MG OS..Tum mera pehla pyaar ho. part3/4 pg1/7NOV12

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Hai friends...this is my first attempt to write an os...dont except soon from me..😉..i'll give after 10 days...this will be my diwali bonus to u all...wait till that  n enjoy the charactors n pictures...this os..u will see a different maan n geet from my all ffs..when i started to think about this os i did not think of dedicating ..but now its dedicated to Yakkali Padma of fb...happy birthday dear...
n this os dedicated to shruthe ajay for making me lovely banners..love u dear...
 
 the words i am using if hurted someone pls i am sorry for it..its not my intension..i m trying to say the positive side only...
this is for those brave peoples,who takes brave steps to marry n accept the partners with whole heart..n love them till eternity..
 
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CHARACTERS
 
 

Maan singh khurana

Age::29 yrs ..

 Occupation: doctor..specialist in plastic surgeries..a vey well known plastic surgeon all over the world..

Nature: very helpful to others'kind hearted'running many trusts , orphanage, old age homes, hospitals n matrimony centres for special persons who cant find pairs becoz of only reason,they are blind,deaf,handicapped like that..schools n music academy for them'

his speciality is he never asks fees from the patients'whatever they give he will take it with smile..the patients who ever approached him can be assured that they will be soon to their normal life..the patients can knock his door without timing..if its night or morning..he will never get irritated'this softness n tender heart was liked by all patients.he has achieved many heights n has been awarded  by all countries..still he is down to earth...he never gets angry on others ,but he will be highly irritated with only one that is his father  ..its not like he doesn't respect his father..the topic he brings makes maan irritated'

marriage'maans only aim is to marry a girl,who will be a special girl .but maans father was stubborn..he doesn't want maan to marry a physically retorted girl ..this difference is the one which makes  stiffness between the two..

hobby:if he get time,he will be doing painting..that too only a pair of two brown eyes,which he saw 14yrs before..

suraj singh khurana, father of maan..

age:55 yrs..

occupation: taking care of maans trust n others.

Nature: very supportive to maan..he was always with him for whatever maan did..he never questions for spending money for trusts..he wants maan to marry a girl who is physically fit..he cant accept maans ambition nor could  support him.as a father he wants best for his son...so,only maan is still an eligible bachelor'

Work: only to search match for maan..

Nakul:

The servant of khurana's from the time maans mom died..he is treated as family member than a servant..

This three make the family..there simplicity can be seen by the way they are living..though maan has crores of money..they still live in a 2 bed room old house..which was  built by suraj singh khurana's dad's..they have renovated it..still compared to other peoples of their status,they are very simple'.

*************************************************************************************geet

geet handa

Age:27 yrs..

Profession: working as a teacher in a school'

Nature:kind hearted..belonging to a middle class.she finished her b.com n b.ed by scholar ship..she takes tuition for kids around her house in free .as they cant afford money..she is fond of social works n collects funds for charity homes..she helps them in all ways that she could'

Marriage is the only word she hates now..every week end someone will come to see her..having nice tea time,they will ask for a huge amount of dowry..they will say no to the alliance..geet hates to stand before them like a doll dressed n kept in shops..she always kept quiet thinking about her parents respect..after the groom left,she will fight with them..she will agree to marry a man who loves her innerself..not her looks n money..but the scene will repeat again.. geet is controlling her anger'she is now a hidden volcano can spill lava any second..

Hobby:classical dancer..n does performances in free for whoever asks to collect funds for charity homes..according to her dance is passion n she wont sell it for money..

Mohinder handa..

Father of geet..

Age:54 yrs..

Occupation:a clerk in a private company..his salary is enough only for the needs of his house..

Rano handa

Mother of geet..

Age:50 yrs

Occupation:home maker..n she knew how to run family within the budget of money  given by her husband..

 

Mohinder n rano's only wish is to see their girl getting married..they cant afford dowry what the  grooms family are expecting n geets marriage was getting delayed for past 6 yrs..which are making them worry..living in a small rental house,which has only a kitchen,bedroom n a living room..but they were happy in their world other than the worry of geets marriage..

PART 1
 

KHURANA HOUSE

Morning 10 AM..

Nakul knocked maans room..maan came only at 2 midnight..he had continuous patients n surgeries at night.. n came home late..

Suraj came :nakul why are u knocking his door..u know na he wont lock the door..

Saying he opened the door only to see Maan keeping a pillow over his ears n sleeping like a small child..nakul n suraj smiled seeing the scene..who can say,he is a dr..

Suraj came n sat next to maan removing the pillow..

Suraj:gud morning maan..

He kissed maans forehead..maan smiled in sleep..

Maan:gud morning dad..he said without opening his eyes n turned next side n slept..

Nakul came other side n sat there keeping the coffee tray on table..

Nakul:maan beta..uttona..

Maan:hmm..nakul kaka..pls sone dona..

Suraj n nakul chuckled seeing him crib like a small child'

suraj:ok..u sleep..i'll say dr.pinky to do the surgery instead of u..

maan sat up in bed in hurry..

maan:dad,dr.pinky..no..she has joined our hospital now only..how can she do operation..no ways I'm going to let her do..she is only assisting me..

suraj:then u must be in hospital in an hour..u know operation is scheduled at 11..now its 10..the nurses would have preparing the patient for operation now..

maan ran inside washroom brushing his teeth fast came out..nakul gave him his coffee..suraj took maans dress n gave him..maan kissed both of them..

maan:love u both..

he ran to washroom had a quick shower n came..nakul n suraj were there..maan was combing his hair,suraj started to feed him.

