virman ss : naa jaane kyun... LAST PART pg 57

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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys this is a link to the index of my works till now...


so guys this is a short story from me again... even though you guys might be thinking that despite having so many on going ffs... i have started a new ss... but what to do i couldnt stop myself from writing when an idea strikes me...
so here it goes and remember story starts from the begining plot of ehmmbh

Naa Jaane Kyun, Hota Hai Yeh Zindagi Ke Saath
achanak Ye dil kisi Ke Jaane Ke Baad
Kare Phir Uski Yaad chhoti Chhoti Si Baat
Naa Jaane Kyun...!!!!



the story starts with the very first meeting of virman and virika...
seeing through that partition and background music playing...
                 
viren and jeevika were looking at one another through that partition and were lost in each other...
virat and manvi were trying to figure out something that their hearts were praying not to be just their illusion... with their hua kya hua kya background music...
manvi and jeevika came in front of the vadera boys...



jeevika was blushing...
viren was busy noticing the girl who was standing in front of him blushing...
manvi was numb and shocked on seeing virat...
virat was looking at the face he was longing to see from such a long time.. almost 3 years...

manvi was feeling so different on seeing that familiar face... the face that was related to her at some point of time in her life... the face that once seemed very important to her... the face that was now not a part of her life and happiness... but manvi had to handle that situation so she took jeevika along with her and sat on the bench beside the swing) and viren and virat (who was unable to leave manvi's sight even for a second) also sat on the swing...


the vadera boys were busy admiring the beauties in front of them...

viren was looking at jeevika and thinking how serene this girl looks not to miss her simplicity and  pious beauty...



 
virat was busy drinking manvi's beauty from his eyes... but somewhere down his soul was really craving to again see and experience her fun loving nature, her childishness and her non stop blabbering... he was just dying to be close to manvi all over again... he just wanted the wheels of time to be reversed back to the time when there was a sweet relation between him and manvi... but he also knew the fact that it was never ever possible then and not now and not ever in his near future or his whole lifetime...


guys do tell me whether you want me to continue it or not... if u like it then please press the like button...!!!
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malini96 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#2

YEP...MINE IS THE FIRST REPLY😊

SO ATLEAST FOR ME U SHOULD CONTINUE😃

IT WAS AWESOME👏

SO CONTINUE AND PME MEEE...⭐️

Edited by malini1996 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: malini1996

YEP...MINE IS THE FIRST REPLY😊

SO ATLEAST FOR ME U SHOULD CONTINUE😃

IT WAS AWESOME👏

SO CONTINUE AND PME MEEE...⭐️


first comment and the first yes on a ss or ff is always special...!!!! 😃
thanks... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aussum concept virman know eachother and they has a past omg plz plz cont soon and do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ss.
They hd a relationship b4 grt to hear
u shud continue
pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was lovely jubily awesome start continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
interesting concept, oohh virman already know each otha, can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww amazing Concept and beginning love it
So VirMan have a past as they kno each other
Interesting
Update soon and pm me please
Thanksz x
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kis ka wait kar rahi hai tu Naina. India jeet Gaye Pak se match na toh shuru kar n's meri maa 🤓
By the way great concept and pm me 😉 Edited by S.Khan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start
continue soon and thanks for the pm!!