virman ss : naa jaane kyun... LAST PART pg 57

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fatima

@fatzo.BFF.spyoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

hey nainu...how was ur exam??/

i've read this one tooo...it was awesome as other stories are 👏👏

loved each n every update...

sorry bcoz i dont have any long wala comment today...but next tym pakka 😊😊😊

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

hey nainaji... again an awesome update...

manvi took the ring... hope virat finds it soon and make her wear it by his own hands... eeks that would be so romantic...

please iss baar zyada delay mat karna... do continue soon ..

thnx 4 pm uziii...:)

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Naina super update ⭐️⭐️.. Loved it.. Manvi was arranging his room.. Thats great 😃.. Shirtless Virat 😳.. Serial mein kabhi nahi milne wala 😆.. Manvi took the ring 😲.. Hope Virat will find it soon.. Please continue soon.. Take care Naina 🤗

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

PART 13

virat was going to manvi's room when he realised that he forgot the ring in the room itself... there was not even a single time, he forgot to carry the ring with himself but how did he today... he hurried to his room and saw that the room was in a better condition. he searched for his jacket and checked its pocket. to his surprise, the ring wasnt there but how could it be possible... this simply means that someone came in his room without his permission but who could it be...

virat searched for the ring in the whole room and in this process he turned the room upside down. throwing things here n there. he threw a vase on the floor in his frustation and there came a sound " isse dhoondh rahe the...??? " (were u looking for this...???)
virat suddenly turned around and saw manvi standing at the doorstep holding the ring in her hands and constantly looking in his eyes.
virat : where did you got this from...???
manvi : tumhare yahan koi rivaaz hai kya ke sawaal ke badle sawaal puchne ka...
virat : where did you get this from manvi...??? (stressing on every word and thereby controlling his rising anger)
manvi : woh...
virat : speak up...
virat moved towards manvi and this scared manvi because of the visible anger in virat's eyes and his changing body language.
manvi : umm..
virat : return it manvi...
manvi : virat...
he held manvi's shoulder tightly and pulled her towards himself...
virat : i said return the ring...
manvi : this ring...
virat : yes this ring... whats up with this now...??
manvi : thats the same ring...
virat : manvi lets not talk about all this... i just want it back...
manvi : no i wont...
virat : manvi...
manvi : you brought this ring for me... remember...??
virat : i remember... but i dont get why do u remember all this...???
manvi : because...
virat : manvi dont pull me back...
manvi : have you moved on...??
virat : thats none of your business...
manvi : it is my business... if you have moved on then why do u need this ring...???
virat : because i paid for it...
manvi : i wouldnt fall for that...
virat : okkayy... i havent moved on... this ring is still for you only but i know...
manvi : what if i want this ring...???
virat : what...???
manvi pulled herself out of his hold and showed the ring back to virat...
manviv : i will wear this ring... only me... no one else... and you will make me wear this... but that doesnt mean i am ready right now... i need some time...
virat : but i never proposed you...
manvi : you proposed me and i will accept it one day... bas thoda tym lagega...
virat : zabardasti hai kya...??
manvi : haan... kisi aur ki taraf dekha bhi na toh main tumhari annkhein noch lungi...
virat : but i dont love you now... we are just friends... you know...
manvi : dnt gimme that just friends shit... you love me... thats it...
virat : manvi... this is not done...
manvi : virat seriously tell me do u love me...???
virat turned around because he couldnt lie to her looking staright in her eyes...
manvi : virat please... look at me na partner...
virat : go away manvi... we dont need this...
manvi : we need this... i need to know... i dont know why but i cant accept the fact that you can love anybody except me... i cant stand the fact that you might like any other girl and want to be with her... i am somewhat jealous... i dnt want to lose you again... now i dont want anybody between us...
virat never expected manvi to say anything like this and he turned around immediately...
virat : manvi...
manvi : say you love me... you will not love anybody else... you will not...
virat : i love you manvi but i dont want to go that fast... i dont want to put a burden on you or force you to love me back... i can wait... n just think about one thing... why are you jealous...?? do u love me...??? why dont you want to lose me...??? why manvi...??? why...???
manvi : i need time...
virat : take as much time as you want...
manvi : thank you...

virat smiled on seeing manvi getting nervous and leaving the room hurriedly...
manvi entered the room and closed the door. she closed her eyes in anticipation of what all happened minutes back...
manvi : shit... did i really get that possessive n mad over virat...??? i questioned him as if i am his girlfriend or something... forget girlfriend... i behaved like an angry and a possessive wife... shit... what is happening to me...?? why does it affect me so much...?? why did i get jealous...??? why i felt happy when virat said he still loves me...??? why does each n every word of his affects me too much...??? do i love virat...??? have i really moved on in life...??? i dont know... i know nothing exceot the fact that i cant share virat with anybody else... but will i be able to love him the way he loves me... he never demanded anything in return... will i be able to give him all that he deserves... i dont know... what has happened to you manvi...?? remember after whatever happened with rohan... you hated even the mention of the love and now u yourself are bent on making virat still love u... why not being loved by him making so much difference to you...??? why...??? why him saying those word to u made u happy...?? why the fear of losing him made ur heart break into pieces...??? am i falling for u...?? or i have begin to realise it now...??? you were always important for me even after u left me all alone... even though i was with rohan, i used to think about you... did i love you from the beginning...??? kya pyaar hamesha se tha mujhe tumse...??? please god... please help me before it gets late... i dont want to lose anything now... i dont want to lose virat... i want to be with... i really want to be with...

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

res
unres...
after sooo long finally yu updated it ...
again shock laga ...manvi ka reaction bilkul hi unexpected tha...
finally usko kuch kuch nai bahot kuch hua
aur iss bahot kuch ke chakkar mein usne virat ko sab kuch bol dala...😉
maza agaya...😃

ab next part plsss jaldi jaldi update karna

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago