Part 4
Fabulous Update
Subhan hurting himself unknowingly and Mannat caring for him was amazing indeed.
Thanks a lot Salley for the lovely edits.
Ghazal sat near Subhan
Ghazal:These days you look very happy.
Subhan thought of Ibadat and said:Yes,I really feel happy these days.
Ghazal:May I know the reason why you are happy?I know that it's not just music.
Subhan was silent.
Ghazal realised that Subhan had no intention to reply to her question.
So she continued with her music class.
Atharv conducted Subhan's sister Janvi's wedding.
Subhan and Kaynaat were very happy and they thanked Atharv.
Subhan:Thank you so much Atharv.If you were not there,my sister would not have had such a nice wedding.
Atharv:No need of thanking me.Even I am grateful to you for accepting my wife as yours.
Subhan became dull.
He thought:How can I tell Atharv that I could not accept Mannat yet and my heart has been conquered by Ibadat?
Dua confronted Mannat and Subhan.
Dua:I don't understand what's between both of you.Atharv says that you both are going to tie the knot.But I don't feel anything between both of you.What is the future of your relationship?
Mannat and Subhan became upset.
Mannat:I don't know.All I know is I am scared to think about the future.I am living in my present with my Atharv.
Subhan:I have no idea about our future.Right now I don't want to think of it also.
Dua:My son is the one who is getting jammed between both of you.
Subhan and Mannat felt sad.
Ghazal talked to Ibadat privately.
Ghazal:These days do you look very happy.I am happy about it.But don't you think you are finding happiness in the person who is committed to someone else?
Ibadat's eyes got filled up with tears.
Ibadat:Why I can't be loved by anyone?You are a mother who abandoned me after giving birth to me.I am just a student to you,not a daughter.Don't I have the right to be in love?
Ghazal got hurt.
Ghazal:You have the right to be in love.But you chose the wrong person to love as Subhan is committed to someone else.
Ibadat:I did not choose anyone to fall in love with.Love just conquered my heart through Subhan.
For the world,my love for Subhan maybe kalank.But for me,it's pure love...a beautiful relationship.
Ghazal became upset.
Ghazal:I was also in love with a married person.Haider.But Haider never loved me.He chose to be with his wife Dua.But I was madly in love with Haider.I was after him madly.
Flash back....
Haider blasted at Ghazal:Please Ghazal...just leave us peacefully.If you really love me,leave me alone with Dua.
Ghazal was shattered as all her hopes broke.
Ghazal:I will leave you on one condition.
Haider:Agreed.What is your condition?
Ghazal:I want a baby from you.
Haider was shocked:What?Are you crazy?I can't even think of looking at any other woman than my Dua.Then how do you expect me to carry my baby in your womb?
Ghazal:I want your baby through IVF.
Haider was stunned.
Haider told this to Dua.Dua was shocked.
Dua:Haider,I can't imagine some other woman giving birth to your baby.
Haider:I understand Dua.No other wife will tolerate it.But you know how crazy Ghazal is.She is not giving us any peace of mind.I just want to get rid of her permanently.
And the baby will be produced through IVF.There will be no physical contact between us.
Haider-Dua confronted Ghazal.
Dua gave a paper to Ghazal:Sign this Ghazal.It's written that after you give birth to Haider's baby,you will never try to contact us in any way.Otherwise Haider won't let you get pregnant with his baby.
Ghazal felt sad.But she signed the paper.Haider and Dua were relieved.
Present....
Ghazal:I was crazy in love.So I hoped that Haider will fall in love with me when I get pregnant with his baby.I thought he will love the mother of his baby.But even after giving birth to you,Haider never loved me.He loved only Dua.He considered only Dua as the mother of his child.I became a fool.I lost Haider completely.
Ibadat:You decided to use your baby to get your lover's love.But after delivery,you realised that your baby cannot get you the love you wanted and the baby can only bring you shame.So you abandoned me in the orphanage.Right?
Ghazal felt guilty.
Ghazal:Unmarried mothers cannot have prestige in the society.That's why I left you in the orphanage.But I never abandoned you.I always gave special fund to the orphanage to give you special care.I kept visiting you.
Ibadat:You did not visit me as a mother.You visited me only as an orphan's sponsor who did charity to her.Later you became my music teacher,but not my mother.
Ghazal:That was my helplessness Ibadat as unmarried mother will be insulted by the society.But in my mind I have always loved you.