Maan:dad..aap ye kya...

Suraj:I know u r late n u will skip ur beakfast..have it this way ..

Maan opened his mouth n had his breakfast..nakul was taking his patient s files,coat n stethoscope'suraj gave maan water. He drank it..

Maan:dad u r going to matrimonial office na..newly appointed staff will cum today..

Suraj:yes beta..

Maan took his car keys..

The both came till his car keeping his things inside..

Maan:have a nice day dad..n u too kaka..

Suraj n nakul:u too beta..drive safe..

Maan:ji..

Their morning routine was mostly like this only.running behind maan'

Maan drove to hospital..he entered his cabin..

Nurse came inside

Nurse:sir.patient is ready for surgery..

Maan:OT is also ready na..where is dr. pinky ask her to be there..

Nurse:she is already there looking for last time preparations..

Maan:ok..u go..i'll cum..

After she went maan took his wallet n opened it..it had the picture of the eyes..which he had drawn in paper..

Maan:wish me gud luck..Almond eyes...bcoz of u I have reached this height..i am a successful dr..but no one knows..its u who made me strong to face this world..i want to see u once..where are u Almond eyes..i don't even know ur name..

He kissed the eyes in paper n went to OT..

The nurse helped him wearing dress ,gloves n mask..

He looked at the patient..a small boy his face n half side of shoulders n hands were burnt n looked horrible..

Maans hands instantly went on his right cheeks n feeling the skin of his..

The boy looked same like him

Pinky:dr.maan can we start..

Maan:hmm..yes..

He closed his eyes praying to god to help him do this operation success..

Maan started the operation..nurses helping him n pinky assisting him..she was looking at his work which he was doing perfectly with utter concentration. ..no tension,no fear.. nor hesitance for next move..

After several hrs he finished the operation..n all had smile on their faces..he showed thumps up n came out of OT..

The boys parents came running to him..their appearance said how poor they are..their tear stricken face showed the love for their boy..

Parents:dr.sahabji..humara beta kesa hai..

Maan:wo ab bilkul teek hai..uske chehre pe ab wo nishan nehi dikega..

They fell on his feet n maan jumped back..

Maan:ye aap kya kar rahe hain..aap dono mujhse bade ho..plz aisa mat kijiye..

Parents:par aap humara bagwan ho..bina kuch paise liye aapne humare bache ka ilaj kiya ..uski bachpan lota diya.. aap humare liye bhagwan se kam nahi hain...isliye hum aapke pair chu rahe hain..

Maan:don't say big words..its ur faith on god n love on him he is safe..aur haan aage se whenever he plays with crackers advice him to play safe'

Parents:ji dr.sahabji..

Maan moved to his cabin ..he sulked on chair feeling tired..

The peon came with his coffee..

Peon:dr..ye lijiye aapka favourite coffee..u will feel better..

Maan:thanks..

After that maan had his routine works..checking patients going for rounds or having operations in other hospitals where he was needed the most..

Here in khurana matrimonial centre..

Suraj entered n greeted by staffs..

Suraj:new appointment girl aagayi kya..

Staff:yes sir..

Suraj:send her inside my cabin..

Staff:yes sir..

Suraj went inside n he heared a knock on door.

Suraj:come in..

An young man came in..

Suraj:how can I help u young boy..

Boy:hai,sir..i'm yash..iam 25 yrs old n a bachelor..my parents want 2 c me settled..so,I came here to search for my dream girl..

Suraj:dream girl matlab..how u want ur wife should be..

Boy:in short a physically challenged ..

Suraj:are u sure..u look fit n fine..

Suraj said looking confusingly at him..

Suraj heared a knock again followed by a sweet voice came

Girl:may I come in sir..

Suraj turned to yash..pls can u wait till I deal with the staff..

Yash:no problem.

Suraj said

Suraj:yes come in...

The girl came inside ..

Suraj:so,u r my new secretary appointed by maan..

Girl:yes sir..

Suraj:naam kya hai tumhara..

Girl:meera..

Suraj looked at her..she was beautiful,but his eyes stopped at her hands..her left hand was not full.

Meera looked at him n his eyes looking her half hands..

Meera:sir,pls don't feel pity on me..i have one full hand that's enuf for me..

Suraj:now I understood how u got selected..

Meera:do u think I'm not suitable for job.

Suraj:no..no..ur confidence..that must be the one maan must have got impressed with u..

Meera:so,shall I start my work..

Suraj:yes..now meet mr.yash..

Yash:hai..

Meera:hai.

Suraj:take his details n contact number..we can call him if we find any suitable match for him..

Yash:miss meera ..what is ur opinion about marriage..

Meera smiled weekly..

Meera:it's a life time agreement to share love n pain with their partners..

Yash:sir..i never talk in riddles..i'm straight forward..i like meera..i want to marry her..

Meera n suraj were shocked..

Suraj:u r taking decision in haste..u saw her now only..

Yash:but I told u,I want to marry a special person only..

Meera:r u mad..

Yash:if u think so ok..then I am..i hv fallen in love with u at first sight..

Meera looked suraj nervously..first day of her work..what will he think..

Meera: I cant be a gud wife..im handicap..when others c me with u..all will tease u..

Yash:now only u said u have a full hand n its enuf for u..then y u r saying non reasonable reasons..

Meera:but..but..i cant marry u..

