~Aate Aate Aa Gaye Pas Hum~V.Day spcl ARIYA OS

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Valentine's Day Special, ARIYA OS


Aate aate Aa Gaye Pas Hum

TITLE CREDIT GOES TO PINKERBELL

 

***((Love is the most wonderful of all feelings in this world.))***

 

Part1


14th February, morning. @ETF office. Sam n Ayesha reached office earlier than Arjun n Riya. As today is Valentine's Day Ayesha is wearing Sam's favorite red high-neck top with white jeans.


Sam: Good morning guys

Ayesha: Good morning Shree, Chhotu... Happy Valentine's Day guys..

Shree: Kya Happy hai iss Valentine's Day mein.. koi Valentine to mile pahele.

Ayesha: Aww... So sorry.. But Shree u already have a Valentine na??

All 3, Sam-Chhotu-Shree is giving her a surprised look.

Shree: I already have a valentine?? Aur mujhe pata bhi nahi hai?

Ayesha: Aur nahi to kya?? Sath leke ghumta hai, abhi bhi pas hi baetha hai and specially u have a jodi name, "ChhoRee". Phir bhi bol raha hai k tera koi Valentine nahi hai.

Chhotu is sitting beside Shree. Shree looks at him. "Ayesha I'll kill u." He picks up his lappy and ready to throw it to her. All were laughing on this joke.

Chhotu: Kya yaar Ayesha, tum bhi humare jale pe namak chhidak rahe ho.. Its not fair..

Sam: But guys where is ARIYA? (in behind of Arjun n Riya whole team call them as ARIYA)

Ayesha: Sameer, don't forget they are newly married couple, aur ye Valentine's Day shaadi k baad paheli V.day hai. So they should b late.

They all have a mischievous smile on their face. Shree just going to start another conversation, but now Arjun pushed the door and enters in the room. Everyone sit perfectly on their seats. Arjun looks at everyone. Ayesha is searching for Riya. After a while Riya has come, she is in black top n black jeans. Riya comes n sit on her chair; Ayesha asked "what happened?" by her gesture. Riya nodded her head by saying "Nothing". But Ayesha got some sense that there must be a problem. She stands up and addressing to Sam, "Excuse me sir, can I talk to Riya for some time?"

Sam: Ok

Ayesha n Riya went out to the cafeteria. Riya: Kya hua? Yaha pe kyun layi?

Ayesha: Chal coffee pite hai aur sach sunte hai

Riya: Kaisa sach?

Ayesha: kya hua tujhe? 1st of all tu aaj k din aise non sense black cat banke kyun aayi hai?

Riya: Kyun aaj special kya hai? Jo black na pahenu???

Ayesha: Stupid, aaj V.day hai. Tu aaj k din aise muh latakake khadi kyun hai ye bata? Shaadi k baad tum dono ka 1st v.day hai yaar. Its so special.

Riya: Nothing is special for me. Arjun k liye to har din hi same hai. Unhone abhi tak wish bhi nahi kiya, wish to dur ki baat ek smile bhi nahi diya. Pata hai Ayesha, kabhi kabhi na mujhe lagta hai humari shaadi ek bohot badi galati hai. Hum jaise the vaise hi achhe the. Kash ye shaadi na hoti, atleast Arjun ko to ye sab sahena nahi padta.

Her voice chocked into tears.

Ayesha: Sorry yaar. But aise mat bol. Har shaadi ko waqt lagta hai. It's a new chapter of ur life. Kisina kisiko to pahela kadam uthana padega na. Why not u? Aaj kuch special arrange karte hai

Riya: Nahi re.. Arjun ko shayad pasand nahi ayega.

Ayesha: Tu zyada soch mat. Arjun sir tujhe pahele hi din se aise hi dekh rahe hai "The Cop Riya",unhe bhi to mauka de tujhe kisi aur roop me dekhne ki. Lets go back,lunch k waqt shopping k liye chalenge. Now smile sweetheart.

After some hours, completing file works Ayesha poked Riya, "aab bol na we wanna go out."

Riya: Tu bol


Ayesha: Sir kam to khatam ho gaya hai, main aur Riya kisi kam se bahar jana chahte hai. Can we?

Sam: Ok. But kaha?

Ayesha: Kisi personal kam hai. Aap zara bahar aaiye

Sam n Ayesha went outside. Riya: Arjun main bahar jaa rahi hu, tum time pe lunch kar lena.

Arjun: hmm...

Riya again became sad. But without say anything she leaves.

Outside Scenario

Sam: Kaha ja rahe ho? Maine socha tha k aaj sath me lunch karenge. Aur tum Riya k sath ja rahi ho. Riya ko to aaj Arjun k sath honi chahiye

Ayesha: Honi to chahiye hi, par tumhara dost na ek no. ka unromantic hai. Pata hai unhone Riya ko aaj ekbar bhi wish nahi kiya, wish to dur ki baat muskura k baat tak nahi kiya. Had ho gayi yaar.. Shaadi k 6mahine baad bhi aisa behavior.. Dekho Sam aaj unke shaadi k baad pahela v.day hai, aur un dono to kuch karne se rahe, hum hi  kuch karte hai.

Sam: hum kya karenge?

Ayesha: main aur Riya ja rahi hu shopping k liye, vaha se sidha unke ghar, tum iss samay Arjun ko ghar jane se rok lena.Atleast raat k 9 baje tak to bilkul bhi ghar mat jane dena. Aur is plan k bade me kuch bhi mat batana

Sam: Ok ma'am ho jaega.

Riya: Ho gaya? Aab chale?

Ayesha: Chalo



All the day they spent pampering themselves.They go to the parlor, shopping n all the things.

