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U,me,aur'?
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You are my love
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SS-Strangely in love.
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Geetanjali.
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Os-tum mera pehla pyaar ho.
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meri khwabon ki duniyan
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Part 7
In temple
Naintara was thinking to brainwash dadi..but dev was like a hurdle for her..dev was always beside dadi n protecting her..he was worried for her health as she looked so much worn out bcoz of their wedding n morning hype ..
Dadi closed her eyes n folded her hands before babaji..
Dadi:oh god..u have been with me everytime in all my ups n downs..thanks for giving me everything..i wished 2 see my dil's before I leave this earth..aapne meri prarthana sunli.first dil turned to be maans past lover..n for maan... mei maan keliye yesi patni nehi maanga..i want a wife for him.who can take care of him love him...not a girl like her..aapne yesa kyun kiya..n what should I do now..i couldn't take any decion..show me a way god..
She prayed for her grandsons happiness n came out with heavy heart..
When we believe in god he will show us the way..
When all came out after darshan..a baba came to her..
Baba:what happened..itni udaas kyun ho..babaji per vishwash haina..
Dadi looked at his face..the peace she got looking at him made her fold her hands before him..he is a rep of god..she believed it..
Dadi:aap tho sab jaanthi haina baba..phirbhi poochrahi ho mein kyun udaas hoon..
He smiled..
Baba:haan sab jaanthi hoon mei..isilye poochrahi hoon udaas kyun ho..if u believe., babaji jo bhi kartha hai uske peeche koi waja hai..then y u r worrying..?
He questioned her back n made dadi think about his words..
Dadi:but..
She looked around n saw him vanished..how he came how he went no one knew..
Dadi got what she wants..
Even when they are back dev was inbetween nt n dadi ..she couldn't do much..
They all had their lunch on way n got back to the marriage hall n got the shock at entrance..
There was a board kept man singh khurana weds geet handa..
Nts earth slipped away from her feet..so was pammi's too..the relatives started to talk about it..dadi rushed to maans room..
Dadi:maan..
Rano n mohinder:maaji aaplog aagayi..how was the darshan..
Dadi ignored them n looked maan..he was coolly turning off his lappy n stood up..
Maan:dadi..im here only..
Dadi:maan whats going on..woh bahaar..
Maan:what u saw is r8..
Rano:maaji..kya hua..
Before Maan says anything manager came inside followed by few more staffs..they all kept many parcels n left the room..
Manager:sir..whatever u asked is there..check once sir..its all of ur choice...n say if I hv missed anything..
Maan:ok u may go..i ll call u later if I need anything..
Maan:opened the boxes n took the things out..even geets parents were shocked seeing how serious maan has taken the things..
It was bridal dress for both maan n geet..n mangal sutr..some jewels etc..
Few dress toys n cars for aarav also were there..
Maan:panditji will come by 7pm..dadi..check things if I have missed anythings..n if u want to do any changes u can..
Dev:but bro..yeh sab..
Dadi:y man..y u r spoiling ur life..
Maan:no dadi..u want me to get married n im fulfilling ur wish..maang barne se shadhi puri nehi hothi..i know..isiliye puri rituals ke saath aaj meri shadhi hogi..so yours n geets parents to see the marriage of mine n their daughters will be fulfilled too..waise shadhi tho life mein ek bhar hi hotha hai..
He looked at nt..who is dumpstuck n wanted to stop this marriage now..
Nt:veerji...u r doing in pity..
She tried 2 reason something..
Maan:u must be happy for ur sister saali ji..ab aap dono behen khuranas ki bahu ho..u wanted to save her name..n im exactly doing that saaliji..n ur sister geet..my wife will be the elder bahu of khuranas..
He stressed the word saali everytime making nt fume more..n the word elder bahu was adding ghee in fire she has again pushed to second place in her in laws too..geet taking the first place which she didn't think before...no it must not happen..kya karoon..
Nt:dadi..aap tho boliye..yeh sab teek nehi hai..
Dadi looked man for a while n thought babas words..
Dadi:jo horaha hai hone do bahu..if man decides something he wont change..n I trust my babaji..geeta mei bhi yahi kaha gaya hai..whats going is all for gud..i think my maans life too will change by geet..what if geet too gets cured after marriage..n my maan gets his full happiness...
That's another shock for nt..nehi..no..it must not happen..
She never thought dadi too will support maan..
Dadi: sab apni kamreimein chaliye aur aaram kijiye..shayam ko milthei hain..aur rano lets look what they have prepared..
Rano had happy tears..dadi too accepted for marriage..n she happily went with her..