Ibadat kept silent painfully.
Ibadat:Can I ask you something?My father did not even want to see me?
Ghazal:Yes.Though he did not accept me,he had fatherly affection towards you.So when you were born he and his wife Dua paid visit to us.Even Dua was affectionate towards you as you were her husband's baby.After that they cut ties with me as per the contract.Before leaving you in the orphanage,I tried to leave you with Haider and Dua.But Haider's family was against it as they hated me to the core.Since you were my baby and you were not the love child of me and Haider,they hated you too.So they did not allow Haider and Dua to accept you.That's why I left you in the orphanage.
Ibadat felt sad.
Ghazal:Because of love,my life got ruined.I don't want your life to be ruined because of love.So be careful.Try to control your heart beta.
Ibadat was silent.
Ghazal remembered painfully how she herself destroyed her life by going after a married man like Haider and producing his illegitimate child.She sang to pour out her pain.
Di nahi dua bhale
Na di kabhi baddua
Na khafa huey na hum
Huey kabhi bewafa
Tum magar bewafa ho gaye
Kyun khafa ho gaye
Ke tumse juda hoke hum
Tabaah ho gaye
Tabaah ho gaye!
Tabaah ho gaye!
Tabaah ho gaye!
Phir akhiyan mein preet ki teri
Reet jaga jaana
Mohey chhod ke jaane ki khatir
Hi laut ke aa jana
Phir akhiyan mein preet ki teri
Reet jaga jaana
Mohey chhod ke jaane ki khatir
Hi laut ke aa jana
Haan ghair ke humnawa ho gaye
Kyun khafa ho gaye
Ki tumse juda hoke hum
Tabaah ho gaye...
Tabah ho gaye!
Tabah ho gaye!
Tabah ho gaye!
Haan sajde mein humne maanga tha
Umar bhi humari lag jaaye tumko
Khud se hi tauba karte the
Nazar na humari lag jaaye tumko
Ghazal danced with her students tearfully.
Haan sajde mein humne maanga tha
Umar bhi humari lag jaaye tumko
Khud se hi tauba karte the
Nazar na humari lag jaaye tumko
Hum magar...
Hum magar nagawara tumhe kis tarah ho gaye
Ki tumse juda hoke hum tabaah ho gaye
Tabah ho gaye!
Tabah ho gaye!
Tabah ho gaye!(Kalank).
Haider was lost in his thoughts.
Dua sat near him.
Dua:I know what you are thinking.All these years you suppressed your fatherly affection towards Ibadat.You visited the orphanage to do charity work.But in the pretext of that you tried to get a glimpse of your daughter Ibadat.Right?
Haider said emotionally:Dua,you understand me so well.
Dua:If I don't understand you,who else will understand you?Your parents are not alive now.So there is no hindrance on your way to accept Ibadat as your daughter.
Haider said painfully:Atharv and Mannat do not know that Ibadat is my daughter.Will they ever accept her?What if they consider it as a shame to them if I accept Ibadat as my daughter and bring her to this family?
Dua became upset.Someone was overhearing their conversation.
Salley
Taahir
GOLDIE ABROL
khwaishfan
Thank u so much friends for the lovely comments.
Why is Ghazal so interested about Subhan's reason of being happy? It's funny because in Rabb se, she tried killing him when he was just a baby. Surprising that Janvi is Subhan's sister. Why is Dua saying like this? She is saying as if she doesn't knows Atharv himself made Subhan and Mannat marry. I knew Ghazal is Ibadat's mother. So she got pregnant through IVF. Feeling sad for Ibadat. Dua is right, Haider should accept Ibadat now. Perfect pics, waiting for next
Ha ha.Because here Ghazal is not negative and she noticed the growing closeness between Subhan Ibadat.
Dua knows that Atharv made Subhan marry Mannat.But she is anxious about their future.
Thanks a lot.
Originally posted by: salley145
Why is Ghazal so interested about Subhan's reason of being happy? It's funny because in Rabb se, she tried killing him when he was just a baby. Surprising that Janvi is Subhan's sister. Why is Dua saying like this? She is saying as if she doesn't knows Atharv himself made Subhan and Mannat marry. I knew Ghazal is Ibadat's mother. So she got pregnant through IVF. Feeling sad for Ibadat. Dua is right, Haider should accept Ibadat now. Perfect pics, waiting for next
Loved it dear 😍
Awesome update 😃
That was really beautiful & emotional 🤩
Thanks for the PM ☺️
Keep writing ✍️
Part 5
Fascinating Update
So it's because of Atharv that Subhan's sister
has gotten married
Salley
Taahir
GOLDIEABROL
khwaishfan
Thank u so much friends for the lovely comments.
