Kalank (Blemish) Subhan-Ibadat,Atharv Cheeni(Mannat)SS - Page 4

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Mannat agreeing to convince Ibadat to stay with them was nice. Ibadat refusing was realistic. Poor Atharv badly wants Ibadat to unite with her father. Ibadat turning away from Subhan was sad. Good that Subhan confronted Ibadat. Waiting for next, perfect pics

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Kalank(Blemish) Part 7

Not being able to tolerate Ibadat ignoring him,Subhan confronted her.

Subhan:Ibadat,why are you not even looking at my face?I am going crazy.Did you break our friendship?

Ibadat felt sad.

Subhan:Tell me Ibadat.

Ibadat:My friendship with you was true and it will always remain so in my mind.But we need to keep a distance with each other.

Subhan:But why?

Ibadat:Because I feel that you are getting attached to me.It is wrong.Because you are committed to someone else.

Subhan became upset.

Subhan:For everyone else,what I feel for you maybe kalank.But for me,it is the most beautiful feeling I ever had.

Ibadat's heart got touched by his words.

Ibadat:But I have no such feelings for you Subhan.I have only considered you as my good friend.

Subhan:But I really love you Ibadat.

Ibadat's heart pained as she was not able to accept his love because of the situation.

Ibadat:Whether you love me or not,I don't love you.

Subhan felt very upset and walked away.Ibadat burst into tears.

Ghazal walked towards her.

Ghazal:My bachi...I heard everything.You cry as much as you can.It will relieve your pain.

Ibadat hugged her:Ammi!

Ghazal was surprised as for the first time she addressed her as her mother.

Ibadat realised what she called her.

Ibadat:I am sorry for calling you Ammi.

Ghazal:No beta.Till now I could not be a mother to you.Now when you are in pain,I want to be your mother in every way.

Ibadat:Why this happened with me?Why so much of pain for me?

Ghazal:This pain is better than the pain which you will get from your unnamed relationship with Subhan.Allah will remove this pain too.

Ibadat and Subhan prayed to God tearfully as they were not getting peace of mind.

Mannat visited Ibadat again.

Ibadat:Why did you come here again?

Mannat:I brought some gifts for you.Some sweets and clothes.

Ibadat:I don't want anything.Please take them back.

Mannat became dull.

Mannat:How can you say that?These are sent by your own family.

Ibadat:All these years I lived without anyone.I will continue living like that.Because I am not used to any happiness in my life.I am scared to be happy.Because happiness too brings me only pain the very next moment.

She walked away.Mannat became upset.

A public hall...

Rakshabandhan celebration was going on.

Little sisters were tying Rakhi around the wrists of their brothers.Ibadat was watching it emotionally.

Suddenly she heard a voice:Irrespective of the religion,won't you tie the rakhi around my wrist too?

Ibadat looked at that person and got shocked.That was Atharv.There was Mannat near him.

Ibadat became emotional seeing him.She did not know how to react.

Atharv:You refused to live with us.Won't you atleast be my sister outside?

Ibadat's eyes got filled up with tears.

Atharv:Trust me.I did not know that you were my sister all these years.I am not one among the one who hated you.Though I have never interacted with you,I really like you my little sister.

Ibadat became emotional.

Ibadat:Bhai!

Atharv and Mannat smiled emotionally.

Atharv and Mannat hugged Ibadat.

Mannat took a Rakhi from her bag and gave it to her.

Ibadat took it from them and tied it around Atharv's wrist.

Atharv fed her sweets.They all were very happy.

Atharv and Mannat were in their room....

Atharv:I am so happy that I got my sister.

Mannat:Even I am happy.Earlier I met her and asked her to come.But when she ignored me,I felt bad.But now I am very happy that she accepted both of us as her brother and sister in law.

Suddenly they heard a voice:Which sister are you talking about?

Atharv and Mannat looked that side.