Suraj was seeing both..he don't know what to say..it was new to him..till now the pairs they made were mostly both had any minus in them..here its not same..

Yash:ok can u answer my few questions..if u give me correct answer then I will not ask u to marry me..

Meera:yes..

Yash:but u must be honest..

Meera:ok..i assure I'll say what my heart says..

Yash:don't u have dreams of marriage,kids n family..

Meera lowered her eyes n said:yes..

Yash:if u are a normal girl like others n if u would have got married with a normal person n after a happy married life,he met with some accident n he become handicap or blind or deaf will u leave ur husband n go..

Meera:no..how can i..

Yash: so u will not have any prob later..but when I say same knowing ur problem I want to spend my life with u,u r denying me..my proposal..ur arguments are onesided meeraji..its not fair..if all persons think like this there will not be any persons to think about marriage like u do..

Not only meera,suraj was also astounded listening to yash..

It was like yash has stabbed surajs heart..

How can he forget maan's position'

The life before 14 yrs..how can he forget it..now thinking about maans decision suraj felt proud of his son'he will now go with his son's wish..

Yash:meera.give me answer..dont think I will stop u working or doing ur works..i will give equal freedom to u..n u can do whatever u want..

Suraj:mr.yash..give her sometime to think..n she must also discuss with her parents na..

Yash:ya..i agree..

He gave his card..

Yash:this is my address n phone number..feel free to talk to me anytime u want..u can enquire about me n my parents..if u have any doubt on me..

Suraj:ok..

Meera:I have one doubt..can u clarify it..

Yash:ji..

Meera: will ur parents accept this..whats the reason behind ur decision to marry a girl like me..

Yash took his wallet n showed the picture of his parents'

Yash:this is the reason..my father is dark ,short n ugly looking..girls ran away from him..my mom is beautiful but blind..boys pointed her blindness..they both bounded together..we are the sign of their love..i have one brother n sister also. I have seen their love..that made me decide beauty is not which u look..its only a feel of heart..i want a heart to love me..not looks'

Suraj felt again like having slaps on his face..he was thinking himself gud by supporting maan in everyway..but now only he realized, when he must be with his life time ambition he was not..he has wasted his time..by going against his decision..

After sometime.yash went n meera also went to her cabin..not knowing what to decide..

Evening..

Maan was called as a chief guest for a charity function conducted by Lawrence group..lawrence is a south Indian dance master cum choreographer in film industry..his dance troop has only special peoples n he also runs an orphanage n a school for blind n physically challenged..

It was maans bad luck..he got an urgent case to attend n suraj came as chief guest..suraj was welcomed warmly by Lawrence n he was seated in first row..

The screen opened n the dance started..he saw a beautiful girl dressed up in bharatanattiyam attire dancing..she was doing her steps very elegantly n her facial expressions kept the audience captivated..

She finished her dance with the posture of lord shiva by lifting her one leg'thats when suraj saw it was wooden legs..he was surprised ..he asked the organizer who sat next to him..who is that girl'

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PART 2

The organizer said:she is geet handa..(i love sudha chandran of real life as she has over come with a great effort as a dancer..i took her as my inspiration for geet)

Suraj:her legs..

Org:yes..she has fixed artificial legs..

Suraj:how ..how can she dance..i mean I cant trust my eyes with the way she performed..

Org:hmm..it was really hard for her..she took 6 yrs training for this..she worked really hard n at last she achieved her dream ..

Suraj:so,she is a dancer..how much u give for her performance..im thinking to organize one..so only im asking u..

Org:she is a teacher by profession..she performs only in shows we conduct for charity..dont think she belongs to rich family..she belongs to a middle class where they spend each money counting it..if she has performed for getting money she would have been having lakhs in bank..she is a very kind hearted girl..in short she is also like u n ur son..who loves to do social works..

Suraj:can I meet her..

Org:if u want 2 meet for her dance performance she will not see u..she trusts us..so we will confirm her program n we will say her.she will come there for performance..

Suraj:no..i want to meet her personally..can I get her address..

The organizer gave him'

Suraj then concentrated on the performances'of Lawrence group'it only showed the will power within them..we people complain a lot when we get hurt a little too..but here they are performing accepting the fate god has given..the sweetness of voice in the persons who don't have eyes..how they get memory to learn all 100s of songs..the sharpness of ears in them..some performed throwing darts on the things which were given by sound..the lip reading of peoples who cant hear..each n every performances was making suraj ,that maans decision was right..every person has right to live..u must see the heart nor the physical appearance as yash said..

All performances came to an end..suraj gave a speech in behalf of maaan n gave momentos to peoples who performed..he gave to geet also..this girl have some spark..he thought'

At night..

Suraj n maan were in dining'having dinner'

Maan:dad,how was ur day today..

Suraj:gud than expected..maan..i want to talk to u about ur marriage..

Maan:dad..pls ..i don't want to see any girl..i don't want to marry..

Suraj:maan,u are 3 yrs when I was in ur age..its already late..i want to see u settled..

Maan:stop this topic dad..u know at the end we both will be stubborn in our decision..n I don't want to hurt u..u know my ambition..jo koi bhi ho..if the girl is blind,deaf or handicap..mujei koi farak nehi partha..i will marry the girl who ever u chose like that'but I know u don't like my decision..

Suraj stopped eating n looked at maan..

Suraj:what if I say,I don't have any objection in ur ambition..i support u like always in ur decision..i've chosen a girl like u wish..