Haider was lost in his thoughts.
Dua sat near him.
Dua:I know what you are thinking.All these years you suppressed your fatherly affection towards Ibadat.You visited the orphanage to do charity work.But in the pretext of that you tried to get a glimpse of your daughter Ibadat.Right?
Haider said emotionally:Dua,you understand me so well.
Dua:If I don't understand you,who else will understand you?Your parents are not alive now.So there is no hindrance on your way to accept Ibadat as your daughter.
Haider said painfully:Atharv and Mannat do not know that Ibadat is my daughter.Will they ever accept her?What if they consider it as a shame to them if I accept Ibadat as my daughter and bring her to this family?
Dua became upset.Someone was overhearing their conversation.It was Atharv.
Atharv told everything to Mannat.Mannat was shocked.
Mannat:Are you sure?
Atharv:Yes.I don't know their background story.But I had noticed that the name Ghazal has always disturbed my parents though I did not understand the reason.But I assumed that she was connected to my parents.So when Subhan wanted to learn music from Ghazalji I discussed it with my Parents. But now I think that my father,Ghazalji and Ibadat are interrelated and that's why Ibadat is often seen with Ghazalji.And I know that my father has a longs for his daughter.I want to unite him with his daughter before I die.Mannat...please go meet Ibadat and convince her to stay with us.
Mannat:Okay Atharv.You take rest.
Atharv was relieved.
Mannat visited the orphanage to meet Ibadat.
The orphanage warden brought Ibadat to the room where Mannat was waiting and told her:Ibadat...this is your visitor..
She walked away.
Ibadat looked at Mannat.
Mannat:I am Haider Akhtar's daughter in Mannat.
Ibadat was surprised.
Ibadat:Why did you come to the orphanage to meet me?
Mannat did not know how to tell Ibadat about her real parents.
Mannat:Actually Ibadat...your real parents are....
Ibadat:I know who my real parents are.
Mannat was surprised.
Mannat:You already know it?
Ibadat:Yes.
Mannat:My father in law is longing for his lost daughter.He wants you to stay in our house as our family member...as his daughter.
Ibadat could not believe her ears.
Ibadat asked with happiness:Really?
Mannat:Yes.My husband who is your half brother only sent me here.You please come with me to our home.We both want to surprise him by taking you there.
Suddenly Ibadat remembered Ghazal telling her that Haider's family hated her and was ashamed to accept her as their family member.
Ibadat:I can't come.
Mannat was shocked:But why?You are brought up in a orphanage devoid of family love.But now you will get your parents' love there.Then why are you refusing it?
Ibadat:All these years I was kept away from the family and hated me as I was their illegitimate child.So I don't want to bring shame now to the family.So let our secret remain a secret.I can't come with you to your house.Sorry.
Ibadat walked away.Mannat became upset.
Mannat reached back home.Seeing her,Atharv walked towards her in excitement.
Atharv:Did you see Ibadat?She is coming here.Right?Or has she already come with you?
Mannat replied painfully:No Atharv.She refused to come.
Atharv was shocked:But why?
Mannat:She is already in pain because of neglecting her all these years.She is worried whether because of her our family will have a bad reputation.
Atharv became upset.
Atharv:I don't want her or Abbu to sacrifice their happiness.I want them to unite.
Mannat became upset as she was not sure whether it would happen or not.
But to console Atharv,she said:I will fulfill your wish Atharv.
Atharv smiled emotionally:I trust you Mannat.
Mannat:Please get ready.It's time to go to the hospital for the chemotherapy.
Atharv nodded.
Seeing Subhan on the road,Ibadat's face blossomed.But she remembered Ghazal telling her that to have a relationship with a committed person can make things worse.So she ignored Subhan and turned off her face.Subhan was stunned.
After some days...
Not being able to tolerate Ibadat ignoring him,Subhan confronted her.
Subhan:Ibadat,why are you not even looking at my face?I am going crazy.Did you break our friendship?
Ibadat felt sad.
Subhan:Tell me Ibadat.
Ibadat:My friendship with you was true and it will always remain so in my mind.But we need to keep a distance with each other.
Subhan:But why?
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