Ariya SS: This is Love <3 "note"(14/10)

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<div align="left"><font size="4">Hi friends ...This is my first SS ...hope u all like it...do leave ur precious comments😊</font></div><div align="left">
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<font size="5"> </font><font size="5"><font color="#9900cc"></font></font><font size="5"><font color="#6600cc">Chapter #1</font></font><font size="5">
<font color="#0000ff">Introduction: A colony in which two best friends live Arjun and Riya , new Delhi</font></font></div><div align="left">
<font size="5"><font color="#6600ff"> </font></font><font size="5"><font color="#6600ff">23 August 1997</font></font>
<font size="5"><font color="#0000ff">A fat boy sitting under a tree waiting for his best friend . A girl whose pretty eyes are covered with glasses with oily hairs tied in plait, comes towards the boy</font></font><font size="4">
R: Happy birthday ... golu.. yeh lo ladoo
A: aaj tou golu mat bolo... acha yeh lo ... </font></div><div align="left"><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">he hands him a red heart shaped box ...</font>
R : golu is mein kya hai n
<font color="#0000ff">gives him a dimple smile..</font>
A : kholo apne aap pata chal jaye ga
<font color="#0000ff">she opens the box and finds the box filled with chocolates</font></font></div><div align="left"><font size="4">

A: happie birthday...
R : thank you .. ohh i mean sorry ... ohh
A : tum nahi sudhro he Kitni baar kaha hai no thank you no sorry
R : acha yeh lo Tumhari gift
<font color="#0000ff">she gives him a box.. the box contains a locket</font>

A : yeh tou tumhara fav locket hain na .. aur yeh tou tum kisi ko dekhne bhi nahi deti thi ... aur yeh tum mujhe de rahi ho...
R : yeh tumhe is liye de rahe hn takey tum mujhe bhul na jao...
A : Aisa ho nahi sakta ke mein tumhe bhul jao ... aur tum mujhe bhulne ki koshish bhi mat karna ... samjhi yah samjhaon ..
R : Ab mera gift ... golu
A : chasmish wo gift tou mein...
<font color="#0000ff">before he can finish his sentence</font>
R : tum bhul gaye ... golu tum aaj kaise bhul...tum
<font color="#0000ff">he puts his left hand over his mouth and hands over him a gift</font>
A : yeh lo... aik baat tou Batao tum itna bolti kiun ho... mujhe meri baat puri tou Karne Diya karo
R : kya mein bolti ..
<font color="#0000ff">n gets upset</font>πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±
A : acha acha sorry sorry I mean no sorry
<font color="#0000ff">n burst out laughing...</font>πŸ˜†
R : no sorry no thank you n she again start laughing
A : acha Ab yeh apna gift tou dekho
<font color="#0000ff">she opens the gift and finds a book which arjun had never allowed any1 to see it.. even riya wasn't allowed to see it</font>
R : yeh tou ..
A : haan wahi hai .. Ab khol k dekho tou isey
<font color="#0000ff">she opens it and there are pics of ariya(arjun and riya) since their childhood</font>

R : mein isey hamesha sambhal k rakhu ge
A : phr tum kal ja rahe ho na ... chalo Ab Tumhari baatein nahi suni parhey ge
<font color="#0000ff">saying this he gets sad but doesn't show his saddness but covers it with a smile</font>😊😊
R : baaton mein tou mein yeh Batana bhul Gaye k mein kal nahi aaj ja rahe hn... aaj shaam 4 baje ki flight hai ... dad mujhe aaj he london bhaij rahe hai further studies k liye ... aur Ab mujhe chalna bhi chahiye
<font color="#0000ff">listening this arjun get angry</font>😑😑😑
A : tum aaj rahe ho aur Ab bata rahe ho... jao tum ... tum abhi chali jao
<font color="#0000ff">n saying this he gets up and run towards his house</font>
R : arjun par meri baat tou suno...
<font color="#0000ff">but arjun without looking back runs n tears falling from his eyes</font>😭

</font><font size="5"><font color="#6600ff">Outside Riya's house 2:00 pm</font></font></div><div align="left">
<font color="#0000ff"><font size="4">Riya is sitting in the car .. her eyes still on arjun's room window...waiting for just one look ...
Arjun in his room and sees the clock</font></font><font size="4">
A: arey Wo nikal na jaye mein usey bye bhi nahi Kaha...
<font color="#0000ff">he sees from his window n sees riya leaving he runs down but till the time he reached it was too late ... she already left...</font>

