Our daughter's Nanny TS Subhan Mannat Raunaq Muskaan/Ibadat - Page 2

Thank you very much.

Kairav is from yrkkh.

Originally posted by: salley145

Good that Ibadat agreed to be a nanny and also not tell the truth. Ibadat wishing that Ayesha says she is the best mother was realistic. Like Ibadat feels, it's very realistic to feel that way. Subhan telling the same story to Ayesha daily was funny. Toy scene was lovely. Is Kairav from yrkkh? Poor Ibadat. I knew Kaynaat will do something like this. Finally Raunak is out of coma. Surprising that Raunak is connected to Subhan and Mannat too. Wonder what will be Raunak's reaction after knowing about Ayesha. Perfect pics, waiting for next

Very interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Our daughter's Nanny Part 3

Thank you very much Salley145 for the edits.

Ibadat was going towards the exit to leave for her home.Suddenly Subhan's cousin Raunak reached there.

Ibadat and Raunak were surprised to see each other.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

They both so happy to see each other that they embraced each other.Raunak lifted her up in his arms and twirled her around.

Subhan,Mannat and Kaynaat were stunned.

Subhan:What is this?You both know each other?

Raunak placed Ibadat down and said:Yes Subhan.Muskaaan...I mean Ibadat is the one I love.I call her 'Muskaan' lovingly as I love her smile.

Ibadat blushed.

Subhan,Mannat and Kaynaat were shocked.

Ibadat:How come you are here Raunak?

Raunak:Subhan is my cousin.

Ibadat was surprised.

Raunak:But why are you here?

Ibadat:I am Subhan-Mannat's daughter Ayesha's Nanny.

Raunak was shocked:Nanny?

Ibadat:Yes.

Kaynaat changed the topic.

Kaynaat:Raunak,come and have lunch.I made lunch specially for you.

Raunak:Yes.I missed your food.

Kaynaat smiled.

After lunch,Raunak grabbed Ibadat's hand and took her to a room.

Raunak:You are a rich woman.Then why are you working here as Ayesha's Nanny?

Ibadat:Because...because Ayesha is our daughter Raunak.

Raunak was shocked.

Raunak:What are you saying?

Ibadat:I am saying the truth.After you slipped into coma and was taken to America for treatment,I realized that I was pregnant.

Ibadat told him everything.

Raunak was shocked and emotional.

Raunak:Ayesha is our daughter?

Ibadat:Yes Raunak.

Subhan and Mannat in their room....

Subhan:That means Ayesha is Raunak's daughter;my brother's daughter.

Mannat:How can we keep away Ayesha from your brother if he claims his daughter?I am going crazy Subhan.How can we sacrifice Ayesha for Raunak?

Subhan wept:I can't lose Ayesha.But if I keep her with me,I will be a selfish brother.I don't know what to do.

Both were in tears.

Subhan and Mannat watched Raunak and Ibadat playing with Ayesha.The trio was playing with flowers.They became emotional.

Raunak:Muskaan,Ayesha looks exactly like you.

Ibadat smiled.

Mannat said painfully to Subhaan:Ayesha will look only like her mother who gave her birth.

Subhan became sad.

Subhan:Mannat,whether she likes Ibadat or not,she is your daughter too.

Mannat nodded painfully.

Ayesha:Can I go and play with Kairav?

Ibadat:Of course yes Ayesha.

Ayesha:Thank you.

Ayesha ran out.

Raunak and Ibadat saw Subhan-Mannat watch them.

Subhan:Raunak!

Raunak:Subhan,Ayesha is Muskaan's...I mean Ibadat's and my daughter.

Subhan:I know.

Raunak said painfully:I know that I am wrong to take Ayesha from you.But can we get our daughter back?

Subhan and Mannat were trying hard to control their tears.

Subhan:Yes Raunak.Ayesha is yours.I can never hurt you in any way.

Raunak and Ibadat smiled emotionally.

Raunak:Thank you Subhan.You are the best.

Raunak hugged Subhan.

In the room...

Mannat embraced Subhan crying.

Subhan:Mannat,Raunak will stay with us.So Ayesha will be infront of us.

Mannat:But I can't imagine us turning into Ayesha's uncle and aunt in a second.

They both were upset.

Ibadat was mentally disturbed.

She thought:Ayesha will be ours after I marry Raunak.Then why I feel upset?

Raunak rode his bike towards Ibadat.Subhan was watching them.

Raunak:Muskaan,come and sit behind me.We will go for a ride.

Subhan:You guys enjoy.

Subhan walked away.

Raunak:Why are you looking dim Muskaan?

Ibadat:Nothing like that.

Raunak held her hand:Then come with me.

Ibadat:Yes.

Ibadat sat behind Raunak on the bike.They both smiled.

They roamed around talking.

Ibadat smiled.

Raunak:Your smile is so beautiful Muskaan.I gave you the right name 'Muskaan'.

She smiled.

They went to a park.Raunak was smiling and talking while Ibadat was lost in some thoughts.