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Part 6

Fabulous Update

Atharv conducts the wedding of Janvi

while both Subhan and Kaynaat were very happy

Is it Subhan saying whether you love me or not, I love you? Or is it Ibadat? Their conversation was emotional. Finally Ibadat called Ghazal ammi and Ghazal called her her bachi. Poor Ibadat. Atharv Ibadat moment was sweet. Umm the voice at the end is of Kainaat? Only she is like that lol. Perfect pics, waiting for next

Its said by Ibadat.thank you for pointing out.I have corrected it.

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Originally posted by: salley145

Is it Subhan saying whether you love me or not, I love you? Or is it Ibadat? Their conversation was emotional. Finally Ibadat called Ghazal ammi and Ghazal called her her bachi. Poor Ibadat. Atharv Ibadat moment was sweet. Umm the voice at the end is of Kainaat? Only she is like that lol. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Kalank(Blemish) Part 8

Atharv:I am so happy that I got my sister.

Mannat:Even I am happy.Earlier I met her and asked her to come.But when she ignored me,I felt bad.But now I am very happy that she accepted both of us as her brother and sister in law.

Suddenly they heard a voice:Which sister are you talking about?

Atharv and Mannat looked that side.

They saw Haider and Dua there.They were looking at them emotionally.

The voice belonged to Haider.

Dua:Why are you both silent?

Atharv:Ammi...we were talking about Ibadat.She is my half sister.Right?

Haider and Dua were shocked.

Haider:You...you both already knew about Ibadat?

Atharv:Yes.I overheard you both talking about her.I remember seeing her during our visit to the orphanage.Thus we contacted her again.

Haider and Dua did not know how to react.

Atharv:Abbu,I know that your heart longs to be with Ibadat.Then why are you not accepting her as your daughter?Ammi...do you have any problem with accepting Ibadat as she reminds you of Abbu's betrayal.

Dua:Stop it.You think that Ibadat is the result of your father and another woman's illegal relationship?There was nothing between them.You know only the half baked truth.

Atharv and Mannat were stunned.

Atharv:Then Ibadat?

Dua:I will tell you everything.

Dua told them about Ghazal obsessed with Haider and producing Ibadat through IVF.

Atharv was relieved to know that his father has not cheated his mother.

Haider:I wanted to accept Ibadat as my daughter.But I was scared thinking about how you both react.

Mannat:Don't worry about that Abbu.We both love Ibadat like our little sister.

Atharv:Yes Abbu.I am waiting to spend time with my little sister which I missed in my childhood.

Haider and Dua smiled happily.

Haider and Dua entered Ghazal's house.Ghazal became emotional seeing them.

Ghazal:After so many years....I kept my promise.I never tried to contact you.

Dua:You kept your promise.But...

Haider:But we both did injustice to our innocent daughter.Ibadat suffered a lot because of what we did to her.

Ghazal felt guilty.

Ghazal:I know that.Allah will never forgive me for that.But recently we both became mother and daughter.

Haider:I want to correct my mistake.I want to give my surname to my daughter.I want her to live the rest of the life as my daughter.

Dua:Ghazal,please allow me also to be Ibadat's mother.

Ghazal became emotional.

Ghazal:Who am I to stop it?I always wished Ibadat to be a part of your family.That's why years back I left her there.But poor girl did not get accepted by the elders of the family.

Haider-Dua became guilty.

Haider:I think she hates me.So she refused to come and stay with me.

Ghazal:Ibadat is a poor soul who cannot even hate her enemies.She has always loved you Haider.But she hid all her emotions inside.

Ibadat came inside.She was stunned to see Haider and Dua there.They looked at her emotionally.

Ghazal:Ibadat,why do you hesitate to go with them?

Ibadat:Is'nt it too late for that?I really respect my father who gave birth to me.I don't want his reputation to be harmed because of me.

Haider:No Ibadat.Nothing is going to happen.And I don't care what others say.All I care about is..you.If you ignore me,I will never be able to live peacefully.

