhi Tu Kabhi Mein...

Here Riddhima Have Lost Everything... No One Was There To Understand Her.. To Hear Her Pain Her Cries.. To Believe Her... To Consol Her... Her Every Each And Ever Relation Was Lost...

And On Other Side Sid And Raj Were Making Their Evil Future Plans And Having Fun... There Was No Guilt No Shame Was There On Their Face...



Next Day
In Sanjeevni...


As Riddhima Entered Seeing Her Everyone Starts To Talk After She Pass Them... But She Hear Everyone's Cheap Talks... But Even Then Controlling Her Tears She Comes On .. As She Came To Treat People Here Not To Hear Talks... So Avoiding The Gossips Going On About Her She Went To Her Cabin...

She Opened A Drawer Pulled Out A Photo Frame From It...
And Seeing The Person In Photo Staring Back At Her.. Made Her Emotional... And The Tears Flowed From Her Eyes...

Riddhima - Kyu Armaan Kyun Chod Kar Gaye Tum Mujhe... Itne Mhaine Mein Ye Sochti Rahi Ki Mera Hi Pyaar Mein Kaami Thi Jo Tum Mujhe Meri Condition Jaane Ke Baad Chod Kar Chale Gaye... Mein Tum Se Nafrat Karna Chahati Thi Vo Sab Jaan Kar Par Vo Bhi Nahi Kar Paai... Tumse Nafrat Karne Ke Karan Mein Tum Se Aur Pyaar Kar Bethi... Nahi Jaanti Thi Jitna Bhulna Chahungi Tumhe Uthna Hi Tum Mujhe Yaad Aaoge... Uthna Hi Pyaar Karne Lagungi Tumse...

Par Jab Kuch Dino Pehle Mein Ne Maa Papa Ki Baatein Suni Tab Mujhe Pata Chala Ki Tum Mujhe Meri Kaami Ke Karan Nahi Chod Kar Gaye The... Tum Toh Mujhe Aapne Bimaari Ke Karan Choda Tha... Kyun Armaan Kyu... Aur Jab Mujhe Pata Chala Ki Tumne Hi Dr.Alina Ko Bheja Tha.. Jo Duniya Ki Best Doctor Hain Mera Jaise Cases Ke Liya Toh Mera Pyaar Aur Bhi Bhad Jaya Armaan... Tumne Aapni Saari Saving Se Dr.Alina Se Mera Treatment To Kara Diya... Par Aapna Kyun Nahi Karwaya Tumne Armaan... Tum Ne Kisi Ko Bhi Nahi Pata Chalne Diya Ki Dr.Alina Ko Tumne Bheja Tha Mera Liya... Aur Aisa Show Karaya Jaise Kisi Coincidence Se Takra Gai Ho Vo Mera Se... Par Mein Bhi Tumhari Basket Hun Armaan Mein Ne Pata Laga Liya Tha Ki Dr.Alina Ko Tumne Hi Bheja Hain... Par Kya Tum Aab Mera Saath Nahi Chahate... Armaan Bus Ek Baar Bus Ek Baar Tu Mujhe Mil Jao Phir Mein Kabhi Bhi Tumhe Chod Kar Nahi Jaungi... Chaeye Tum Kaise Bhi Halat Mein Kyun Na Ho... Please Armaan...

Dekho Aaj Log Kya Kya Bol Rahe Hain Tumhari Riddhima Ko... Jab Tum Hote The Toh Koi Mera Se Kuch Bhi Nahi Bol Pata Tha... Tum Kisi Ko Bhi Mujhe Bolne Nahi Dete The... Aur Koi Galti Se Bol Jata Tha Kuch Toh Tum Hote The Toh Sab Ka Saamna Kar Leti Thi Mein Par Aab... Aab Tum Nahi Ho... Tumhari Basket Ki Strength Tumse Hi Thi Armaan... Please Armaan Wapas Aa Jao Aapne Basket Ke Pass... Plzzz... Bilkul Aakeli Paadh Gai Hain Tumhari Basket... Laut Aao Armaan Laut Aao...


Here When Sid Entered Again The Talk Starts...
But He Was Least Effected With All The Talks... As The Image Of The Girls Are What Stands On Stake In Everyone's Eyes... Boys Doesn't Have To Go Through Any Torture In All The Fault Even When Boys Are The One Talking Away The Image And Pure Souls Of Girls Away... Even Then People Says That "That Specific Girl Suffering From All The Torture She Must Have Done Something That Boy Forced Her..." Is There Any Girl Who Willingly Goes To A Boy And Then Face All The Bad In The World All Alone...

And A Girl Like Riddhima Who Never Let Even Armaan Do Anything... Never Let Him Too Close Before They Ill Be Married... With Whom She Was Madly In Love And With Whom She Was In Relation From Last 3 Yrs... Even When She Know That Armaan Was The Person Who Have Put His Life At Stake To Make Sure She Is Safe From A Single Scratch Too... When She Never Let Her Life Her Armaan That Close Then How Can People Think Of Her That Way... These Are The Say People Who Use To Adore Her For Her Mature Yet Innocent Behaviour... Who Use To Adore Her And Love Her Because Of Her Nature ... Today Those Same Peple Commenting On Her...
Can I Be A Possible For A Girl Like Her To Do Such A Thing...


Hope u all would be liking the parts...
Parts would be posted every Sunday or Monday, once a week...
Enjoy... Leave ur feedbacks and like :)


With Love,
Aayushi
Edited by Aayoo.PM.Id - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Awesome awesome Aaayooo
Love it muwaahhh :*
Sid toh hai hi kamina...
Aur Shashank se toh yehi expected hai...
Hope Armaan jaldi waapas aaye ;)
continue super soon...
take care <3
Love u derrr saraaa :D
Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago
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awesome and little emotional
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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awesome part
yeh sid kutta kamina insaan
armaan kaha hai
i agree with ur last para nobody understands a girl but instead blames her
post next part soon
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and yeah what about AWU uska update kab milega
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superb aayu...
loved it :D
muuahhh :*

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AWSOME !!!! AMAZING !!!!!!! FANTASTIC !!!!!!
it was superb part but little emotional too.
my poor ridhz she is suffering so much nd tje scene where she talk wid armaan pic was so beautiful nd touching.
that sid he is a jerk, kitna kamina h. nd uske plan sunke to i felt like killing him.
i hope armaan will come soon nd teach this jerk sid a gud lesson. do update soon
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nice star man.u portrayed ridz emotions very well.ek armaan vapas anedo kameena sidka toh aiseki tesi kardengi.waiting for more.
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Amazing start...just waiting for Armaan's entry badi majedar halat hogi Sid ki uske baad.
Do update soon eagerly waiting to read aage ki story ;)
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