Rano:geet ki papa..aap bhi chaliye..aapko bhi kuch kaam hai..
Mohinder followed her
As geets parents he too has to fulfil his duties as much as he can..its their dream coming true..n he would savour it for life time..whatever happens later they will face it..but for now they are brides parents..
Nt n pammi stamped their foot n left the room..dev was still unaware of their intensions..maan smirked..
Dev:bro..kya aap jo karrahi hai wo teek hain..woh geet..is haal mein shadhi..
Maan:I know u love me dev..but trust me..i really want to go with this..noone is forcing me..its my decision..u must also be happy for me...go n take rest..n for u geet is bhabhi..ok..
Dev nodded his head n left..
After dev left rano came in..she rubbed a little haldi on his cheeks n applied the same in geets cheeks..then she took mehandi cone which she bought with her..she took sleeping geets hands..it was already adorned with mehandi for devtara's marriage..she wrote something..
Maan neared her n saw his name written..
Rano:yeh bhi ritual hai beta..haldi and mehandi dono hogayi ab..
She smiled n left..
He doesn't know why he is feeling peace now..aarav n geet sleeping in his bed..he sat next to them ..he felt like his life is completed with them..
Maan went n checked outside..handa's n khuranas both side relatives are in full swing in preparing the wedding..he smiled n came inside..
Soon maan's phone rang..
Adi:maan.sir..
Maan:yes adi..whats the status of work which I gave u..
Adi:s..i..rr..
Maan:I want the news about armaan mallik
Adi:sir..he is missing for last 2 yrs..he didn't resign the job too nor get any settlement from us..
Maan:aadi..a person who is no more cant come n get settlements..even his wife is is dead so how can u expect it..
Adi:si..si..r.how do u know..
Maan:becoz armaan is my wifes jiju..what I asked n what u r searching..does he had any enemies..n what about other staffs details..n the bridge collapsed details..
Adi is shocked hearing maans wife..yeh kese ..how ..
Adi:y..es..sir...woh sir..ji..sir
He stammered
Maan:adi..
His stern voice made adi to come out of shock..
Adi:sir..the staffs who left us is working in other places..but only one person is in high level..his name is rahul..i couldnt guess how he reached this height..
Maan smirked:so his status has reached a height..he has become rich so sudden..
Adi:yes sir..
Maan:how is he connected to armaan..
Adi:he is assistant store keeper sir..n worked in both of our projects under armaan which got collapsed
Maan:don't u think its fishy adi..
Adi:j..ji..s.ss.ir..
Maan:ok..send some men behind him n ask them to gather info of his every works..including his bank dealings n land purchased..who he met n still meeting whatever he is I want 2 know about him..
Adi:k..isliye sir..
Maan:I doubt is he behind armaans death n our loss..
Adi:g..g..ot..it sir..s..i..r..e..k baath..poochoon..
Maan:I know..what u r going to ask..yes im married..enuf..now go n do what I told u to do..kal milthe hain..
Adi:c..ccongrats sir..yes sir..but how sir..
maan:jese sabko hotha hai..
Maan smiled at phone..adi was a very humble person..n trustworthy too..but he always stammers bcoz of fear..n he loves to see adi fearing him..his face looks worth watching..
It was evening aarav woke up first..
Maan took him in his arms n gave him chocolates n variety of doll cars..aaravs smile widened ..his eyes twinkled in joy..he unwrapped one choco n started to eat..messing maan too..he noticed maans hand in bandage..he frowned..he took maans hands n kissed it tenderly n blow air on it like his breathe will cure his injury..maan was so touched with this small gesture..a small heart too feels his pain when he doesn't have any pain now...he kissed aarav on both cheeks..n gave one more chocolate unwrapping it.
aarav remembered something..
Aarav:maa ko..maa ko..
Maan left him down..he ran to geet n sat next to her..he took one choco n fed to sleeping geet..she woke up with the sweet taste lingering in her mouth..
Maan looked at their bond..geet cares so much even in her unconscious state..n aarav..he wants geet for everything n want to shares his every things to her..both are pure by heart..innocence is oozing out from them..
Geet:baby..choco bohut achi hai..nani di thi kya..
Aarav:aaav ki papa..
Maan just stood rooted in his place..he called him papa..that word papa brought him a fatherly feeling..he can feel himself changing.his stone heart feeling so light n lively now...geets presence in his life has brought many good things in life..maa papa.n .aarav..
He promised himself to keep both happy..
Geet looked at maan with a cute pout..
Maan:kya hua geet..