Dua:Yes Ibadat.Haider has'nt slept happily since many years.He was carrying guilt as a burden in his heart.Only you can give him a bit of happiness.

Ibadat became emotional.

Haider:Please beta..please call me Abbu.

Ghazal:Ibadat...you are one of the few who got your parents back.Don't do the blunder of rejecting their love.You will regret the whole life.

Ibadat looked at Haider:I am sorry for hurting you.

Haider:No,I am sorry for keeping you away from me all these years.Please come with me beta.

Ibadat:I will come with you Abbu.

Haider smiled tearfully:My daughter called me Abbu.

Dua and Ghazal smiled emotionally.

Dua caressed her face and said:You have one more mother too now.I am your mother now.

Ibadat smiled emotionally.Haider and Dua hugged Ibadat.Ghazal smiled.

Ibadat was brought home by Haider and Dua.Mannat and Atharv welcomed them cheerfully.

Subhan was stunned to see it.

Ibadat's eyes met Subhan.They looked at each other silently.

Suddenly Atharv saw Subhan standing there clueless.

Atharv:This is...

Subhan:Ibadat.I know her.She is my music classmate.

They all smiled.

Atharv:She is my sister.

Haider:She is our lost daughter.I got her back now.

Subhan was surprised.

Haider:This is a happy occasion.Let's celebrate.

Dua:Yes,we will celebrate by dancing.

Everyone smiled.

Dua,Ibadat and Mannat danced cheerfully.

Latak matak chali
Dil ko patak chali
Pakde kalali koi
Baanh ko chatak chali

Zara idhar chali
Zara udhar chali
Gadar machaya tune

Jahan jidhar chali
Chhod chhad nai-har ki galiyan
Kaun hai woh jis piya ke ghar chali

Mann tarse re
Rang barse re
Mann tarse re, tarse re, tarse re
Rang barse re, barse re, barse re
Chain ke looteri hoon main
Nindiya ki chorni


Laayi de...
Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajwaadi Odhni

Zara idhar chali
Zara udhar chali
Gadar machaya tune
Jahan jidhar chali

Chhod chhad nai-har ki galiyan
Kaun hai woh jis piya ke ghar chali

Ho bandhi ke payaliya paaon mein paaon mein
Chhan chhanati jab main jaaun re
Haan toh hawa ka jhonka bolo re, bolo re
Aa savaari main karwaaun re

Ho bandhi ke payaliya paaon mein paaon mein
Chhan chhanati jab main jaaun re
Haan toh hawa ka jhonka bolo re, bolo re
Aa savaari main karwaaun re

Jab naachu re
Jag soche re
Jab nachu re, nachu re, nachu re
Jag soche re, soche re, soche re

Aa gayi sheher mein kaise
Jungalon ki morni

Laayi de...
Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajwaadi Odhni

Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajvaadi Odhni
Layi de, layi layi de mohe Rajwaadi Odhni

(Kalank).

Though Subhan and Ibadat were staying under the same roof,Ibadat kept ignoring Subhan.Subhan got fed up and went near her.

Subhan:Ibadat,God himself brought you near me,because he knows that I can't live without seeing you.

But your negligence is killing me.

Ibadat:Subhan,why don't you understand that it's a sin?You belong to Mannat bhabhi.

Subhan was hit by the reality.

Subhan:I know that.But can't we be atleast friends?Why are you breaking it?

Ibadat:Okay.We will remain as friends.Happy?

Subhan:Yes.But for one last time tell me the truth Ibadat.Don't you feel for me?Don't your heart beat for me?

Ibadat's heart pained.

Subhan:Why are you silent Ibadat?Say the truth.

Tears dwelled up in her eyes.

Ibadat:Yes,I also love you Subhan.But it's kalank.I can't break my brother and sister in law by loving you.

Subhan's eyes became wet:This is not Kalank,it's pure love.

They looked at each other tearfully.

To their shock Atharv,Mannat,Kaynaat,Haider and Dua were watching them.