virman ss : naa jaane kyun... LAST PART pg 57 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow... please continue soon. ...
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Wow really nice plot. It is fresh and different.

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contunue ...and do pm me...ur an awesome writer
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nice concept, plz do continue
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PART 2

manvi : toh hum log aise hi chup baithe rahege kya...??? shadi wadi karni h ya nahi viren ji...??? (why are we all sitting quietly...?? will we sit like dis only guys..?? viren ji do u want to get married or not...???)
viren : ji
manvi : ji...?? forget it main manvi aur yeh meri di jeevika...
viren : hello... par how did u recognise me ms manvi...??
manvi (trying to sound reasonable fearing that she cannot let them know that she already knows virat and his nature) : umm... because u look sweet and mature... so i guessed that u must be viren...
viren : so u are very observant i must say...
virat (lost in manvi) : i know...
viren : did u say something bhai...??

virat : nahi bhai... by the way i am virat...
jeevika : namaste...
virat : namaste jeevika ji... namaste manvi ji...
manvi : namaste... (now turning to jeevika) di main abhi aati hoon...
jeevika : mannu...
manvi : di its important... tab tak u two must talk to each other
viren : u can stay here manvi... its okk...!!
manvi : its not like that viren... but i have to go...
virat : hey u...??? oh hello behri (deaf) ho kya...??
manvi : are you talking to me mr. vadera...?????
virat : yes ms. chaudhary i am talking to you...
manvi : listen i have to go...
virat : listen i am just asking you to show me the way to the washroom...
manvi : ohh sure...
virat : after you...

manvi and virat went from there leaving virika behind who were just standing there and looking at each other.. none of them able to utter even a single word...


scene shifts
virat was now becoming restless he had to had to talk to her...
virat : manvi...
but manvi didnt reacted and continued walking... this irritated virat so he grabbed manvi's hand and pulled her into a room with him and locked the door...
manvi : leave me virat... what are you doing...??? and why did the hell u pulled me here... in this guest room...???
virat : ohh so u still remember me...??? i thought that u forgot about me...
manvi : virat leave me... dont touch me virat... (as virat was pinning her to the door with his one hand on her slim waist and other blocking the way against the door)
virat : kyun...??? may be bcos only he has that right...
manvi : stop it... i dont want to talk...
virat (moving close to her as if he wants to become her soul) : but i do want to talk... today u have to answer all my questions...
manvi : ohh really...??? what bl**dy questions do u want to ask...???
virat : do u still love him...??
manvi looked the other way ignoring any kind of eye contact with him...
virat : look at me manvi... just answer me... do u still love him...??
manvi : why do u want to know virat...??? what is your problem...???
virat : my problem is that u left me because of him... he was the god damnit reason for which u rejected my love manvi...
manvi : i dont believe in love anymore... and just get away from me...

Edited by naina927 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Un res
Ab ye teesra kaun hai 🤔
THNXS for the pm
Update soon
Edited by S.Khan - 13 years ago
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wow...nice update...who is the third person in virman love story?thank u for the pm.Continue soon.

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