Geet rubbed her stomach n said
Geet:patiji..geet ko bhook lagi..
Same time rano came inside with snacks n hot drinks for all..
Naina too accompanied her..she wants to do something to stop this marriage..but her mind is blocked as maan has flopped her plan..n from that time her mind has stopped working.. dev too came in..
Maan sipped his coffee..n looked at nt n dev..both face showed the disappointment..but both had diff reasons..one on love n other in hate..
Maan:saaliji..
Nt turned n looked maan...he had a mischievuous smile on his face
Maan:saaliji..u love ur sister right
Nt..h.aan..of course..
She couldn't find the reason why maan is asking it..
Maan:as there is no beautician ..i want u to dress my wife..hmm ur loving sister for our marriage..i want to see how u dress up her.which will clearly show how much u love her..
Nt:what?
She screamed ..n anger was visible..
Nt cooled seeing dev n rano looking at her..
Nt:I mean..how..
Maan enjoyed her face turning pale..
Maan:what..how ..means I said in simple words only saaliji...didnt u understand..ok..i repeat..get ur sister ready for marriage..
Rano:beta..i ll do it..
Maan:maa..aapko bohut saara kaam hogi..so let my saaliji get my wife ready..kyun saaliji wont u do it for ur loving sister's marriage..
Dev:don't worry bro..she will do..she is gud in it..ur bride will look beautiful on ur marriage..
Dev gave his words..
Nt:hmm..ye..i 'll..
Rano:beta..u get ready..i ll take her to our room..
Maan:no maa..i m going to dadi's room ..u go n dress up aarav n urself..saaliji will getgeet ready here..
Nt couldn't say anything ..she was trapped..
Maan gave the dress n jewels to naina..
Maan:samhalke..i want my bride beautiful..n all relatives will also come to know how much u r perfect in ur work..
He said in whisper that's audible for her only..
Maan:dev come lets go..ladies need their space..
Maan gave rano a packet..this is for aarav..
Rano saw a beautiful sherwani in it..other than rano n mohinder none had brought things for aarav..not even pammi n nt..
Rano:thank u beta..
Maan:ab wo mera beta hai maa..so don't say thank u to me..
He took his packet n went to dadi's room..
He still couldn't trust nt..so he sent dadis cousin sharadha to his room till he freshup n get ready..
It's a silly excuse but this will make nt do her work..someone watching her will make her behave..
Maans room..
Nt opened all packets n found all beautiful..from the bridal dress to jewellary everything was outstanding..her insides burned in jealousy..
Geet:maa..yeh sab bohut achi hai..haina..yeh naina ki hai..
Rano:nehi beta..tumhari..
Geet:meri..meri kyun..
Rano:aaj tumhari shadhi haina..
Geet scratched her head..
Geet:shadhi..jese naina ka hua..waise..
Rano was in tears..she doesn't even know what is marriage..
Rano:haan..yesterday u asked us na..u too want to be like naina n go round round around fire..
Geet clapped her hands..
Geet:haiya..geet ki shadhi..geet ki shadhi..
Aarav too clapped n said gee ki shayi
Rano chuckled..n corrected him..aarav:maapapa ki shadhi.
Aarav:mapapa ki shayi..(shadhi)
Rano took geet first n freshed her up..she changed her to the bridal dress n made her sit before the mirror..
Same time sharadha too came inside..
Rano:geet..u must sit quietly n let naina do ur hair n face makeup..if u are a good girl I ll give u one big box of choco..
Geet nodded in yes ..a box full of chocolates is more for her..she gave a cheeky smile
Rano:naina I ll get aarav ready..
Naina:hmm ji badi ma..
When rano went naina combed geets hair roughly which brought tears in geets eyes..
geet:aah..
Sharadha:naina bahu..what r u doing..have patience..wo bachi hai..u know better than us about geets situation...
Sharadha is also a strong believer of god..n she too thought whats going on is gods wish..n they have to accept it..she had no grudges on geet..but she pitied geet..
She was beautiful..educated..but god has taken her mental stability..
Naina:ji dadi..
Naina:di..sry di..mei ab teek se karthi hoon
She told sweetly..n started to do her hair n make up..she weared geet the jewels n all..
As sharadha was looking on naina she was conscious n really did a gud work on geet..
When rano entered she couldn't believe her eyes..geet was looking so beautiful..
Dadi too came n checked geet..she too was stunned seeing her look angelic..
Geet:mama..see ..she rolled herself n showing how naina has got her ready..
Geet:mama see .im looking .gud..mei achi..bohut achi..