Nakul dropped the water jug n maan the spoon..

Maan was surprised n shocked..

Maan:dad..really.. Nakul:really..

Suraj:yes..just waiting for morning..i will go n talk with her parents..i wish u also come with me..

Maan:sry dad..ive an operation at Mumbai..i will be leaving by morning..when u have decided I know u would have seen the girl's heart..not the physical appearance..no need to see her dad..i will marry any girl u say..just say me the day n time n place..i'will come..

Suraj:ya..she is very gud at heart..i saw her helping the peoples in charity function..her performance was cherry on cake yesterday..i cant believe my eyes'the organizer said she loves doing social works like u..u both will match..i know..i know u wont reject my words..

Suraj continued:I'm sry maan for not understanding u..after a long thought only I could understand the reason behind ur ambition..though its late god has opened my eyes..

Maan:dad,don't say sry to me..as a father u want best for ur son..i can understand..n my ambition u cant accept it..i was forced to change my ambition from an actor to doctor..if that accident has not happened I will not be like this..a famous dr,who can be acknowledged by one n all..the fame I got will not stand before the fame of an actor'the peace I get treating patients..i cant say in words dad..when they keep me in gods place n fall in my feet'its all becoz of u dad..u have been always with me in my bad time..though u are broken,u r the support for me..u r my spine dad..my backbone..my every successs is becoz of ur hard work..u can never be wrong..

Nakul was in tears seeing maan..

Maan turned to nakul

Maan:meri taraki pe jitna haq mera hain kaka ..utna hi haq aapka bi hain..when mom left me n I was hospitalized ..u r the one who took care of me..u never let me feel alone..

Nakul:aaj kya hogaya hai..tum badi badi bathe karrahi ho..i know the third person behind ur success..the girl who saved u..who gave u courage to fight against ur fate..

Maan smiled:ya..Almond eyes...its true na kaka..she came to my life as a savior..the life which I am living is her gift...kash I could meet her n say thanks..

Nakul:ok ok bohut hogaya..u both go n sleep..

Maan had a nice sleep..suraj was waiting for the sun to rise..

Morning..both were getting ready'maan to Mumbai n suraj to geets house..

Suraj dropped maan at airport n went to geets house without knowing the storm going there..

Geets house..

It was regular Sunday..rano gave a sari to geet n asked her to change..

Geet:mama..dont say someone is coming to see me..

Rano:ji beta..dev chopra naam hai..he is working in bank..earning 20000rs per month..

Geet:do they know,I don't have leg..mein ek appajiz hoon..

Rano:I've told the broker to say them already beta..

Geet:mama,mei thak gayi hoon every week naye naye log..do u really want me to cum before them..

Rano:im sure beta,this alliance will be the last..they will not say no ..tum tho bohut sundar hoona..noone can deny my girl..

Geet:for all moms their kids are best..if no one can deny me,then what will u say those 100s of grooms who rejected me pointing my wooden leg

Rano 's mouth was sealed..geet was saying the truth..

Mohinder:betaji..pls they will arrive at any time..pls ready hokar aaja..i'm sure this alliance will click

Rano:pls geet..

Geet half heartedly went n dressed up..

The broker came with the chopras family..dev,his mom n dad..

Rano n mohinder made them sit.n offered them snacks n tea

Devs mom(DM):ghar aapka hai..

Rano:ji rent hai..

DF:call ur daughter..

Rano went n came with geet..

Dm:beto..

Geet sat next to her..dev was going ladoo on her beauty..

DM: not bad..why didn't u wear some more jewels u know all will fill their neck n hands with jewels..u are wearing single chain..

Geet:I like to be simple..

Dev:erm..what u have studied..i heared u r working..how much salary u get..

Geet looked at the person..

Why she don't know she doesn't like the look ..his eyes wandering all over her body..

Geet:ji..ive done my bcom.. b.ed'I ve applied for m.com in corres..

DM:zyadha padkar kya karegi..u must look after house n kids onlyna after marriage.

Dev:aap ka hobby..

Geet:I love dancing..

Devs mom gave a disapproving look...teek hai..how much dowry u will give..u know,my son is working in bank..atleast 15 lakhs cash..a bike..n for ur daughter 400grams of gold..then she was continuing her list..

Geet looked at her parents..her look said she did not like the way they r talking..she was suppressing her anger..

Rano:aap chai lelijiye..tandi hojayegi..rano tried to divert the topic..

Df:ji..

Rano gave to them n broker..

When giving to devs mother the tea cup slipped n fell on geet..she did not scream..

DM:are kaisi insaan ho tum..gharam chai giri aur tume uff thak nehi ki..

Geet was wiping the tea on her sari with handkerchief..

Geet:it slipped on my wooden leg na..

Devs mom screamed..

Dm:kya..wooden leg..

The broker was sweating profusely..geet lifted her sari a little n showed her artificial leg..

Dm:tum appayiz ho..

Geet was used to this words..so it did not hurt her..but her parents were hurt..

Df turned n looked at broker..

Dev:ye kya tamasha hai..how can u look a girl like this for me..

Broker:wo..aapki kundli kisise nehi mila..isise mili isilye..

Devs mom who had faith on astrology now became a little calm..devs astrology was too bad..if this girls matched then we can go with it..aur ye tho hamara badakpan hoga hum ise bahu banakar lejayenge..ye sara zindagi kuch nehi bolegi..she was greedy too..

Then dm opened her mouth..