Raunak:Muskaan!Where are you even looking at?Guess you forgot that I am here.

Ibadat looked at him painfully.

Raunak held her hand:Tell me Muskaan.What's your problem?I am sure that something is bothering you.Don't hide anything.

Ibadat started weeping.

Ibadat:Raunak,are we not doing wrong by snatching Ayesha's rights from Subhan and Mannat?

Raunak was stunned.

Raunak:I know that I have hurt them.But we are Ayesha's real parents.And we decided to stay with them,so that Ayesha can be with them too.

Ibadat:But do we need happiness by hurting them?Can you be happy after hurting your brother?

Raunak became dull.

Ibadat:Can Ayesha be happy with us?

Raunak:Ayesha loves you.She will accept me too.

Ibadat:Ayesha loves me,but as her nanny,not as her mother.As her mother,she loves only Mannat.If we tell Ayesha suddenly to accept us as her parents,she will be hurt.Should we hurt our own daughter's little heart?

Raunak became upset.

Ibadat:We will have children again.But Subhan and Mannat will not have children.They will not even think of adopting another child after losing Ayesha.

Raunak:You are right Muskaan.We should not be selfish by claiming rights on Ayesha.

Ibadat:Yes.We can be close to Ayesha as her uncle and aunt.

Raunak:Yes.

Raunak and Ibadat got married.

They looked at each other romantically.

Subhan and Ibadat went to Raunak and Ibadat's room.

Mannat:We have not told the truth to Ayesha yet as we have no courage to face that situation.

Subhan:So you both can tell her.Tomorrow you both can take Ayesha.

Mannat:Please let us sleep with Ayesha for one last time as her parents.

Raunak:Not just for tonight,always you both will be Ayesha's parents.

Ibadat:I looked after Ayesha as her Nanny.But she loved both of you more than me as from you both she got parents' love and affection.So you both have more rights on her.

Raunak:We are happy as Ayesha's uncle and aunt.Because even we may not be able to love Ayesha more than you both.

Subhan and Mannat were surprised.

Mannat:Really?

Ibadat:Yes.

Subhan:God will bless you both for being so kind to us.

Raunak:It is not any kindness,we realized that you both deserve Ayesha the most.

Subhan and Mannat smiled happily.

Subhan and Mannat went towards Ayesha who was on the corridor and lifted her up in their hands happily.

Mannat:I am so happy that Ayesha will be with us.

Ayesha:If I am not with you both,where else will I go?

They smiled.

Ayesha looked at Raunak and Ibadat who were looking at them.

Ayesha:Grand Maa told me not to disturb Raunak uncle and Ibadat aunty,because they are going to celebrate their wedding night.How do you both celebrate the wedding night?

Mannat laughed while Raunak-Ibadat were embarrassed.

Raunak kept his finger on his lips and said:Shhhh naughty girl!

They all laughed.

Subhan:Ayesha...come and sleep.

Subhan and Mannat walked to their room with Ayesha.

Raunak and Ibadat had a passionate night filled with romance.

Raunak and Ibadat got blessed with twins.They lived happily with their twin daughters Khushi and Roshni.

Subhan and Mannat lived happily with Ayesha.

The end

Thank you each and everyone for supporting this TS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

reserved for comment

story already ended

Surprising to see Sharad Yesha Jodi. Just like in Mujhse dosti, here Yesha's lover calls her by a different name, I love the uniqueness. Wondering why Kaynaat suddenly changed the topic. Poor Raunak and Ibadat. Feeling bad for Subhan and Mannat too. Poor Subhan has to sacrifice Ayesha. Good that Raunak and Ibadat decided not to snatch Ayesha's rights from Subhan and Mannat. Loved Ibadat and Raunak's conversation with Subhan and Mannat. Felt like laughing at Ayesha's cute and innocent question. Loved their first night scenes. Favorite couple here are both. Favorite scene is Ibadat Raunak deciding not to snatch Ayesha. Favorite character is Ibadat as she was the main character and also that she agreed not to tell her own daughter the truth which no one will agree for.

Kaynaat changed the topic as she did not want the discussion of why Ibadat is there as a Nanny at that moment.

Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: salley145

Surprising to see Sharad Yesha Jodi. Just like in Mujhse dosti, here Yesha's lover calls her by a different name, I love the uniqueness. Wondering why Kaynaat suddenly changed the topic. Poor Raunak and Ibadat. Feeling bad for Subhan and Mannat too. Poor Subhan has to sacrifice Ayesha. Good that Raunak and Ibadat decided not to snatch Ayesha's rights from Subhan and Mannat. Loved Ibadat and Raunak's conversation with Subhan and Mannat. Felt like laughing at Ayesha's cute and innocent question. Loved their first night scenes. Favorite couple here are both. Favorite scene is Ibadat Raunak deciding not to snatch Ayesha. Favorite character is Ibadat as she was the main character and also that she agreed not to tell her own daughter the truth which no one will agree for.

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update & beautiful ending 👏

Very emotional and amazing 🤩

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Part 3

Magnificent update... elegantly written

lovely end