She giggled looking herself in mirror..
Rano took kajal n applied in back of geets ears..
Rano:meri beti ko kisiki nazar na lagi..
Aarav pulled rano..
Rano:what aarav..
Aarav:aav ko bhi..
She put for him too..
He then jumped to geet..
Oh !!! his maa is looking beautiful..
N geet too was looking aarav who was loking like a doll in that sherwani..
She was wearing a white n red choli..whereas aarav too was wearing same colour sherwani..
Geet:baby..same same..red red..white white..
Aarav looked at his dress n geets..haan maa bhi same same same..
Rano:geet beta..take blessings from both dadi's..
Geet bent down n touched their feet..
Dadi:u r so beautiful..
Geet:haina..geet achi..
Her eyes twinkled in innocence n joy..
Sharadha too blessed geet..
Sharadha:let god be with u always beta..bohut sundar lagrahi ho..pari jese..
Geet:meri naam pari nehi hai dadi..woh meri padosi ka naam hai..mera naam geet hai..
Sharadha laughed..
s:I know u r geet..i said u look like an angel..
Geet:angel..
Rano:geet..angel means beautiful
Geet:geet beautiful..
Aarav:maa beuful..
Both kids were having masti..
Rano came to naina n kissed her forehead.showering her love on her..
Naina felt something stirring inside her..
Rano:thank u so much beta..u have proved ur love for geet..ab geet tumhari zimadhari hai..
Rano:ja beta jaldi ready hoke aana..
She left soon..
Pammi was waiting in her room..dev was with maan.
Pammi:where were u tara..
Naina:doing beautician work for that geet..arghh..maan..he flopped everything...kya socha mei..if he marries he will leave her..n then we will get all properties.he will be ashamed to say geet as wife...but no..he is marrying her before all..puri riti riwaaz ke saath..n he is going 2take her home..he told im 2nd..again she got the first place..im nothing..nothing..again I lost before that geet..
She threw the bangles on dresser annoyingly
Pammi:ok..ab jo horaha hai..hone do..we cant stop..but I have already planned something..lets see how maan escapes from it..
Naina:maa..aap maanko jaanthi nehi..i too took him lightly..but he is a shark..i heard from dev man can overcome any situation if he decides..
Pammi:that may be in business..but this is his personal life..it will matter to him...
Naina took a very beautiful dress n weared it..she started to do her make up..
Nt:I want to look beautiful than her..all were praising her..
Pammi:u r looking beautiful dear..
Soon,they were called as pandit came..
Maan sat in the mandap n started doing the rituals..he looked around..everything was like he dreamed off..red n white combination of flowers ribbons n hangings..very simple yet beautiful..all relatives eyes on him..they are still not believing its happening..
Dadi n dev near him..mohinder looking after guests..
Soon the bride was called n man looked at the steps seeing the hustle bustle between the relatives..
All were murmering something amongst them..he turned n looked geet ..she was breath takingly beautiful..aarav was hugging her..rano was pulling him but he refused to come from his maa..
Maan:so this is the matter all murmering..
Rano made geet sit beside maan.aarav still in her arms..
Man:aarav..papa ke paas aaja..i ll get u one more car..
It worked n he jumped to his lap..
Rano adjusted geets dress n made her sit..
She whispered in her ears..
Rano:geet..behave like a gud girl..do what pandit says..
Geet:geet achi bachi maa.
All were looking at them..he gave a damn to them...they all are here bcoz of his name n fame
pandit said both to stand n do warmala..
.he give the garlands in both hands n asked them to exchange..maan gave aarav to mohinder n turned..geet thought it to be a game n she weared on maan before he thinks.he looked at his garland..she was so quick..before me...all laughed seeing maans look..even dadi giggled seeing maans plight
Then maan weared the garland on geet..
The rituals continued man wore her mangalsutr n filled her maang..they did their vows before fire..with aarav in hands..he is not ready to leave his papa now..he wants a new car now..
Everything was going gud..all felt relieved..rano n mohinder was truly happy n wished that god makes geet normal soon..not for them..but for maan..
Maan n geet took blessings from all..
But..pammi smirked while giving them ashirwad..which maan noticed too..her smile widened when she saw the manager rushing to maan with sweat..
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haha bad timing 2 stop..me😈
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEEPA DARLING (DD)
this part dedicated to you..may god bless you sweety..n u get all happiness through out the life..n keep on going with ur hard work..you are a pillar to all writers..love n hugs to u..
@ love 2 sona..will give u.me soon dear..sry..just i am confused with continuity..
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