Dm:dev shanth..beta..dek..she is beautiful isn't it..haan baiya ji..hum is rishtey keliye tayaar hai..aap ab is appayiz keliye aur rakham dedijiye..hmm 50 lakhs..ab bike nehi car chahiye aur jewelery'

Geets patience broke down..

Stop it..she said loud fuming in anger..

Rano:beta..pls..calm down..

Mohinder:geet u go to ur room..

Geet:ab aur nehi hota papa..im not a thing to sale..or kept in auction..when they can shamelessly increase the amount in name of dowry..i too have a condition..

Dev will be living here as a typical bahu does..gar jamai bun ker..

Rano:geet..

DM:how can u say our son to stay in ur house..i have only one son..

Geet:then y u r selling him for 50 lakhs..if we pay the thing belongs to the person na..same way..ur son will be my slave..if u r ready I m also ok ..

Dm:appayiz hokar tum itni bolthi ho..if u r gud what else u will say..

Geet:hoon mei apayiz..but not a begger like u..i don't have leg..but still I stand on my feet..i can earn for life time..not like u greedy robbing in name of marriage..now get lost before I threw u out..

Dm:humei bhi nehi chahiye yesi ladki..chalo ji yaha se...she dragged her son n husband with her..

Geet turned to her parents..

Now u r happy na..do u think I am a burden for u..then ok..get me married to any one..some days before this same broker came with Alliances ..u know'an old man asked me as his fourth wife...another one father of three kids..n another who is suffering from physcological problem..any one u chose ..

I will marry..but please aaj ke baath mei kisi ke samne saj sawarkar nehi aaonga..this is my final decision..if u force me..then I will end myself..

She left the house to the nearest park..which can give peace of mind..

Geets parents were in tears..

Rano:when will god show our geet a way of light..we too want her happiness only..y all makes her hurt..when happiness will knock on our doorsteps'

They both heared a knock on door..they turned to saw a man standing there..

Mohinder:bhai saab aap kaun..

Suraj:ur happiness who is knocking ur door,,

Rano:ji..hum samji nehi..

Suraj:I am here to ask hands of ur daughter to my son..i saw ur daughter yesterday in function..i wish to see her as my bahu..

Rano n mohinder was confused..

Rano:hum..aapko jaanthi tak nehi..

Suraj laughed..

Suraj:haha..im sorry..i am suraj singh khurana..

Both their eyes widened..

Mohinder:aap..aap'khurana saab..the great dr.maan singh khurana ki pitaji'ander aaayiye betiye..rano ..go n bring tea for him..

He said all in one go'

Suraj:behenji..rukiye..first let us talk..then I will have sweet from ur hands..

Rano stopped ..

Suraj:pls u two also sit..so we can talk freely..

They both sat..

Suraj:u know about my son maan..so no need of introduction..i'm asking hands of ur daughter for him..

Rano:but bhai saab..aap tho bade log hai..hum aapki..

She gulped her saliva,how to say they cant give dowry as per status..

Suraj:let me clear u more..i..sry..we..maan n me are always against dowry..second..ur daughter will come to our house with her precious gift..her smile n gud heart..three.all expenses will made only by us..next...by agreeing to this marriage both of our problems will be solved..my maans ambition n ur daughters life will also be filled with colours..i can assure u..

Mohinder:can u give us time..shyam tak..

Suraj:ok'

He said in disappointment..

Rano:pls have something..i'll make tea..

Suraj:I dreamt many things before coming here..i will get ur acceptance..n we will make their marriage by next week end..my maan always love simplicity as ur daughter.. so it will be easy to go with a simple marriage..

Mohinder thought something..

Bhai saab..can u wait for an hr..i'll be back n say u my decision..

Suraj..sure..

Mohinder went to park n saw geet sitting their looking at the kids playing..the calmness in her face said she is normal..

Mohinder sat next to her n apologized for his act..geet too asked sry 4 her behavior..they both were silent for few minutes..mohinder tried to converse with her normally..

Moh:geet do u hv any program today..

Geet no pap..

Moh:I heared suraj khurana came yesterday..

Ji papa..

They are too rich..but they never shows..they help peoples through trust also na..

Geet looked at her father ..she thought ,he is trying to fill the gap created by them by talking random things..she don't want to disappoint him..she tried to go with him to make him feel ease..

Geet:yes papa..khurana trust is doing many gud things..u know..his son is dr..n he is a famous surgeon..our sharmi na ..jo pados mei rehthi thi..college girl..her legs n hands were burnt as she slipped accidentally in lab..he only treated her..that too without money..all expenses were taken up by his trust..

Mohinder:do u know about his wife..

Geet laughed..he is still bachelor..

Mohinder:tho..jo bhi usei shadi karega wo lucky hoga..

Geet:yes dad..but I don't know why he has not married till now..he is handsome,has money.fame,gud at heart..young..then y he is still unmarried..

Mohinder:may be he is in love with some girl or some hidden relation..

Geet:papa..pls don't talk rubbish..he is mirror..what he is..that is what the public also knows..

A boy called geet..didi cum lets play..

Geet:yes im coming..

Mohinder:ok beta..im going home..u come later when ur little friends leave u..

Ji papa..

Mohinder came back n saw suraj settled comfortably in living n watching tv..rano was walking to n fro..

Moh:rano,bring sweet..

The one word is enuf to know his decision..

Suraj:im so happy..

Moh:me too..

Rano gave them sweets n both fed each other..

Suraj:hmm..so lets go to pandit to fix date..

Moh:haan chaliye..

Both went to pandit

The pandit looked at their astrology n said'this both are made for each other..n u have only one date that is tomorrow'both were shocked..

Moh"tomorrow..how can we do..

Pandit:I said as per their astrology or u have to wait for a year more..

Suraj:I cant wait for a n yr more..

Moh:but..

Suraj:leave all to me..hmm lets keep it as surprise..u come with ur family to our kuldevi mandir..i'll see to arrangements..

Moh:ur son..my daughter..they must also know each other..n accept each other..

Suraj:my son will not say any word..today morning he said dad say me date n place I'll cum there..n ur daughter..i know she will also accept..

Moh:ok..

Suraj:so they will be the first to be in their own marriage without knowing its their marriage..

Moh:ok..

Suraj n mohinder went to their houses..suraj on his way went to the marriage planner n asked him to decorate the mandir n do preparations..he went to shop n purchased dress for maneet..he came home happily n said the gud news to nakul..only to make him faint'he sprinkled water on nakul..

Nakul:kal shadi..but maan..he told he will come tomorrow only..he wants to be there for another operation..

Suraj called maan..his phone came switched off..so he messaged him with no other way..

I have fixed ur marriage at our kuldevi mandir tomorrow at this time ..come before time ..ive called ur close friends n our relatives..

Mohinder said this news to rano..

Rano chided him:in one day..what can we do..

Moh:he said just we must come to mandir before an hr..rest he will take care..u just take the jewels out n without her knowledge if u can do her mehendi..

Rano somehow lied n did mehendi in geets hands writing maans name in mid..

Morning

Maan switched his phone after his midn8 operation only to get the message..his marriage is fixed

Maan:dad must be joking..

Then he got msgs from his collegues advance congrats 4 marriage ..he went to catch his flight so urgently..he still cant believe his dad took his joke seriously n informed venue n timing..he called his dad before entering the plane..

Suraj:gud morning beta..

Maan could hear the sounds of bells of mandir behind his back..

Dad,are u serious..u r in temple..

Suraj:yes beta..im hear to look after ur marriage preparations ..afterall my sons marriage n my dream is cuming true..after a long time agirl will be entering our house.,as ur wife..

Maan:dad..my condition..

Suraj:trust me my boy..ur ambition is also cuming true today..u want to c her..

Maan:no dad..i trust u..i'll see her at mandap..

Suraj:will be waiting for u..bye..

Maan:bye..

Maan was feeling butterflies..he sat on his seat n fastened his seat belt..he took his wallet

Maan:almond eyes..u know what..today is my marriage..kash tum meri saath ho..i will be the happiest man to have u beside me..how the girl will be..will she be gud like u..can I keep her expectations up..

Till now he had no dreams of married life..but hearing marriage he started to dream..

Dad said about her performance..may be she is a singer.i will ask her to sing a song for me..n I will support her to become a big singer..i don't know what her ambitions are..can she manage my hectic schedules..will she get angry on me if I didn't give enough time for her..how will I manofy her..maan from now u must have a look on ur schedules..ur wife must be waiting for u from tomorrow'I want a girl baby..what she will expect ..boy..girls always loves boy babies..so what we will have both a boy n a girl..

Maaan's mind was racing fast than a horse..with new dreams.. he smiled sheepishly,when the airhostess looked at him weirdly for his different emotion s running on his face..

He landed in delhi n took a taxi straight to go to temple where his bride would be waiting for him..

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part.3..

Here mohinder n rano got ready ..they woke up geet n asked her also to get ready fast as they are going to mandir..rano gave her a new sari to wear..she weared her minimum jewels..

Rano:u look beautiful..

Geet:mama..u know I look like an ad girl for jewellary shop..whats the occasion mama..u r making me so heavy..

Rano:we are going to mandir na..

She looked at geets mehandi..

Rano:ur mehandi is dark..it means ur husband will love u more..

Geet said mockingly:mama,pehle husband ko aane do..

Mohinder:rano,I called for taxi..it came..now we can go..

Rano:ji..aap wo sab saaman taxi pe rakdeejiye,hum aathe hain..

Rano took her to the idol of god n prayed to god..

Rano:god,I don't know its dream or true..but pls don't break our hearts..we are moving only trusting suraj khurana's words..so only I did not even say to geet also..what if it turns to be a fake..pls bagwaan ji..meri beti ki khushiyon ka khayal rakna..

Mohinder too joined them n did aarthi..then all left to mandir..

Geet was feeling something wrong for sure..they never took taxi..n rano never made her dress like this..

What are they upto..ghosh..are they not making me again to look a groom..if so..then I will not forgive them..she was about to ask them when the car stopped before the mandir..

Geet:we are really in mandir..so,mama n papa did not lie..

Geet moved forward n took steps..suraj who came down to call someone came near rano n mohinder n greeted them..he took them up..he gave them geets bridal dress n called the parlour women..

Suraj:behenji...,this all for my bahu..go n prepare her..

Rano:where is our sil..

Suraj:he left for an urgent operation in Mumbai..i have informed him..he has landed delhi..he will be here any second..

Rano took geet with her to the van..

Geet:mama where are u taking me..

Rano:cum I'll say u..

Geet:mama..this mandir is decorated fully..today someone is getting married here..i heared people talking..

Rano:its u who is getting married..

Geet felt like her earth slipped away..she did not think that her parents will not ask her..