</font><font color="#6600ff"><font size="5">Arjun's room</font></font></div><div align="left">
<font color="#0000ff"><font size="4">he in his bed feeling very sad... his dad comes in ...
</font></font><font size="4">D: happie birthday beta</font><font size="4">
A: thanx dad
D:kya baat hai aap Apni birthday par khush nahi lag rahe
<font color="#0000ff">Arjun then gives his dad a smile</font>😊
A: nahi tou dad mein tou bht khush hn , Aakhir mein 10 yrs ka ho Gaya hn
D: acha phr apne hum se abhi tak gift kiun nahi manga
A:kiun k mujhe pata tha aap hamesha ki tarha gift dena kaise bhul sakte hai
D: Lekin is baar aapko apna gift lene k liye America jaan parhey ga
A: America ?? magar kiun
D: aap Apni further studies aboard karma chahatey thay na...
A: but kya mein London ja sakta hn...
D: Lekin aapko admission waha ki best university mein karwa Diya hai aap k uncle bhi waha aapka intezar kar rahe hai
A: but pls dad..
D: arjun it's final aap America he ja rahe hai
A: dad but...
D: it's final no more argument ... get ready abhi 7 baje ki aapki flight hai.. aapke liye car ready hai .. driver aapko airport le jaye ga
A: Lekin
<font color="#0000ff">before arjun could say anything his father left the room</font>
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Arjun's house at 5:00pm
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<font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">arjun after saying bye to every1 left for the airport</font></font><font size="4">

</font><font size="5"><font color="#6600ff">01 jan 2012 </font></font>
<font color="#0000ff"><font size="4">introduction:
Sameer Rathore is the chief of ETF ,

Shree is the IT specailist and gadget whizz of the team,

chottu the muscleman of the team

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<font size="5"><font color="#6600ff">ETF headquarter at 9:00am</font></font></div><div align="left"><font size="4">
<font color="#0000cc"> Rathore sitting in the ETF lounge reading newspaper. Shree and Chottu enters ETF office</font>
C: good morning sir
S: Good Morning Sir
Ra: good morning, Waisey tym kya ho raha hai?
C:sir kiun aap ki ghari (watch) kharab ho Gaye hai
shree gives him a look saying rathore sir means hum late kiun hai
S: sir wo actually aaj traffic bht tha tou hum late ho gaye
Ra: tum aur tumhare excuses. acha aaj se ETF mein do new members join kar rahe hai .
<font color="#0000ff">rathore gives them two files.</font>
Ra: yeh pehli file ACP 'arjun rawte'
<font color="#0000ff">listening the name of arjun, shree and chottu exchange a look wo nahi...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">both spoke at once</font>
S and C: sir wo encounter specialist
Ra: haan wahi encounter specailist
<font color="#0000ff">suddenly the main door open and a man with charming looks in white T- shirt and black pants wearing sunglasses entered.</font>

Ra: mein yahan ka chief ACP sameer rathore
<font color="#0000ff">n they shake hands</font>
A: bht suna tha aapke Barey mein aaj mil bhi liya...
Ra: yeh shree aur chottu etf members
S: hello sir
C: sir aap ke baarey mein bhi bht suna hai
A: haan suna ho ga wo akhru ...angry man...
<font color="#0000ff">shree and chottu luks at each other n smile</font>πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
<font color="#0000ff">Rathore phone rings , he walks away talking and after attending the call he comes back</font>
Ra: abhi thori dair mein he , miss riya research specialist hamey join karey ge
</font><font color="#0000ff"><font size="4">Arjun listening the name riya , remembers his bestfriend of childhood. N remembered how they got separeted</font></font></div><div align="left"><font color="#0000ff"><font size="4">
</font></font><font size="4">shree to chottu very slowly: bas pls Ab yeh akhru na ho
Ra: tum dono ka paperwork khatam ho Gaya hai
<font color="#0000ff">and gives him a look to get to work, they both nod and get to work</font>

</font><font color="#6600ff"><font size="5">ETF headquarters it's 10:00am</font></font></div><div align="left">
<font color="#0000ff"><font size="4">Everyone is busy, Arjun is helping Rathore wid his work, chottu and shree doin their paperwork,
After half an hour , a size zero figure girl wearing a sexy pink dress , hair tied in high pony enters the door.</font></font>
</div><div align="left"> </div><div align="left"> The end of chap 1</div><div align="left">
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yayyy  me first to comment loved it alot dear πŸ˜ƒEdited by saba-ramisa - 11 years ago
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wow... nice.. loved it... the childhood separation was touching.. poor ariya.. hope they remembers each other now..

update soon!!!
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Amazing start...thnks fr the pm...
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omg...i cant believe dis story line...!!!
ok dats was damn great...luvd ur chap1...awesome start dear...!!!
 
plss do conitinue...separation was sad...bt very well know...dat dey got separated by destiny bt jst to meet again...bt qs. is how??...n dats ur work...so plss do tell dat soon...i mean update soon dear...!!!
 
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Hey ...
Great start ... :)
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nice start loved it 

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Wao lvly nice its diffent start but owsome so ariya r frs n didnt kno each other waiting for next part cont soon
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omg it was awsome update
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nice start...
Sounds good...
interesting story plot...
update next part soon...