virman ss : naa jaane kyun... LAST PART pg 57 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
naina ji mera naam list mein nahi hai ji...😛 plz add me also...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wohoo... just read part 2... whats wid der past... hai kaun ye for whom manvi left virat??? jooth toh nahi bol rahi hai ye... lolz damn interested in the next part... update soon naina...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey nice concept. .cntinue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
plz disclose d suspence dear., update soon
And plz pm me
Edited by Zoya89 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3

manvi : i dont believe in love anymore... and just get away from me...
virat : miss manvi chaudhary doesnt not believe in love... unbelievable miss filmy chakar doesnt believe in the filmy love anymore... the girl who once had the set parameters/ concepts for love... the gal who thought that love only happens when there is a romantic song or probably violens playing in the background, when dupattas start flying with cold breeze blowing and lots more...
manvi : that was 3 years ago... i have changed virat... people do change with time and u just have to accept that change.. there is nothing u can do about it...
virat : manvi... kuch hua hai kya...??? (manvi did anything happen...???)
manvi : kuch nai hua hai... chep ho kya..?? mere piche hi padh gaye ho... (no nothing had happened... are u chep or wat...?? why are you pestering me...???)
virat : haan... chep hoon... sirf aur sirf apni manvi ka... (yes i am a chep... only yours chep manvi.. only yours...)
manvi : virat plss... mujhe jaane do... (virat... let me go...)
virat : manvi answer me first...!!!
manvi : what do u exactly want to know virat...??? do u want to know that i broke up with rohan... or u want to know the reason for that breakup... or u want to know that he used me... or u want to know that he broke my heart ruthlessly or do u want to know that u have any chance or not...
virat : chance...??? how could you think like that manvi...?? i loved you and i still do... i only loved you manvi... you are my only love... my first love ever and the last one too... but foe god sake dont tell me u thought that i wanted to fool around with you...
manvi was now quiet with her eyes lowered...
virat : did u think so manvi...?? tell me...!!! if by any chance i wanted to fool around with you, i could have done it long back in college... it was always easy for me if i ever wanted to do it as i was the only guy close to u... i was the one who knew you in and out... i was there with you all the time... i was the one with whom u chatted day and night... i was the one u talked with for hours.. let it be any time of the day... i was the one who had the power to influence u or make a difference to u... i was the one who was your best friend ded futiya...
manvi was now unable to control her tears and she hugged virat... it was the tightest hug that she ever gave to anybody not even jeevika... she felt safe in his arms and poured out her heart to him... her virat, her friend, her chep...

manvi : i am sorry... i am rel..really so..rr..y.. i am shattered virat... he left me... he left me for another girl... i know i made a wrong choice... i chose him and rejected you... i was so lost in his love that i coulnt clearly see what he wanted... i even distanced myself from you... only becuase he wanted me to be with him all the time... he didnt like our friendship virat... i thought that may be he was protective of me but no... he wasnt... i was so dumb virat.. i was always lost in that filmy concepts of love... which really do not exist... i thought that he loves me because i always felt a pull towards him... and the first time i met him it felt so great... the first time we had a handshake, it sent shivers down my spine and cold air breeze started blowing... i thought that may be i have found my RAJ...
manvi came back to her senses after hearing chachi calling her name and looking out for her...
manvi pulled herself out of virat's embrace and looked into his deep brown eyes which were now teary...
manvi : i am sorry... i need to go... (wiping off her tears)
virat : manvi... pls stay na... (holding her hand and looking at her as if pleading)
manvi : virat i have to go...
virat : but first tell me why did u broke up with rohan...??? did he hurt you...?? did he
manvi : can we talk about it some other day plsss...???
virat : hmm... i will be waiting...
manvi : thank you for understanding partner...
virat : its okk partner... i am always there for you...
*********

swamini : hum aap sab ko bahut jald jawab de denge...
beeji : ji bilkul...
swamini : waise humein jeevika pasand hai... viren virat chale...??
vv : ji...
viren and virat looked at jeevika and manvi and smiled before going...

viren smiled to the girl he liked and was thinking to get married...
virat gave manvi the smile which soothed her after a long time...
manvi and virat were happy to get back their best friend in their life...

whereas virat was confused whether he should be happy on seeing manvi after 3 yrs or sad for knowing that she had a breakup was heart broken... there was a fight going on inside him between a lover and a friend... a lover who was extremely happy thinking that he might get his love back and a friend who was sad thinking about his friend and the pain she was going through... a lover who just wanted his love and a friend who just wanted his friend's happiness and smile... a lover wanted to possess his love forever whereas a friend wanted to fulfil his promise of being together... a lover was yearning for love and a friend was yearning for the missing bond...virat was now in the biggest confusion of his life... he really had no idea what should he do... whether he should be friends with manvi again and become her support system or he should try and give his love for manvi another chance and made her realise that he is the one for her...



Edited by naina927 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update yaar.You potrayed the struggle virat is going through in words very well.Beautifully written.Love u.U are amazing😊.Loved the update.But want to readand know abt maanvi's past.Pls update soon.Thanks for the pm.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Dosti hai toh pyaar, it's true you know.
You wrote it beautifully, the lover and the friend,
wonder who he will chose...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx 4 the Pm Naina...

soshe is heart broken... awww poor soul... but she made wrong choice...

virat is in the big delima of his life... so nice dear...

now Manvi get her friend or his partner back... lovely

update soon... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: preetipc

Lovely update yaar.You potrayed the struggle virat is going through in words very well.Beautifully written.Love u.U are amazing😊.Loved the update.But want to readand know abt maanvi's past.Pls update soon.Thanks for the pm.😊


THANK YOU SOO MUCH DEAR...😃 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is fantabolous...👏..

continue soon 😊

and dont keep ur frnd waiting for the next update

i am just eager...😃

and i dont know how u r writng like this ...it is awesome ⭐️

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