Rano was unwrapping geets sari n making her wear the choli given by suraj khurana..

Geet was numb to react..after yesterdays incident,she thought they will leave her..but they thought her as burden..so they have arranged for marriage without her knowledge..

Rano was saying about khuranas..but geet did not hear anything..she missed rano saying dr.maan is the groom..she sat like a doll..the parlour women added beauty to her natural beauty..

geet(st) : y my parents r doing this with me..how can they arrange my shadi without even telling me..have i  really become burden for my dad  n mom..may be..waise bhi ek aphahiiz ko kab tak palenge ye..

she sighed feeling her heavy heart..

Rano showed her the jewellaries given by suraj

Rano:geet,ur father in law gave this to make u wear this..see how beautiful it is..she showed the bangles,necklace maang tika earings rings n all..

Geet st:u know me mama..i am not a girl to fall for this ..

The parlour women said..i have never seen such a beautiful bride..u r really lucky to step as daughter in law to the rich family of delhi..

Geet gave a weak smile which did not reach her eyes..they are sending me as dil to rich family...what they expect from me..may be iam 2ndr 3rd wife..geet sighed..

Then she heared someone saying loud..

Dulha aagayi..

Then she heared footsteps near the van..then someone talking outside..

Maan:dad,whats this..u really shocked me..

Suraj:ya I know..but it is a sweet surprise na..ok now come I will make u meet ur father in law..

Suraj:this is mohindar handa..ur fil..n this is my son..ur son in law..

Maan touched his feet n took blessings..

Mohinder was happy to see a groom like that.never in his life he thought he will be lucky to get a son in law like him..

Geet:so,the groom too don't know about the marriage..what a family ..we both have..

Suraj:aapki patni kahaan hai..

Geets father knocked the van calling:rano..

rano:ji..

she came out .

suraj:beta,this is ur mil..

maan took her blessings too..geet tried to see him..but all three were hiding her view..she did not see suraj also..she gave up closing the window..whatever god has written in my fate I must only face it..why should I blame god..its my parents n his parents wish..i cant voice ok..but he can na..then y he is not saying anything..it looks like he also wants this marriage..

suraj:now u go n change ur dress..ur dress is in our car..ask nakul he will help u..its time now for marriage..

maan:ok dad...

maan came soon changing to his sherwani..nakul made him sit in mandap..maans face covered with flowers..geet was also brought to mandap..walking towards mandap,she felt her heart would come out of her rib cage thinking about her parents..they are tying her to an unknown person..she walked with a broken heart accepting her defeat n her parents decision she sat next to maan..maan was restless..when she sat near him he had an unknown temptation..a feeling of peace..like she is the girl..she struggled to sit..n he saw her wooden legs..maan was happy,that his father did not cheat him n really gave respect to his ambition..maan looked at her face..it was covered with veil..he was disappointed..geet was looking only at the fire..her eyes was down casted n did not see the surrounding..

panditji :can we start the rituals..

rano:ji panditji..

both exchanged varmalas..maan tied her mangal sutr n filled her mang..but he missed to see her face every time..they took pheras..when his hand was placed in hers she felt a warmth covering her..he was squeezing her hand lightly assuring her that he will be with her side for ever..n she took the oath before the fire,that she will be honest to the relation ..maneet took blessings from elders..geet thought suraj as one of the guests..

geet cried when bidai was conducted..though she was angry on them they are her parents..

the whole drive to the mansion was silent...maan was so desperate to see his bride face..but his bad luck its cover with veil..but he heard her silent sobs..he thought it as the pain of leaving her mayka n coming to her saural..parting away from parents is difficult for all..maan slowly put his palm on her palm which rested on her lap...she stiffed a little with his touch but then became normal with his warmth...he lightly squees her palm...looks like their hearts dont want any word to comfort each other..

maneet entered the khurana house..geet n her parents were awed looking the decors..though it's a small house it was well maintained..it did not look like only mens live there..

nakul was the only one who was running here n there..geet thought him as her fil..she did the rituals she was asked to do..

suraj:beta,come inside..

she was taken to the pooja room..

suraj:from now all the responsibilities are given to u..this house was not having a female presence for past 14 yrs..now u have arrived..just fill this four walls as house with ur love n warmness..which we lost after ur mil death..now i want that back in ur form..this is ur mil..he showed picture of surabhi.,maans mom...geet touched the photo n took the blessings..maan was with his friends..all were congratulating him as he has been a role model for everything'

rano was helping nakul..

all had the dinner..n guests n friends went to their houses..

suraj came to mohinder who was talking with maan.. rano n geet was inside

suraj:maan ..can u excuse us for a minute..

ji dad..he went giving them space to talk'

moh:what ji..

suraj:hmm..can u n rano ji stay here tonight..

moh:wo acha nehi hoga suraj ji..

suraj:mohinderji..we have no ladies in our house..so only I am asking u both 2 stay here tonight..what if geet needs her mother by side tomorrow..he said hesitatingly not to embarrass her father..

suraj:erm..wo..ask rano ji to show maans room..the right side corner room..

moh:ji..we will stay here..i understood..

rano took geet to maans room..geet couldnot sit in centre of bed like other brides..so she sat in corner of bed..the decorations of the room was making her nervous..she don't know what to expect in this marriage..she is the one who has not yet seen her husband..she has not seen any kids too..n by the touch of maaan n physical appearance she can guess he is young..but y he married me..how much she thought she was confused more..

is he also like me..i don't think so..he has perfect 2 hands legs eyes ears..he did all rituals by his own..then ..babaji..ye kya horaha hai..

suraj n nakul came to maan

maan.go to ur room..ur wife is waiting for u..

maan was also nervous..he smiled weekly n moved..both gents escorted him till his room making rano n mohinder chuckle.