Office scenario

Sam: Guys aaj yaha hi khatam karte hai. Chhotu, Shree chalo tum log bhi ghar jao

Arjun: Itni jaldi?

Sam: Kya karenge? Koi case bhi nahi hai, aur file works bhi khatam, to bekar me office me rahe kar kya karenge?

Shree n Chhotu become so happy for this decision.

Sam: Arjun tu aaj jaldi me hai kya? I mean ghar jaldi jane ki to koi plan nahi hai na?

Arjun: Its only 6 Pm now. Nahi koi jaldi nahi hai. But plan kya hai?

Sam: Mujhe Ayesha k liye kuch gifts kharidna hai. So I think u should come with me

Arjun: Gift?

Sam: Arree yaar, aaj Valentine's day hai na. So I wanna gift her smthng special

Arjun: V.day, gifts. Tu kabse ye sab kar raha hai?

Sam: Shaadi k bad se. Am not like you, so insensible. Tera chehra dekh k saaf pata chal raha hai k aaj Riya ko wish bhi nahi kiya. Vo bechari to wait kar rahi hogi. Tu aisa kaise kar sakta hai yaar?

Arjun: Hold on.. Hold on.. Kya karu main?

Sam: Shaadi k 6 mahine baad bhi main samjhau tu kya karega? What non sense. Chal mere sath Riya k liye kuch kharidega.

Arjun: ufff... U r just so nagging... ok chal

They entered in a Jwellery shop; Sam bought a diamond ear ring for Ayesha. But Arjun was so confused.

Sales girl: Hallo sir,may I help u?

Arjun: Yeah.. Vo actually I wanna buy something for my wife. But cant decide what to take for her?

Sales girl: Come with me sir. U can take this for her

She has shown a diamond bracelet to Arjun.

Arjun: Wow.. Thanks, its so nice. I will take this

Sam: ho gaya?

Arjun: yup.. ho gaya

Sam: Its just 7:30PM now, chal kahi baethte hai.

Arjun: Kya? Kahi baethte hai? Ok chal.. (suddenly) tu ja main aaraha hu

Arjun crossed the road and entered in a shop.



Sam watched him and talked in his mind, "Beta tu to ek hi din me kafi romantic ban gaya hai.." He entered in a pub, and picked up the phone, "Hallo..Ayesha...Am in a pub. Yes am alone here, Arjun nahi hai. Aree pucho mat, main jo bhi kahunga repeat mat karna, bas sunte jao. Arjun is now in a lingerie shop. Haan haan beta ek hi din me kafi zyada romantic ho gaya hai. Ise kaheta hai sangat asaar. Aab rakhte hai, tum time se ajana. Love you.. Bye."

Ayesha was laughing continuously. Riya: Kya hua?

Ayesha: kaha?? Kuch bhi to nahi. Kuch nahi. Chal final decoration karte hai.

Arjun entered in the pub, trying to hide the gift box he sits there.

Sam teases him, "kaha gaya tha?"

Arjun: nothing special. Ek dost mil gaya tha

Sam: Accha? Ok, chal kuch order karte hai. Lets take some vodka.

Arjun: Tu na aab ye adat chhod de. Its the last time. Next time main Ayesha se kahe dunga.

After some shots Arjun starts feel its too much, he is now a little bit drunk, "Lets go home Sam. 8:30baj gaye."

Sam was in his sense, after one shot he continuously took a glass of vodka n mixed water in it, but Arjun was in trap.

Sam: Yup let's go. I will drive the car.

Sam plays his favorite music track, "Mahi Ve" from Highway

They are on the way to home. In that time Arjun has closed his eyes n Riya is in his mind. He can't wait any more to go to Riya, he realizes how much she is upset. He is regretting now, how can he was so insensible in these long 6months. He never expresses his love to her, "Aur kini der Sam?"



Sam: 10mins

Arjun: But Sam, I think am lill bit drunk. Riya ko bura lagega..

Sam: Kuch nahi lagega, its better for u, jo tu karne jaa raha hai na, who karne mein asani hogi..

Arjun just takes a deep breath...

In Arjun's Home

Ayesha n Riya have completed their decoration. Ayesha also gets ready in a red n black saree, n Riya is in a transparent Red n White saree.

Ayesha: Wow Riya.. aaj to Arjun pe shamat aane vali hai re..(Riya feels shy) All d best for tonight. (She winked and hugged her and said bye to Riya.)

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Wow concept Suki ji..
First you tell me when are you updating for next chapter..
Bilkul latka diya hai tune..
So good one...
Akdu Arjun ko kuch nhi pata..
Bichari Riya..
ChoRee jodi...lolz..
Aisha n Sam are cupids...
Update soon..
Wanna see how Arjun expresses love..

Awesome V'Day gift dear..Edited by Amritamalhotra - 10 years ago
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Loved it... Eagerly waiting for part 2!!
Arjun went to the lingerie shop *wink wink*
He is also slightly drunk update soon plz
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beautiful
cont soon
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Beautiful update 
Cant wait to read more 
Arjun dhakkan hi rahe ga ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜†
Thanks for the PM 
Continue soon ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome dear.. Love it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Wow..
Sukku ji... Beautiful concept...
Loved it a lot.
Waiting to know how Arjun proposes Riya.
ChoRee jodi... Lolz...
Agla part chhedi chhedi update karna...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm...
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Omg I mso excited now

What will happen now

Arjun is drunk

I hope riya will nog angry on him...

Poor girl arjun is just ...grrr
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OMG...kya kya complements mila hai
Akdu..Dhakkan...
😆 😆
I wish ye SM ko bhi pata chalta... 😆
[ROFL]Edited by Sukanya001 - 10 years ago