Love U ๐my cutie pie for chapter 2 review... I am so touched.๐ณ.. I went back and read chapter again... all scene came in front of my eyes... Iss story me mera Jallu Lastyyy and Kaminaaa hai but he is tooo caring and loving bhi hai... thoda akdu and sadu bhi hahi...heheheh... but my Jodhu is akdu... and strong character... Jalal ko maid ke piche pagal karna thoda touff tha yaar... mene bahot papad bele yeh plot likhne me... most difficult task was... to build Jodha's character... shenshah fall in love with maid it's some what hard to digest... so I had to put lot of effort in Radha's character... but I am so happy U enjoyed chapter 2... and loved Jodha and Jalal's first meeting...๐Originally posted by: Kanchani1375mis
Next one is a todu fodu chapter kya inroduce karvaya hai ja ka jo se muuuaaah isse best kuch ho he nahi sakta bs ch padke puppia dene ka man kar raha hai apko ... the song i like once u started singing poured ur pain out ... and lustyyy jallu uuufff ...in d garden area his eyes r very
naughty radha bhi to kam nahi kapdo k colours ka combination to dekho .lol. green with yellowMorning hide and seek i loving that soo much and enjoying the desperation of jallu to see herkab tak bachogi tum mujhse ek na ek din to pakad he lungaRadha beaten ks enjoying the scene this jo has self confidence upon her and also she is very strong knows how to handle the personsStraight forward attitude ne ja ki to bolti band kar di ..,, hehehehe..,,Vaise he don't knows ki vo lattuu ho gaya hai radha pe!!!!!!!!!!Garden scene is like $ sone p suhaga $ ... And ya Garden is sooo beautiful di...,,,,,,,,And last bt nt least Heart living FF #RKG # $ Angry, Arrogant bt Loving and dashing* Jallu*...love u
yes di falling in love with maid might be wiered alittle bit bt its not that also bcoz which character of radha u showed anyone will be fallen in love with her and๐ jo to ja ki destiny hai naaa!!!! To vo to crazy hoga he (and this is the perfect fact naa )Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Love U ๐my cutie pie for chapter 2 review... I am so touched.๐ณ.. I went back and read chapter again... all scene came in front of my eyes... Iss story me mera Jallu Lastyyy and Kaminaaa hai but he is tooo caring and loving bhi hai... thoda akdu and sadu bhi hahi...heheheh... but my Jodhu is akdu... and strong character... Jalal ko maid ke piche pagal karna thoda touff tha yaar... mene bahot papad bele yeh plot likhne me... most difficult task was... to build Jodha's character... shenshah fall in love with maid it's some what hard to digest... so I had to put lot of effort in Radha's character... but I am so happy U enjoyed chapter 2... and loved Jodha and Jalal's first meeting...๐
I am almost done with chapter 10 ๐but feels like I have lost that touch๐.. In begining when I started this story I was crazy in love with it... but I am writing after long break... so feels like lost that charm... hope I don't disappoint u all... me nervous as always after writing chapter...
so u r updating the chappy soon...just cant beleive mujhe toh lga tha ki ab update next year hi milega but aapka comment padhkr ek ummid si jag gyi h ki update jaldi hi milega...so pls pls di jaldi update krdo aur wait nhi ho raha ab and pls ab aap continuous update dena and one more thing aap nervous mat ho u r the best๐๐๐๐ aur aap apne readers ko kbhi disappoint nhi karti...now just waiting for the update hope to get it soonOriginally posted by: shahbhavini
Love U ๐my cutie pie for chapter 2 review... I am so touched.๐ณ.. I went back and read chapter again... all scene came in front of my eyes... Iss story me mera Jallu Lastyyy and Kaminaaa hai but he is tooo caring and loving bhi hai... thoda akdu and sadu bhi hahi...heheheh... but my Jodhu is akdu... and strong character... Jalal ko maid ke piche pagal karna thoda touff tha yaar... mene bahot papad bele yeh plot likhne me... most difficult task was... to build Jodha's character... shenshah fall in love with maid it's some what hard to digest... so I had to put lot of effort in Radha's character... but I am so happy U enjoyed chapter 2... and loved Jodha and Jalal's first meeting...๐
I am almost done with chapter 10 ๐but feels like I have lost that touch๐.. In begining when I started this story I was crazy in love with it... but I am writing after long break... so feels like lost that charm... hope I don't disappoint u all... me nervous as always after writing chapter...
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