Maan:why are u following me..

Nakul:to remind u..

Maan:what?

Suraj with a naughty smile..

Lock the door after entering..dont keep open like u do usually..

Maan:daaa..a.a..ad..

Suraj kissed his forehead..ur mom will be happy today..just give me ur mom back to me as ur kid..he said in tears..

Maan has never seen his dad crying

Dad..u r crying..

Maan hugged him comforting ..

Suraj:I miss ur mom today..thats y.

Nakul:what are u doing..see maans face turned pale..aaj ka din aap usei upset karrahi ho..

He wiped his tears..

Suraj:im sry beta..now we don't want to disturb u..

Saying both left..

Maan entered his room..no now its not his..its their room..he locked it..

His footsteps n the lock of door has already made geets heart pace fast..he was nearing her slowly..geet was fiddling the corner of veil in her hands..

Maan sat next to her..she felt her body temperature shooting high..

Maan took her leg in his n removed the wooden part slowly..

She did not feel anything..as he was touching the wooden part..geet looked at him thru veil..his head was bent n she could not see him..but his physique was well shown by the tight fitted dress he was wearing..she thought he looks hot..

Her thought were broken by his manly voice..

Maan:do u feel relaxed now..do u need any medicine to apply..

Geet can feel his concern in his voice..

Geet:ji..i'm f9..

Maan slowly took his hands up n lifted her veil..

He was blown up by the beauty of hers..he never dreamt of any girl other than his ambition or ,his almond eyes..but now seeing her beauty he was speechless..she was looking at her toes..maan did not see her eyes..

Maan:have anyone said to u before that u r incredibly beautiful..

She can feel her cheeks burning n turning to deep red colour.

She was silent..yes she has not heared it other than her parents..others only pointed her state n made fun of her'

Maan:I know its not easy for u to digest our marriage as it happened in a strange way..for me too..we have not met before nor asked each others opinion..are u happy with this marriage.

Geet don't know what to say..she is happy or not..who cares for her..but this man is asking her..without her knowledge she was falling for him..his words..his care..his concern..

Maan looked at her who was still fiddling her dupatta..he cupped her face n made her look at him..the instant their eyes met..crackers blasted on him..

Maan:almond eyes...

He hugged her in joy..n looked at her eyes again..

Maan:I cant believe u r here with me..

Geet was also equally surprised to see maan..the great dr.maan is her husband..then last days incidence came to her mind..mohinder asking about khuranas..but y he is happy n y he is calling her almond eyes..

Geet:ji mera naam geet hai..

Maan:no..u r almond eyes to me.. i..i.cant believe this..pinch me..

She looked at him weirdly..

Maan:I am saying truly..not kidding u..pinch me..

She pinched him lightly..

Maan:ya its true..

He scooped her in his arms n twirled around..

He was shouting like a kid who found his lost toy'yehhh..

Geet couldnot help than smiling..his smile gave happiness to her..he placed her on bed..

..maan cupped her face looking intently on the lips..she cant deny her husband..she leaned on the bed..submitting to him..he took her lips in his..she can feel the love n care in it..he loves her..did she think that way..but can love happen only by tying mangalsutr ..she slowly melted in his passion..she never expected that she will get married n these things will happen..she slowly responded to him..when both felt lack of air,they parted..he kissed his eyes..

Maan: thanks almond eyes..u know I never thought u will be back in my life..its a real surprise that the girl whom I am searching is my wife now..

Geet:ji..mei samji nehi..

Maan:wait..

He went n opened his cupboard..he took a jewel box n came to her..

Maan:see this..shayad ..you may remember me..

Geet opened the box n saw a golden chain with a locket..she instantly recognized it..its hers..

Her parents presented her as birthday gift when she was 13 yrs..she lost it in manali'

But how maan is related with this locket..

Geet:maanji..how u got my locket..

Maan:still u don't remember me..

Geet nodded her head :no..

Maan scooped her again as she cant walk without her artificial legs..he moved to his study parted inside his room..when she stepped there she recognized him..he placed her on a chair..his pictures when he was 15 yrs.till may be he is 20 r 22 yrs was there.in that partition with his half face burnt'.

Geet touched his right cheeks..

Geet:the scar is no more..

Maan:hmm'I did plastic surgery..n I got my face back..do u remember that incident..

Geet:yes..but..i want to know y u did that'

Maan:u have right to know..becoz u r the girl behind my success..n this life is urs..

Maans flash back

last part ...click here.

 

Edited by valli22 - 11 years ago
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Congrats on the new OS Valli!!

And lots of love for this dedication... muah...
Me eagerly waiting for this diwali bonus...
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Posted: 11 years ago
congratulation for new OS dear
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  wow lovely congratzzz didi and best of luck.. os wow me waiting didi
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hi valli di

Thanks a lot.

U dedicated this story to mee.i can't express my feelings right now iam cloud at 9

My fav writer dedicated a story for me..yahooo

Iam eagerly waiting for this os..

Thanks a lot di.
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Posted: 11 years ago
10 din kaise guzrenge now waiting 2 read ur lovely OS n congo 4 ur 1st OS.
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ongrats and will be waiting